Paco no Bogazda

Name: Paco Bogazda

Appearance Age: 20
Possible True Age: 100
Possible Gender: Male

Hollow type: Lesser Familiar

Personality: Before the transformation to hollow Paco was a genius boy with a huge military experience. After turning in to hollow that part of him was saved and for that when fighting he carefully thinks about a strategy and the best way to fight his opponent without any harm done to himself. He would of been the perfect hollow soldier, but when he turned into a hollow another person started living in his mind - Sadistic, energetic, radical and violent barbarian. His schizophrenia activates when Paco starts bleeding. The only thing that connects the two people in Paco is there love for explosions. Leaving the battle preference of the two personalities there are other difference between them :
Paco : Is always come and thinking things carefully, so you could say that he is a little boring. He doesn't have any real goals except maybe to become stronger just to survive, because of his dream to see his kids in this place. Even dead and hollowfied he is still loyal, so he would never heart another person, or to cheat his wife.
Bogazda : Is totally different. And opposite to Paco - He never thinks and is always excited no matter what, so it's always fun around him. His greatest lust is power, so he will never leave someone to heart Paco, only because he want him to achieve his goal. He doesn't know loyalty and honor, so he will kill everyone and everything, and on top of that his hipper active and excited.


Lesser Familiar Appearance:

Paco is a octopus like hollow with bright purple tentacles witch replace his legs and arms, the tentacles themselves have holes in there end. He doesn't have a body or neck and his masks covers his face. The masks is bright white and tentacles on it's below.
Lesser familiar Abilities:
Fly : Having no legs, Paco developed another way to travel, and started flying rather fast, using his tentacles.
Slime : His tentacles are covered with miniature spikes witch spill strong poison. 3 minutes ( Posts ) after the touches the skin of the person the poison paralyze him for about 2 rounds. If the enemy is hit with the tentacles rapidly the poison becomes stronger and the one that the poison is used on goes under it's effect faster. ( Doesn't work on enemies with higher power lvl )
Explosive : Paco can fire explosive clay balls from the tips of his tentacles.
Stretch : The tentacles can stretch reduce it's size to catch enemies.



Background: Paco always dreamed to be powerful and have a nice wife and kids. But apparently the two things can't be combined and because of that he had to suffer. The both dreamed come true and he become a very powerful man with a General status in the military, also he married to a young and beautiful girl witch gave birth to two beautiful girls. But with grate powers come grate responsibilities and Paco had to work allot of time so he didn't saw how his kids grow up and he started getting old. When he was forty a terrible thing happened. His both girl were kidnapped and even when he paid the ransom, the kidnappers killed them. He used all of his influence and found the murderer of his kids, and in an act of rage he took his gun and tried to deal with them alone. But a merer man didn't stand a chance against allot of opponents. He ended shot and then dead, but his spirit still lived with the aim to kill the one's who killed him. While trying to find a way to do that, His soul slowly corrupted and he turned into a hollow. At first he was terrified, almost his hall body disappeared and some strange tentacles emerged from his head, his face covered with some strange mask, hard like a bone but light like feather. His new form scared him for some time, but after a day or two it began to amuse him. Paco realized that he no longer needs food, cause the air in the place entirely filed him up. And it was getting even more interesting, when he realized that his tentacles are not meant to crawl but can be used to fly. Thinking that this is the end for him Paco began traveling in his new home - Hueko Mundo. Everything looked simple and peaceful, and there was only one thing that worried him a little bit, was this hell or heaven ? It was too peaceful and come to be hell, but looked too deserted to be heaven. So where was he ? Someplace between the two, maybe ? He no longer had the time to relax and think, because he was made to realize where was his place. A big hollow attacked him with only on mean to eat him up. Still not understanding the powers of his new form Paco tried to run, but that didn't work out. He tried to fight but using his tentacles like fist was worthless. Thinking that he is gonna be killed and eaten Paco closed his eyes and just waited to be devour by the giant opponent. It was near hopeless, but something surprising happened. With the first drop of blood the Hollow entirely lost the control of his body. It would of been bad, but someone who had control of the full capacity of the body skills took over. That one not only saved Paco live but killed his opponent with no problem. After the giant hollow been killed Paco got over control of his body and watched the remains of the opponent. At first he was just amused, but then he started to get angry. Angry that he couldn't defeat him by himself, and with anger came something else. Something that made Paco to start tearing apart the flesh of the victim and chewing ti with his teeth. Soon he understand that it gave him some powers, and that entirely chanced what he fought about this place. Realizing that this is not the end, but only the beginning.
Role Play Sample:
- Hueko Mundo, i hate this place !!
Angry growl spread around, giving room for the appearance of a small hollow with purple aura, and an angry face. A short time after him another hollow ten times bigger appeared, growling to the little one. Showing no fear to the bigger opponent a bloodthirsty smile occurred on the face of the tiny one :
- So you are my victim, a ?
The big hollow decided not to waste his time and directly attacked, trying to slash the tiny guy with hes claws. One fast move from the tentacles of the other hollow and he flew over the big one, moving his pointing him with his tentacles, he fired few explosive and made a big smile :
- So it's time to feed.
Little surprised that his first opponent had been defeated so easily, but he didn't wasted his time to think about it. Paco landed near the body and started feeding. Shortly thereafter Paco enjoyed his victim smacking his flash slowly. The moon illuminated the remains of the opponent and made the little hollow think about something, maybe Hueko Mundo wasn't that bad ?

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Comments/Notes: Great, I love the simplicity, but just a bit of problems;

Can you perhaps make the personality and background/history a bit longer? Then that's when I give the stamp.

Tier: 4-1 to 3-3!

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