Minamoto-Genji no Nanashi

※Name: Minamoto-Genji no Nanashi

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※ Nickname: Mangetsu Seishin (Spirit of the full moon)

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※ Age: Unknown
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※ Gender: Male
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※ Status: Alive

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※ Race: Arrancar
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※ Height: 5"9" ft
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※ Weight: 190 lb

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※ Orienation: Freelancing

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※ Reiatsu: Ebony and Ivory
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Racial Abilities:

-Hierro:Advanced

+Sonido:Master

+Pesquisa:Master

Cero/Bala:Adept

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※ Loyalty:
+Bushido
+Renkindo
+Kishido
+Shinto
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※ Weapon:
Zanpakutō

Mangetsu (Full Moon) (Often referred to as Quietus)
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※ Features:
+Hair Color: Ebony
+Eye Color: Ebony (Gold)

+ Hollow hole located over the heart
+Skin Tone: Pale
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※ Unusual Features:
+ Pale Skin
+ Wears a Ebony and Sanguine cloak. (Quietus Mitsurugi Ryuu llX)
+ Mood Eyes.
+ Fangs.
+ Passionless Indulged Gaze.
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+Kata:
● Quietus Mitsurugi Ryuu
● Quietus
● Shoutengatatsu
● Shoutensatsu
● Battojutsu
● Kenjutsu
● Mujuushin
● Muy Thai
● Hamon

●▬▬▬▬▬▬{Skills }▬▬▬▬▬▬●

-Durability: Advanced

+Speed: Master

-Strength: Adept

+Weapon Skill: Master



In his Life Nanashi was but an orphan. Addopted and raised by the Minamoto family. Raised in each custome he pledged loyalty to its codes and devoted his life to such principals – as a born genius, Nanashi quickly advanced most all before him and was bestowed the fifth seat at age Nineteen. Proficient in most all custom swordplay Nanashi developed different styles and utilized what was taught to forge new arts. His philosophy that he left behind was conjured and brought into the readings of Musashi Miyamoto who would later write the famous novel: “Book of Five Rings” on the divine execution in the Sword art: “Sword of two heavens single current”. He died in 1903 (Fifth year of Genji) at age 66 defending the Minamoto household from the hands of the new-world government; he laid wasted with several bullet wounds from the western invention “Gatling Gun Mechanism”. Dieing with hate over his failure he vowed vengeance and slowly let his soul be taken by impurities.



Appearance:

Nanashi has ebony eyes and wavy, shoulder-length Ebony hair that he keeps unkempt and parted down the middle. He also has a faded goatee which gives his appearance to look maybe no more then Tweanty-four. His clothing is unusual for that of an Arrancar. He wears a ebony cloak and crowl outlined with a smeared sanguine pigment, Kanji lettering litters the back labling “Tenchu” (Divine Punishment). Underneath his cloak he possesses a black kimono overlaying light chainmail armor; upon his forarms rests the buckles giving hint to his previous life style (Also found on his legs). A black sash is worn in a manner similar to a matador around his waist. He wears a silver scarf that dropes over his chest. Below he walks in bakezori sandals laced with steel on the bottoms of his steps; and atop his head rests his sugegasa. Further close analysis would detail that his left hand is bandaged. The remains of his Hollow mask consist of a fanged bottom jaw that is position along his neck as if it were a necklace. His Hollow hole is located in the breast of where a beating heart was once present.



Personality:

Nanashi is granted with a keen intterectual outview, possessing thoughts in most philosophies thus as the following he openly admits in harboring: Misanthropy, Humanism, Nihilism, and Pessemistic Philosophy. Utilizing these aspects of his nature he demeans the wisdom of an elder and sports the detatched even so cynicall disposition. Often always serious though never appealing such; his gaze is indulged with a passionless obscurity. Generally laid back and relaxed he hardly ever whipes such from his facial expressions. Often times he’d been shown to relay mercy never truly wishing to kill though will so if needed. He seeks those who may accept him for who he is though due to his social anxiety and loathes of crowds this is nearly impossible. His hobbies are people watching and long enthusiastic walks, often through forests at night when the moon is full; where he feels most tranquil.



Zanpakutō

Mangetsu(Full Moon)

Nanashi wields a standard-size Mugenjin (Serrated Katana). He uses it as a weapon in his un-released state to make up for that fact that he doesn't have a standard Zanpakuto. It sports a sanguine-colored Cross guard, with small protrusions on each tip, and a moon-like design wrapped around the hilt's collar. The hilt itself is a ebony color, and the sheath is a metallic-silver color. He often referrs to his blade as a nickname he created calling it “Quietus” meaning “Final Stroke” or “Ending Cut”

(Further Detail: The blades hilt is hollowed out entirely. A Button on the blade activates a mechanism inside, to pull the blade from one end to the other. The blade itself has an exceptionally high density at its center, since the opposite ends of the blade are identical. There are two guards on either side of the hilt, but this isn't apparant since the guard on the unarmed side collapses. The blade itself possesses the ability to distort the Reiatsu of anything it comes in contact with.)



Unlike all other known Arrancar, Nanashi’s enormous power is not sealed in the form of a Zanpakutō. Instead, it is sealed in a Glyph on his back. When the spirit pressure is released the ressureccion occurs – the discharged energy darkens the heavens and lights the earth with but a single collosal Full moon in which he would take his position infront of to accordingly release.



Ressureccion – Mangetsu release command is “Howl” (咆えろ, hoero) Upon entering his ressureccion Nanashi expels from the light of the moon allowing his persona to be viwed (Resureccion takes place in the glow of the moon, thus his figure no more then a Silhouette for the time being) His clothing has changed drastically for now he is wearing what could be interpreted as traditional samurai armor. Possessing all the required elements thus being Kabuto, Sode, Nodowa, Sendan-no-ita, Do, Haidate, Sune-ate, Kyahan and Tsurumaki. Though each modified and taking a unique primal layout. The Kabuto that rests over his head would possess such characteristics of that of a wolf, its jaws open just enough for sight and may be adjusted to close against potential threats in which the sight can be modified. The Sode have been re-arranged and took the shape of two wolf skulls that guard his shoulder plates. The Sendan-no-ita that protects his frontal chest region is marked with that of a stamped paw print. The Do that overlaps the regional area beholds the insignia of a full moon which is wide-spread across the base of his gut. The Kote that lie where his buckles once mended have been modified and extended to his finger tips which serrate as claws (Talons). The Haidate that shields his lower body bears scrapes and scratches with five main scaring cuts that could be identified as the mutilation one could receive from a lashing by canine fingertips. The Sune-ate wraps around his entire leg though seem gnawed by the teething of fangs. And lastly his Tsurumaki is shaped in that of paws perfectly equipped with potential claws. The coloring of his armor would be Ebony and a darkened Burgundy



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Mangetsu: Has the ability to absorb the Reiatsu of the nature around it as well from its opponent and user thus later can be transferred into obliterating force when collided with anything it comes in contact with. Virtually indestructible due to the dense Reiatsu, Mangetsu seals within itself making it probably invulnerable to any spiritual base or physical attack.



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.°»_ Offensive Techniques _«°.
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-Mangestu First Technique allows Reiatsu within the blade once passed through the flesh of the opponite leaves behind particles that will combust instantaneously burning the opponite at great temperatures. Activated with the voice command “Mugetsu”

-Mangetsu Second Technique allows Reiatsu within the blade to liquefy becoming a lethal poison upon the blades tip that once cut rapidly spreads through the area of the wound offering a numbing paralysis Activate with the command “Suigetsu”

-Mangetsu Third Technique allows Reiatsu within the blade to run off creating a potent wave or beam of energy capable of severing most anything it passes. Activated with the voice command “Zangetsu”

-Mangetsu Fourth Technique allows the Reiatsu within the blade to generate its own Aura which then can be manipulated into an Offensive attack that the wielder may utilize. Commanded with the voice activation of “Tsuki”



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.°»_ Deffensive Techniques _«°.
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-Mangetsu First ability is fairly odd; the user holds it vertically in front of them with there right hand firmly grasping its hilt as there left hand is placed on the center-side of the blade giving the voice command “Eclipse” this stance causes the blade to slow time to a creeping halt within the proximity of five feet around the user allowing ample time for the user to counter attack or even evade the enemies assault



-Mangetsu second technique the ability to form a shield or dome out of its stored Reiatsu which can then be curved into an offensive attack with the voice command “Protect”

-Mangetsu third technique has the ability to transfer the Reiatsu that it stores to its user healing those even enhancing senses and adrenalin with the voice command “Limit”



-Mangetsu fourth and final technique has the ability to glow an iridescent ivory which light gives off a bright glow seemingly unaffected Nanashi utilizes this to throw off his opponents.

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Wolves: In reference to the nature of his Zanpakuto the sky becomes dark and a fullmoon materializes over head upon the summoning of the pack, Nanashi is able to summon a pack of Auroura wolves seemingly numbering in the hundreds. The wolves are controlled verbally by command and will chase down the enemy with the intent to cling via a bite. Upon biting the enemy or getting close enough, the wolves erupt in explosions of varying size and power. They're capable of being very destructive, Nanashi seems to be able to summon them without limit, thus overwhelming the enemy with their sheer numbers.



Moon: Nanashi seperates half of his reiryoku to form the full moon that rests in the sky above him he is thus able too return the energy too him to regenerate from vital wounds and other necessities.



Reiryoku Swords: Nanashi is able to summon spiritual energy swords from his Glyphs, which vaguely resemble the ordinary Mugenjin he wields in his sealed form.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [O]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
  

Comments/Notes:

There seems to be a lot of problems with this application with the specific parts.

I'm just going to keep this short and blunt; you should get rid of the skill sheet stuff for now and edit it in later when we give you an appropriate tier.

In his Life Nanashi was but an orphan. Addopted and raised by the Minamoto family. Raised in each custome he pledged loyalty to its codes and devoted his life to such principals – as a born genius, Nanashi quickly advanced most all before him and was bestowed the fifth seat at age Nineteen. Proficient in most all custom swordplay Nanashi developed different styles and utilized what was taught to forge new arts. His philosophy that he left behind was conjured and brought into the readings of Musashi Miyamoto who would later write the famous novel: “Book of Five Rings” on the divine execution in the Sword art: “Sword of two heavens single current”. He died in 1903 (Fifth year of Genji) at age 66 defending the Minamoto household from the hands of the new-world government; he laid wasted with several bullet wounds from the western invention “Gatling Gun Mechanism”. Dieing with hate over his failure he vowed vengeance and slowly let his soul be taken by impurities.

Too short in my honest opinion along with your personality.

Mangetsu: Has the ability to absorb the Reiatsu of the nature around it as well from its opponent and user thus later can be transferred into obliterating force when collided with anything it comes in contact with. Virtually indestructible due to the dense Reiatsu, Mangetsu seals within itself making it probably invulnerable to any spiritual base or physical attack.

That's a big no-no. No reiatsu absorbing since as far I know, it's not allowed and especially the way it works at the moment.

●▬▬▬▬▬▬{Technique}▬▬▬▬▬▬●
+Kata:
● Quietus Mitsurugi Ryuu
● Quietus
● Shoutengatatsu
● Shoutensatsu
● Battojutsu
● Kenjutsu
● Mujuushin
● Muy Thai
● Hamon

What are these? ...

I think that's it for my VERY ultimately short rant for now. Although, I may sound angry... I am not. Things get awfully confusing when the person doesn't use the template we give out.

Most of the abilities seem a little less too short and bluntly detailed and I advice giving a bit more explaination than that. After that, I'll come back to see what else to look at.

Also, RP sample!

Tier: 3-1 to 2-2 fixed. (Might change later.)

1. Racial Abilities: ranking such as adept and Master are not to be entered before rank is given

2. personality needs to be atleast 10 sentences, your is 6

3. All your offensive and defensive abilities need to be revised woth more detail. They need time limits, cooldown times, flaws etc. Something along these categories and overall they need more explanations. IE. If your using a poison made from liquefying you reiatsu then it would be less effective when fighting higher tier characters. these are points you need to state clearly in your powers. This site is all about detail

4. In your further detail, I will not allow distortion of reiatsu

5. None of this "Unlike all other known Arrancar, Nanashi’s enormous power is not sealed in the form of a Zanpakutō. Instead, it is sealed in a Glyph on his back. When the spirit pressure is released the ressureccion occurs – the discharged energy darkens the heavens and lights the earth with but a single collosal Full moon in which he would take his position infront of to accordingly release.". Your character is a normal Arrancar, he is not special.

6. Your wolves CANNOT be summoned without limit. there is always a limit.

7. none of this: "Moon: Nanashi seperates half of his reiryoku to form the full moon that rests in the sky above him he is thus able too return the energy too him to regenerate from vital wounds and other necessities.". If someone above me allows it then fine. But until then I'm going to sya no for this.

8. none of this "Mangetsu: Has the ability to absorb the Reiatsu of the nature around it as well from its opponent and user thus later can be transferred into obliterating force when collided with anything it comes in contact with. Virtually indestructible due to the dense Reiatsu, Mangetsu seals within itself making it probably invulnerable to any spiritual base or physical attack."