Hikashi Shikimori [Done]

Vizard Template

Name: Hikashi Shikimori

Appearance Age: Between 18 - 21

True Age: 700

Gender: Male



Personality: A Male who always itching for battle and wanted to fight.He likes to fight alone instead with a partner.He always being a solo instead of teamwork because he feels annoyed whenever someone budge into his fight or fights with him as a partner.He dislikes those he has a creepy laughter and anyone that budge into his fight, being his partner and cheating in the battle like infinite health, godmod and all kinds of cheating that doesnt let the opponent die.He dislikes the most is Immortal.Since he cant do anything with Immortal people because he cant even kill them no matter what kind of things he does.

Hikashi is a very evil person and cold-hearted.He shows no mercy to anyone.Especially to godmods, since he cant kill them, he could cut their heads off, not showing a single mercy.Thus, he know that Immortal have weakness.All he needs is the cut their heads off, because its everyone's weakness.Mostly he is serious in almost all kinds of battles and wars.He never surrenders to anyone and anything.He will kill anyone that stands
in his way.

He mostly likes wars and battles.So he can kill as many people he wants with no mercy.He also likes blood spilling all over the place.He is evil enough to kill anyone and everything.He cuts trees down whenever he was in a bad mood.And most likely he goes out for a walk when he is in a good mood.Good mood is one of the rare thing that anyone could see.Hikashi always in bad mood.And rarely in good mood.He also has no patience of waiting and kills everyone when he cant wait much longer.

He usually puts his zanpakuto on his right.He rarely wraps his zanpakuto with bandage.He does that whenever he dislikes someone looking at his zanpakuto.He holds the zanpakuto with his left hand, he knows its much easier to hold with his left hand because its always his favourite hand to hold something heavy.He rarely sit down, because he always stands up and fight everytime he encounters his enemy.He has no fear of anything.But most likely he holds his fear heights, since he wants to prove himself strong and tough.He often faints whenever he cant hold his fear of heights anymore.

Appearance:

Height: 6'1

Weight: 75kg



Zanpakuto Name: Yami o koete (Beyond Darkness)

Zanpakuto Spirit:
His zanpakuto spirit was a male demon/spirit fox.The demon/spirit fox was a fierce and an aggressive fox.He doesnt like anyone to approach near him unless it was his weilder.The demon/spirit fox could remember the weilder's smell.So he wouldnt be easily tricked by others that they were his weilder.He doesnt care anything about his past weilder.He only respects his current weilder only.

Zanpakuto World: The Zanpakuto World is an endless lake of blood, with massive statues of demons sunken in it.Hikashi is somehow able to walk on the liquid’s surface.The sky was red.And there were some few white clouds only.And all other cloud was red.There is a full moon at the sky, so it makes the place visible.

Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance:

Release Phrase: Chi to yami, Release!




Shikai Appearance:

Shikai Abilities: Dark Cero - Hikashi would able to fire out a dark cero from his index finger.It charges for 5 seconds, firing at the enemy.It deals only a small damage.

Dark Wave - Summons a dark wave my swinging the zanpakuto upwards.The wave deals no damage.It only knocks the enemy back.The range is 100 meters away.It fires in a straight line.

Anger Release - Whenever Hikashi was in bad mood or angry.His attacks are greatly increase.He was able to release it by slashing at the enemy with his zanpakuto.



Bankai Appearance:-None-

Bankai Abilities:-None-



Inner Hollow Description: He is Hikashi's Inner Hollow.He has been staying in Hikashi's body since he was a teenager.He has an identical face and body like Hikashi but different personality and clothes.He is a fairly tall and lean-built being with white skin and hair.His eyes consist of violet pupils, white irises and black screla.The Inner Hollow also has black nails.His Hollow self wears a white Shihakusho with a black cloth belt.He weilds the same zanpakuto as Hikashi but the zanpakuto was black.

Inner Hollow Personality: The Inner Hollow Male was a cold-hearted man and usually itching to fight and battle.He is a guy that doesnt show mercy to anyone he fights.He mostly targets their necks so he could cut them off and defeat them easily.He hates anybody that annoys him and those who talks more than him.He mostly hates anybody that wasted his time whenever they talks how powerful they are and whatever they are.He knows people like those, are action too much.Anyone that pisses him off, will get a death judgement from him.

He would take over Hikashi's body whenever he was itching for battle, since he know Hikashi wouldnt mind that he took over his body.

Hollow Mask Appearance:

Hollow Powers: Cero - Hikashi charges a cero on his index finger, then when being fired, its range is vast and it deals a serious damage for most enemies.

Dark Hell Spike - The Hollow Hikashi was able to summon out a dark spike from the ground by waving his right hand up while his zanpakuto was stabbed into the ground.

Enhanced Strength - The Hollow Hikashi's strength would slightly increased.Hollow Hikashi's Zanpakuto was able to cut through large buildings but hasnt enough strength to cut off normal metals.

Enhanced Speed - Hollow Hikashi's speed would be slightly increased as well.Faster than a normal flashstep.His speed was fast enough to able to attack the enemy from different direction and angles.

Enhanced Endurance - The Hollow Hikashi was able to resist most of the pain,attacks and the damage he took.

Hollow Combat - Hollow Hikashi's attack would be more aggressive and more ruthless.And mostly his attacks is slightly faster.

Multiple Ceros - Hollow Hikashi able to fire out multiple ceros.The first cero on his mouth, the 2nd cero charging on his left hand and his third cero charging on his right hand.He was able to fire three of them at once.Its suitable for long range and mid-range.Short range is risky.It deals fatal damage once all 3 ceros make contact with the enemy.High Moderate damage with 2 cero make contact and Moderate damage with 1 cero make contact.

Resurreccion Appearance:-None-

Resurreccion Abilities:-None-

• Durability: Beginner
  
• General Speed: Adept
  
• Strength: Advanced
  
• Weapon Skill: Adept
  

• Hoho: Adept
  
• Cero/Bala/Kidou: Advanced
  
• Zanjutsu: Beginner
  
• Hakuda: Adept
  

Background/Roleplay Sample

The Beginning:

Child/Kid:

Background:

A Male named Hikashi Shikimori grew up in the soul society around in Seireitei and doesnt remember much of his past.He only grew up with his uncle only.Hikashi doesnt even remember who are his family.He only treat his uncle as a father.Hikashi also wanted to join Gotei 13.But, he isnt strong enough to get into the Gotei 13.And he must have a zanpakuto too.

He wanted to train, but he was just a weak ordinary human being who doesnt have any shinigami powers.Hikashi then walk out from his house, wanted to take a stroll around the soul society.After 30 minutes of walking, he saw large mass of smoke coming out from his house.So, as soon as he sees it, he quickly ran to his house.His eyes widened that someone burned his house, as well as his uncle is inside.He has no courage of going into his house, since the fire was so big that he couldnt just simply go into the house.

Tears starts falling out from his eyes, pain and sorrow in his heart, just couldnt let go of it.He just kneel in front of his house, crying for his uncle.And then he saw a few hollows attacking his house, he heard his uncle shouting for help.But he couldnt have the courage to save him.He just kneel down quietly.Then he turn his head around, he saw a group of shinigamis' rushing into his house, fighting and killing those hollows.Then his uncle was thrown out from the window, landing onto the ground, half eaten and blood flowing out from his uncle's body.He saw his uncle holding a sword, it appears to be a zanpakuto.He took it and saw a paper on his left hand.It seems to be a message.He took it and sees the message his uncle wrote, "Hikashi, i know you wanted to be strong like a shinigami, so i hand this zanpakuto for you because i want you to be strong and able to protect anyone from hollows.Please accept the zanpakuto i gave you", As soon as he reads the message.More tears would flow out from his eyes, dripping onto the message.

But he forced himself not to cry.He took up his zanpakuto, and quickly ran away as fast as he could.He then decided to join the shinigami academy after he became stronger.When the first time he see spirits, he was shocked and scared.He didnt know a weak human like him could see spirits.Then he realise he was already a shinigami.But the thing is... where did he GET the shinigami powers?He dont get from any people,anyone.He doesnt know who it is.It remains a secret about himself becoming a shinigami suddenly.But still, he shivers in fear whenever he sees a spirit.He wasnt strong enough to see them and its impossible for a weak and no courage shinigami to see spirits all of the sudden.

Teenager/Young Adult:


So many year has passed, he reached the age of 300, he joined the shinigami academy.But he was strong enough to enter the Gotei 13 already.But he felt that himself, wasnt strong enough.He had a box with him ever since he started to join the shinigami academy.He found the box when he search in his house for anything that is left and not yet being burned.He found a box and had open it before.But he decided to open it whenever himself is weak.And one day, his squad and him was send out to do an assignment.The assignment was to kill a bandit that stole something important from the soul society.

He ran to the area while gripping tightly of his zanpakuto tightly, when him and his squads were arrived to the destination.The blood was splattered all over the place.We then spotted the bandit, he just flashed away in such a quickly speed.Almost all the people in his squad was killed in an instant.His eyes widened and shocked with such an incredibly fast speed.He took out his zanpakuto and managed to block some of its attacks, but a few cuts would appear on his arm, bleeding.

He then stabbed the bandit in time, the blood would flow out from him, dripping onto the floor.He would swing his zanpakuto to the left, slicing him into half with no mercy.Blood would spill all over the place.He then took the thing that was important to the soul society.He quickly ran back after he eliminated the bandit.Thus, leaving all his dead squads alone.

Adult:


Been so many years until he become an adult and serve under the soul society.But one day, he betrayed the soul society and left to the human world.There is one simple thing he betrayed them.He turn himself into a vizard.He took the box that he brought with him for so many years.It was a hollow DNA.He injected the Hollow DNA to his body, fusing his soul into one, thus turning him into a vizard.The Hollow DNA was actually kept by his uncle for many years.He took the DNA from a hollow that he eliminated many years ago, to use it as an experiment.

Hikashi couldnt handle the pain after injecting it to him.Thus, he fell.His body was in pain, unable to move.He wasnt strong enough to take control of himself after injecting the Hollow DNA into him.Then a guy quickly took him away quickly before the shinigamis' could see him.We hide somewhere safe.The Male introduced himself, "My Name is Zen Hyamaru,What is your name?", as he asked, he smiled.Then Hikashi introduced himself as well, "My Name is Hikashi Shikimori,Pleased to meet you", he would then turned away.Zen asked hikashi, "Do you want to join the vizard corps?", he asked politely.Hikashi then nodded, "Sure" , Zen grabbed hikashi's hand, showing him the vizard corps and told him about it.

Hikashi then joined the vizard corps.He did made a few friends but he was very cold-hearted and mean to them.He doesnt care either it was his friends or not.He would even still kill anyone that stands in its path no matter who.But Zen and Hikashi became best friends but still, they rarely talk and met each other.Hikashi usually busy training and Zen wasnt around that time.So, the story continues.

Role Play Sample:
The Male named Hikashi would stand there.Current himself was in the bad mood.So, he sees a tall building standing.Then he took out his zanpakuto quickly, transferring a half of his anger into the zanpakuto, then he swings it to left, piercing through the building.Hikashi put his zanpakuto back, the tall building that was standing would be slashed into half, collapsing onto the ground.

The Male smirked, he swing his zanpakuto again.A Hollow beside him would be cut as well, but as he release his final half anger, the hollow exploded after the hollow got slashed.The explosion would spill the blood all over him.The male took a step to the left, half of the building that was cutted off would explode like a nuke, destroying everything that stands it its path.As well as turning everything into dust.

He would took another step to the right, before himself could be spotted and caught by others.He flashstep and dissapeared quickly.It was just in time that a few people just came after he dissapeared.But Hikashi only flashstepped behind the tree, hearing what they are saying.But they just said they saw someone that was standing at the place where Hikashi stand earlier ago.He was lucky that the others said its just an imagination.Then he look at the town, the entire town was almost being exploded by a massive explosion.Only a few building was stand, hundreds of them are still alive.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [O]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
  

Comments/Notes:

Can you describe your abilities' paralyzation in posts? And how do they get paralyzed?

Some of the abilities seem a little half-assed to be honest (not the concept, but the details of the ability's potential).

The history makes it sound like he has became a substitute shinigami. (I think you know that shinigami transferring powers are a death penalty; hence.. Ichigo saving Rukia from Sogyouku... etc.)

Also RP samples have a lot of commas... change that and make them smaller into sentences with actual periods. xD

Edit: 2411 - 800 = 1611. At that time, Tokyo wasn't a city nor a town. So, I guess editing the age or modifying the history would help.

Tier: 2-2+ if fixed.

Ok following up due to U-Momma and Akemi's orders

-Biggest Problems in the history
1. your 800 years old, tokyo wasn't around in 1611. During that time it was called Edo and was the center of a military Government

2. No where in your history do you state how Hikashi knows about the Soul Society. Besides this, a 13 year old knowing about the Soul Society is not something acceptable.

3. Also, physical strength from you human body does not effect your strength of your spiritual body. Meaning your training at 14 is worthless. Along with the fact that he should not know about the SS at that age to begin with.

4. You don't state that he has the ability to see spirits. This is not an understood fact. You need to state clearly when he started to see them.

5. The part with the shinigami in your history is just plain ridiculous. 1)e why would a random Shinigami offer you his powers. 2) You would be a substitue shinigami if he did. 3) he wouldn't disappear 4) He would be hunted down and killed by the SS because doing so would gibe him the death sentence. 4) they would not allow you to join their ranks if this had happened anyway. 5) You would enter a spiritual body and your human body would be left behind

6. You don't explain how he became a Vizard. During the manga Vizard were created by using the power of the hyougyoku in which Aizen possessed. Unless he used it to turn you into a Vizard then your not one. Unless someone above me allows another explanation this is not acceptable.

7. Why is your mother still alive after 400 years. I see you had her die after meetig her again, but 1) why the hell is she still alive 2) what is her race, It would not make sense if she were still alive if she were human. If your trying to imply that she was not human it won't work that way. Say what race she was. If she is human she was dead along time ago.

8. In the history of the vizard they were not hunted down. If they didn't hunt the others down why would they hunt you.

-these are the biggest parts wrong with your history. All these points need to be fixed before it is to be accepted.

Moved to WIP until changes are made to this app.

Done changing the history and the age.

P.S: The changes are made. :3

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