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Mon May 30, 2011 2:45 pm
Little did yall know I dabble in poetry.



















Think







The brightness can overtake ones eyes



The darkness can overtake ones mind



Only if ever that fire should die



That I would ever allow myself to become truly blind







Worry not you may not see the same light as I do



Why worry yourself with a breeze that's felt by someone who
is not you



Only by those whose minds have been solidified can the true
temerity of ones timeless toil to find the truth of truths be trialed



Wouldn't it be great, for it it’s worth, for the light to be
just given, instead of being sought and as elusive as an opportunity that was
once thrown away and to never be re-given







But of course young lad the prisms of the mind are far more
than one can just see



Because before the belief that one had his freedom his mind
could do nothing but grow



Only then his ferocious fight with the driest of plights
could he finally be free



By only his own power and the force of his hand that he
walks tall now







So why is it that I and he can still see the same light and
have them be completely different?



Sorry it's a secret but ill give you a hint, the light isn’t
different but just a different shade



Only thinking in black and white will be the cause and an
unresolved conscious will continue to leave your eyes vacant



So don't worry my friend because here comes one more hint







That time only moves forward, and your mind never truly
erases, and your heart already knows



Words, will forever be meager in place of the thought of the
light that captures your eye



Because that light is your energy, once you find it its
yours, its only up to you to dispose



So take what it is, your light, your wonder, and follow it to
the end of the earth, because every light is yours you just have to choose.







Only if you think about it, its pretty funny, because the
light also has to choose you.
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Sat Jun 04, 2011 1:22 am
You did this?! Woah. I suck at poems and such. You're so good! ^^




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Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:32 pm
NO NO this is soo bad >//< but thank you for your kind words.

I feel like poetry and writing go hand and hand. And so it's almost an automatic thing yknow?


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Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:11 am
Don't say it's bad! It's better than I could do! I suck and I mean SUCK at poems!




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Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:26 am
Try making one... youll see how easy it is x3


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Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:31 am
Okay!

Potatoes are nice,
Potates with rice,
Potatoes eat dice,
Potatoes are nice.

=w=




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Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:24 am
etoo.... i liked it xD;;;nice repetition and end rhyme...


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Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:42 am
=w= Potatoes.




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Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:28 pm
xD eduardo


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Sun Jun 05, 2011 4:17 pm
The name of the poem, I forgot to name it! D:


Potatoes




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