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Poem
Mon May 30, 2011 2:45 pm
Little did yall know I dabble in poetry.
Think
The brightness can overtake ones eyes
The darkness can overtake ones mind
Only if ever that fire should die
That I would ever allow myself to become truly blind
Worry not you may not see the same light as I do
Why worry yourself with a breeze that's felt by someone who
is not you
Only by those whose minds have been solidified can the true
temerity of ones timeless toil to find the truth of truths be trialed
Wouldn't it be great, for it it’s worth, for the light to be
just given, instead of being sought and as elusive as an opportunity that was
once thrown away and to never be re-given
But of course young lad the prisms of the mind are far more
than one can just see
Because before the belief that one had his freedom his mind
could do nothing but grow
Only then his ferocious fight with the driest of plights
could he finally be free
By only his own power and the force of his hand that he
walks tall now
So why is it that I and he can still see the same light and
have them be completely different?
Sorry it's a secret but ill give you a hint, the light isn’t
different but just a different shade
Only thinking in black and white will be the cause and an
unresolved conscious will continue to leave your eyes vacant
So don't worry my friend because here comes one more hint
That time only moves forward, and your mind never truly
erases, and your heart already knows
Words, will forever be meager in place of the thought of the
light that captures your eye
Because that light is your energy, once you find it its
yours, its only up to you to dispose
So take what it is, your light, your wonder, and follow it to
the end of the earth, because every light is yours you just have to choose.
Only if you think about it, its pretty funny, because the
light also has to choose you.
Think
The brightness can overtake ones eyes
The darkness can overtake ones mind
Only if ever that fire should die
That I would ever allow myself to become truly blind
Worry not you may not see the same light as I do
Why worry yourself with a breeze that's felt by someone who
is not you
Only by those whose minds have been solidified can the true
temerity of ones timeless toil to find the truth of truths be trialed
Wouldn't it be great, for it it’s worth, for the light to be
just given, instead of being sought and as elusive as an opportunity that was
once thrown away and to never be re-given
But of course young lad the prisms of the mind are far more
than one can just see
Because before the belief that one had his freedom his mind
could do nothing but grow
Only then his ferocious fight with the driest of plights
could he finally be free
By only his own power and the force of his hand that he
walks tall now
So why is it that I and he can still see the same light and
have them be completely different?
Sorry it's a secret but ill give you a hint, the light isn’t
different but just a different shade
Only thinking in black and white will be the cause and an
unresolved conscious will continue to leave your eyes vacant
So don't worry my friend because here comes one more hint
That time only moves forward, and your mind never truly
erases, and your heart already knows
Words, will forever be meager in place of the thought of the
light that captures your eye
Because that light is your energy, once you find it its
yours, its only up to you to dispose
So take what it is, your light, your wonder, and follow it to
the end of the earth, because every light is yours you just have to choose.
Only if you think about it, its pretty funny, because the
light also has to choose you.
Re: Poem
Sat Jun 04, 2011 1:22 am
You did this?! Woah. I suck at poems and such. You're so good! ^^
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Re: Poem
Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:32 pm
NO NO this is soo bad >//< but thank you for your kind words.
I feel like poetry and writing go hand and hand. And so it's almost an automatic thing yknow?
I feel like poetry and writing go hand and hand. And so it's almost an automatic thing yknow?
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:11 am
Don't say it's bad! It's better than I could do! I suck and I mean SUCK at poems!
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:26 am
Try making one... youll see how easy it is x3
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:31 am
Okay!
Potatoes are nice,
Potates with rice,
Potatoes eat dice,
Potatoes are nice.
=w=
Potatoes are nice,
Potates with rice,
Potatoes eat dice,
Potatoes are nice.
=w=
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 10:24 am
etoo.... i liked it xD;;;nice repetition and end rhyme...
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:28 pm
xD eduardo
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Re: Poem
Sun Jun 05, 2011 4:17 pm
The name of the poem, I forgot to name it! D:
Potatoes
Potatoes
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