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Which of the templates that you preferred when making a human? If not making a human, imagine that you are.

6 - 55%
2 - 18%
3 - 27%
 
Total Votes: 11
 
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Human Template (Advanced)
{Poll and Opinion} UHCM's Advanced Human Template Bleach_OrihimeInoue_005{Poll and Opinion} UHCM's Advanced Human Template Sado___Chad___Yasutora_by_Darraneekeri

Background

{Start from the beginning, then move forward, if your character reached the proposed age, skip the rest of this section and if your character died at a certain age, skip to Soul.}

Childhood (Birth-Age 5):

Early-Teenage (Age 6-11):

Mid-Teenage (Age 12-17):

Late-Teenage (Age 18-20):

Early Adulthood (Age 21-44):

Mid-Adulthood (Age 45-64):

Late-Adulthood (Age 65-Natural Death):

Soul (After Death):


Identity

Name: (First Name)

Family Name: (Last Name)

Nickname: (What do they call you by?)

Age: (How old are you?)

Gender: (Are you a man or a woman?)

Occupation: (Job/Career)

Status: (Alive/Missing/Dead...If a Soul, count it as Dead)

"This person's name is [Name] of the [Family Name] Family. This [Age]-year-old [Gender] is also known as "[Nickname]." All we know of this person was that the status is [Status] and that person worked as a [Occupation]."


Talents

Occupational
{Skills gained from being in a career or a job.}

Hobby
{Skills gained from doing what you do on your spare time.}

Natural
{Skills that you have quickly adapted to.}

Educated
{Skills gained from your time in school.}


Powers

{Whether it is First Stage or Second Stage of Power, Half-Awakened or Fully Awakened of Chi, here is where you can make powers. Be sure to mark them as the legend key depicted}

Legend Key
----{S1} = First Stage of Power
----{S2} = Second Stage of Power
----{C1} = Half-Awakened of Chi
----{C2} = Fully-Awakened of Chi


Offensive
{Powers that can harm your enemy.}

Defensive
{Powers that can block or resist an enemy's attack.}

Support
{Powers that can improve the chances for yourself or your allies.}

Countermeasure
{Powers that can be offensive or supportive when you are responding to an enemy's attack.}


Appearance

{Add an image and you can choose to skip the rest in this section.}

Skin Color: (Light/Tan/Dark)

Figure: (Stick (underweight)/Apple (desirable)/Orange (overweight))

Physique: (Wimpy/Average/Strong)

Allure: (Deterring/Average/Attractive)

Hair: (Describe what your hair look like.)

Eyes: (Describe your eyes.)

Face: (Describe the face.)

Blemish: (Scars, freckles, infections or so on.)

Beauty Care: (make-up and nail polish along with other things)

Head: (Hat or Helmet for example)

Back: (Coat and Cape for examples)

Top: (shirts or bikini top for example)

Hands: (gloves or gauntlets)

Bottom: (pants or something like that)

Feet: (shoes or boots for example)

Accessories: (jewelries and gadgets for examples)

Power Stage 1: (What your character looked like when he or she is tapping into the first stage of power)

Power Stage 2: (What your character looked like when he or she is tapping into the final stage of power)

Half-Awakened: (What your character looked like when he or she is using Chi.)

Fully-Awakened: (What your character looked like when he or she is using the full power of Chi.)


Personal Attitude

Love: (Some of the things that you do love to do, eat or acquire.)

Brave: (Some of the things that you will have mostly no fear about.)

Like: (Some of the things that you do like.)

Neutral: (Some of the things that you generally don't mind or don't care.)

Dislike: (Some of the things that you do not like.)

Fear: (Some of the things that you would be afraid.)

Hate: (Some of the things that you do hate to do, eat or receive.)

Strength: (Some of the things that made you reliable)

Quirk: (Some of the things that made you not reliable)


Relationship Attitude

Kindred: (How you act to a family member or a Lover.)

Ally/Best Friend: (How you act to a person you trust or helping.)

Friend: (How you act to someone who earned to be close to you, but not earned your full trust yet.)

Acquaintance: (How you act to someone you met before, but not your friend yet.)

Neutral: (How you act to strangers.)

Rival: (How you act to someone that you don't trust and often compete against.)

Enemy: (How you act to those who you are against.)

Nemesis: (How you act to someone who has a personal grudge against you.)

Arch-Nemesis: (How you act to someone who you definitely know the grudge is more than personal.)


Situational Attitude

Leisure: (How will you act when you have spare time.)

Work: (How will you act when doing work.)

Combat: (How will you act when in battle.)

Bored: (How will you act when you have nothing to do.)


Combat Role-Play Sample



Leisure Role-Play Sample



Skills Sheet

{Do not fill it out until you are assigned a Tier, refer to this list for basic ideas}

Levels: Master, Advanced, Adept, Beginner

Durability: (How tough you are and how much you could survive.)

Ingenuity: (How clever you can be when perceiving someone or making something from junk.)

Technology: (How well you can use computers and gadgets.)

Driving/Piloting: (How well you can pilot a hover vehicle or drive a ground vehicle)





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[center][color=darkred][size=24][b]Human Template (Advanced)[/b][/size][/color]
[img]http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_XFGuSZ6n1LY/SLFZKY5e2iI/AAAAAAAABWg/FoQkrvLQ9go/s400/bleach_OrihimeInoue_005.jpg[/img][img]http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_ALkYXV0dapI/TVDFa0Cu99I/AAAAAAAAABM/IEeRUL-HdrU/s1600/Sado___Chad___Yasutora_by_Darraneekeri.png[/img]

[b][u]Background[/u][/b][/center]

[color=red][b]{Start from the beginning, then move forward, if your character reached the proposed age, skip the rest of this section and if your character died at a certain age, skip to Soul.}[/b][/color]

[b]Childhood (Birth-Age 5):[/b]

[b]Early-Teenage (Age 6-11):[/b]

[b]Mid-Teenage (Age 12-17):[/b]

[b]Late-Teenage (Age 18-20):[/b]

[b]Early Adulthood (Age 21-44):[/b]

[b]Mid-Adulthood (Age 45-64):[/b]

[b]Late-Adulthood (Age 65-Natural Death):[/b]

[b]Soul (After Death):[/b]


[center][b][u]Identity[/u][/b][/center]

[b]Name:[/b] (First Name)

[b]Family Name:[/b] (Last Name)

[b]Nickname:[/b] (What do they call you by?)

[b]Age:[/b] (How old are you?)

[b]Gender:[/b] (Are you a man or a woman?)

[b]Occupation:[/b] (Job/Career)

[b]Status:[/b] (Alive/Missing/Dead...If a Soul, count it as Dead)

[i]"This person's name is [Name] of the [Family Name] Family. This [Age]-year-old [Gender] is also known as "[Nickname]." All we know of this person was that the status is [Status] and that person worked as a [Occupation]."[/i]


[center][b][u]Talents[/u][/b][/center]

[b][u]Occupational[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Skills gained from being in a career or a job.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Hobby[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Skills gained from doing what you do on your spare time.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Natural[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Skills that you have quickly adapted to.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Educated[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Skills gained from your time in school.}[/b][/color]


[center][b][u]Powers[/u][/b][/center]

[color=red][b]{Whether it is First Stage or Second Stage of Power, Half-Awakened or Fully Awakened of Chi, here is where you can make powers. Be sure to mark them as the legend key depicted}[/b][/color]

[b]Legend Key[/b]
[i]----{S1} = First Stage of Power
----{S2} = Second Stage of Power
----{C1} = Half-Awakened of Chi
----{C2} = Fully-Awakened of Chi[/i]

[b][u]Offensive[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Powers that can harm your enemy.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Defensive[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Powers that can block or resist an enemy's attack.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Support[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Powers that can improve the chances for yourself or your allies.}[/b][/color]

[b][u]Countermeasure[/u][/b]
[color=red][b]{Powers that can be offensive or supportive when you are responding to an enemy's attack.}[/b][/color]


[center][b][u]Appearance[/u][/b][/center]

[color=red][b]{Add an image and you can choose to skip the rest in this section.}[/b][/color]

[b]Skin Color:[/b] (Light/Tan/Dark)

[b]Figure:[/b] (Stick (underweight)/Apple (desirable)/Orange (overweight))

[b]Physique:[/b] (Wimpy/Average/Strong)

[b]Allure:[/b] (Deterring/Average/Attractive)

[b]Hair:[/b] (Describe what your hair look like.)

[b]Eyes:[/b] (Describe your eyes.)

[b]Face:[/b] (Describe the face.)

[b]Blemish:[/b] (Scars, freckles, infections or so on.)

[b]Beauty Care:[/b] (make-up and nail polish along with other things)

[b]Head:[/b] (Hat or Helmet for example)

[b]Back:[/b] (Coat and Cape for examples)

[b]Top:[/b] (shirts or bikini top for example)

[b]Hands:[/b] (gloves or gauntlets)

[b]Bottom:[/b] (pants or something like that)

[b]Feet:[/b] (shoes or boots for example)

[b]Accessories:[/b] (jewelries and gadgets for examples)

[b]Power Stage 1:[/b] (What your character looked like when he or she is tapping into the first stage of power)

[b]Power Stage 2:[/b] (What your character looked like when he or she is tapping into the final stage of power)

[b]Half-Awakened:[/b] (What your character looked like when he or she is using Chi.)

[b]Fully-Awakened:[/b] (What your character looked like when he or she is using the full power of Chi.)


[center][b][u]Personal Attitude[/u][/b][/center]

[b]Love:[/b] (Some of the things that you do love to do, eat or acquire.)

[b]Brave:[/b] (Some of the things that you will have mostly no fear about.)

[b]Like:[/b] (Some of the things that you do like.)

[b]Neutral:[/b] (Some of the things that you generally don't mind or don't care.)

[b]Dislike:[/b] (Some of the things that you do not like.)

[b]Fear:[/b] (Some of the things that you would be afraid.)

[b]Hate:[/b] (Some of the things that you do hate to do, eat or receive.)

[b]Strength:[/b] (Some of the things that made you reliable)

[b]Quirk:[/b] (Some of the things that made you not reliable)


[center][b][u]Relationship Attitude[/u][/b][/center]

[b]Kindred:[/b] (How you act to a family member or a Lover.)

[b]Ally/Best Friend:[/b] (How you act to a person you trust or helping.)

[b]Friend:[/b] (How you act to someone who earned to be close to you, but not earned your full trust yet.)

[b]Acquaintance:[/b] (How you act to someone you met before, but not your friend yet.)

[b]Neutral:[/b] (How you act to strangers.)

[b]Rival:[/b] (How you act to someone that you don't trust and often compete against.)

[b]Enemy:[/b] (How you act to those who you are against.)

[b]Nemesis:[/b] (How you act to someone who has a personal grudge against you.)

[b]Arch-Nemesis:[/b] (How you act to someone who you definitely know the grudge is more than personal.)


[center][b][u]Situational Attitude[/u][/b][/center]

[b]Leisure:[/b] (How will you act when you have spare time.)

[b]Work:[/b] (How will you act when doing work.)

[b]Combat:[/b] (How will you act when in battle.)

[b]Bored:[/b] (How will you act when you have nothing to do.)


[center][b][u]Combat Role-Play Sample[/u][/b]



[b][u]Leisure Role-Play Sample[/u][/b]



[b][u]Skills Sheet[/u][/b][/center]

[color=red][b]{Do not fill it out until you are assigned a Tier, refer to this list for basic ideas}[/b][/color]

[b]Levels:[/b] [i]Master, Advanced, Adept, Beginner[/i]

[b]Durability:[/b] (How tough you are and how much you could survive.)

[b]Ingenuity:[/b] (How clever you can be when perceiving someone or making something from junk.)

[b]Technology:[/b] (How well you can use computers and gadgets.)

[b]Driving/Piloting:[/b] (How well you can pilot a hover vehicle or drive a ground vehicle)
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Tue May 10, 2011 3:19 pm

I will say that I am impressed with what you have written here, however the template will pretty much appear three times as big. Well to those that are a little lazy may see this as a daunting task and not bother making a character with this. Thats only for those half assed people, hopefully we wont get many of those xD

I didn't fully understand how the powers are done though. Do you write something then put {CS1} at the start of it or something?

overall though, its actually quite nice i just wanted to give friendly and helpful criticism

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