Kairu Zukinio (complete)

My only problem really with this is split into two parts,

That is the fact that your Second power 'Stalk' is more of a bankai ability and is also very edgy as it hinders true movement out of the area its in. By that i mean you cant get out... That I dont like... Plus it feels like a captain ability so id think about something different really.

The second problem is that, well your history is nearly all Roleplay. This isn't bad and we can live with it, but it scrapes the line between a history and an RP sample... However you may keep it if you wish as its not half bad xD

May i add another and make that my bankai then?

yes you can but dont go over the top with the cube. you also wont have bankai right away.

You can minus post count if you like just wanted to let you know that its been modified

kk good ?

• Name [x]
  
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• Appearance Present [x]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [x]
  
• History is of appropriate length [x]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]
  

Comments/Notes: Everything works out fine then.
Tier: 2-3

Kairu wrote:

S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Kairu Zukinio
Gender: Male
Age: 168
Appearance:



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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: Easy going and always polite to women no matter what has the highest respect for women but always seems to be flirting when he tries not to. Kairu is the type of guy that believes so highly in his morals and goals with no change that he is known to argue with others if they conflict with his morals and goals. He can easily be alone and loves to think but also if very friendly towards others. (Especially looking into the eyes of a beautiful women.) Kairu usually stays to himself unless others come to him or speak with him, he has a tendency to stare into others eyes when they speak with him. Kairu speaks as if he is lower then everyone else but that changes with battle he becomes higher then his enemy when he speaks and always serious. He would usually goto others for answers he doesn't carry well to problems or tricky situations, but as situations pro-long he would eventually come out with a answer. Hates to fight with his friends and would always hold back in fear of hurting them even if it could get himself hurt.

Kairu has a low pain tolerance and cries often at the sign of pain he could stub a toe or trip over something and he would cry but in any sight of a women he would not he would suppress all tears or screams he may only be seen by a women when he is crying only while in battle. He would rarely ever go against what his zanpakuto wished for he saw in is sword the way the move forward and he would always treat his friends with kindness is zanpakuto is Kairu's friend. Kairu loves pets and would always talk to animals as if they understand him treating them like a child, is usually embarrassed by acting this way to animals but can't help it. When alone Kairu could listen to music for hours he likes all types of music but above all else is the piano he played piano and listened to it, every time he would drift away in his own mind.


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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: Life:

A son left to die in the arms of his dead mother covered in blood at the age of one just outside of New York city. Saved by Tairaa an older man in his 40 this man became his father and named him Kairu after his father. Tairaa had hidden Kairu's past from him hoping he would grow one day happy and normal. His wish was coming true till one day the real father had heard of one who bears the name of the women who he had killed which was Zukinio. He found the city and the home of Tairaa but Kairu was gone to school. Tairaa was home and tortured till death had fallen upon him and he never spilt a word of where Kairu was,The real father left the city.


Kairu arrived home to find his father dead inside they're burning house his father laying against the wall. Cuts all over Tairaa's body mutilating what image he use to have with blood driping from his face. Kairu just looked into the blank eyes of his fathers, just gazing in them tears began to fall from Kairu's eyes yet still emotionless he grabbed what looked to be a letter from Tairaa's hand. Just walked outside and watched as the house burned as his life and all he cared for burned, feeling the fire in his body all the anger and hatred he left what life he had to burn.


Days later he reads the note;"" Im so sorry kairu, I tired to raise you from this I tried to help you forget but now it is back and always will be. I am so so sorry... I love you. Never forget that I will always be watching and waiting for you."

Love,
Your Dad Tairaa"

Death:

Kairu is confused in what he wished for justice or revenge but either decision he knew had had to find his real father. He had no home only the streets he roamed for days looking for clues and asking people if they know of his father, with no luck. Kairu searched for years and never gave up on his goal of finding his actual father, and one night when he wished to sleep for the night, as he was sitting in his alleyway to sleep he just had a glimpse of his father walking by. He ran out of the alleyway to see his father again having a cigarette just outside of a pub.


There was no hesitation in Kairu's mind as he sprinted at his father with clutched fists his stomach twisted as he ran no thought in his head this was his instinct to kill. The father had seen Kairu and ran for the nearest alley to hide but it was far too late, Kairu had already blocked him in. The instant the father turned the impact of Kairu's fist drove his fathers head in the wall leaving a gash on his head. Kairu kicked his father and mounted on top as he drove his fist into his fathers face blood splatted everywhere. The father could not move, Kairu had picked up a piece of glass from the ground readied to slit his fathers throat but stopped. His father begged for his life but Kairu could not hear him for he was lost in thought and confusion he was lost would he kill or do what was right he thought.


As Kairu pushed this glass slightly cutting his throat he stood up from his father but the instant Kairu stood the father had shot him three times in the chest, as Kairu bled on the ground gasping for air as the lungs filled with blood, the father laid on the ground and had said "I'm so sorry" and shot himself in the head. Kairu's life flashed before his eye's and all he did was smile and had said, "finally".


Kairu Zukinio died that night at the age of 24.

Time in Soul Society before the Academy:


Kairu awoke in the Soul Society on a bridge crossing, confused he panicked not knowing what was going on around him he ran. As he ran he didn't understand what was going on or where he was nothing was the same all he could do was keep running, Kairu ran till he couldn't breath, sweat dripping down his brow he stopped and hid in a corner in between a stall and to be looked like someones resident.


He could see flashes of his old life and he could remember his old life. Kairu remembered everything but how he got to the soul society, Kairu kept asking himself if he was dead and finally after hours someone answered him. A boy looking to be the same age as himself told Kairu the process of being sent the the soul society. This boy not knowing much only told him of how a shinigami would have sent him here and that is all. Kairu gazing at the ground as he was sucked into deep thought never said a word for hours but this boy sat down by his side until the sunset, the boy asked if he would like to stay with him for awhile, Kairu didn't answer just followed.


40 years has past still no word escaped Kairu's mouth, Kairu had taken up a job farming with this boy who he said his name was Sadako he always smiled and accepted that Kairu never asked for rent or money of sorts but Kairu still left money on the table ever time he was able. One day out in the field as they were just harvesting some crops Kairu see's a beautiful women pass by with long brown hair and the bluest and most beautiful eyes he had ever seen pass by and suddenly just spurt out the words, "wow". Sadako stood immediately looked at Kairu and was amazed that Kairu spoke, Sadako started to try and get Kairu to speak he was simply happy just with yes and no's at first and slowly tried to get more and more out of Kairu and he did so.


52 years had past since Kairu had arrived in the Soul Society and Kairu and Sadako were having full conversations now. Kairu was fascinated by women and spoke of them the most and always in a highly respectable manor. Sadako and Kairu were working one day and Sadako stopped and told Kairu he would like for him to meet someone that has become important to him. Sadako meet a beautiful women while working when Kairu was sick. Of course Kairu agreed so they finished there work and they made a bigger dinner that night. Time went by it and was getting very late the weather was a terrible black sky as it rained, Sadako became worrisome and ran out to look for this women. Kairu and Sadako split up and the only description that was given was that Kairu would know when he saw her. Kairu searched for hours and started to head back to see if there was any luck on Sadako side, as he walk in his direction he saw him and her. Sadako and the women with the most beautiful blue eyes, they were kissing in the rain, Kairu stayed hidden and felt something down in the pit of his stomach, this was jealousy. Sadako and the girl made they're way back to his home to find a letter Kairu left, Kairu had decided he could not watch them be all lovey dovey around him, therefor he wrote a note saying that Kairu had thought that they may enjoy the night alone and maybe later on he would meet this women.


Kairu planned on sleeping in a alleyway again the rain had no effect on him some reason he had felt like he was use to the cold of the rain. As he walked no one was around it was just himself alone, he thought to himself that he needed something just he wasn't sure what immediately tho. He wandered for three hours before he figured it out, it was to meet this women. Sadako has given so much to him but he refused to see this women and he felt guilty for it. He ran towards Sadako's home to only hear a scream from inside, Kairu's heart pounded as he smashed open the door to see Sadako had pushed this women into the wall of his home.


He calmed down just from seeing that Sadako was alright and as he walked towards him asking what was the issue he froze in place. Looking at the womens face in such horror his heart started to pound again as Sadako said nothing, Kairu said his name in hope of a answer there was only silence as Sadako turned Kairu's eye's had widened looking into the sadako's blank eyes. Kairu remembered seeing those eye's before, Kairu suddenly heard a whisper come from Sadako saying, "Come closer please." and Sadako repeated over and over again saying it faster "Come closer.... closer" until suddenly it became a screech. Unbearable screech as his teeth got sharper and more teeth began to appear in his mouth like a shark, Kairu's only thought was to run but he couldn't not with the women trapped there. Kairu stopped thinking and threw a glass vase at Sadako and picked up this women in his arms and ran as fast as he could, no one was willing to help he was alone. The creature appeared in front of Kairu, he realized running was pointless he could run as fast as Sadako and he had felt as if hiding would not work as work so Kairu set the women down on a bench and prepared his mind thinking it was the right thing to do.


Kairu could only hear laughing as Sadako came near and the night became heavy the rain has faded but the sky still black as the wind howled in between the houses. Kairu was frightened and grasp what was going on he stood near this women looking down at her and a tear came from his eye, He would protect this women for Sadako and himself she was important to both of them. Kairu could now hear someone breathing in front of him heaving, as Kairu looked up he could only see white this creature had Sadako's body white as snow and a giant whole in is chest as if something cut a circle through his body. Kairu looked at his face and his eye's they were blank just like that night the night everything burned, Kairu cried while looking into Sadakos eye's but this creature saw no reason to wait as teeth appear all over in the mouth of Sadakos body as it rushed forward screaming "Come closer!" and Kairu could only look into his eyes and wonder why this happened to his friend. The pain that came afterwards as blood coated Kairu's arm, he could only yell out in pain as his body was smashed aside into the street, his arm became numb Sadako had cut open Kairu's arm by biting him, the teeth did not pierce far but he had no use of left arm. Kairu could not think with his heart pounding so loud but he stood to challenge Sadako once more. Sadako was not interested in Kairu for some reason tho, and only wanted to get to the women, Kairu had no choice but to tackle Sadako onto the wet ground face to face they were Kairu cried as he gazed upon his face and into his eye's and screamed at Sadako's face,"Why are you doing this?!, I thought you cared about her?!".


Kairu began to fly through the air into the bench that this women was laid upon, he tried to stand but couldn't his body would not listen anymore. His body was numb he had the strength but his body refused, he could only gaze into Sadako's eyes as they came foward so slowly and Kairu said, "I'm sorry.... I'm so sorry I couldn't protect you, I should have stayed with you!" he cried, " We'll if this is my end I'm happy its you I could have had no better..."


Suddenly a black figure had appeared behind Sadako and a sword pierced his stomach in a upward swing blood sprayed on Kairu, as his friend fell to the ground fell to the ground he could only watch, so badly he wanted to catch his friend but couldn't move. I hand appeared from this black kimono and said, " That was not your friend so you shouldn't have given up so easily he had no mercy for you." Kairu let one last tear from his eye as everything faded to black.


20 years has past since Sadako had died Kairu had healed from what was paralysis, he was the lucky one with the small does. The women was not so lucky and has been permanently paralyzed from the waist down, Kairu stayed with this women and took care of her. He felt as if it was his responsibility and that would've been what Sadako wanted. He cooked and cleaned for this lady he still thought she was beautiful and her eyes breath taking, this womens name was Mizuki, she had grown attached to Kairu but no matter what Kairu couldn't his mind always thought of Sadako. Kairu wanted to move on and if he stayed he wouldn't be able to do so, he knew what he wanted. He wanted to get stronger he needed to become a shinigami.


Kairu had tell Mizuki before he left but first to make her one last dinner which would be dumplings tonight that was her favorite, Kairu just hoped to see her smile one last time before he left. As Kairu cooked the dumplings he had heard someone knock on the door, he called Mizuki, " Can you get that please?" He continued to cook for a hour longer till the food was complete, Kairu entered from the kitchen, " Mizuki what would you like to drink tonight? and who was at the door?" Mizuki replied, " Some saki for three please our guest is still here." As Kairu entered the living he said, " wow this must be a close friend of your to be staying this late." Mizuki replied with, " Actually I believe that she would be a good friend of yours and she has been waiting very patiently." As Kairu looked up he saw a black kimono. Kairu, " I am very sorry Yumi I didn't...." Yumi interrupts Kairu with, " It's alright you know I won't mind, how have you been?" Yumi was a cheerful women always smiling always making other around her smile, she had short blond hair and was 5'8.


This is the women who saved them that night, Kairu felt he owed everything to this women. Kairu replied, " I'm magnificent now that you are here Yumi." Mizuki only shook her head and Kairu asked, " Would you like something? Dinner was just to start." Yumi hesitates on the answer but then nods saying, " No, I'm alright thank you."


Kairu then stands and head into the kitchen bring back two plates of dumplings and a box of pockey sticks, setting two sticks on each plate and taking one out for himself he sits. Misuki states, " Kairu you are truly amazing, thank you so much." Yumi replies," Yes he is truly amazing." Mizuki looks confusingly at Yumi. Kairu states," Thank you, but please eat before it cold." he smiles and they both nod is agreement. Yumi then stops to ask where Kairu's dinner was but Kairu lied and said he wasn't hungry and asks Yumi," May I ask why are you visiting? Your company is certainly amazing tho."

Kairu smiled as Yumi blushed, Mizuki seemed uninterested as she bite down on food. Yumi nods and sits straight, " I've come looking to recruit you Kairu." Mizuki's eyes widened but stayed silent, Kairu did not know what to think but he asked, " why me? Yumi?" Then Mizuki jokingly says, " Yea why him he's just a cowardly cook." Kairu laughs with his head down a bit only to hear a "SLAP!"

Kairu looked up to find that Yumi has slapped Mizuki, she was surprised as Yumi screamed, " Never say that! even as a joke!" Yumi calmed and continued, " Kairu saved you yet you call him cowardly, he stood against something he know he couldn't deal with to save you." "He could have ran but he stayed, you would call that cowardly? Have you seen his scars that should remind you he was there and still is." Kairu could only stare as Yumi stood and made her way to the door, "I am very sorry for my rudeness the offer stand Kairu i'll give you some time to think if you decide meet me in two days at the gate." Yumi left.

Kairu and Mizuki sat quiet for a long period of time till Kairu said, " Mizuki i'm going to go become a shinigami." Mizuki stayed quiet as her eye's watered, Kairu knew that Mizuki cared for him but this was something he had to do to move forward. Kairu said, " Mizuki I will send money to you from time to time to pay for someone to come cook and clean for you so you don't have to, I want to be able to send you letters from time to time if that is alright?" Mizuki cried as she said, " Of course" Kairu just smiles hoping to see Mizuki's smile one more time but she didn't smile.


Kairu awoke the next morning to Mizuki laying next to him in bed, he was not surprised but embraced her as she looked up and smiled she said, " I made you some breakfast before you go. I hope you enjoy it," as she got herself into her wheel chair she said, " come come". Kairu couldn't help but smile, Mizuki had made grilled hida beef, sashimi, tempura, miso soup and with a glass of tea.


Kairu stated, " Wow Mizuki you went all out this is just amazing!. Taste delicious as well!" Mizuki could only blush and say, " I just don't want you forgetting me that all." Kairu set his food down and walked over to Mizuki and hugged her for several minutes to then say, " I would never forget you, and I hope you would never forget me." Mizuki pulled Kairu closer as she said, " never"


That night Kairu left Mizuki's home only thinking of the smile he got as Kairu walked from the house.


Time in Academy:

It took 32 years after that event for Kairu become one of the lowest ranked shinigami, but Kairu always waited knowing he would make his way up, it was like a tree he started at the truck but he would someday make his way to the sun. He was very excited to be in the same squad as Yumi.

He realized it took 32 years to just make it to the same squad as Yumi but just being able to watch Yumi while she is in battle her sword looks divine just like a captains released sword Kairu has heard just the curve in the sword as blades come off the sword looks devastating. The day Kairu made it on the same squad as Yumi they became a lot closer as friends and Kairu hid his emotions well but began to love Yumi. They ate together and walked together as friends and they battled together no matter what Kairu was always watching Yumi and one day that had gotten him hurt.

A hollow had noticed this weakness and waited to strike catching Kairu's chest in downward swing cutting open Kairu's chest. As Yumi went over to assist Kairu she heard her sword howl as she neared him. She was confused as it howled louder and louder but she couldn't let this stop her as she sprinted over Kairu was on the ground Yumi jumped in front of this hollow.


The howling turned into a growl as Yumi was smashed to the ground by this hollow and the sword landed in Kairu's hand as it glowed he pierced the mask of the hollow and the zanpakuto split into two splitting from the hollows mask splitting down both of its arms. Yumi looked surprised yet disappointed as Kairu was in amazement. That was the last hollow as Yumi stood she said, "congratulations" as she walked away, Kairu turned and said," What happened?" she replied with, " It's yours keep it." then disappeared.


Kairu didn't sleep that night, he could only stare at his new sword to the point that he had to try,he stood and practiced all night to split this sword or just to make it howl, he was determined to get something from this sword. Morning has come and still nothing, Kairu is exhausted and has to head out to meet Yumi, Kairu has decided to give back what was hers. As Kairu walked into the Shinigami training area Yumi was not there thinking she would only be late Kairu started to train ahead of time, as time passed Yumi never showed up.


Kairu was worried and as he was walking out of the area she walked in just stood in front of Kairu and you could only see disappointment in her eyes. Kairu couldn't understand why, as he walked over to Yumi to greet her she pulled out a new zanpakuto and charged at Kairu, Kairu surprised but defends accordingly thinks that this is just them training.


She looked into Kairu's eye's when they clashed and just asked, " Why you?" he was confused, he felt her sword forced down on him harder then she had ever done. Kairu asked, "Yumi can you settle down a bit, whats wrong?" She forced him forward and thrust-ed her zanpakuto towards him just cutting the side of his leg. Kairu stepped back and yelled, " What is wrong with you!?"

She looked at him and as Kairu looked into her eyes she whispered, " I hate you." Kairu's eyes widened as he asked, " why?" she replied yelling," I've tried so much harder so much longer then you, why would you have found your zanpakuto!? Where is mine? Where is my chance." Kairu looked down at his new zanpakuto, then looked up, "If this is what you want then take it!" he threw the sword down to the ground towards her, Yumi yelled, " It cant just be fixed like that!, pick your sword up now!" Kairu just put his head down as he said, "no" Yumi just looked down and said, "fine"





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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Ren Mai
Appearance: fox
Inner World: Moon-lit meadow as far as the eye can see but if conflicted the moon will be clouded or Forrest will consume more and more of the land.
Sealed Zanpakutô :
PhatomTech: No


Release: Hunt Ren Mai

Shikai Description: http://cdn1.iofferphoto.com/img/item/113/032/547/xRRq.jpg

Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.) Howl - The zanpakuto will suck in air for a period of 2 posts this action will be very noticeable as you can see random gust of air surround the sword at random times. After 2 posts the zanpakuto's tip of the blade will be covered in wind like a arrow head and it may be shot whenever he pleases to ricochet projectile weapons back at the enemy or try to negate or deflect some abilities. The distance is not far that this can be shot it can only reach 45' and can not be a finishing move. Can easily be negated by wind attacks.
Gnaw - Kairu's sword will glow black and a black light blinding everything will flash then Kairu's cloths become tattered and his red highlight becomes white and his pupils look of that of a fox. He will have a heightened sense of smell and hearing but will only be able to see in black and white and this will tire Kairu out quite quick. This can last to a max of 5 posts.



Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample:
Kairu smiled as he sat in the dead if night on a rock just outside Shinigami Academy
it was only when the moon was out that he could feel happy of his past and where he was going. As the night chilled he would just walk to keep warm he always liked being outside.

"I guess it's getting pretty cold out isn't it Ren Mai? How about we go get some training in before we pass out or would you rather just walk in the moon? I'll let tonight be your choice either way we would be doing something I enjoy."

He walked as if he knew his zanpakuto true desires, he walked with his eyes to the moon. " So this is what you want for tonight. alright then." He traveled through the night and into the darkness thinking of what would be the next step forward.

Morning has come and the sun blazes in the sky, in this moment Kairu would usually be hiding away listening to music but today trains. He feels like something is coming a new step something he must train for.

"Ren Mai do you feel it coming? I think something big is about to start and we will be a part of it." Kairu slashes his zanpakuto through the air as he twist and turns into a new stance every second. Kairu thought he would try to learn every possible stance there is to know, as several hours past he began to slow a new stance every 30 seconds.

" There is far to many stances for me to possibly do them all in a practice, I think I'm going to give up for now Ren." " I say we should have some tea."
Kairu had given up his training and headed his way towards a tea house but then suddenly he could hear his sword howl and start to growl.

"So I guess no tea then eh? Well I guess its for the best." Kairu's zanpakuto howled through the air as he swung, his determination flourished as he heard this howl, he could only smile.

"Ren Mai... Thank you".


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S K I L L S H E E T

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills

• Durability: Adept
  
• General Speed: Beginner
  
• Strength: Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced
  

Racial Skills

• Hoho: Adept
  
• Kidou: Beginner
  
• Zanjutsu:Advanced
  
• Hakuda: Beginner
  

Tier: 2-3

modified it again and idk why it posted whole thing again i clicked edit