Kano Vs Kenji xP

We decided to have alittle compitition xP here is the the original




and here is mine

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Criticizem, praise, and punishment is allowed in the post. but please make it abit more meaningfull then "hey thats cool" or "that sucks" if your gonna praise or punish, then please state why you do or do not like it from the original. dont say that the picture from the original sucks aswell, since that was the one used for the competetion. there is no reward, just a friendly competition between me and Kenji. she will also be using the same original image, and doing what she wants to it.

You do seem to have put a good amount of effort into this picture. Although I am no expert at judging images, I'll give it a shot.

The coloring of ichigo's hair makes me think he is currently in Super Saiyan mode, and the transparency between his face and the hollow mask does not meld in well, especially at the hair portion. The tattoo on his check seems to porturde out of the flesh, as if it is immersed in an aura. I am not certain if that was what you were aiming for, or if you just wanted to make a tattoo. I recommend getting rid of the mask, or leave a fraction of it on Ichigo's face, still transparent. Dim out the opacity of the tattoo so it actually looks like one, and change the hair color to something that does not remind me of DBZ. Otherwise, the background is completely fine.

Keep at it.

i do see what your saying about the tatoo and the mask, the only problem is for some reason when i saved the image, if flattend all the layers as one so i can go in and take things out without redoing it from scratch. I didnt mean for the hair to look super sayain. i was meaning to go orange, but i wanted their to be alittle difference between him and ichigo. even changed the eyes blue. the tatto was ment just as a tattoo thou xP so that part i greatly failed at. and with the mask, i didnt notice that the jaw didnt line up untill i looked at it in here.
i realy appreciate you posting your view ^~^ and next time i gotta look at it in ways like this

Stop being good Kano. D:


Tools: Wacom Tablet, Paint tool Sai.

Character: OC I haven't bought here, Kenrai Chokichi,

LOL, well your hair is alot better than mine xP

x3 I like yours moreeeee.

lol, but alot of what Raen pointed out was all true

It's stil better than mine. You added the backgrounddddd.

i can teach you how to do that

Yay!