Zidane Truesdale( Finished)

Name:Zidane Truesdale
Age:24
Gender:Male
Personality:
Zidane is a courageous type who want's to see a change in the world he lives in.
He's always wanted to have powers like the other humans who fight to protect their
world from hollows and other worldly creatures. Ever since he was young he's been
able to see spirit's but has never developed powers of his own, but this hasn't
disheartened Zidane. Instead it has fueled him to work harder to rid the world of
these menace called hollow. In his social life Zidane is rather care free he looks
to make friends were ever he goes and gets kind of awkward in embarrassing situations. Now the president of his missing fathers company Soul Corp, Zidane has access to all of his fathers research into paranormal counter measure technologies. Being so young Zidane has become akin to being a child locked in a candystore after closing. He now struggles with the responsiblity of running the company and being a normal young man.
Appearance:

Height:
6,0 ft
Weight:
190 lbs
Zidane has only currently manafested the ability to see spirits and sense rietsu.


Soultech bracer- A white computerized bracer that is worn on the user's forearm.
It can track beings with spirtual pressure, and is the source of the SoulBreaker armors power. The bracer also allows the armor to exceed it's limitations for a duration of 5-10 seconds(3 posts) Doing so will cause the armor to increase the speed, endurance and offensive power of the user to new hights. This is an increase of 1 level in each skill area for the duration. This can only be done a max of three times per topic before the armor enters an exausted state and takes a toll on the users body cutting it's ability in half for the remainder of its use in that topic. If the armor takes such an overwhelming blow that would be destroyed it deforms and vanishes.

SoulBreaker Mark II Aka "Crusader"


Weapon: Seen in image 5 ft sword made of an unknown material, it reshi eminates across the blades surface allowing it to harm souls and flesh alike.

Exceed abilites:

Lightforce sword: The blades hilt explodes with a beam of energy engulfing the blade into a larger blade upwards of 15 feet in length it strikes with the equivent force of a cero.

Consicrate: The armor glows with energy and then out from it in a 10 yard sphere super heated rietsu expodes forth in all directions to burn and set a flame enemies. This also can be used defensively to reduce or eliminate some or all of the damage from an attack #50 or lower.

Other equipment

Soulfrag- A small ball like weapon when the fuse is activated with the push of several lighted buttons it detonates after 6 secounds dealing damage to spiritual beings equal to a #30 Kidoh in a 10 ft range.
The grenades have no effect on living beings other then a blinding effect. Zidane carries 2 to 3 of these.



Background:
Zidane was born to a wealthy family as an only child and grew up a strict environment where he was forced to become a person fit to lead a company he might one day inherit. In his childhood he had little free time to himself he was always kept occupied with tutors and studying. Day after day he would peer out of his window and watch the children playing and laughing, a carefree life they had he thought. What he wouldn't give up to have the same life they did. But alas he was born to the president of one of the top technology research and development companies in the world. For most of his life he never knew what his fathers company actually did until he followed his father into the lab one night and caught his first glimpse at a hollow. The terrifying creature was chained inside a sealed room. Even at his young age of 12 he knew full well what his father was doing. The creatures shrieks and cries in pain gave no mystery to the objective of the experiment. They were trying to figure out how to hurt it, and from the sound of things his fathers research had been making astounding progress. The sudden wail of the hollow startled Zidane and he tripped over a lab stool making a big ruckus. Naturally his father was alerted and he was furious, He immediately had him escorted out of the lab and he was grounded for several weeks after that.

It was not till later in his early 20's that he was able to convince his father he was mature enough to start learning what his father's true intent was and that he had been working on bigger things then just torturing these creatures he called hollows. One afternoon after Zidane finished his studies he was asked by his father to meet him in the lab. When zidane entered he was ushered to a high security testing area where from above he was able to observe his fathers newest project which he code named Senshi. His father explained that this project had been in development for decades now and was finally nearing the prototype stage. A young man entered the testing area and affixed a white bracer onto his forearm and pressed a few buttons opening a small slot on the inside of his forearm. In his other hand he held a small chip much the size of an SD card, the man proceeded to insert the chip into the slot and close it. His father noted "now watch carefully my boy this is where the magic begins."
The computerized EVA which had a female voice sounded out. Initialize program..... "Sparti"..... Realize In an instant the bracer let out a blinding light that enveloped the test subject when the flash dissipated the man was covered in an amazing looking armor and on his back he had a scabbard with a sword in it. "Amazing" Zidane remarked to his father. His father said in return. "That it is my boy, now to see what it can do. I'm going to release the captured hollow into the chamber do your best to eliminate them take it slow it is a prototype after all."

The test subject nodded in acknowledgement, as four hollow were released into the testing area. The first hollow was a brute type strong and slow. The second was a lizard like hollow. Quick and agile. A third and fourth were your run of the mill breeds. The first hollow to attack was the lizard he let our a roar and pounced at the suit swiping downward with it's rather large clawed foot. The man in the suit rolled easily dodging the swing the speed was an amazing sight it was worlds beyond what any human could do on his own. With a quick counterattack the armored man charged in and shoulder checked the hollow with immense force knocking it over and slamming it into the wall of the arena. The two run of the mill hollow took the opening and dashed in for what seemed like an easy meal. But the suit reacted and spun around in time to dodge the first hollows tendril and grab onto it and with a mighty heave he yanked the hollow toward his awaiting fist and like a hammer he smashed the hollows mask disintegrating the hollow. The other fodder hollow struck from the side and latched onto the suits arm with it's mouth clamping down on it and in the process taking the suit and it's occupant for a ride.

The fierce bite penetrated a good way through the armor but not quite far enough for the suit's operator reached to his back and drew the long heavy kitana blade and made quick work of the hollows neck slicing cleanly through it in one motion. Now on the ground he arose from one knee to examine the damage. Arm was damaged but due to the reinforced armor around the arm the bracer was not damaged. "The suit's operator came over the vox and spoke. "Sir permission to remove the safeguards and end this quickly." Zidanes father scratched his chin and thought for a second. "very well you have permission to release safeguards but don't overdo it you know doing this puts a strain on the body" "Very well". The suits operator called out to the Eva "exceed" Safeguards disengaged.... Exceed mode rise up. Suit Armor plates began to expand slightly and release a red glow before zidane knew what was going on the armor burst forth with incredible energy. "Common you shithead bring it" The pilot taunted the lizard hollow as it rose to it's feet and galloped towards him. The operator reared back the kitana and let out a charged blade of energy severing the hollow in two. The suit began to let out steam afterwards a sign of it overheating. But the fight was not over the brute hollow which had been patently watching would watch no longer as it stepped in at the suits moment of weakness and swatted the armor into the wall of the room it made a loud thud as it created an indent and fell to it's knees. "are you ok Zidanes father called out" "him ok sir but this ones strong but i need a little more power." The pilot called out again Exceed The suit once again flared up a burning red as it matched blow for blow with the rather large brute hollow. Hitting fist against fist. When he found an opening he leaped up to its face and attempted to deliver a killing slash to the head but was caught in the air and grabbed by both arms by the horrid beast. The operator was helpless looking like a man on a cross as the 2nd exceed charge was about to run out. He looked to his left arm noticing that the program chip was beginning to crack. "The operator thought to himself If the chip shatters and i lose the ability to fight then everyone in the lab is in danger. At that moment that brave man made a choice. Zidane didn't know it at the time but in the suits prototype stages the max a chip could handle was three exceed charges and the cost for using all three back to back was almost certainly death. The suit at the time had been directly wired into the nervous system of the user for quicker response times but this came at a cost, the removal of the safeguards caused considerable shock to the persons body and ultimately death. That man choose to be a hero, "Sir it's been a pleasure working for you" "No you fool don't" The man turned off his Vox and uttered Exceed one last time. "Warning exceed limit reached....confirm..... Do it he shouted....Affirmative..... Final Exceed activated program will terminate in ten seconds. The suit burst forth one more time with a crimson energy. With one last struggle the suit forced it's arms back in doing so forced the hollow to bring its head near to him. In a flash the suit delivered a punishing kick with both legs cracking the hollows mask and freeing himself as he landed he had trouble getting back to his feet the suit was letting off sparks and the servos began to malfunction. With sheer force of will the operator forced it forward retrieving his kitana from the ground. Program termination in 5.4.3 The man reared back the sword and hurled it in a spinning motion at the hollow impaling it's head to the wall killing it. 2.1. Terminate. The program chip ejected from the bracer and shattered into dust in the air. With a last sign of serenity the pilot gave the thumbs up as he fell to the floor as the armor dematerialized. Medics rushed in but the damage to his body was to great and shortly later he passed away.

Zidanes father was deeply troubled and angry. "That idiot i told him not to overdo it" Zidane reached out and struck his father in the mouth with a closed fist knocking him to the ground. His father was dazed and shocked as was everyone in the lab. "Shut up father that man sacrificed himself to protect everyone here. If he had listened to you we would all probly be dead right now. Honor that man and thank him for all he gave up for us." Zidane stormed out of the room and since then him and his father have not talked much. After that Zidane was never the same it had been as if that mans fighting spirit had been infused into Zidane. He wanted to be just like him sacrificing everything for the good of others.

Since then several years have passed and the armor had been improved immensely. The dangers of the exceed had been all but eliminated by means of cutting down the power output allowing for longer bursts at a slightly less intensity. Zidane had been working closely with the researchers to pave his own vision of the future of the company. While his father reluctantly allowed it. All was well until one night after Zidane left the lab. When he reached his suite he was alerted by a terrible phone call. It was security at the lab, there had been an accident and one of the captive hollows had escaped and trashed most of the lab his father did not survive. Zidane took it hard and it was months before he could bring himself back to the rebuilt lab. Instead these events only further hardened Zidane for the path he had ahead of him. For now he had a vengeance stuffed deep within him that craved retribution and such retribution could only be paid in hollow blood.

Roleplay Sample:

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• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
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Comments/Notes:You have done well in developing the profile, there's but one problem I find, however, and that is the lack of description for some of the chips and attacks. First off, the star system is quite confusing. It would be better if you relate agility, endurance, and strength os actual skill ranks. does a **** in endurance equate to a Master Hierro (it better not)? Please, either apply a chart to explain the star system, or change it to be similar to the skill rankings.

Second, the Exceed Slash wave is too vague. What's the speed and range of the wave? how powerful is the wave? How many times can this be used?

And lastly, explain the piercing power/damage of the exceed hypersonic shot. Can it pierce through the most durable of Hierro? Explain these and you'll be approved.
Tier:N/A

done

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: For Equipment. Both here and in the Equipment thread please post them in the Equipment template as well. - You state that he has not developed his own powers Then putting N/A. Plus Your character doesn't have any Natural abilities to him? He is not flexible? He is not smarter then normal humans? If so fill it in but if he doesn't put N/A, if you need an example of what I mean PM me and I shall show you.

Your chip idea need a bit more working, is there any downfall to when he uses Exceed, all technology has it's flaw. Oh please try to fix the spacing <3
Tier:N/A

ok i redid the character and did away with the chip system hows it look now. Also posted in the equipment topic.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Everything seems fine by me and the issues seem to be fixed
Tier: 5-4+

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