Murtali

GENETICS

Character Name:
Murtali

Character True Age:
128

Character Appearance Age:
9

Character Gender:
Female

Orientation:
Loyal to Cero Espada(sort of)

Personality:
Murtali seems at first glance to be an annoying little imp of an arrancar, not very impressive or amazing. She constantly sticks her nose into the business of others, taunts and teases her fellows, and just makes a pest of herself to those around her. However, despite this harmless (if incredibly annoying) appearance, she is far more dangerous than most would believe. She is constantly conniving and scheming, looking for any way to move herself up the social ladder. She loves to eat, both food and reiatsu. She tends to treat feeding on reiatsu like a food critic might, defining the taste, flavor, and texture of it. She is highly envious, coveting anything she sees others possessing, especially power. One of her more useful traits, however, is her drive to succeed. Once she sets her sightts on something, only death will deter her. Her ultimate goal is quite simple: she wants to be Lord of all Arrancar. And nothing, and no one, will stand in her way to obtain that dream.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:

Spoiler:

She is 4' 2''.She was green hair, which she keeps short and unkempt. She also has green eyes.She is rather short, with a sleek, slightly athletic build. There isn't any real muscle on her though, making here appear even more child like to observers. Her Hollow Hole is located right where here belly button should be. The only other unusual feature of her is her tongue, which is approximately five times the length of a normal human tongue, or 20 inches.

Bone Appearance:
The remnants of her mask are shown as a small strip of bone on the crown of her head with a pair of antennae sticking out of it. The antennae move and twitch about like they were a part of a living being as opposed to simple bone.

Reitsu Colour:
Green(I take it you've noticed the theme by now)

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:
Her weapon takes the form of a wakizashi. It is rather plain, with the only interesting detail being that the handle is green. She usually wears it strapped to he back.

Racial Abilities:
Murtali's most noticable talent is her ability to drain reiatsu with her tongue. By touching someone with it or biting them, she can drain reiatsu directly from their bodies.She must keep the tongue touching her opponent to drain any energy, requiring her to remain close to her opponent and stop him from attacking her tongue, which isn't nearly as tough as the rest of her. She can also attempt to devour the power from some forms of energy based attacks by biting the attack itself, or( in the case of weaker attacks) swallowing the attack whole. There is a limit to how much power she can drain without the attack overwhelming and damaging her. Any reiatsu gained through this ability is only temporary and immediately begins to slowly drain away as soon as it's acquired.

Also, there is a limit on how much she can drain at once. At the moment she could drain all the power from a tier 3-3 or below, about half the the power of a 2-3 or below, and maybe a fourth of the power of a tier 1-3. Also, it takes time to drain her prey. Only once her tongue has grabbed onto someone can it start draining. Even then, she can only take pieces at a time, absorbing about 1/10 of the power per post. As far as attacks go, at the moment, she can swallow a high-powered attack of a tier 4-1 or lower, a mid-powered attack from a tier 3-2, or a low-powered attack from a tier 2-3.

She also has a very potent pesquisa ability, her antennae acting as a form of amplifier. This makes it hard to both hide from and sneak up on her.At the same time, she is very good at hiding her own reiatsu from others.

She also possesses the ability to adhere herself to any surface her bare feet or hands touch, much the same way a roach or other insect might.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Lixiviación(It means leech)

Resereccion Release Phrase:
Drain Dry, Lixiviación!

Release Actions:
She simply holds her blade behind her back when activating it.

Resereccion Appearance:
When in her Resurrección form, Hollow bone forms over the outer part of her arms, the front of her legs, and on her sides. The bone has the appearance of something like chitinous plating, the type found on a variety of insects. Also, her jawline receives a light layer of similar covering which traces up to her mask remnant, framing her face with boney chitin.

The most noticeable thing about her transformation, however, is her back. A pair of large, slightly curved plates cover the entirety of her back, going all the way down to the back of her knees in length. They resemble a pair of small, white surfboards. These are movable from side to side, and hide a pair of insectoid wings.

Resereccion Abilities:
First of all, her speed massively increases. She also gains far more precise ability when it comes to her pesquisa, allowing her to easily pinpoint a targets exact position despite physical or sensory barriers. Her abilty to drain reiatsu also becomes enhanced, allowing her to drain not only more energy at once, but also from her hands as well. Suffice it to say, getting into a grapple with her isn't near as advantages as it would appear to be.

Also, the large plates on her back act as a kind of shield, being far stronger and tougher than than any of the other chitin on her body. This of course means, however, she has to have her back to an enemy to use them. A tricky move indeed. Also, the wings she gains allow her to fly, ignoring the need to use reiatsu to lift herself skyward. It also allows her to hide her reiatsu while in midair, a rather useful trick for surprise attacks.


SKILLS

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Adept
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner

• Durability: Beginner
  
• General Speed: Adept
  
• Strength: Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Beginner
  

PAST

History:
The girl that would have been Jessica Abel lived only a few moments in this world. After coming into the world, she died only five minutes into it. Her small soul was swallowed up in no time by Hueco Mundo, and thus her second life began.

She was a minor Hollow, literally an insect of Hueco Mundo, feeding off the spiritual energys of Hollows and souls the way a mosquito feeds off blood. Most of her kind don't live long. They were devoured by other Hollows or were squashed as a nuisance to be rid of. She, however, did something they almost never did. She survived.

As time passed, she drained more energy and grew, becoming slowly stronger and stronger. This little thing that had so easily let go of it's human life clung to this one with no sign of ever relinquishing it's hold. She slowly grew, gaining power until one day it happened: she thought. Her first true thought as a sentient creature. Her true birth day.

More time passed, and slowly she grew. Eventually she changed, becoming something different, something new. Like a gillian-class, but not the same. The change was not lost on her. Quite the contrary, she felt thrilled! Compared to what she had been, she was so much more now. She was becoming something great, something amazing, and she never wanted it to stop. And then she ran into a Vasto Lorde. her world shattered. How could she compare to this...this god!? For the first time in her life, she truly realized how small she was.

She doesn't remember when it struck her. She truly can't recall when the thought entered her mind. It just seemed like a good idea, like a stroke of genius. She had no reason to believe it would do anything. Maybe it was her instincts, some deep part of her that told her she needed do it, to take this step. Whatever her thoughts or reasons or what ever it was that made her do it, one day she just stopped and pulled off her mask.

The pain was unimaginable. The feeling of change so great it was like her body itself was being ripped in two. Yet she knew she had to keep going, to see it through to the end. Then the mask came off, and she realized it was all worth it. She was different, better, stronger! Now she could truly ascend! Even that thing that had once terrified her couldn't stop her now! Or so she thought.

Once more she was shown her own standing in this world, left half-alive and badly beaten. However, that would not be the end of her. She crawled out of the crevice she had hidden in and continued on. She would let nothing stop her from achieving her goal.

And then everything changed. Ashlei's organization of the Espada changed everything. That was when her life took yet another turn. She gave her a purpose, a direction. She gave her a place in this world. She gave her a way to become stronger. She gave her an enemy to pit herself against and improve her abilities to defeat. And she also gave her a new goal: To surpass and dethrone her.


RP Sample:
Murtali sat watching the other arrancar go about their duties; training, running errands, pretty much what ever their superiors wanted them to. It was like living in an ant hill. An ant hill with very powerful, very dangerous, very willful ants. She just smile to herself as she watched it all. They probably didn't notice her, sitting on the top of a look out tower. She was easy to miss, even if you were looking for her. But, enough of this. She rose to her feet and hopped from roof-to-roof heading to see what else she could find. And then she saw her prey. A low rank numeros.

Perfect.

She hopped down to the edge of the roof nearest him. He was busy sorting something. Looked like documents. He was probably being punished by being given some minor, non-combat focused task. She had to control her nerves, lest she just start laughing at his predicament and never stop. But she had to control herself. Had to keep he calm. For the moment. She let a smile spread across her lips. Time to have some fun.

"Wow",she said,"looks like you got quite a job there. What happen? They run outta monkeys and had to use you?"

The numeros looked up at the unexpected voice and, upon seeing her, gave a rather unamused look. He obviously didn't recognize her, otherwise he might of been a bit more controlled with his attitude.

"Listen you brat",he said, his irritation showing in his voice,"go play somewhere else before I get annoyed."

Oh,she thought, we got a fighter. She had been hoping she would find someone with a short temper. It would make the game all the easier for her, not to mention more enjoyable. Now to poke the bear some more. She hopped off the roof and landed just out of arms reach of the numeros.

"Aw, but I don't want to take up the time of anyone important."

A look of barely controlled fury crossed the arrancars face. Obviously being insulted by someone so seemingly weaker than him must of truly been working on his nerves. It was fun to watch him get so furious, to know she was so effortlessly getting to him. Soon it would get him into a predicament he couldn't get out of.

"What's the matter? You look kinda flushed. Guess the blood doesn't have anywhere else to go."

And that was apparently the last straw. The numeros threw a furious punch at her, going for power and damage over precision. Poor fool. She effortlessly slipped under it, skittering under his arm and behind him. Then, with the grace of a practiced dancer, she turned on her heels and leapt onto his back, clinging to him like a barnacle on a ship. She wished she could see the look on his face right now. Probably priceless. Her tongue shot outta her mouth, wrapping around his neck. She felt him shake, trying to dislodge her. Too little, too late. She felt the reiatsu draining from him, flowing into her, energizing her. Oh, the taste. How delectable. Smooth, but with a noticeable after taste. Rather sour too. His thrashing had decreased, his strength leaving him. He was done fighting.

As she reached near the end of his reserves, she released him, letting his near-unconscious form collapse to the ground. She wasn't allowed to kill of other arrancar without a reason, and just because wasn't considered a reason. But she had gotten her meal. That would do for now. Looking out over Las Noches, a thought ran through her mind, her tongue sliding across her lips as it did. I wonder what Ashlei tastes like.

Hello I'll be checking this app today

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Um first you need to make your personality longer to at least 10 sentences So thats the first thing. Second your powers the whole draining thing. You need to tell the limit to it like how longer she can do it asnd how much she can drain. (EX: can completely drain a 3-1, 50% drain 2-2, ect.)

If you can fix those two things I think i can approve this.
Tier: Undecided

EDITED

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in [X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Notes: I'm withholding approval due to your ability to drain reiatsu. I'm not sure if that would be acceptable in any form, but not the way you have it now. In short...

Denied

Until changes are made

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: I've already gone over what I wanted to see in PC with you. As long as you have drawbacks and limits, I do not mind. If anyone else has a problem, please say so.

Tier: 3-3