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[Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Sun Jul 14, 2024 4:44 pm
THE QUINCY APPLICATION
I. Basic Information
» Name: Lehanna Kisagami
» Alias: Lilly
» Age: 20
» Nationality: French
» Gender: Female
» Association: N/A
» Appearance Written: Lehanna is not someone who generally stands out of a crowd too often and especially so if she can help it. She stands at about 5 feet 7 inches tall or roughly 174 cm. Her appearance often depicts a more conservative styled dresser a lot of the time, however she often just wears whatever appeals to her more that day. She has long, straight hair in a light grey shade in color. Often times she will wear her hair down or in a braid of some fashion, but it's extremely rare that she doesn't wear her normal black hairband in her hair. Rather basic in design with only a small hourglass shape like design on it in the same color in which her attire often accentuates.
To her clothing type, her general attire doesn't often change in the warmer weathers despite the heat and humidity increases. She finds it doesn't really bother her much and isn't so much bothered by the weather in general be it hot or cold. As for her clothing, she has an affinity for somewhat of the same style of dress: a light, white and green long sleeved dress with a yellow ribbon worn around the front. She wears an almost charcoal colored crop jacket with a dull gold trim over top. On her legs she wears thigh-high stockings that fade from teal to a dark brown from top to bottom. The tops of the stockings are lined with gold, and her footwear consists of black heels with a base of white, as well as a pair of green gems in the center along with teal, ruffled collars that wrap around her ankles.
» Appearance Image:
![[Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami DjIZcWTm](https://i.imgur.com/djIZcWTm.jpg)
I. Personality
» Personality: Beyond her normal shell, Lehanna is as one would describe as myriad of different emotions. She could go from being calm and collected to extremely angry or breaking down in tears with simple key words or phrases. Her fragile state doesn't always present itself, but if a conversation goes deep enough into it, she can snap easily and quickly back into someone's face without much consideration and no warning what so ever unless it was seen in small bodily ticks.
Kind and Generous: When it came to present themselves to people whom have stayed long enough to get through her blank shell, her kinder side makes her seem like a more innocent person from whom she actually is. As it stands in helping others, her generosity jumps in front of her protective shell, always smiling and offering herself to helping someone with an issue they may have. For someone that might end up greeting her after such an instance, her mind set would be to enveloped in her more enjoyed and joyful mood to jump straight back into her shell... Given whomever she met wasn't in some form of ridiculous attire or doing something off-putting. Then again, that would all vary on the person and situation, so the mystery of any changes would become much more fun.
Friendships: As far as these are concerned, there's no chance that someone can't be viewed a friend in Lehanna's eyes. Whether they tend to return the title is variant on the person, however that isn't really her main care. Friends are as good in quantity as they are in quality as each friend can carry themselves useful in special cases if a chance presented themselves. Whether they were weak or strong, good or evil, goofy or serious, and so on. The person whom they are matters not to Lehanna so long as the two of them are on good terms. To Lehanna, even an insulting comment in the right context can be considered more of a friendly term of endearment and she wouldn't cast a friends choice to criticize her appearance at all.
Enemies: These are truthfully one of the fewest in things that could ever be attained for her. As much as she is in willing to accept everyone for any fault they have and to ignore the complications of wars and sides being taken in order to breach peace. To add into that, the act of gaining an enemy is still possible and very much a real situation. Enemies though do carry a different merit to her specifically than the traditional sense of the word. All enemies can potentially become allies, or just even useful for bartering in help if the need is that strong, however the problem lies mostly within the act of the person themselves and the degree of reason from which they are labeled an enemy. Enemies for Lehanna usually just entail a very sarcastic and snarky personality, a lot of eye rolling, and a lot of uncooperative attitude from her, unless someone were to directly order her to or otherwise so. Enemies in combat deserve the same form of approach as if she'd been on a mission to purge a town from hollows; No mercy and kill them 'til they die!~
Combat: This is more of a tricky topic to be considered. As a person who's never learned to fight for the sake of hunting or protecting others, it's not really like Lehanna to fight in any fashion aside from what she was trained to do. Should she have to? Sure, she'd do it... But it's nothing she would go around to pick fights for. For her friends, she would ask to spar, pick up a few tips and tricks on how she could learn to fight better, however she still does make many amateur mistakes that she could easily die from -or at least get near to. However, if she were pushed to the point of it being her or her opponent, then surely she would choose to use her instinct to survive at any cost. Even then, that doesn't mean she would ever want that situation to come forth, but in the back of her mind has it kept known that possibility can never be too far away.
Loyalties: The ways from which Lehanna keeps her loyalties to is something that first may come across as simple and basic, however given the alignment of her friendships, that could drastically become a large issue within itself. As far as those whom Lehanna remains the highest grade of loyalty to are those among the ranks in her life and the person of whom she considered herself to be eternally loyal to for his efforts in saving her life from having to deal with the issues from which plagued her life among the world of the living. However, should a time come where her friends and those in her ranks put her in a divide.. Well that crossroad would be something that would need to happen to show otherwise.
» Likes: •Research - Lehanna is an avid lover of anything new that she can learn about or learn more about. If someone were to approach her with new or conflicting information, she would gladly jump to wanting to know more about it.
•Animals - There has always been a soft spot in her over animals of all types since she was small enough to remember.
•Analytics - The very core of her thought process is that she tries to be very logical and analytical when it comes to everything from combat to normal conversations and expressing her opinions or facts of them.
•Drawing - Despite how mature she may come off to be, drawing is a bit of an escape into a feeling of serenity and relaxation. Semi-talented in it, she can draw recognizable things for sure, but she isn’t a full blown artist.
» Dislikes: •Being discriminated against - Just the same as her being teased over her age or size, being talked down to has been one of the larger annoyances in her life. And no matter how hard she tries, someone will try to put her down.
•Senseless Violence - It doesn’t matter whether it’s as small as bullying to something as large as a massacre, nothing angers her more than the need to commit senseless acts of violence in any capacity.
I. History
» History:
- Spoiler:
- Everything in Lehanna's life seemed to always point her in the direction of the line of her lineage as a Quincy. It didn't seem to strike at first until she was at an extremely young age and happened to recollect the nights she was read stories about knights and protecting the princess. Though even back then she had been a bit more enthralled in the knights and the soldiers than that of the princess. A tiny hand pointing out the archers launching volley's of arrows at the evil dragon coming for the princess piqued her parents curiosity over just a child's enthusiasm or something more.
It didn't start to connect to them until she had been at a very young age trying to craft a bow from sticks and vines around their property. Catching her in the act and observing the dedication to the attempts of trying to craft one with her own hands, they had confronted her in a gentle manner and taught her the more proper ways of using a real bow and arrow. Going out to different places to teach her more about what kinds of bows existed but never really letting her use them for a while. They believed at that point she was too young to attempt the sport much less the more painstaking part of hurting herself through learning.
That wasn't until Lehanna was roughly the age of 8 when they finally let her start practice under their supervision. Though a year of constant findings of her continuing her own attempts to learn, a fully crafted wooden bow made of a crude branch and a vine hidden in the brush of their back yard led them to consider this to be more of signs than anything. Quick to learn how to hold her bow, take a stance, knock her arrow, and fire led -to their surprise- a rather quick improvement of shots. Out of 7 arrows they held at that moment, three were off of the target, two landed within the outer rings of the target and the last two showed a closing in towards the bullseye. Impressed with the results, Lehanna took her time to learn just how gravity and strength helped her reach closer to the target, however her parents guidance truly helped her thrive in picking up archery.
By the age of 10, she had become a very quick study of what bows she best enjoyed and how to capitalize her shots quickly. It was at this point her parents decided now would be the best time and way to introduce things to their child. By now, Lehanna knew quite a bit of her family's life as a long line of very successful, strong, and brave people, but it hadn't been until they revealed the entirety of her lineage that it all pieced together to her. One and then the other, her parents showed their own capabilities as very skilled archers and without wielding a real weapon, she watched them form to her light into the shape of a bow and an arrow before they fired one straight through the thickest part of a nearby old oak tree in their backyard. They took the time to introduce their abilities and just how they thought best for her to achieve hers.
Months went by and Lehanna continued to make no real progress with being able to achieve her Quincy powers. She struggled to find the bit of logic in how they could do any of the things they could do, but she could never grasp the reality of her lessons. All of her attempts at her years of archery were based on these real and calculated things, but her reality felt almost shattered trying to comprehend how it worked. Attempts to try and make her own bow form out of the shape of holding one seemed to work at first, but nothing would happen from it. Discouraged by her lack of trying and succeeding, Lehanna tried and tried again. She continued again and again creating shakey and unstable shapes in her hands before it snapped and dissipated in her hands.
One morning, her parents had come to wake her up for a visit out to the city when they discovered their daughter missing from their bed. They searched all over the house and couldn't find her until they reached the back yard. There they found Lehanna laying against the wall in the back yard, a smile adorned on her face. Nearby was a newly made number of gradually deepening holes in the trunk of the tree there. When they approached to check on her, her left hand was torn with burns and cuts from her holding the arrows of her hand with a lack of experience or control in keeping her power completely stable while she tried her target practice. Taking a small break from her normal archery due to the excuse of her burning her hand and being told to refrain from activities of the sort gave her more time to learn how to control herself much better.
Her parents took all the time they could in order to help discipline her to control herself to the point she would use the surrounding woodlands to practice with them. When she returned to her actual sport months later, it was almost as if her abilities improved tenfold. By then, her hand was always gloved from a habit of one made by her mother to help keep her from scarring herself so easily and helping to regulate her spiritual abilities when making an arrow. Over time, Lehanna began to gain that teenage brain of trying whacky and strange things to the extent she would try and create other weapons within certain forms in order to use. Her first and most ideal thing to use were slim looking swords that she could fire a short distance, but she was much more proficient at up to three arrows being fired at once with much better accuracy.
One night, her parents had woken her up in a quiet bit of panic. They shushed her down while rushing her out of bed and taking her to the shed in their backyard. The two had worked to remove a hidden panel in the side of the wall and quickly pushed her inside before placing the board back up. Warning her not to get out from this spot until they came back, they had been quick to leave and shut the door. Being the teenager that she was, she had not listened at all and gently removed the wall piece anyway. She could hear her parents arguing with a mystery voice and then a shrill scream that made her flinch. Her whole body tensing up and shoulders raised, her curiosity got the better of her and she cracked open the door of the shed to see the body of her father collapse to the ground on the other side of this mystery figure. Her eyes widened in shock and fear as she quickly pulled the door back and tried to rush herself back into the hiding place.
Her mind raced with this wonder of who could or would do this to her parents. She was aware of the past issues between shinigami and quincies, but as far as she was aware, most if not all of them were more in tune with the peaceful resolution that currently was between them. She'd never seen a shinigami in person, so was this person one of them? Someone who just didn't want to see peace between them and wanted to end them all? Well, her thought didn't have a moment to continue as the door to the shed creaked open. A couple of steps were heard before a dismissive chuckle to themselves before a disturbing line would haunt her mind and dreams for years to follow: "She can't hide forever. I'll be back." Paralyzed with fear and worry to move, Lehanna just spent the night in the hollow hole in the shed until the next morning came around.
Carefully, she exhumed herself from her hiding place and then headed out of the shed where she saw the bodies still laying in the bloody grass. Her eyes poured tears for a moment until that voice rung in her head and the reality set in. With tears still in her eyes and rolling down her cheeks, Lehanna ran into her home to find it strewn about in a frantic mess. Broken vases, ripped and cut furniture, she ran into her room to grab a hidden box that contained a locket she had been given as a child. She took it, a small bag with some of her clothes, and her bow and arrows she kept and ran far far away.
Finding family was a rough challenge for her, however having the knowledge of logic and reality helped her navigate the real world just long enough to find potential grandparents. In reality, they were not her biological grandparents, but they were long time friends of her parents, however she was always told they were to be considered as her grandparents since they looked after their parents through their training as well. When Lehanna explained all that had happened they took the time to make calls and take care of everything they could to excuse her from being there that night or knowing at all from the police.
Leaving behind their money and an inheritance to their only child made being raised much easier, however the trauma of her parents made her become much more reclusive and focused on her archery and training. She wouldn't let vengeance cloud her from her life, but she would never turn away from the day she'd hunt down the shinigami in white. The one she believed was the one who killed her parents and show them no mercy.
I. Natural Abilities
» Natural Abilities: Keen eyesight from years of target practice
I. Racial Abilities
» Racial Abilities: -Blut is something Lehanna has taken time to learn more of as she can more easily incorporate it to her everyday and combat when/if needed.
-As it stands, her familiarity with Steigen is her most prominently trained ability. Wanting to be faster than her enemy tends to equate her choice to being able to take a hit most times.
I. Spirit Weapon
» Spirit Weapon Name: Raiken
» Spirit Weapon Appearance: This weapon is by default the tool by which Lehanna fights. The weapon, while oversized at first glance is fairly easy to maneuver for her. With years of experience under her belt, she can wield such its size with ease due to its lack of weight. It's shape is commonly shaped towards modern looking Compound bows. With it, the size as well allows for longer traveled arrows to be fired with less of a penalty as those without the tension capacity of smaller weapons. While its shape retains such an appearance, the color of the bow primarily matches that of the color of Lea's reaitsu (teal) and it's accenting colors are a crisp white shade of color.
![[Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami 7VpsH0Mm](https://i.imgur.com/7VpsH0Mm.jpg)
» Spirit Weapon Abilities: Tri-shot - Three arrows form notched to the users string as it is pulled onto, firing all at once towards a single destination.
Volley - Firing an arrow into the air, the arrow bursts and forces a concentrated bit of the users reiatsu to rain down in an area.
Piercing Shot - Lehanna can fire a special piercing arrow intended for puncturing other abilities and defenses. When this attack comes in contact with a non-living obstacle, it's offensive power is considered 50% higher.
» Spirit Weapon Appearance: Two standard length blades form at the top of its respective hilt formed purely of the users concentrated reiatsu. Taking color from which it is created from, these swords take a "forming" similar in the way a Lightsaber would grow to its length. At the base they appear as two separate looking bits of energy, then seemingly forming a small diamond shape before converging and forming the rest of the blades as well.
![[Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami LP1WRvMm](https://i.imgur.com/lP1WRvMm.jpg)
» Spirit Weapon Abilities: There are none currently known to the user of abilities with this weapon.
I. Quincy Release
» Letzt Stil or Vollständig: Vollständig
» Name: Knight of Ifrit
» Appearance: The form's appearance is brought about through advanced levels of anger, be it concentrated or not to form fire. Pulling their reiatsu to their body, the fire works like a forge to simulate a metallic like armor to cover their body. The appearance taking shape through a mesh of imagination, power, and energy. It's overall appearance mimics that of mech like suits some of which might consider from a tv show. Snow white in color, the suit carries little in a secondary color, but does accent around the helmet, the gem located on her chest, and several emblems of the Quincy symbols at the front and either side of her waist. The helmet itself has a total of 6 slits between the gold accenting cover that are symmetrical to one another in shape and size. Behind it is a concentrated glow of a teal colored energy.
![[Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami ViEhdxfm](https://i.imgur.com/viEhdxfm.jpg)
» Abilities: Lehanna can expend energy to add a 150% boost to her speed for a post by venting energy from the back of her armor. Due to the energy needed, this can at most be done 4 times a post.
I. Equipment
» Equipment: Ancestral locket: This locket contains the symbol used by Quincy long ago, passed down upon generations.
I. Skill Sheet
(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it)
General Skills
» Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Martial Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Will Skills
» Willpower: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Quincy Skills
» Blut: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Gebet: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Kreuzen: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
» Steigen: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
I. Role Play Sample
» Roleplay Sample:
- sample:
- Some time had passed while tending to her own mental devices. What to do was wearing on her mind so much it could frustrate even the most patient of people. And considering that the doll was among those people, this was very much going sideways as time passed on. Well, now seemed like the best time as a figure passed by the window on the top floor close to the front balcony of the manor. The time to act seemed to be perfect for a couple of ways, but this idea was a test theory and frankly if it led to the deaths of a couple people aside from innocent civilians, so be it. If she didn’t act now, then she may lose her chance for who knows how long. Comfort was a weakness —rather, a crutch that she was ready to kick out from under this man leaning upon it. And once he’d lie on the floor, unable to recover as his attacker would approach, would she surely seek out every lick of information from him before letting him go. After all, killing him is not her goal today. Just information and some reparations for her troubles.
A cold gust of air would pick up, much akin to winter as opposed to the summer heat in the country. The guards at the front let off a sudden shiver from the chill they received. Questioning one another as to if the other had been cold or it was just them, they’d soon watch as a large arrow made of ice pierced into the wall on an angle. The two guards had been curious as to how an arrow made of ice made its way through the summer heat, but it didn’t last much longer than a second before the arrow would explode with shards of ice and high gusting winds of bitter cold air that could freeze a body of water on contact. The wall attached took most of the brunt of damage, but the initial message was made. The entrance had become coated in a layer of snow and small shards of ice sticking up from the ground itself. ”Show time.” She said to herself, lowering a rather large sized crossbow.
Making her way down with no urgency in her step, the rainbow slayer walked closer and closer to her icy gateway, stepping on and walking across the slippery ice with no resistance. The patter of low cut heels against the icy ground carried the little bit of weight she carried until one added in the crossbow held in her hands. Made of pure ice, the design came off as something crafted by a blacksmith, but simply replicated in all forms from memory with the added touches of ice was the way she had done several other designs of hers. The mission focused girl moved on towards the entry when several guards had surrounded the entrance. Several of them had guns and one even fired preemptively into the right arm of the doll. The sound of shattering glass and even her arm subsequently falling off made no remark or even a flinch of care.
The guards seemed to be completely completely thrown off and confused as the living doll just looked up from her own broken arm and shook her head lightly. Her eyes swayed to her left -more specifically towards the left flank of guards. A sigh left the dolls mouth and a small puff of warm air would exit. The sight she had begun to watch was a white strangely shaped object swiftly moving along the ground towards the group. The white object had seemed to resemble that of the fun of a fish, or more importantly a shark. As it closed it, the fin would begin to rise into the air, pulling more and more water together as it formed into a large, white colored shark made of water. As it begin to form a flip in the air to readjust itself to land on target, the sun would bounce off of the aquatic creature and reveal the rainbow hue. The shark would then fire right down on top of the group and with a sudden burst of water and sending the few guards in various directions and with little resistance of being knocked out.
”You can leave. Or I’ll do worse to you.” She spoke up, turning her attention to the remaining three. They didn’t waste much time at all before they did the same thing. Fleeing at the word said, they didn’t bother trying to fight back at something that had been shot and made absolutely no reaction. Sakura would reach down and pick up her arm, or what was left of it and hold it up, then blowing a bit of air between it and the rest of her body, would create a makeshift arm. Testing her reflexes in forming a fist, there was little to be said after that. Now having no obstacles that would attack back now, she would approach the doors and simply touch them. Before her eyes, they crystallized into ice and just a flick from her left hand had shattered the door like collapsing sand. Immediately she could see inside the place and frankly... it was aggravating to see.
A life of luxury and extravagance while she could only picture back to her own childhood, watching her mother work two or even three jobs to keep up with things when she grew up. Anger pushed down the feeling of sadness, rage welling up over depression, but all of them were pushed back into the shell of her porcelain body. Beyond everything, this was a job, be it personal or not... Thumping around above her showed he was still here and that was perfect. The the doll made her way up the steps and behind her left small footsteps of ice as she did so. Her seething rage has manifested in an aura of ice from which was laying frostbite to every little thing she touched. The ice would even spread like a virus among everything it touched until the ice has become a thing layer that added a shine among the staircase, railing and all. As the idol reached the next set of steps, she had tapped the door and simply repeated the process as before, turning the door into a pile of icy rubble. Stepping inside, she would see a man cowering in a corner almost, at least until he saw the smaller figure and he seemed to be a little more at ease. “Wait.. wait please! Please don’t kill me! I-I’ll make it worth your while! J-Just name your price!” He tried to plead and beg, but instead she silently continued to approach him. Just a mere 2 meters from him, she could see him shaking harder than anything she’d seen before. Between the fear and the cold emanating off of her, all she could do was shake her head in disappointment.
”I had much higher expectations... but I guess that’s what happens when you hire civilians for security.” She spoke, making no effort to give any information to him until she felt ready to, if at all. ”But I guess that’s what happens when you try to hide and live a comfortable lifestyle with your tail between your legs. Start running.” Motioning with her head, she would let him get up and begin to run for the exit. Was she serious? Was she tricking him? Well... the latter would be the closest thing to the truth. As he would go to run and turn the corner, he would slip on an ice covered floor and fall over. His running momentum forcing him against the banister of the upstairs. Crashing through it like he’d been thrown down a bowling lane into pins, he fell off the balcony of the second floor and crashed down onto the steps. A loud scream came from his mouth and a smile formed on her face for just a moment.
Moving to the place of impact, she would look down as he had laid on the ground, his right leg bent in several directions and in agonizing pain. Now that he wasn’t moving anywhere, Sakura made her way down the steps to the male and stepped down on his broken leg. ”Almost too easy, really...” The man would reel in pain, looking for the girl, asking who or what she was. ”I’m the Snow White who was conceived by two dwarves; bravery and cowardice. But cowardice abused bravery to a point even she couldn’t do much. And when the two learned of their newborns illness, Cowardice took off, taking with him everything they had and leaving a mother and child alone to bare the front alone.” Her heel dig into his leg, eyes narrowing in anger and as he flailed in pain, a smirk of amusement came across her face. ”And so Snow White simply took her years of isolation and depression, bottling it up with what little magical power she had, and one day unleashed it into a weapon.”
A sigh finally left her mouth, finishing her story and even removing her foot from the injured leg. ”But I won’t be killing you. In fact, I have nothing more to say to you... it’s not my place to cast judgement upon the swine of the world... but when the embers burn, they will burn your whole world to ashes and the Phoenix will be reborn anew.” She would turn her back and begin to walk away, leaving him there to be rescued by the incoming authorities. The air of cold would vanish, and just as it had, so would the doll. Her job was done now.
END OF CHARACTER APPLICATION
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Tue Jul 16, 2024 2:26 pm
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Spirit Weapon
Volstandig
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In addition to the image, please include a short written description of the bow. The picture while pretty, is a bit ambiguous as some individuals have unorthodox types of bows. And as such, please clarify which element in the picture is her bow.
Volstandig
Same as the Spirit Weapon. Please include a proper written description to lay out which elements in the image make up the released form.
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Fri Jul 19, 2024 2:28 pm
Bumping for edits made!
-Added second spirit weapon after getting clarification on personal mix up of what was or was not included in such.
-Both have descriptions added.
-Corrected a few leftover spelling issues missed upon first look through (thank you browser default spell check)
-Added description for Volstandig as well as requested.
-Aaaand as of a second edit added a separation of both weapons to show separation between them and lessen any chance for confusion
-Added second spirit weapon after getting clarification on personal mix up of what was or was not included in such.
-Both have descriptions added.
-Corrected a few leftover spelling issues missed upon first look through (thank you browser default spell check)
-Added description for Volstandig as well as requested.
-Aaaand as of a second edit added a separation of both weapons to show separation between them and lessen any chance for confusion
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Mon Aug 05, 2024 3:44 pm
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Please follow the Quincy template and include the name of her Spirit weapons. Even if theyre as simple as "Bow" or "Swords" we need to be able to differentiate them. That aside.
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Please follow the Quincy template and include the name of her Spirit weapons. Even if theyre as simple as "Bow" or "Swords" we need to be able to differentiate them. That aside.
Please give some quantification of how much stronger than a normal shot this is. IN really any instance, anyone can add a bit more energy to an attack in order to try and punch through defenses or another attack, so a good idea would be to include some specific quality that allows this arrow better penetration power and against what sort of offending attacks or defenses. Namely what would distinguish this from simply an arrow that has more energy put into it?
Peircing Shot - Focusing more of her next shot, the arrow being fired from this is much more concentrated and stronger. This shot has potential to pierce through objects or if strong enough, potentially weaker abilities (with approval of any combat partner/rival/etc.)
Just how much of a speed boost is there here? Additionally, I'm a little unclear on what the second portion of this section is. If its perhaps a residual from an ability thats no longer present or if there is some sort of typo. If there is supposed to be an ability in regard to it's density, please be a bit more clear and descriptive.» Vol Abilities: This release form allows the quincy the ability of controlled flight and slightly faster speeds. Due to the increase in the density of their reiatsu to form this, abilities such as kido,
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Wed Aug 07, 2024 11:41 am
Bumping for edits made!
-Please forgive crummy ability creating, I'm incredibly rusty in doing so and doubled under different mechanics.
-Added name for weapon
-Clarified the best logical way I could think of to allow the ability to work, but will adjust if need be.
-Attempted a fix of the Vol ability thing. Rereading that even I had no idea wtf I was thinking. Maybe I got distracted and never went back to finish so it just looks like a half eaten sandwich of an ability, but hopefully this edit is better.
-Please forgive crummy ability creating, I'm incredibly rusty in doing so and doubled under different mechanics.
-Added name for weapon
-Clarified the best logical way I could think of to allow the ability to work, but will adjust if need be.
-Attempted a fix of the Vol ability thing. Rereading that even I had no idea wtf I was thinking. Maybe I got distracted and never went back to finish so it just looks like a half eaten sandwich of an ability, but hopefully this edit is better.
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Wed Aug 07, 2024 12:12 pm
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You will also need a name for the double Blades, as they are a separate spirit weapon. But lets get to the ability.
The description of the Piercing shot is still pretty vague, we prefer something a bit more concrete so here's a suggestion.
This gives it a bit of an edge against your normal barriers and such, but doesn't give it extra destructive power on a person, and leaves bodily defenses (Such as blut or raw spiritual energy bracing) alone to give it a bit of natural counter play.
Vol Ability:
Its gonna be a no for the skill level bump. On Platinum Hearts, Physical ability levels are non-linear and more exponential. The difference between say beginner and adept is MUCH smaller than say Advanced to Elite. Not only that, but boosting a skill level becomes rather insane if you are at elite and say get bumped to Master (Which by itself is a very big nono).
Anywho, with another view at the description, I'm not seeing any sort of propulsion that would explain why they can fly with this. Is this being accomplished by forming wings out of the aurora? Or are they simply shooting themselves around by firing energy from portions of the armor? I'd like something more explicit about whats giving this ability of flight. As for the boost itself, that will depend on whats providing the flight. If theres say, wings they form that are allowing them to fly around especially fast, then I think something like a 100% boost to speed so long as the wings are intact. However, if it's something like just boosting around with reiatsu, I imagine that you'd be moving around and then utilizing high speed bursts at the cost of expending energy. In which case you'd want something like
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You will also need a name for the double Blades, as they are a separate spirit weapon. But lets get to the ability.
The description of the Piercing shot is still pretty vague, we prefer something a bit more concrete so here's a suggestion.
Peircing Shot - Lehanna can fire a special piercing arrow intended for puncturing other abilities and defenses. When this attack comes in contact with a non-living obstacle, it's offensive power is considered 50% higher.
This gives it a bit of an edge against your normal barriers and such, but doesn't give it extra destructive power on a person, and leaves bodily defenses (Such as blut or raw spiritual energy bracing) alone to give it a bit of natural counter play.
Vol Ability:
» Abilities: This release form allows the quincy the ability of controlled flight and slightly faster speeds equivalent to that of an additional tier (i.e. beginner bumped to advanced while in release).
Its gonna be a no for the skill level bump. On Platinum Hearts, Physical ability levels are non-linear and more exponential. The difference between say beginner and adept is MUCH smaller than say Advanced to Elite. Not only that, but boosting a skill level becomes rather insane if you are at elite and say get bumped to Master (Which by itself is a very big nono).
Anywho, with another view at the description, I'm not seeing any sort of propulsion that would explain why they can fly with this. Is this being accomplished by forming wings out of the aurora? Or are they simply shooting themselves around by firing energy from portions of the armor? I'd like something more explicit about whats giving this ability of flight. As for the boost itself, that will depend on whats providing the flight. If theres say, wings they form that are allowing them to fly around especially fast, then I think something like a 100% boost to speed so long as the wings are intact. However, if it's something like just boosting around with reiatsu, I imagine that you'd be moving around and then utilizing high speed bursts at the cost of expending energy. In which case you'd want something like
This is just an example. Naturally this has limited uses and is a tiny bit stronger than the passive, but unlike the other version, you don't lose access to it if the hypothetical wings are destroyed.Lehanna can expend energy to add a 150% boost to her speed for a post by venting energy from the back of her armor. Due to the energy needed, this can at most be done 4 times a post.
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Wed Aug 07, 2024 2:54 pm
Bumping for you!
I am not one for arguing so if it's alright with you, I did use both examples. Knowing percentiles are something used if not more often will be noted for myself for additional abilities in the future, so thank you for that ^-^
I am not one for arguing so if it's alright with you, I did use both examples. Knowing percentiles are something used if not more often will be noted for myself for additional abilities in the future, so thank you for that ^-^
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Wed Aug 07, 2024 3:49 pm
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Alright very good, the requested changes seem solid. Doing one last cursory look, I only see one last small change needed here.
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Alright very good, the requested changes seem solid. Doing one last cursory look, I only see one last small change needed here.
I'm not sure what you're intending this to scale off. But there really isn't a reason to get super technical on how big the arrow rain she shoots out is. Just go ahead and change it to something likeVolley - Firing an arrow into the air, the arrow bursts and forces a concentrated bit of the users reiatsu to rain down in smaller shaped arrows into a diameter equivalent to her power at that time.
It's a simple ability, and while I could try and sus out some sort of 'Limit' there really isn't much need to. Whatever level of oomf youre putting into the area is getting spread out through the area, the wider the area, the more dilluted the power will be. Smaller area, more powerful rain. Common sense applies. So once you snip that implied scaling bit, I think we'll be just about all set for your final approval.Volley - Firing an arrow into the air, the arrow bursts and forces a concentrated bit of the users reiatsu to rain down in an area.
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Fri Aug 09, 2024 3:08 pm
That's completely understandable. I guess old habits of other systems are harder to adjust than I assumed they would be, haha!
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Re: [Spirit Class 9] Lehanna Kisagami
Fri Aug 09, 2024 3:49 pm
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General Skills
Durability: Beginner
Speed: Beginner
Strength: Beginner
Martial Skill: Beginner
Will Skills
Willpower: Beginner
Deduction: Beginner
Focus: Adept
Racial Skills
Blut: Beginner
Gebet: Adept
Kreuzen: Beginner
Steigen: Beginner
Spirit Class: 9
Comments/Notes: Good luck, Swordgirl
General Skills
Durability: Beginner
Speed: Beginner
Strength: Beginner
Martial Skill: Beginner
Will Skills
Willpower: Beginner
Deduction: Beginner
Focus: Adept
Racial Skills
Blut: Beginner
Gebet: Adept
Kreuzen: Beginner
Steigen: Beginner
Spirit Class: 9
Comments/Notes: Good luck, Swordgirl
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