Byakuya Kuchiki [APPROVED. 0-3]
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Re: Byakuya Kuchiki [APPROVED. 0-3]
Fri Jan 18, 2013 7:39 am
alright I know that this is a character who is very important to this site and I am a recent new comer but I feel I have been proving myself as of recent times and I can not sit by and watch Byakuya just sit here, so I am throwing in my application to adopt him.
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The cold breeze caressed Byakuyas skin, the wind within this empty valley cascade like a river over him. This night had been so peaceful so serine, The ex captain of the 6th company basked in the radiant glow of the moon. But this peace was only gained through the path of blood. On closer inspection this valley was a war zone, the walls carved with the blood of hollows the ground littered with the bodies. the shards of Senbonzakura flowed gently around the man, his eyes were closed the sound of quiet his faithful ally. But this quiet was short lived the echoing scream made Byakuya's attention turn, a hollow lay on the floor covered in blood the shards of Senbonzakura had dealt the damage. his right arm was completely gone and as he sat there holding what was left of the limb, Byakuya let the his words trickle from his mouth echoing within this space.
It seems I missed one of you? No matter this mistake will soon be rectified.
The dark empty eyes of this man stared towards the hollow, inside them he saw only death for himself. The hollows remaining arm launched out mustering all of its strength it formed a cero. The energy blast fired directly towards the face of the Shinigami, as it hit the point of impact it created a large scale explosion. As the smoke rose the hollow couldn't believe his luck, avoided death by a thread it seemed almost amusing the beasts laughter rang through the valley as he lay there. but as the smoke had cleared it seemed that fate had played quite a cruel trick on this hollow.
Nothing.... the point of which should hold a charred reaper now only had a few shards of Senbonzakura, but where was Byakuya? That question was quickly answered behind this hollow who now lay in a panic a small sigh came. Followed by the cold hiss of senbourn zaruka crashing through the head of this hollow. closing his eyes the captain turned and began to walk away from this hell struck valley.
The weak never learn their place in the world.
This night had been so peaceful
Rp Example:
The cold breeze caressed Byakuyas skin, the wind within this empty valley cascade like a river over him. This night had been so peaceful so serine, The ex captain of the 6th company basked in the radiant glow of the moon. But this peace was only gained through the path of blood. On closer inspection this valley was a war zone, the walls carved with the blood of hollows the ground littered with the bodies. the shards of Senbonzakura flowed gently around the man, his eyes were closed the sound of quiet his faithful ally. But this quiet was short lived the echoing scream made Byakuya's attention turn, a hollow lay on the floor covered in blood the shards of Senbonzakura had dealt the damage. his right arm was completely gone and as he sat there holding what was left of the limb, Byakuya let the his words trickle from his mouth echoing within this space.
It seems I missed one of you? No matter this mistake will soon be rectified.
The dark empty eyes of this man stared towards the hollow, inside them he saw only death for himself. The hollows remaining arm launched out mustering all of its strength it formed a cero. The energy blast fired directly towards the face of the Shinigami, as it hit the point of impact it created a large scale explosion. As the smoke rose the hollow couldn't believe his luck, avoided death by a thread it seemed almost amusing the beasts laughter rang through the valley as he lay there. but as the smoke had cleared it seemed that fate had played quite a cruel trick on this hollow.
Nothing.... the point of which should hold a charred reaper now only had a few shards of Senbonzakura, but where was Byakuya? That question was quickly answered behind this hollow who now lay in a panic a small sigh came. Followed by the cold hiss of senbourn zaruka crashing through the head of this hollow. closing his eyes the captain turned and began to walk away from this hell struck valley.
The weak never learn their place in the world.
This night had been so peaceful
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Re: Byakuya Kuchiki [APPROVED. 0-3]
Mon Jan 21, 2013 3:02 pm
Alright. Lionus, I think you have a basic idea of how to do Byakuya. However, your RP level isn't quite up to par with him yet. Keep working, focus especially on your grammar, and work on really getting into the flow of him. I honestly believe you will be able to pull him off, just need some more experience.
So, for now, DENIED.
So, for now, DENIED.
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Re: Byakuya Kuchiki [APPROVED. 0-3]
Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:09 pm
SCREW IT. JUST, SCREW IT ALL.
Blades Never-Ending /B\Y/A\K/\U/\Y/\A/ \K/U\C/H\I/K\I/
"And here I was made to believe that Arrancar would be a challenge."
The Shinigami muttered to himself, two of his opponents rapidly falling from the sheer speed of his blade slicing their heads clean off while he performed hoho; his body vanishing as he took a step forwards, his shunpo activating as he flashed forwards, dashing as he reappeared among the group of Arrancar that the foreguard of Hanataro, Isane, and himself had encountered. Here they were, on their way to retrieve the crazy kids who had decided to lead the charge on the Espada's main base. He thought it was needlessly reckless; but he believed that they would be alright. While he trusted Renji and Ichigo; he could sense Rukia was heavily wounded, and these… Arrancar were trying to slow him down.
However, the follow up team of Captains was quickly making their way to reinforce them, and Byakuya was currently preparing himself to meet back up with them. Important to note was that one should never doubt the mastery of law which the Captain of Squad Six commanded. He always followed his orders to the letter; and never once was he told that everyone who went to retrieve Toshiro's squad HAD to come back. It was very witty; although the Shinigami Captain himself would never have shown much more then simple description as he informed anyone else about it.
Now, the matter at hand. There were three Arrancar before him, attempting to bar his way. He was not amused; apparent from the blank look on his face. He just wanted to reach Rukia's energy signature; and that was all. However, these fools were standing in his path, attempting to stop him. "Your punishment shall soon befall you." He stated simply, holding up his blade, his eyes quickly closing. "That you would stand in my path…" He muttered, even as his Zanpaktou began to glow.
"Scatter, Senbonzakura."
He stated, his voice completely calm, but the look on his face completely serious. The blade in his hands quickly scattered, turning into nothing but cherry blossoms and leaving the hilt in his grip, which quickly began to circumvent around the Captain. He held out a single finger then, preparing to open with something other then immediately using his Shikai in order to surprise his opponents. "Hadō Four, Byakurai." He stated simply, the gaze on his face totally calm as usual, as from his right hand shot a massive amount of energy, but very focused.
The blast shot out, slamming into one of the Arrancar from behind, blasting off his entire arm. It keeled over from the pain, as the other two swiftly began to change. Their bodies became altered as they thrust their blades within themselves. The look on Byakuya's face was completely passive as he moved his arm to the left after firing the Byakurai, as the cherry blossoms which had been floating around himself suddenly began spinning around with his hand, quickly shooting towards his opponent, the hilt guiding the cherry blossoms as they shot towards the Arrancar. The many blades began rotating in spirals as they shot towards the nearest Arrancar on the ground, as the many blades began to dissect it, slashing into ti from many angles simultaneously.
However, he was perfectly ready for the other two. His body quickly flashed again as one of the two attempted to fire a cero at him, his gaze cool and his eyes slightly narrowed as he vanished behind another one when they thought they had originally spotted him. "You are wasting my time here." He continued, reaching out his right hand as his blade reappeared in his grip from the handle, having reformed as he threw his right hand forwards, his body vanishing as he reappeared by the other standing Arrancar, stabbing deep within its neck, before releasing his grip on the blade, as the petals scattered, focusing themselves before slashing into the Arrancar's neck, completely taking his head off. "Did you really suppose to challenge me?" He continued, his tone flat and yet, because of the flatness, sharply mocking.
The other standing Arrancar became enraged, flying towards him. Byakuya quickly turned his head, his body quickly following as his blade reappeared in his hands once again. His blade remained firm as the Arrancar's large claws slammed into it, before he threw his hand far out to the side. "Claws? These claws were meant to harm me? I see that my time has most definitely… been wasted." He expressed, as Senbonzakura shot towards the Arrancar from all angles, slamming into him. However, something was off; Byakuya raised an eyebrow as his opponent moved with an unexpected amount of speed, blowing all the petals away.
"I see. Senbonzakura." He called, as the blade reappeared in his hands once more, as he extended his right hand holding the blade upside down, before releasing it from his grip, his eyes closed solemnly, looking… bored, for lack of a better word. "Bankai." He spoke, as he released the blade from his grip. It began to descend, before rippling on the very ground. As he did so, his eyes remained totally focused on the Arrancar, the only one remaining standing as it looked confused at the massive blades that seemed to appear out of nowhere around Byakuya. Hundreds of blades, one thousand blades to be exact, on both sides of the Arrancar appeared, Byakuya looking at them still, as he pointed a single finger at the Arrancar.
"Senbonzakura, Kageyoshi."
He said, as the blades suddenly scattered. The Arrancar looked around itself, confused; it had not expected this. Byakuya looked straight into his opponent's eyes, before the blades shot down on the Arrancar, completely crushing it from all sides, pressured heavily, before the blades scattered again. He looked impassively as the shredded form of the Arrancar was revealed as his petals began floating away, not even humanoid any longer. He sighed in disappointment, knowing he had essentially wasted his time here, about to turn around before he suddenly widened his eyes, looking voer his shoulder at the first Arrancar he had defeated, gripping onto his right shoulder with its remaining arm, bleeding all over.
He realized that his opponent had gotten within his Hurtless Zone, as without warning the Arrancar slashed downwards at his back. However, there was a problem; it hit nothingness. Byakuya reappeared behind the Arrancar, his sleeves covering over his hands and blowing in the wind from his speed, as suddenly where the Arrancar was, Byakuya's massive amounts of petals appeared… and proceeded to slam into the Arrancar, spilling around Byakuya's body as he was completely swarmed by them, unable to see or even dodge the blades coming at it as the blades enveloped it, shredding it into mere dust as the Shinigami scoffed, the blades forming back into his zanpaktou as he quickly sheathed it, having sustained no damage to any part of himself from the opponents, not even a drop of their blood had fallen on his body.
"What cowardice. You were always doomed to be destroyed." He said simply as he walked off, his eyes closed, as behind him his comppany blinked their eyes in shock, before quickly following along behind him, as he entered shunpo once again, heading straight towards Rukia and towards his rapidly approaching battle with Zommari… Although he did not know this yet…
"And here I was made to believe that Arrancar would be a challenge."
The Shinigami muttered to himself, two of his opponents rapidly falling from the sheer speed of his blade slicing their heads clean off while he performed hoho; his body vanishing as he took a step forwards, his shunpo activating as he flashed forwards, dashing as he reappeared among the group of Arrancar that the foreguard of Hanataro, Isane, and himself had encountered. Here they were, on their way to retrieve the crazy kids who had decided to lead the charge on the Espada's main base. He thought it was needlessly reckless; but he believed that they would be alright. While he trusted Renji and Ichigo; he could sense Rukia was heavily wounded, and these… Arrancar were trying to slow him down.
However, the follow up team of Captains was quickly making their way to reinforce them, and Byakuya was currently preparing himself to meet back up with them. Important to note was that one should never doubt the mastery of law which the Captain of Squad Six commanded. He always followed his orders to the letter; and never once was he told that everyone who went to retrieve Toshiro's squad HAD to come back. It was very witty; although the Shinigami Captain himself would never have shown much more then simple description as he informed anyone else about it.
Now, the matter at hand. There were three Arrancar before him, attempting to bar his way. He was not amused; apparent from the blank look on his face. He just wanted to reach Rukia's energy signature; and that was all. However, these fools were standing in his path, attempting to stop him. "Your punishment shall soon befall you." He stated simply, holding up his blade, his eyes quickly closing. "That you would stand in my path…" He muttered, even as his Zanpaktou began to glow.
He stated, his voice completely calm, but the look on his face completely serious. The blade in his hands quickly scattered, turning into nothing but cherry blossoms and leaving the hilt in his grip, which quickly began to circumvent around the Captain. He held out a single finger then, preparing to open with something other then immediately using his Shikai in order to surprise his opponents. "Hadō Four, Byakurai." He stated simply, the gaze on his face totally calm as usual, as from his right hand shot a massive amount of energy, but very focused.
The blast shot out, slamming into one of the Arrancar from behind, blasting off his entire arm. It keeled over from the pain, as the other two swiftly began to change. Their bodies became altered as they thrust their blades within themselves. The look on Byakuya's face was completely passive as he moved his arm to the left after firing the Byakurai, as the cherry blossoms which had been floating around himself suddenly began spinning around with his hand, quickly shooting towards his opponent, the hilt guiding the cherry blossoms as they shot towards the Arrancar. The many blades began rotating in spirals as they shot towards the nearest Arrancar on the ground, as the many blades began to dissect it, slashing into ti from many angles simultaneously.
However, he was perfectly ready for the other two. His body quickly flashed again as one of the two attempted to fire a cero at him, his gaze cool and his eyes slightly narrowed as he vanished behind another one when they thought they had originally spotted him. "You are wasting my time here." He continued, reaching out his right hand as his blade reappeared in his grip from the handle, having reformed as he threw his right hand forwards, his body vanishing as he reappeared by the other standing Arrancar, stabbing deep within its neck, before releasing his grip on the blade, as the petals scattered, focusing themselves before slashing into the Arrancar's neck, completely taking his head off. "Did you really suppose to challenge me?" He continued, his tone flat and yet, because of the flatness, sharply mocking.
The other standing Arrancar became enraged, flying towards him. Byakuya quickly turned his head, his body quickly following as his blade reappeared in his hands once again. His blade remained firm as the Arrancar's large claws slammed into it, before he threw his hand far out to the side. "Claws? These claws were meant to harm me? I see that my time has most definitely… been wasted." He expressed, as Senbonzakura shot towards the Arrancar from all angles, slamming into him. However, something was off; Byakuya raised an eyebrow as his opponent moved with an unexpected amount of speed, blowing all the petals away.
"I see. Senbonzakura." He called, as the blade reappeared in his hands once more, as he extended his right hand holding the blade upside down, before releasing it from his grip, his eyes closed solemnly, looking… bored, for lack of a better word. "Bankai." He spoke, as he released the blade from his grip. It began to descend, before rippling on the very ground. As he did so, his eyes remained totally focused on the Arrancar, the only one remaining standing as it looked confused at the massive blades that seemed to appear out of nowhere around Byakuya. Hundreds of blades, one thousand blades to be exact, on both sides of the Arrancar appeared, Byakuya looking at them still, as he pointed a single finger at the Arrancar.
He said, as the blades suddenly scattered. The Arrancar looked around itself, confused; it had not expected this. Byakuya looked straight into his opponent's eyes, before the blades shot down on the Arrancar, completely crushing it from all sides, pressured heavily, before the blades scattered again. He looked impassively as the shredded form of the Arrancar was revealed as his petals began floating away, not even humanoid any longer. He sighed in disappointment, knowing he had essentially wasted his time here, about to turn around before he suddenly widened his eyes, looking voer his shoulder at the first Arrancar he had defeated, gripping onto his right shoulder with its remaining arm, bleeding all over.
He realized that his opponent had gotten within his Hurtless Zone, as without warning the Arrancar slashed downwards at his back. However, there was a problem; it hit nothingness. Byakuya reappeared behind the Arrancar, his sleeves covering over his hands and blowing in the wind from his speed, as suddenly where the Arrancar was, Byakuya's massive amounts of petals appeared… and proceeded to slam into the Arrancar, spilling around Byakuya's body as he was completely swarmed by them, unable to see or even dodge the blades coming at it as the blades enveloped it, shredding it into mere dust as the Shinigami scoffed, the blades forming back into his zanpaktou as he quickly sheathed it, having sustained no damage to any part of himself from the opponents, not even a drop of their blood had fallen on his body.
"What cowardice. You were always doomed to be destroyed." He said simply as he walked off, his eyes closed, as behind him his comppany blinked their eyes in shock, before quickly following along behind him, as he entered shunpo once again, heading straight towards Rukia and towards his rapidly approaching battle with Zommari… Although he did not know this yet…
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Re: Byakuya Kuchiki [APPROVED. 0-3]
Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:12 pm
Since i now you really enjoy Byakuya and i don't know anyone else who really fits his bill....
You are hereby approved!
Play him well!
You are hereby approved!
Play him well!
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