RotR Transfer Tsubaki Kenpeki

Name: Tsubaki Kenpeki
Age: 28
True Age: 410
Sex: Female

Personality: While she is calm most times and can run things efficiently and effectively, Tsubaki is easily riled up and has a fiery temper, despite her age. She is also a rather caring woman, but will reluctantly follow orders from her superiors, depending on what they are. She has been known to have glared down even the strongest of wills. In private, she is timid and constantly scolding herself for stupid things, while in public she's very outgoing and blames others for her mistakes. Despite trying to be a perfect role-model for other officers and those under them, she is very clumsy, but she takes it all in good faith, and sometimes laughs at her own clumsiness, but glares down those that laughs at her. When her rank or general kindness doesn't convince others to do their work, she won't hesitate to use brute intimidation, which is her favorite method. She firmly believes anything goes in a fight, so there is nothing called a cheap shot or low blow or anything of that nature. The purpose is to win, and she would do anything to achieve that purpose. She also doesn't mind drinking on the job, or anytime for that matter, but she will never be a Rangiku Matsumoto.

She isn't one for subtlty, when drunk, she's loud and obnoxious, though during work she's careful not to get drunk. Even when she's not drunk, stealth or subtle hints are not her specialty. She will stop a fight if her opponent can no longer fight back, unless it is a hollow or arrancar. In that respect, she is an honorable person. Strangely, she isn't clumsy in battle, though this could be due to her focus, which she does have some problems on with everyday activities.

Character Appearance

Height: Five feet eight inches
Weight: 135 lbs.

Spoiler:

Just change the clothing to a shinigami uniform.

Fighting Style

General Fighting Style: She likes to fight at two extremes, either up close and dirty (in which she would even do cheap shots), or at range with her shikai. She's very good in shunpo, and utilizes it to keep either up close or at a distance. If the person gets close to her when she has her shikai active, she's not afraid to pistol whip'em.

Strengths: Enhanced endurance-being a brawler, she knows how to take hits and deal with pain. Enhanced strength-she needs to be strong to wield her shikai. Shunpo expert-to the point of rivaling Squad 2 officers. Expert hand to hand combat-she's a brawler. Expert knife fighter?-are tanto daggers even considered swords? She's an expert using her sealed zanpakutou, but not actual swords. Expert marksman.

Weaknesses: Her swordsmanship is much to be desired of, though she only uses that skill during training with bokken. Kido is another weakness of hers. She is also easily riled up and provoked into attacking prematurely. She also is not one for stealth or sneaking up on people.

Zanpakuto & Kidou

Sealed Appearance: A pair of black tanto daggers with no guard, but a picture of a pistol on the blade of each dagger.


Spirit’s Name: Kenjuu

Spirit’s Appearance: A cowboy with a pair of rediculous sized pistols at his hip wearing a cloak. His face looks like a zombie with red eyes. When his dark brown cowboy styled hat is taken off, his hair is black. He also wears plain black leather gloves, a red flannel, long sleeved shirt, blue denim jeans, and light brown cowboy boots with spurs. His skin tone is dark grey. He is also pretty buff, nearly twice her size. His belt is a four inch width belt with a pair of revolvers crossing each other as a belt buckle. His pistols is a fifty caliber Desert Eagle and a fifty caliber revolver, each one looking exactly like her shikai.

Spirit’s Personality: Kenjuu takes no BS, and is just as easily riled up as Tsubaki. He is also, surprisingly, a sexist and generally a jerk to her every time she visits. He also loves to drink and to fight, though really doesn't have one to do those with. Beyond those, he's pretty mysterious. He thinks he is the most badass thing in the world. Arrogant and overconfident, he'll do anything to get under Tsubaki's nerves. Like her, he believes there are no cheap shots and will fight dirty. He is a tad cynical and sadistic.


Inner World: A stereotypical western town in the middle of the desert. The kind often seen in movies with various saloons, houses, restaurants, stables, gun stores (with guns of the early 21st century), and hardware stores. Except with no people other than her zanpakutou spirit. There are, however, skeletal horses at the stables.

Kidou: None to speak of whatsoever.

Shikai

Call Out Command: Shoot, Kenjuu

Appearance: http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2431/3705171382_2769dfd2e6.jpg

and https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/i/howitzer2lr2.jpg/sr=1

Abilities: Her Desert Eagle .50 cal fires powerful bullets made of spirit energy, and can break through most shields, depending on how strong they are and the person's power that she is fighting. Think of the bullets as a smaller, high powered bala. After nine shots, there is a nine second recharge rate for the "bullets" to reappear in the "magazine" and "chamber." She does this by channeling her spirit energy into the gun. This process may get interrupted and the consenquences would be only a partially full "magazine." One second for one bullet.

Her revolver of the same caliber can fire multiple different "bullets", three in total. To switch between the type of "bullet", she has spin the chamber to the appropriate one, as each are labeled with a symbol, and that takes about three seconds to do that depending on her decision making process. After six shots, of any kind, she needs to do the same thing as with the Desert Eagle. For example, she fires six shots of the shotgun bullet, she spins the chamber to the charge shot. But, she cannot fire it until she spends a certain amount of time putting energy back into the chamber. The number of the types of bullets are not set in stone. But the recharge rate does very after each full expenditure of shots. For example, she fired a charge shot, three normal Desert Eagle like shots, and two shotgun shots. The recharge rate would be five seconds for the charge shot (as it is her most powerful shot), one second for each normal shot, and three seconds for each shotgun shot, which would amount to a total recharge time of 14 seconds. If she fired six charge shots after that, she would require thirty seconds of recharge before she can continue firing the revolver. If the process is interrupted, unlike with the Desert Eagle, she will still need to charge it fully before it can be used, there is no partially full chamber with this one.

Both pistols are semi-automatic.

Revolver "bullet" types:

1. The same type of shot as the Desert Eagle
2. An energy shot, much like the first, but is a shotgun, firing multiple shots at a time and in a random pattern just like a shotgun. It doesn't have the penetrative punch of the first type of shot. Mostly used at moderate range and short range.
3. Lastly, a charge up shot that is her equivalent to a cero, and has the same weaknesses. This is also her strongest type of bullet/shot.

Boosts: Both her speed and strength increase to a moderate degree.

Bankai

New Name: [What's your zanpakuto's new name? Ex: Tensa Zangetsu, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi, etc.]
Appearance: [What does your bankai look like? Character appearance changes, weapon changes, etc.]
Abilities: [What abilities does your character gain]
Boosts: [Increases in your character's physical capabilities. Speed, Strength, Stamina, etc.]

Back Drop

Background: Ever since she was young, Tsubaki was extremely competative, contributing to her fiery nature and short temper. However, she was a housewife, living in Japan. While she kept the household running smoothly, she was abused by her near constant drunk samurai husband. Only because of her clumsiness. One day, her fiery temper got the better of her and fought back. She killed her husband with a tanto dagger that she always played around with. She was soon found, "tried", and executed. She soon found herself in the Soul Society

While there, she worked as a handy woman, doing odd jobs to support herself. Despite her clumsiness, her glare and friendliness still allowed her to make quite the profit. It was also because of her unique look that she started to get timid side to her, and started to scold herself. What she showed outwardly was very different. The complete opposite. She also felt hungry, an abnormal occurance in her district. After finding out about the Shinigami Academy, just for kicks she applied. Surprisingly, she made it in.

Life in the Shinigami Academy was uneventful and uninteresting. She graduated at the top of her class in terms of brawn, and above average in terms of brain. She very slowly worked up the ranks to her current one.

Side Notes: RotR tier: The equivalent would be 2-3 or 3-1
RP Sample: http://www.riseoftherevolution.org/t1577-keten-zima-vs-kyo-blaze

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: A Desert Eagle normally can pretty much kill every human alive with a single, well placed bullet. If not, a second one does the job. While some races have increased physical resistance, humans still don't get the same luck when facing a desert eagle, therefore, I cannot approve of that.

Please add either more description for appearance, or add a picture.

Please add at least 2 more sentences for Personality, another paragraph would also do the job.

Tier: Incomplete

I can do the appearance and the personality, but not the powers. I love the big pistols way too much to change it, I really do.

Go ahead and move the app. to denied apps. I still want a shinigami character, but he'll be an original one for this site specifically and at a later date.

After reviewing the gun issue with staff, we decided that it was okay, as long as it doesn't state that it is a one hit kill. I will come up with the checklist shortly, as I need to review the rest of the app.

Sorry for my blunder ^^''

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
Appearance is Not Claimed [-]
10 sentences for personality [O]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Alright, first : Appearance is too short. Either add a picture or add some stuff in the actual description
Also, please describe the reload rate/cooldown of the gun's abilities, this is important especially because you use a special charger for it to use your abilities. I believe it needs more description in there.

Sorry for the delays on the checklist

Editted. Hope that makes sense.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Looks good. Accepted
Tier: 2-3

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