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Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:47 am
Vizard TemplateGeneral Information
Name: Ayumu Kazuki
Appearance Age: 17
True Age: 795
Gender: MaleOverall Appearance
Personality:
Appearance:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 165 LbsZanpakutō (Sealed) Description
Zanpakutō Name:
Zanpakutō Spirit:
Zanpakutō World:
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance:
Release Phrase:Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description
Shikai Appearance:
Shikai Abilities:
The top two blades on either side of the gauntlets main blade detach and begin to spin very rapidly as they levatate. Ayumu can then control these blades telepathicly to chase down his opponent(s). It is very easy for him to change the direction of these blades to any angle at slow speeds, but if he is useing there full speed there ability to change direction is slightly hindered as they must take a larger arc to turn and change direction. (He controls his blades as byakuya controls Senbonzakura. There speed rival Ayumu's quickest foot speed with out useing shunpo.)
When the opponent is sliced by Ayumu's blade a small amount of blood sprays from the opponents wound before healing almost instantly. When the opponent is sliced again the old wound will open along with the new causeing both wounds to open and spray blood yet again as if they were just made before healing again and so on. When the old wounds reopen due to a new cut the opponent will feel the pain of the old wounds as if it were just made. Also if this ability were used on himself it would not cause his wounds to open again, but will cause him pain and a small amount of blood loss before healing his wound(s).Zanpakotu (Bankai) Description
Bankai Appearance:
Bankai Abilities:
Ayumu's claws can rip dimensional doors from one point to another allowing him to attack through or even step through virtually instantaneously. He does this by causeing a very brief alternate dimension between his location and the desired location where he or his blades reappear. This ability has a distances limit of up to two miles under optimal conditions, although it is at his extreme limit, and he can become severely fatigued if he tries to teleport that distance in one shot. (This ability has a sound when tearing through dimensions simular to a garganta.)
When Ayumu attacks with his tail he could either use it like a alligator whipping his opponent or The tail can divide in to eight sections and begin to spin very rapidly as they levatate. Ayumu can then control these blades telepathicly to chase down his opponent(s). It is very easy for him to change the direction of these blades to any angle at slow speeds, but if he is useing there full speed there ability to change direction is slightly hindered as they must take a larger arc to turn and change direction.. (He controls his blades as byakuya controls Senbonzakura. There speed is increses extreamly in this form compared to shikai.)
When the opponent is sliced by either Ayumu's claws or tail blades a small amount of blood sprays from the opponents wound before healing almost instantly. When the opponent is sliced again the old wound will open along with the new causeing both wounds to open and spray blood yet again as if they were just made before healing again and so on. When the old wounds reopen due to a new cut the opponent will feel the pain of the old wounds as if it were just made. (This ability carrys on from Shikai and when the old wounds reopen due to a new wound the opponent feels the pain of the old wounds as if they were just made, Also this ability if used on himself will not cause his wounds to open again, but will cause him pain when used on himself.)Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow
Inner Hollow Description:
Inner Hollow Personality:
Hollow Mask Appearance:
Hollow Powers:
High-Speed Regeneration, Mask Protection, Cero, Bala, Power Augmentation, Enhanced Strength, Enhanced Speed, Reiryoku Enhancement.
He has the ability to call his Zanpakutō to himself if it were ever knocked from his hand or left behind. (He can jedi his blade to himself.)
Not Yet Achived
Resurrección Appearance:Resurrección Abilities:
Ayumu's claws can rip dimensional doors allowing him to attack through or even step through. (This ability has a sound when tearing through dimensions simular to a garganta.)
When Ayumu attacks with his tails he could either use them like a alligator whipping his opponent(s) or The tails can divide in to sixteen sections creating blades that Ayumu controls to attack his opponent.
When the opponent(s) are sliced by Ayumu's claws or tail blades the wound will begin to fester instantly causeing the wounds to become infected and in time causeing the meat around the wound(s) to rotBackground/Roleplay Sample
Background:Racial Skills
- Hoho/Sonido: Adept
- Cero/Bala/Kidō: Adept
- Zanjutsu: Advanced
- Hakuda: Advanced
Role Play Sample: RotR Battle Thread
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Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:08 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [O]
- History is of appropriate length [O]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
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Tier: N/A
And now the explanation.
10 sentences for personality
Simple enough; your personality is too short.
History is of appropriate length
Couple things here:
A) History is a little short.
B) There is no explanation/reason for the character to have a hollow influence int he first place
C) Did you get okay'd by Tsubine for this, since he controls the current Captain Commander. If this took place before that Captain Commander's reign, did you okay it history wise?
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered
Only reason this was checked was because unless you are okay'd by an admin, we're not currently accepting Shinigami/Vizards with Bankai or Vizards with Ressureccion.
Powers are described reasonably enough
You're powers seem straightforward, but are a little vague on certain points; does the reopening of the wounds actually feel like the wound being split open again? How fast do the blades move? Just how much control does he have over the blades once they're released?
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Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:01 am
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Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:42 pm
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Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Sun Jun 19, 2011 5:21 am
There is no explanation/reason for the character to have a hollow influence in the first place
This needs fixing still.
Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:18 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: MUCH CLEANER
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Re: Ayumu Kazuki (Mod Wip)
Sun Oct 21, 2012 5:11 am
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