Editing Hollow Powers

» Name Of Character: Laskt
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Chains that Enslave Heaven: Tozat has always favored chains to complement his swordsmanship in combat, and, upon donning his mask, Laskt gains access to these very same chains. As soon as his mask is activated, two bladed chains materialize around his left arm, as well as from four dark portals that appear from behind his back. These chains are controlled mentally, so no physical motion is necessary. Their Strength, Durability and Speed, curiously, has an inverse relationship with the curse intensity. They are two ranks below him for the full effect of the curse, one rank for 75% of the effect, equal for half effect. When not in use, they will automatically defend Laskt to the best of their ability.

Curse of the Last Tyrant: The chains of Tozat are no simple tools. Each set of chains houses a debilitating curse that activates when the bladed tips pierce the target’s flesh and draw blood. The effects only intensify if the targets are hit additional times. If the target is two tiers above Laskt, then the effects are reduced by half. Additionally, the chains must physically draw blood from the target for the curses to activate making spiritual defenses like Hierro extremely effective counters.

Curse of Scorching: This curse is housed within the chain upon Laskt’s left arm. Upon the activation of the curse, all chains rapidly increases in temperature, around a thousand degrees per curse activation. This heat does not affect Laskt, and similarly will be weak against those with resistance to its temperature.
Curse of Nightmare: This curse is housed within the chainup on Laskt’s right arm. Upon activation of the curse, auditory and sensory hallucinations of the target’s worst fears (both physical and mental) begin to appear, only detectable to the target. Every time they are struck, the illusions grow more and more real and complex. If the target has focus or mental deduction that is greater than 2 ranks below Laskt’s Power Augmentation, they can resist the effects. Additionally, these effects are purely mental, and cannot deal any damage.

Curse of Debilitation: This curse is housed within the chains upon Laskt’s left leg. Upon activation of the curse, a selected physical sense is reduced by half of its normal potency. Spiritually based senses are unaffected by this debilitation. If the target has focus or mental deduction that is greater than 2 ranks below Laskt’s Power Augmentation, they can resist the effects.

Curse of Greed: This curse is housed within the chain upon Laskt’s right leg. This curse is a bit different, as instead of intensifying upon each hit, it instead activates the same effect on every hit. Upon this curse’s activation, about 5% of the target’s energy pool is absorbed by the chain and given to Laskt himself. This effect increases or decreases by 2% if the target is a tier above or below the target respectively. If the target is massively more powerful than Laskt, the sudden influx of energy could have disastrous consequences.


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Chains that Enslave Heaven: Tozat has always favored chains to complement his swordsmanship in combat, and, upon donning his mask, Laskt gains access to these very same chains. As soon as his mask is activated, two bladed chains materialize around his left and right arms respectively, as well as from four dark portals that appear from behind his back. These chains are controlled mentally, so no physical motion is necessary. Their Strength, Durability and Speed, curiously, has an inverse relationship with the curse intensity. They are two ranks below him for the full effect of the curse, one rank for 75% of the effect, equal for half effect. When not in use, they will automatically defend Laskt to the best of their ability.

Curse of the Last Tyrant: The chains of Tozat are no simple tools. Each set of chains houses a debilitating curse that activates when the bladed tips pierce the target’s flesh and draw blood. The effects only intensify if the targets are hit additional times. If the target is two tiers above Laskt, then the effects are reduced by half. Additionally, the chains must physically draw blood from the target for the curses to activate making spiritual defenses like Hierro extremely effective counters.

Curse of Scorching: This curse is housed within the chain upon Laskt’s left arm. Upon the activation of the curse, all chains rapidly increases in temperature, around a thousand degrees per curse activation. This heat does not affect Laskt, and similarly will be weak against those with resistance to its temperature.

Curse of Nightmare: This curse is housed within the chains on Laskt’s right arm. Upon activation of the curse, auditory and sensory hallucinations of the target’s worst fears (both physical and mental) begin to appear, only detectable to the target. Every time they are struck, the illusions grow more and more real and complex. If the target has focus or mental deduction that is greater than 2 ranks below Laskt’s Power Augmentation, they can resist the effects. Additionally, these effects are purely mental, and cannot deal any damage.

Curse of Debilitation: This curse is housed within the chains that appear from the two portals on Laskt's left side. Upon activation of the curse, a selected physical sense is reduced by half of its normal potency. Spiritually based senses are unaffected by this debilitation. If the target has focus or mental deduction that is greater than 2 ranks below Laskt’s Power Augmentation, they can resist the effects.

Curse of Greed: This curse is housed within the chains that appear from the two portals on Laskt's right side. This curse is a bit different, as instead of intensifying upon each hit, it instead activates the same effect on every hit. Upon this curse’s activation, about 5% of the target’s energy pool is absorbed by the chain and given to Laskt himself. This effect increases or decreases by 2% if the target is a tier above or below the target respectively. If the target is massively more powerful than Laskt, the sudden influx of energy could have disastrous consequences.


» Why: Honestly this is just fixing typos. It was always meant to be scorching (left arm), nightmare (right), debilitatating (two left portals), Greed (two right portals), but I must have uploaded a rough draft version by mistake.

» Extra: [Anything extra to add?]