Hanatarō Yamada [APPROVED, 3-1+]

Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:37 pm

S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Hanatarō Yamada
Gender:Male
Age:+1000
Appearance:
(400 years later)(Minus the robe just the appearance)

https://i.servimg.com/u/f62/15/82/46/37/han411.jpg

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:He tends to be clumsy and easily duped. Hanatarō's kind nature and
nervousness results in him becoming the victim of many bullies and
practical jokes. In fact, he states that he is "the most bullied kid in
the world. People spend the whole day tricking him as a result.He is popular with the ladies but is kind of scared of them most of the time. He has a good heart and will become stronger in the future.He will not be the same person he was before and wants to change for the better.

400 years later
He starts to be stronger, and show back bone.He is tired of the sidelines, and begins to carry his sword with him. He is now very bold despite his ability's, and now can fight with stronger opponents. He now more calmer,as well as respected amoung the 13 court gaurd squads.He likes to fight with his Kido's now but when needed he will use his Zanpakuto.He has a strong heart and great at healing people.
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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: After the Great War that brought the end of the evil Espada take over. He was relieved that the fighting was over and tended to the wounded. He soon after the battle wanted to learn to fight in the future instead of sitting on the sidelines. After everyone returned to the soul society, he started to train among the other soul reapers; everyone questioned him because of his current squad.It didn't matter to him because with these doubts his resolve became stronger.

100 years later he became better at fighting as well as healing in squad 4.He soon went on missions to fight hollows as well. He could not transfer over to another squad because of his healing skills, and was stuck in squad 4. He really didn't mind as long as he was able to train to become stronger. He reminded himself that the duty of his squad is too help people, and stuck to those morals.

300 years later he surpassed his current 5 seat which put him up for 4 seat. He was glad that after all the years he was able to get out of his 7 seat. He never gave up his role as a healer, and wants to someday become captain of a squad .To do this he must become stronger, and learn to wield his bankai.
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Racial Abilities

Name:Healing Kido:
Description:He focuses his spiritual pressure to his hands and can heal people or himself in the area his hands are on.

Expert Kido/Hado Practitioner : His Kido's are much stronger then the average Soul reaper. There more powerful,faster, and has good aim that they can compare to a vice-captain's kido

His sword in it's sealed state can heal anyone, even himself in combat or anywhere else there is a injured person.
Shunpo
Description:a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow.^[1]. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed

Name:Binding Cross
Number:20
Range:Long[10 ft. Max]
Incantation:"Bind them within the holy symbol! Bakudo #20 Binding Cross!"
Description:The user aims their palm at the enemy then a blue flash of reiatsu shines in front of the user as a cross made out of reiatsu is fired from their hands at the enemy. If the enemy is within ten feet of the caster the blinding flash of blue light will momentarily blind them, giving the cross the time it needs to strike them once it has they will literally be, crucified on it. They are bound to the cross held in place by the intense reiatsu rope that entangles their arms, the Bakudo keeps an enemy trapped for one turn. It cannot be used without the use of the incantation, even attempting to do so will result in a backfire hurting the caster.

Name:Bakudō # 30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam
Number:#30
Range:short/mid
Incantation:Unknown
Description:Shitotsu Sansen is primarily used to disable. The practitioner generates a burst of crackling yellow energy in his/her palm and uses that energy to draw a inverted yellow triangle. The triangle then generates solidified energy in he shape of triangles from the the three points of the inverted triangle. The fired triangles hit the intended target and pin him/her against a nearby surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in the shape of a perfect triangle and immobilizing the target.

Name: Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield)
Number: #39
Range:None
Incantation:None
Description:Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks

Name: Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down)
Number: #33
Range:Long
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."
Description: Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.

Hadou
Name: Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning)
Number: #11
Range: Close
Incantation:None
Description:Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through

Name: Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames)
Number: #54
Range: Mid-Long
Incantation: None
Description:Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.

Bakudō #61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light; Viz "Six-Rod Light Restraint")
Number:#61
Range:Mid-long
Incantation:"Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"
Description:Rikujōkōrō is primarily used to disable. The practioner points his/her index finger at the target generating a spark of yellow energy. That energy summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection

Bakudō # 8. Seki (斥, Repulse)

Number:#8
Range:close
Incantation:None
Description:Seki is primarily used for deflection. The practitioner generates a orb of light blue energy that rebounds an attack when said attack makes contact with it. The effect not only blocks the attack but repels whatever strikes it

Zanpakutô Spirit Name:Hisagomaru
Appearance:(Just found out he has one)

Hanatarō Yamada [APPROVED, 3-1+] Spirit10

https://i.servimg.com/u/f62/15/82/46/37/spirit11.jpg

Inner World: It looks like a Hospital room like in the human world with a sunset making it look beautiful with flowers everywhere in the room.
Sealed Zanpakutô :His sword is a black Zanpakuto that is looks like a normal zanpakuto despite the color, and has a gauge in the middle of it.
Release:When he cuts into the enemy enough times and then when his gauge is filled he says.Fulfill" (満たせ, Mitase) to release his blade.

Shikai Description:

A scalpel which is very small and has a gauge in the middle of it.The gauge goes up when it hits anyone thats it touchs.The rate will go up depending on the cut on the person it cuts.The guage goes down when he releases a attack wave but afterwords can easily be refilled when his blade by cutting people again.

Shikai Abilities

NameAkeiro Hisagomaru
Range:10 meters
Description:It shots out a waves of spiritual pressure that cuts aything in it's path, and it's color is red.The speed would be like a bala being shot but It is much stronger depending on the size of the gauge.The gauge would then revert back to zero and then it will refill again.

Name:100 cuts of flower
Range:1 meter
Description:Because of his size of his blade he can cut at any much faster speed and still have the same power of a normal shikai.He cuts everywhere in the chest area and because of the blade being so small it is hard to see and dodge in close range combat.

Name:Flower bed
Range:5 meters
Description:He plunges his small blade into the ground and shoots spiritual pressure waves everywhere in his range.The more the guage is filled up the stronger the attack is.The gauge would go back to zero and then refill back up when he cuts people.

Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay
Sample
Neon opened up a Garganta in the middle of the park, and walked throught.He felt the nice warm of the sun as the light made shadows in the ground.He soon saw little children playing as they had fun with thier friends.Of course he couldn't be seen by them and he walked around them quickly.He hide his spiritual pressure as he walked around in plain human clothes.The area was noisy with laughter, and cars coming down the road in a rush.He didn't want to walk into another car again so he just waited for the light go red,or yellow he didn't remember.After that only walk for nothing he came across a school,he felt some strong spiritual pressure at this school.

He soon walked in but it seems that everyone was gone for some reason.He soon remembered that humans go to school, and leave at a certain time.He came up to a field that was painted with white lines, and a large net at each side.He looked around the schoolyard as he didn't know what to do as he spoted a ball in the corner.He walked up to the ball and picked it up to examine it closely.It seemed like a normal ball and soon put it into the floor.He put his feet on the ball and lightly pushed it as it moved into the grass field.

"Well this seems like a pointless thing to do"He said as he kicked the ball hard in the air.To his luck that it went into sky really high and didn't come back for 10 minutes."That was fun mabye something more"He said as he smiled at the nets as he smashed his kick into the ball, and it moved fast at the net.He soon went throught the net,then cracked the wall hard as it soon fell back to him."Mabye If can play this at las noches to be less bored"He soon took the ball into his hands and kept training how to keep the ball up without it flying through the air.

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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills

Durability: Beginner
General Speed: Beginner
Strength: Beginner
Weapon Skill:Beginner

Racial Skills

Hoho: Beginner
Kidou: Advanced
Zanjutsu: Beginner
Hakuda: Beginner

Mon Mar 07, 2011 1:12 am

Can someone check this

Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:57 am

Fix the grammar.
Space after Punctuations.
Punctuations not needed after Quotations.
Fix the Coding.

To be simple, it is rather difficult for me to read since the grammar mistakes are ruining the flow. I will not judge until the problems are repaired.

Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:30 pm

Okay I fixed most of the problems sorry about that.Can anyone check this

Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:10 pm

I see Unohana as tha appearance. You CANNOT have that image for appearance. Please change it, and make sure you don't pick an image that isn't taken already in the face claims.

SECOND: The shikai powers are too vague, and needs much more description plus you should put an image of a scapel for the shikai, OR describe it more. Describe how exactly the gauge goes up, and at WHAT RATE? What attacks cause it increase more. Does any action cause it to DECREASE?

Please fix this.

Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:50 am

Okay once again finished and that picture said it was Hanataro when I looked up images but I found a another one

Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:22 am

First off: His zanpakuto spirit HAS a real appearance. It was shown in the zanpakuto filler arc. Please use that as that woman on a hospital bed is NOT accurate.

Secondly: His shikai has an actual release command as well. Cutting people fills the gauge, yes, but the shikai is released WITH the command once the gauge is full.

Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:49 pm

.....I just found out he has a spirit,huh sorry about that fixed again for the forth time.

Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:03 pm

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Comments/Notes: Alright it seems you made the appropriate changes needed for this app to be approved, and everything seems to be in check.
Tier: Approved 4-3

Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:21 pm

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