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Ukika Shuhiro [Approved, Vizard; 1-2] [Hazard Rating E]
Fri Jun 21, 2019 1:19 pm
THE BLACK GENERAL
» Name: Ukika Shuhiro
» Titles: The Demon King, Embodiment Of Chaos
» Appearance Age: 21
» True Age: 322
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: Lux Orior
» Reiatsu Color: Dark Blue
» Appearance Description: Ukika is a fit muscular build. He has long black hair and blonde strands. He has a black sleeveless coat with a cotton shirt under. He has a black choker and a necklace with a teardrop-shape diamond. He has several black bands on his arms and gloves. He also has a leather band on his leg as well as a chain in his pocket.
PERSONALITY
» Personality: Ukika is very energetic and loves to battle and help people. When he wakes up he is usually very happy and he greets everyone with a big “Good Morning!” He is very fond of his cooking skills even though he burns most of the food he makes, but he can live with it (somehow). The way he walks is how he expresses himself. If he is happy he will do a happy jog. If he is fine he will walk normally. If he is sad he will walk as if he has had a bad day.
Likes
» Battle: Ukika loves to battle. He loves it, even more, when someone is stronger than him or he is bleeding.
» Destruction: Ukika has the tendency to destroy things whenever he is mad
» Cooking: He tries his best to cook as best he can. Even though he mostly burns it (mostly? Nah all the time it's rarely cooked)
Dislikes
» The Men: Ukika has Incredibly Strong hate for the cloaked men, because of what they did to him and his mother.
RESOURCES
» Necklace: This necklace was given to him by his late father when he was a kid. He keeps it because it’s the only thing he remembers about his father.
» Energy-Sealing Chain Necklace: This was given to him by the Shinigami Research and Development Institute to seal his destructive reiryoku.
NATURAL AND RACIAL SKILLS
» Master Swordsmanship: Ukika is pretty decent with his swordsmanship. He can take down two unseated Shinigami with his Zanpakuto. He had also perfected a style called "The Beast's Approach.'' Which he does a series of slashes and pierces to damage the opponent.
» Immense Strength: As this is Ukika's strongest feat, he has an exceedingly high level of strength. He can easily shatter walls with his bare hands. He prefers to use his sword because he thinks he will "End The Fight Too Quickly."
» Immense Spiritual Pressure: Ukika's Spiritual Pressure is Wild and Dangerous. His pressure causes the bodies of nearby people to collapse on themselves.
THE HISTORY
When Ukika was alive he used to be peaceful and not so destructive. He was born from a rich family and he was treated like a king. He had a scholarship to the finest school (and the most expensive) and he was very smart. He pursued his academic dream and he accomplished it, but one day in his town people was disappearing. That is when he said, "Where did the teachers go mom?" he said.
His mom replied "I'm not sure honey. Later, that evening his mom put him to bed and said Goodnight Ukika, I have to go somewhere. She left without saying goodbye, but he disobeyed his mom's command and snuck out. He was walking down the street and he sees his mom in a black cloak and a bunch of tall men in the same cloaks.
She saw me and the tall men did as well. The tall men whispered "You have to get rid of him or we will get rid of you." His mom looked at him and then looked at the men and said, "No!." Once she said that one of the men stabbed her and he said, “Should have killed him, but you didn’t". Then, he turned to the kid, but the kid was gone.
30 years later, He died of a heart attack, because he had been smoking for months. The cause was depression. While he was in the Soul Society, he came across a Shinigami. Ukika beat him easily, but one of the Shinigami from the Shinigami Institute Of Research and Development felt his Overflowing and Dangerous Reiatsu. The Shinigami was even pushed down by his Spiritual Pressure. The Shinigami gave him a Reiatsu-Lowering Chain Necklace. If he wants he can remove it to go full power. Months had past and he noticed that someone was talking to him.
He told someone and they said that he was a vizard and the person that was talking to him was his inner hollow. He was put to train himself to use the hollow's strength and it takes people a few years but he had done it in 9 months. He had his hollow under control and he can draw out his power by saying "Destroy, Kuroi Ryū!.”
SEALED ZANPAKUTO
» Zanpakutō Name: Akuma
» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Akuma is a tall and well-built man, with narrow red eyes and red hair that is tied back into a topknot. One of his most notable features is his goatee, which he is proud of. He has thin eyebrows and wears some eyeliner around his eyes. On his head, he wears a small Chinese headdress with a yellow gem in its center. He dons traditional clothes that are mainly red, white and black in color along with a black flowing cape. The maroon belt he wears has a golden ornament of a beast on it.
- Appearance:
» Inner World: It is a mansion surrounded by trees. The trees are oakwood and the animals are a different species than the normal ones you see every day. The deers have 4 sets of horns instead of one and the squirrels have four eyes instead of one. The Wolves have 2 tails and an extra set of teeth, but they don't bite (I think). The Foxes have 4 tails instead of one and also have an extra set of teeth and they don't bite (I think).
- ‘Picture’:
» Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Akuma is an Odachi with a black tsuba and a blue sheath. The guard is a 2-pointed star with tiny blue zircons on top.
Sealed Zanpakutô Powers
Hellfire Manipulation: It’s kind of like Fire Manipulation, but the flames are blue and they are hotter. Ukika can also use the fire for jet-propulsion purposes.
Hellfire Fireballs: Ukika is able to shoot fireballs. The Range is 10m. Ukika is able to use this in Shikai, Bankai, Hollowfication, and Resurrección
Hellfire Combat: Ukika is able to coat his limbs with Hellfire. Ukika is able to use this in Shikai, Bankai, Hollowfication, and Resurrección
Hellfire: Ukika is able to shoot flames from his mouth. Ukika is able to use this in Shikai, Bankai, Hollowfication, and Resurrección The Range is 20m.
Dragon’s Blade: Ukika is able to engulf his Zanpakutō with Hellfire increasing the Damage. Ukika is able to use this in Shikai, Bankai, Hollowfication, and Resurrección
SHIKAI
» Shikai Release Phrase: Obsure, Akuma!
» Shikai Release Actions: Ukika points it at the opponent and a column of blue fire erupts under Ukika.
» Shikai Appearance: Akuma becomes a steel broadsword with glowing details. The guard is a 4-Pointed Star instead of a 2-Pointed Star.
Shikai Abilities
Advanced Hellfire Manipulation: Ukika is able to use more Hellfire-Based moves than normal.
Enhanced Strength: Ukika is now able to put massive holes in walls or anything solid.
Hellfire Barrage: Ukika ignites his Zanpakutō with fire and then charges at the opponent, hitting them with a continuous barrage of strikes enhanced with Hellfire. Ukika is able to use this in Bankai, Hollowfication and Resurrección
Hellfire Rocket Strike: Ukika is able to create a stream of fire from the pommel of the Zanpakutō, propelling him forward and increasing the strength of his strikes. Ukika is able to use this in Bankai, Hollowfication and Resurrección
Hellfire Missile: Ukika creates a miniature sun on his Zanpakuto that can grow at will to a huge size, causing an immense explosion.
BANKAI
» Bankai Release Phrase: "Bankai!"
» Bankai Release Actions: It is the same as the Shikai Release, but the flames are darker.
» Bankai Appearance: Ukika stays the same, but the sword becomes a giant black blade with edges on the side. The guard is a black goat skull with blue glowing eyes.
Bankai Abilities
Extreme Hellfire Manipulation: Ukika is able to use hellfire to a greater extent.
Hellfire Bath: Ukika is able to engulf his entire body in flames to heat up the surrounding area. This is powerful enough to make water reach scalding temperatures Ukika is able to use this in Hollowfication and Resurrección The Range is AoE
Dragon’s Grip: Grabbing his enemy and supporting his arm with his other, Ukika blasts the target at point blank range. Ukika is able to use this in Hollowfication and Resurrección
Hellfire Horn: Ukika lights his Zanpakutō ablaze and strikes the target at a high speed. Ukika is able to use this in Hollowfication and Resurrección
INNER HOLLOW/MASK
» Inner Hollow Name: Kuroi Ryū
» Inner Hollow Description:
- Picture:
» Inner Hollow Powers: Demonic Hellfire Manipulation: Kuroi is able to use a darker version of Ukika's Hellfire.
» Hollow Mask Appearance:
- Picture:
Enhanced Speed: Ukika is able to travel at high speeds and outrun a car
Cero: Ukika is able to fire a beam of dark blue reiatsu. Ukika is able to use this in Resurrección
Enhanced Strength: Ukika is able to throw giant rocks and lift thing a normal person can't.
Enhanced Durability: Ukika can take several ceros at a time and he won't be damaged.
Enhanced Hellfire: Ukika produces a searing hot flame from his Zanpakutō before shooting it out in the direction they are facing. The unleashed flames engulf a large-scale area and, with their incredible heat, can not only scorch the earth beneath it but utterly vaporize it, leaving a U-shaped valley in its wake. Ukika is able to use this in Resurrección. The Range is 50m[/strike]
RESURRECCIÓN
[NOTE: This form is for 0-3 and up. Refer to the racial specs for more information]
» Resurrección Release Actions: Ukika activates his Bankai and throws it up into the air and before it lands he says the chant and a giant explosion occurs
» Resurrección Appearance:
- Picture:
Enhanced Cero: Ukika is able to fire a cero that is strong enough to destroy an entire building.
Enhanced Spiritual Power: Though already possessing immense spiritual power, in his Resurrección, his blue spiritual energy permeates the area. It is intense enough to create a profound effect on others and coalesce into blue shards which fall in the surrounding area when he releases.
Enhanced Speed: His speed is greatly enhanced, moving great distances in an instant.
Enhanced Durability: Ukika's Durability has vastly increased in strength.
Enhanced Cellular Regeneration: Ukika is able to regenerate 10x faster than any human being
Cero Azul: Ukika fires a giant cero from his sword and obliterates anything in its way.
Extreme Demonic Hellfire Manipulation: Ukika is able to use the peak of his Hellfire Manipulation.
Demon’s Sphere: Ukika releases a massive stream of Hellfire at his opponent from his Zanpakutō by launching his arm forward in a punch-like motion. Once the flames reach its target, they increase in size, creating a giant explosion. The Range is 40m
Demon’s Weapon: Ukika forms a scythe of Hellfire off of his weapon which he uses as a weapon for destructive results.
Demon’s Meteor: This is Ukika’s Ultimate Move. Ukika charges up a dark ball of Hellfire from his Zanpakutō and focuses the blast in the direction of their release point that fires akin to a meteor. The Range is 100m
PHANTOMTECH
» PhantomTech: Chip
Phantom Tech Abilities
Enhanced Strength: Ukika is able to lift large objects with ease.
Enhanced Speed: Ukika is able to travel at high speeds.
Enhanced Durability: Ukika’s durability is increased.
Phantom Tech Powers
Holographic Readings: Ukika is able to compute someones physical and mental statistics and send messages.
THE KING OF DEMONS
This form is only for 0-3 and up!
Appearance Image:
- Appearance:
Chant: "Thy power of the demon king, engulf me with demonic strength and power, make me become a force that gods can't even handle, I shall destroy the heavens!"
Activation Appearance: A ball of dark red energy covers him entirely. Few seconds later, he starts growing wings and all the other body parts. His skin darkens and is long hair turns into ashes. Then, he is released out of the ball.
THE DEMON KING'S PASSIVES
Flight: Ukika can fly with a trail of fire behind him.
Enhanced Strength: Ukika can lift humongous pieces of rock and throw it at a target.
Enhanced Speed: Ukika can outrun anything at this point.
Insane Durability: Ukika can take on a captain with enormus spiritual pressure. (ex, Kenpachi Zaraki).
Passive: Pure Fire Manipulation: Ukika can now access a type of fire he has never dreamed of. This is 10X stronger than Hellfire.
THE DEMON KING'S MOVES
Kagero: Ukika shoots a stream of pure fire from the palm of his hand
Hiken: Ukika turns his fist into flames and launches it as a column of fire at his target. This attack is so incredibly powerful that it is able to plow through several ships in one shot
Shinka: Shiranui: Ukika hurls long lances made out of pure fire. The lances have the combined effect of simultaneously burning an opponent while piercing them.
Entei: Ukika shoots a huge burst of pure fire from his hands, that completely destroys the target.
Dai Enkai: Entei After creating great spiraling flames centered on his location before amassing it at a focused point (i.e. the palm of his hand), Ukika then turns it into a gigantic fireball resembling the sun and hurls it at his opponent to try to obliterate them.
SKILL SHEET
- Spoiler:
- 6-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
5-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
4-Tier: Allowed 1 Adept, 3 Beginner
3-Tier: Allowed 3 Adept, 1 Beginner
2-Tier: Allowed 2 Advanced, 2 Adept
1-Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 2 Advanced, 1 Adept
0-5 Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 3 Advanced
NOTE: There can be exceptions you can discuss with staff if the character's themes and masteries etc, are better suited to a different configuration. Let us know when after we approve your character if something along those lines is something you want for your character. e.g If your character isn't particularly quick but the force in their strikes are massive, so you could take a hit to their speed and drop it a level in exchange for raising your strength
General Skills
- Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
- General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Shinigami Skills
- Hoho: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Kidō: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Zanjutsu: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Hakuda: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Vizard Skills
- Power Augmentation Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Cero: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Mask Protection:: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Hollow Control: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Hollow Skills
- Acid Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Garganta : Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Cero/Bala: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Regeneration: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
- Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
ROLEPLAY SAMPLE
» Role Play Sample: Ukika looks both ways and runs to the other side. He says to himself "I doubt they will catch me." He keeps running and behind him are a bunch of low ranks chasing him because he stole a bag of food. They corner him and pull out there swords. They say "Hah! We got you cornered! What are you gonna do now?"
They preceded by slashing, but Ukika wasn't there. The man says Ugh! Where did he go?!" The other man says "I don't know?" They hear grunting and fighting noises. All that man sees is bodies of low ranks on the floor. The man yells "I'm gonna kill you!" Ukika shrugs while the man rushes towards him. 3 seconds later. The man is crying on the floor begging for mercy.
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Re: Ukika Shuhiro [Approved, Vizard; 1-2] [Hazard Rating E]
Mon Jun 24, 2019 12:16 am
[mod]« Application Checklist »
« The Willsheet Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [O]
- History is of appropriate length [O]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
« The Willsheet Checklist »
- Willpower/Determination: N/A
- Mental Deduction: N/A
- Focus: N/A
- Tier: TBA
Affiliation/Rank: Does this make him neutral/independent or is he a part of the Gotei? I'm just confused is all because his app doesn't mention being aligned to the Gotei once but he has a necklace from the R&D division.
Appearance Image: If there's one supposed to be here it appears to be broken, if you send me the image I can code it for you if you'd like but otherwise you're free to remove it if you want to just go with what is provided.
Personality: Needs about 2-3 more sentences.
History: A suggestion to break it into numerous paragraphs to begin with as it makes it much easier to follow, however that brings me to my second point. The history is incredibly vague and difficult get an idea of him.
It leaves big holes which I personally say hold it back, a few things for example is that his resources imply he has somehow got contact with Gotei but doesn't mention it once - he has a title which would be nice to get an idea of how he got it. Your history is core for working out where they'd sit upon approval.
Natural and Racial Skills: I don't feel comfortable tossing him this level of feat, the main reason being that he has very little to support it. Going back to my last point history is very important to this and there is nothing to suggest he'd be a master swordsman or able to do such feats at this level.
Destructive Reiatsu: You mention something about sealing his destructive reiatsu in your resources, I'm going to need that to be actually noted and have an idea of what it entails.
Zanpakuto: Everything is fine, except I have no idea what Hellfire Manipulation entails and overall I just need more of an idea of what the zanpakuto does. Is it just fire manipulation? If so what's the range, what's it do?
Inner-Hollow Vizard: Fine, just beware that ceros follow their own scaling and him tanking an Elite or Master Cero user's cero is unlikely.
Bankai and Vizard Resurreccion: These are things that tend to be handed out after development such as Bankai, whereas a the resurreccion is very rare and only able to be supported by people with exceptionally large energy reserves (0-3 tier) and we tend to not hand out 0-tiers very often on approval. As he currently is he is unlikely to have them so they are not graded yet.
Phantomtech:
Enhanced Durability: Ukika is able to take on several Mid Rank Shinigami
Going to need to tone this down, durability doesn't measure one's capacity to fight opponents. It's tankiness and resistances so I recommend reworking its effect.
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Re: Ukika Shuhiro [Approved, Vizard; 1-2] [Hazard Rating E]
Tue Jun 25, 2019 9:02 am
[mod]Just leaving a note here that the following points haven't been addressed yet.
- Affiliation/Rank: Still needs clarification on his affiliation.
- Natural and Racial Skills: Still needs to be toned down.
- Destructive Reiatsu: Still needs to be noted on what it entails, would recommend a quirk attributed to his reiatsu rather than just larger reserves.
- Bankai and Vizard Resurreccion: He won't have these on approval, it's preferred you either remove them or strike them with
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Re: Ukika Shuhiro [Approved, Vizard; 1-2] [Hazard Rating E]
Fri Jul 05, 2019 1:19 am
[mod]
Comments/Notes: N/A
Hazard Rating: E
Tier: 5-2[/mod]
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Focus: Beginner
Hazard Rankings
- Power: E
- Influence: E
- Resources: E
Comments/Notes: N/A
Hazard Rating: E
Tier: 5-2[/mod]
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Re: Ukika Shuhiro [Approved, Vizard; 1-2] [Hazard Rating E]
Thu Oct 03, 2019 12:24 pm
[mod]Due to member inactivity, this character is being moved to the archives. If the member becomes active again in the future, they may be reinstated.[/mod]
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