Re: Ry

Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:26 am

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B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Ry
Gender: Male
Age: 260
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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:
Accepts authority:Ry accepts authority very well and has no problem with taking order’s. Even Order’s that he does not like he will still follow them if give to him by a higher up. Since in his family her was trained to always listen to those that are higher up unless it contradicts with what someone higher up then that person told u to do. But he was also taught to never argue with a person that is of a higher rank then him since it just show’s disrespect.

Loyal: Ry has a high aspect of Loyalty. Getting his loyalty does not come easy though. He never gives it to anyone that does not deserve it. But when u have earned it then u have got Ry side pretty much for ever. Unless u do something that Ry thinks’ is truly wrong. Then u may never have his loyalty ever again. This makes Ry a good person to have on your side. Since he is very loyal and a person who will not betray u or stab u in the back.

Accepts what's given: Ry always accepts what is given to him in life. He never complains about his life And always takes what happens with the best of his attitude. Since he learned at a young age u cant resent the world for what happens in your life. U just got to learn to dill with it and let it settle. Because fighting it will only make it worse for u and everyone around u. Making you fill bad in the end for what u have done. To those that u loved

Aspiring: Ry has many dream’s in life and is always getting new ones. He wants’ to become a great and all powerful human. And show people that he is worth something. And let them know that he can be something. And show that he can change the world and make it a better a place if he has the help and power to do it. This is one of Ry’s biggest dream’s in life. And he will stop at nothing to achieve it. Since he wants’ it so bad

Ambitious: Ry is always trying to try something new since he show’s no fear and will do anything asked. This makes Ry open to all types of things that most people that most people would say no to or stuff that most people would be scared of. This makes Ry a perfect person for experiment’s. Since he pretty much never say’s no. Even If there is a chance he could lose his life. Cause he believes that what does not kill u can only make u stronger in the end. And that is a big thing in Ry’s life

Motivated: Ry is motivated at everything that he does. Giving everything he does his best. Since he thinks’ it is not worth it if u don’t give it your all. So whenever he does something he is fully dedicated to give it his all. And try his best till the end of it. Since he now’s the spot above the best is right above it and can be reached with dedication and if u do not dedicate and give something your all then what is the point of doing it.

Caring: Ry is very caring. Caring about the people that can’t defend them selves’ and always willing to help those in need that deserve his help. Since he is always willing to help a person. Since every person will need help every now and then. So Ry is a prime target for people to ask when they need help cause they know he will say yes to it cause it is just his way. Cause at one point he needed help and he will need it again someday.

Cooperative: Ry is very cooperative and easy to get along with. Since he does not care what other people truly think about him. As long as they think he is doing his job good and that he is helping and a good asset to the team then he could care less of what they truly think about him. Cause inside he knows what he truly is. This makes him a person who is easy to get along with. Plus he always takes what people say into consideration. And gives it a chance before he neglect’s it.

Self-disciplined: Ry has been trained in the ways of discipline very well. He knows to respect his elder’s and those that are higher up then him. But he has also trained himself by using strict discipline on himself. This makes Ry a person that can follow order’s and control himself in the heat of battle when things get intense. Allowing him to know when to give his opponent mercy and not kill them when some people would. This makes Ry a good person to train with.

Reliable: Ry is a very reliable person. Since he always follows orders no matter how much he does not want to sometimes. And since he gives everything his all he would give everything his all it makes him a person who can get the job done at all cost even if it meant giving his life to do so. So this make Ry a person to call when a job needs to be done cause he will not stop till it is done or rather die before he fail’s.

Hard-working: Ry is very hard working. He works hard at everything that he does. Always giving everything his all. This Is also a reason why Ry would rather work for everything then have it just handed to him. Cause Ry knows that he can truly not become strong and powerful unless he work’s for it and gives it his all. This make’s Ry perfect for any job. Cause even if he does not like the job he will work hard and give it to his all.

Courageous: Ry is very brave and will try anything. Ry is the person who would rush into battle with a enemy that is way stronger than him. Because without trying u never know if you will succeed. So no matter how stronger the opponent is Ry will give them a shot in battle if given the chance. Sometimes this can be helpful to Ry. But sometimes it can also be his downfall. Cause it causes him to get into thing’s that he should not be into.

Strategist: Even though Ry does not use strategies much. He is very capable of making them and very good at it. Bu he would rather rush straight into battle then take the time to think of a strategy. But when the situation’s call for a strategy. Ry is able to think of if he so chooses. Making him very versatile in battle. Since people expect to rush in head first most of the time instead of trying to think things out.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: Ry born in a family that was known for their great sword skill's most of his family went off to join the soul society. Being one of the youngest he had to weight to go to the soul academy. He was so disappointed that he ran away from his house and just ran with a sword on his back but as he was running something felt his spirit pressure and chased him down it was a very powerful hollow not knowing how to fight a hollow he was hurt very badly

. But luckily a friend of his brother a soul reaper who just finished the academy came to his rescue saving him. He then told him that he had a very powerful spirit pressure and that he should enter the academy as soon as he could. So Ry waited another 2 years until he was 10 then he entered the academy. after he finished he went home but his parents could not be found So him and his brother's and sister's in the soul society got worried and started looked every for them. Searching every for them. Ry even missed all of his day's at the Academy to look for his parent's

But they were not found until 5 years later. But they were dead someone had killed them by slit their throat's. So Elendril vowed to find that person and kill them as they did to his parents. And the only way he could do that was by getting stronger. So he Joined the Academy again. So he could revenge his parent's. This was the start of his second time in the Academy. And this helped Ry go threw the academy a little faster then most of the rest of the student's in the Academy. He then would come to join the 8th squad for a while. But in do time he would come to leave the Gotei 13 and join a new group made by a unknown person at the time. And Ry would come to dedicate his life to this person in helping him complete his goal.

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Kiyoshi Kuga
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Inner World:

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Sealed Zanpakutô :

PhatomTech:Yes

Release: Slither

Shikai Description:

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Shikai Abilities:

Poison: Poison on he blade will only take effect when a person is cut. The poison will start to go into the victim's blood. And so what ever body part the blade cut's is now unable to be used. The time it can not be used depend's on the tier of the character's useing this system if your tier is one below me then the poison work for 1 post. EX: Me: 1 tier, You: 2 tier poison will only work on you for 1 post. Though if your Tier is a higher tier then Ry's the poison will not effect the person. This is because there power is able to completely stop the poison.

Only one body part can be affected by the poison at a time. And if this body part is the chest your heart will not stop beating but you will have a hard time breathing for the time the poison is in your blood system. The Ry's sword is also able to become a snake and can expand. When the sword is transformed into a snake it becomes very flexible and is able to bend and move around. The sword is also able to expand itself at about 3 Meters a second. This is something that can be done while the sword is ether in it's regular mode or in it's snakes mode

Slithering Snake Mode: When this is activated Ry is able to turn the lower half of his body into a snake's tail, which greatly increases his speed and agility. This can only be used for 5 post though.After the 5 post are used up Ry will then have to go under a 3 post cool down before this can be used again.

Snake Stab: By stabbing the ground with the sword a crack will appear and Snake's will start to crawl out of it. Rywill be able to see and feel everything the snake's does. Ry is also able to control these snake's. This can only be used once per a post and only 10 snake's can come out a post. These snakes are basic snakes that can range from 2 to 6 feet. And they truly hold no combat purpose can be used for other things.

Snake Tongue : Ry is able to turn his tounge into a snake. While like this Ry's tongue is able to expand up to 15 Meter's at a lightning speed of about 3 meters a second. The snake is very special having a hidden sword in it's mouth. The sword resembles Ry's shikai's appearance. Though unlike Ry's the sword holds no poison. If the snake is cut while like this Ry's tongue will revert back to it's normal stage ,and Ry will not be able to turn his Tongue into a snake for the next 3 post.

Snake Arm: Ry is instantly able to turn his arm's into snake's. And use them like a whip. He can also have the snakes Bite his opponent or target sending off his Poison to what every body part that was bit. These snakes have sword's soaked in poison hidden in there mouth. Theses sword's are just blade's but resemble that of Ry's Zanpakuto Shikai. These snake's can movie at a very fast speed and strike fast. They will be able to move at about 5 Meter's a second If the snake is cut it will fall off and then Ry's arm will come back.

Side Note: All wounds caused by Snake sword's ( the snake's that have sword's in there mouth ) or there bite cannot heal normally: cell activity in the impacted areas slows down, so the wounds remain open far longer than they should. This would increase the chances of the victims dying from blood loss. Other then that they have no real poison

Levitation: Ry's Zanpakuto is able to levitate. And while it is levitating Ry is able to control with the movement's of his finger's. This ability comes very in handy if the sword is away from Ry since he does not have to be toughing the sword to activate it. Though while this ability is activated The sword will glow a light blue color.

Snake Coil: Ry will have two big snakes which crawl out from his sleeves, and coil around the enemy capturing them. This is a great technique for capturing someone alive, or for inflicting damage by constriction, and if the situation calls for it, the snakes can bite the victim with their poison fangs. Though the snakes can be cut and killed. The down fall of these snakes is that they truly do not move at a very fast speed making them easy to get killed.

Formation of Ten Thousand Snakes: With this technique, Ry can release a torrent of countless snakes from his mouth, forming a wall of snakes. The snakes will then rise and rush towards his target. While crawling together the snakes form a defensive wall blocking almost any attack around Ry's Tier level. The snakes can also open their mouths to extend Zanpakuto like blades. The only downfall of this attack is that the wall takes a good amount of time to be formed.

Snake Transformation: Ry's Zanpakuto is able to transform into a giant purple Snake (look at the spirit) while in his Zanpakuto is in this form it loses most of it abilities. But it become a very hard opponent since it very fast and strong. Plus it's giant Fang's. While in this form Ry is able to control the snake like a puppet with hand movement's or with his thought's . If Ry where to run out of power or be knocked out the snake would return to Ry's sealed sword state.

Bankai Description: The sword is the same

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The sword has all of the same ability's but now is apart of Ry's body.The user has the able to manipulate his bones to different parts of their body thus making them bigger, smaller, and even with no bones at all. Because the user is like a snake he is able to somewhat transform into A large snake. His body become boneless thus can stretch up to long ranges and move faster than normal in this form. In this snake form he look exactly like a snake thus he is able to have his body like a snake.

Snake Venom: His blood is different. Meaning his blood has a very large portion of poison on it (Cobra Poison). Just like a snakes he is able to pass the poison in his body throughout his teeth. Because of that he is immune to his own poison since it is stored in his body. A simple bite from him will not be Fatal. And the poison work's the same as before but now uses a diffrent system EX: me 1 tier you 2 tier poison work's for 2 post. You 0 tier me 1 tier poison does not work. If you 3 tier and i 1 tier poison last for 4 post. The time limit is just pretty much doubled.

Snake Manipulation: Because he is so close to snakes in every way. He is able to manipulate snakes. More often he has them connected to his bodies and use them as weapons. The reason he has some snakes around his body is because when the snake's are little their blood cells are mixed with that of the user cells. Since then he has snake characteristics as well as some snakes grown in his body He use's these snakes to attack by taking them out from his sleeve etc.

Snake Taste Technique: he is able to use his tongue to gather particles from the air to locate enemies that are around the area via heat. He is able to locate an enemy that is about 20 feet from himself. This is because of his close relation to snake's and the way snakes use there tongue to find objects that are near them. This can be a very useful ability to Ry when people are hiding from him. Since he will be able to find them threw there heat. Though he will not be able to actually tell who the person is. He will just know that a person is there.

Posionic Spray Technique: The user will expel a spray of poison at the target from his mouth. If it hits, the target will be poisoned. The poison will continuously harm the target's body until it is removed the user will be unable to use there flash step or anything like it. But the amount of poison stay's in the body depend's on this system
EX: me 1 tier you 2 tier poison work's for 2 post. You 0 tier me 1 tier poison does not work. If you 3 tier and i 1 tier poison last for 4 post.

Body Shedding: Used after sustaining massive injury, or simply to escape from a seemingly inescapable attack, this technique allows the user to regurgitate a new body from their mouth, new clothes, complete with any lost limb being regenerated and all wounds healed, much like a snake sheds its skin. This can only be used once for a Topic

Gathering of the Snakes: If Ry is somehow sliced in half by the opponent, snakes come from the halves of his body and bring him back together by connecting the sides of his body and retching him. This is because the fact that the snakes are a part of Ry's body and are connected to him they try and keep his body connected so that he and them may live. This may only be used once per a Thread.

Side Note's: This Poison work's more like a virus then a poison. But it can not be transfered to other's by you having it. Only the user is able to pass the virus out with his Zanpakuto. But they also have the cure to the Poison. So Elendril can give out the cure at any time. Just the same way he gives it out. But his blood also has the Cure.

( credit's of the Zanpakuto system go to Black★Matagi )
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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills

Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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