Anastasius [APPROVED 1-1++/0-5+] [HAZARD RATING: A]

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• And Comments/Fixes •[/center]

»Quema de estaca-Stake Burning: please quantify the degree of damage the burning does to him, also give a upper duration of use before critical damage occurs. Utilization until being rendered unconscious after an indeterminate amount of time is not an adequate drawback for such a potent technique.

Personality: I noticed you deleted a large portion of his personality. I’m going to give you time to rework this since as it is right now I will be forced to drop your will skills accordingly.

• Willpower/Determination: NA
  
• Mental Deduction: N/A
  
• Focus: N/A
  

• Comments/Notes: N/A
  
  
• Tier: 1-3+ [1-1 in ressureccion] (pending fixes)

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

N/A

• Willpower/Determination: Elite
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Focus: Advanced
  

• Comments/Notes: N/A
  
  
• Tier: 1-1++ [0-5+ in ressureccion]