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Mirja Eeola
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Mon Jan 22, 2018 11:16 am
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» Item Name: Raging Heart Excelion
» Item Type: Hannah Chiza

» Used For: Supplementary

» Item Description: Because nothing is ever perfect, even when made by magical wish power.

Hannah has had the Magisters aid her with tinkering on her staff, culminating in a new, much more potent weapon for Kido Enhancement. However, it requires power from an internal battery system, so it is segmented into Restraint Levels, to ensure it doesn't burn out the battery with a single use. It rests in Restraint Level 3, where it has slightly stronger Kido enhancement capabilities to the old Raging Heart. From there, it can Release Restraint to level 2, or level 1, and finally to level 0.

Level 2: The staff blossoms Reiatsu wings from the head, and the power of any Kido is increased considerably. It also increases the projectile speed of any kido fired from it, shooting faster and hitting harder, allowing for a better hit chance than normal. The battery can sustain this form for four posts, before recharging for five posts.

Level 1: The crook of the staff bends to form a spearhead, and the reiatsu wings increase in size and prominence. On top of the potency increase and speed, it also forms the kido into a sharp point, allowing it to blast through physical objects and spiritual barriers easier than a normal kido. An example of this power is allowing Kido of #78 and upwards to penetrate a Danku, rather than the usual #89. The battery can sustain this form for three posts, before recharging for five posts.

Level 0: A sub-form, Level 0 is not an actual level, but rather an enhancement. It costs three posts of battery power, and makes her Kido a lot stronger for a single shot.


» Obtained From: K-World Magisters

» Yen Price: (Some imput required. Hannah heads the group making this equipment, so would it cost her anything to make?)

» Notes: [Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add]


Last edited by Mirja Eeola on Fri Jan 26, 2018 2:06 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Fri Jan 26, 2018 10:42 am
[adm]
On top of this, the Staff can load Kido Cartridges to enhance the power of any Kido used even further than usual, ensuring that no power is lost in the firing. Level 0 has no cartridge container, and so cannot load Kido Cartridges.

Remove this line, and add the following drawbacks:

- Add a note saying that the second shot of level 0 will be at half power
- Drop level 2's time limit to be four posts instead of five
- Give more specifics on what kind of defenses level 1's "Sharp Point" can pierce through

Once these are changed, this should be good to go.[/adm]
Mirja Eeola
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Fri Jan 26, 2018 11:03 am
Removed Kido cartridges, reduced Level 2 run-time, added a [hopefully] clear indication of it's penetration powers.

Didn't like the idea of losing the staff completely for a delayed, half-power Kido, so changed how Level 0 works.
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Fri Jan 26, 2018 11:59 am
[adm]
"...but blowing so much power on a single shot has it's own drawbacks..."

You need to go into the details of these drawbacks unless what was mentioned before was what those drawbacks are meant to be.[/adm]
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Fri Jan 26, 2018 2:13 pm
[adm]Approved.[/adm]
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