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Lillian
Lillian
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Danava Demon Profile
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I. Basic Information


» Name: Lilium
» Titles: Danava of Flesh
» Age: Appears 18-20 yrs old; Actually about 2-3 months
» Gender: Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Yaksha/Tartarus
» True Appearance Picture: Lilium [Approved; 3-2] Hibiki.%28Kantai.Collection%29.240.1850699

I. Personality


» Personality:

Insecurity is the root of this young Danava's being.

No matter how much she manages to change physically, deep inside her hides a scared, crying child who has no clue of how to function in the world, or why she functions. She was thrust into existence on a whim, tossed from the luxury of nonthought, suffering a torrent of memories, thoughts, emotions, and being dumped off in a strange place with strange people.

THANKS NIDHANA

Since coming into being, she managed to build up an exterior personality as much of humanity has; a stubborn ass prideful brat that has no wishes to be used or abused. She has a strong sense of dignity, and doesn't wish for it to be crumbled at all. Though her behavior can be inconsistent at times, she still tries to maintain a good self-image. She's not flamboyant or wishing to have every eye on her, rather not wanting to be seen as a weak and helpless little girl who needs a mommy or daddy, or even big brother to hold her hand as she rubs her salted, teary eyes.

Because of her strong dislike towards being seen as weak, she tends to keep people at arm's length, and any sort of leaking of "private" info makes her severely regret it afterwards. She's easily embarrassed which is visibly shown with a hot, red face, a scrunched up nose, and puffed cheeks, followed by her quickly evacuating the conversation.

She may act very harsh and stubborn, with her defiance and refusal to follow or trust commands unless she is sure it will not hurt her or others, she truthfully has a general concern for lifeforms. She'd never want to hurt another creature unless put in a situation to be forced to, but she's no humanist or anything, most times she doesn't even make her regard for other's safety vocally obvious.

» Likes: Intimate Contact

» Dislikes: Morally disgraceful actions (At least what she deems disgraceful)

I. History


» History:

Far before birth, the Danava was plenty aware of the process of leaving the safety of the womb, into the cold and unforgiving world. Concept forming, the being saw many things, through many, many eyes. From the sympathies of a mother tending to her hurt child after play, to the horrors of deadly bombs raining from the sky, things formed in her mind.

Peace. War. Friendship. Betrayal. Love. Hate. Sin. Virtue. Many scenarios, many years, many lives lived and lost but never known, but a concept of their lives, their experiences, their choices, formed the Danava of Flesh...

________

...Bells...

Singing..? Why is there singing?

So cold... Bothering me... Can't I sleep a little longer?


Soon the Danava's eyes cracked open, light pooling into her vision as shapes formed, colors were born, and sounds came into coherency. The girl's face was pressed against something rather rough, kind of itchy as well, causing her to grunt and slowly sit up, her bare feet making contact with the floor before recoiling from how horribly cold it felt. People stood before her, having begun to leave their seats, chatter flooding the small white space.

A church... This is a church...

The girl drowsily rubbed her eyes, releasing a rather heavy yawn as she stretched her arms. Before she knew it, the church was almost completely empty of participants, the vacancy evident by the sheer lack of sound resonating in the rows of seats aside from some elderly folk giving some praises.

Her attention was brought over to one of the windows, having been adorned with many white flowers, looking much like aesthetic-heavy little bells. Her sleepy self was suddenly gravitated over to the display, little footsteps gently colliding with the marble floor as she reached towards what did not come to her mind, yet gave her a sense of calm.

But unfortunately, she was a few inches too short. She soon was pressed against the wall, straining to reach for the flora hanging serenely above her, just barely getting a grip on the pot...

"Ah! No! Non!" She felt her little body being grabbed as the decorative piece sailed towards the floor, a sturdy set of hands being produced to prevent the seemingly inevitable mess. The girl was yanked away from the disaster to be, one of the young men dressed quite fancifully in white having a tight grip on the pot. A sigh of relief puffed behind her head, her turning to see another with hands tight around her body, holding her securely.

"Kid, where are your parents?!" The pot catcher snapped at her, putting the flowers back where they had previously perched. The young Danava struggled against the man who kept her fast to his chest, still wishing to partake in the flowers.

"She seems a bit young to be able to answer that, don't you think?" The man holding her at bay rose a brow at her, "Though she seems quite interested in the Lilium display."

Lilium... The word was a lovely tune in her thoughts and on her ears as the two men bickered back and forth of what to do with her, of course the girl blotting it out to stare at the white petals instead.

"... Well at least tell me your name, sweetheart."

Faced with the question, the girl answered rather appropriately, despite being born mere minutes ago, "Lilium, is my name."

________

The hum of the vehicle droned as the girl sat in the back seat, staring beyond the windshield as the man quietly drove the miracle of mankind. Rain fell onto the glass, blurring the view into scrambled lights and colors, unable to be deciphered by the young one's eyes. Night had fallen, the girl rather puzzled with her situation.

She remembered the other man told the young man who caught her to take her to the station and file a 'found child' report, but instead he seemed to have other things in mind. Black shapes floated in her vision, hardly visible as the bumped around in the small space. He told her they were going somewhere she would love, and would be taken care of...

Her stomach felt like acid was gnawing at it's walls, clawing and biting through her body. Her face paled from the discomfort, the feeling to vomit boiling. Her face pressed against the glass as she released a gentle moan.

"You okay? Not getting carsick, are you dear?"

"N..."

She began to cough, to her surprise a black tarry liquid sprayed from her lips, splattering on the seat before her.

"Alright... We're here." The car soon pulled up to a rather gloomy looking building, "We're just going to start right here, okay?" He turned and looked at her, the sickeningly sweet smell of lust being the last thing remembered before her vision was coated in black.

Fear was what struck her, fear stabbed her very existence, threatening to tear it to bloody pieces, as soon as it began.

I'm not a child... I'm not a child... I'm not a child..!

Her thoughts screamed in the empty canvas of her mind, her body squeezed together in security.

"You may not be a child, but you certainly are a young one." A pair of gentle hands touched her scalp, instantly calming the panicking girl, "To be foolish enough to let it spill over like that... I envy that depth of ignorance, but you aren't allowed it."

Huh...?

"You're free to ignorance; Experience is life's best teacher, after all." The voice gently chided, though there was a coldness behind the ginger tone, "I wonder how you will do this time..."

_____

Bonk

Bonk

Bonk


The irritating sensation of a small object repetitively colliding with one's face isn't the best thing to wake up to. Her eyes slid open, the action far harder to complete than previously. A little black blob looking around aimlessly continued to bump in her face, her having been left fast asleep on... Well. She didn't know til she had fallen flat on her butt; a statue of some man on his steed she honestly could give less than a shit about.

Even the black creatures floating aimlessly didn't phase the silver haired Danava, keeping to herself and being rather snappy of any attempts at aiding her.

"I'm not a kid!" She'd be rather snippy about it, glaring holes in others with her dulled eyes, but to all she appeared to be a lost child with no manners.

Being around so many people is so annoying... Why do they have to be here?


I. Natural Abilities


» Natural Abilities:

Unique Akuma Kyodo:
Lilium has a bizarrely distinct Akuma Kyodo; Not only does it provide general defense, it actually protects her from a demon’s greatest weakness - Heavenly items or energy. She has a natural, neutral resistance to holy energy. But then how do these attacks affect her? If it’s solely made from holy energy, specifically designed to harm demons, then it wouldn’t affect her. If it was a physical item simply imbued with the energy, like say a knife, would only affect her how that object would mundanely affect a person. Bottom line, straight holy energy cannot hurt her and will only affect her like it affects any species not harmed by it, and any objects bearing it would just hurt her as the object, not as the object including the energy.

Shadow Movement:
Through her short existence, Lilium has managed to grasp a reasonable amount of control over this demonic ability. It’s much like the generic movement; she’s able to move more quickly to get to somewhere faster and such. Mostly self explanatory, but she has managed to develop her own twist of it on top of it. She’s able to maintain the speed for 2 posts, and has to cool down for 4 in order to use it again.

-Shadow Fog Movement:
A new twist on a normal demon ability - With benefits of course! Instead of simply having a short burst of speed, Lilium’s body actually turns into a white puff of smoke, looking similar to that of a stereotypical ghost. This form allows her to easily pass through objects and even makes her temporarily unable to be hit by physical attacks. Another addition granted by this furthering of Shadow Movement, is that she can actually transport another person by enveloping them with this form as she switches over. However, this is a relatively new ability and she isn’t very polished with using her abilities, so she’s extremely limited with how long she can maintain and then use this form again, being limited to only a post of holding it and a 5 post cooldown (Much like the base level for Shadow Movement).

Flesh-related Body Manipulation:
Body Manipulation is a common trait in demons, though often times, very diligent training is needed to get the most out of it, such as regeneration and limb regrowth. However, Lilium is naturally specialized in the functions of flesh, in this sense being literal flesh. She has very tight familiarity with her own body, to the point of a scenario of mind over matter. Her body manipulation is less using Za Koa or any other sort of energy to manipulate her own body, and more pushing the capabilities of her own body, controlling it with a mere thought. She isn’t at the level of restoring entire limbs or her own head, but she has noticeable mastery over what happens in her own materialization. She can do things like shift the locations and connections of organs, disconnect or reconnect parts like blood vessels, nerves, arteries, etc., or even focus blood flow into a specific part of her body. Hell, she could even pull her belly open and show the innards if she wishes to without any horrific consequences.

As far as outside matter, like poisons or bacteria, she can know the location of it and quickly reject it from her body before it can do any serious damage, or in extreme cases can sort of “pinch off” the wad of flesh containing the contaminant so healing will be much easier.


I. Origin Powers


» Origin Name: The Rebellious Flesh

» Origin Power: Control over human aspects, being emotional, spiritual, and physical.

» Origin Abilities:

Flesh Manipulation:
Tying into her more literal control of flesh, Lilium is able to manipulate the physical form of others. However, this process requires her to actually maintain physical contact with the manipulated for at least a single post. When contact is maintained long enough with her intent on manipulation being present, whatever body part maintaining contact actually hooks onto the other person’s flesh, quite tightly in order to prevent interruption since it requires her spreading her own energy into the other being’s body to perform this. The process isn’t necessarily the painful part, those having this done on them likely not feeling anything happening, though depending on what she actually does, it could induce soreness in whatever area was messed around with.

It can do things like quickly closing up wounds, surgical procedures without needing to open the person up or have them feel pain during it, or seamlessly put something in or take something out. The forced connection ceases whenever she wills it, loses focus, or loses too much energy during her performance.

Sinful Embodiment; Partial

Being thrust onto the path of grabbing control by the horns by her Eternal Partner, Lilium has begun letting loose of her unnecessary fears, in turn releasing the gates to bring sin in with far less issue. Though this form is largely incomplete, shown by the second set of wings being only muscle and bones, she is able to form a glorious pair of black and white wings that appear to shimmer in whatever light one would look upon them, her eyes fully resembling her partner's own. The sin she absorbs no longer gushes out of her, though there is pain and mind yellings in her head, it is far more bearable as she has begun accepting it and letting it roll it's course.

Depending on what sin she had absorbed, her behavior can drastically change, for example she would get intensely flirty and perverted until she can manage to absorb enough to settle the disgusting amount of sin, or if she or the person/people attracting so much leave. She wouldn't do anything that she personally would object to, only have a more extreme end of a trait be presented. She also does not gain any particular perks from this form, aside from her wings which flight has not been practiced upon.

Along with decreasing the amount by consumption, she can also attract far more intentionally, which, if the person was already sensitive to their own personal darkness, would be swallowed whole and experience the extremes of indulgence until they pass out. A more effective method would, by how she excreted sin in the prior manifestation, would be for her to either allow it to gush from her mouth and deliver it through a kiss, or make it into a significantly larger haze (capable of covering a 20 ft diameter spread thin) and having those around her breathe it.

Top Notch Body

Being the Danava of Flesh, it would be rather lackluster if Lilium didn’t have anything to show for it. Despite appearing rather petite and weak, Lilium’s body is actually rather strong, though this isn’t apparent unless she’s actively using her muscles, which would appear rather tough and developed when actually having their limits being pushed. Her natural, physical self far surpasses even the best and healthiest of human athletes. She has a very high amount of stamina paired up with a noticeable (but not quite outrageous) ability in speed, allowing her to run far but at a speed only slightly above well trained and maintained humans. Her strength would be the most shocking for someone her size, being capable of lifting a few thousand pounds (though not exceeding 6k) but with a large amount of struggle to maintain it. She has generally good senses (as far as smell, taste, hearing, etc.) tipping slightly on the supernatural scale, but nothing alarming.

Sinful Rot

A minor ability of Lilium’s; She can apply sin to openings and exposures of the body by having some recently taken in energy form in her palm as a black, gooey liquid. If this manages to make contact with wounds or large orifices connected to sensitive areas (Mouth, Eyes, Nostrils, etc.), the sin will actually enter the body and slowly spread, much like an infection. Though despite how terrifying it appears, it actually cannot directly kill anyone (As in, it cannot be the main cause of someone’s death. If someone, for example, had a gaping gash and they were losing a lot of blood and then had the sin placed in their body, it would only aid in putting the victim into shock and killing them faster from the blood loss if without any aids nearby). The symptoms of having the sin in circulation of one’s body for too long (about 3 posts if the source is not purged or removed) greatly vary, from fever to delirium and plenty of other symptoms that are slightly worse than that of the flu. It’s less of a horrifying experience and more of a massively uncomfortable situation if otherwise healthy. The absolute most the rot would hold would be a few hours in the case of people with no sort of restoration or demonic energy purging abilities whatsoever.

Sin Viewing

Lilium can visually witness sin. As of the moment, it is constantly active and thus expends her energy at a constant rate, inducing tiredness. With this ability, she can see the amount of sin one has, normally forming as a sort of fungus-like darkness that clings onto people (normally around the shoulders or back) or floating around as strange little black creatures, hardly bigger than one’s palm. Whenever someone gives into their desires, or is close to snapping, the sin appears to build up, almost covering their entire body, until the desire is acted upon, making the person appear as a humanoid, horrific beast instead of a normal person (Although outside of her vision they are completely normal; this is just a physical representation of how the sin has twisted their mind). Sometimes more energy is randomly expended for her to see even deeper, to witness the nature of the person’s sin. They of course are linked to the 7 deadly sins, though often times are in a benign state; they are just the kind of sin the individual most often gravitates to and strongly exhibits in comparison to the others.
Wrath is Yellow
Lust is Blue
Greed is Orange
Gluttony is Red
Envy is Green
Pride is Purple
Sloth is Grey

Floating Sin Appearance -


Sin Materialization

As previously mentioned, Lilium is able to physically manifest sin around her. Considering it exists anywhere a person or thing that can commit sin, it isn’t too difficult of a task to gather enough to form into a physical presence. What’s truly the challenging part is having enough energy to utilize it. Lilium has to use energy to materialize sin, and considering she expends so much to begin with on a prior ability, she can only form enough to make either of the following abilities:

- Creatures of Sin:
Lilium is capable of balling sin together into a semi-sentient lifeform capable of being witnessed by the naked eye. It looks different than it’s floating counterpart, and really all it can do is just… Hop around and take up space, pretty much. It doesn’t have much rhyme or reason to function, so it just behaves in a benign fashion.

Appearance -
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- Sin Weaponization:
A less taxing solidification of sin; Lilium can create weapons by molding sin together into a more exact shape. However, these weapons are extremely crude, only having about the strength of bronze, no matter what is formed. Depending on the weapon, using it too much or for too daunting of a task can cause the sin to destabilize and shatter, rendering the weapon useless and nonexistant. She can always make more, but of course would further expend energy towards this.


I. Eternal Partner/Conceptual World


» Conceptual World:

Well, Lilium is to be a physical representation of human nature illustrated by philosophy and religious themes, yes? It wouldn’t be unnatural that her world is the very place depicted in humanity’s birth; The Garden of Eden. Though, of course it’s vastly different than (hardly) described in scriptures and tongue, but possesses similar themes. It has at least two of each animal, of what used to be and what currently is, male and female, all living in harmony without the need for hunting since death is not an inevitability. At least one of each ever existing plant also exists in this space, providing sizable biomes of many kinds, including a deep but rather small sea to surround the garden. Though despite appearing beautiful on it’s surface, the absolute ideal world, all that glitters is not gold. With a closer look and feel of the world, it’s eerily… Perfect. There are no deformities, no imperfections… It’s about as even, symmetrical, and transfixed beyond how one could possibly imagine. Even with this perfection… There’s a hollowness to this world. The birds don’t sing, the wolves don’t howl… Everything is rather orderly during the sun’s rays. But come night, and the place quickly changes. The flora turns colors of cruel, and the fauna become chilling beasts, appearing like a skeletal, rotten husk of their daytime selves. The water itself becomes a terrifying sight, becoming similar to blood in appearance and consistency. Two halves within one world, though it’s all routine, balanced even. The dark never conflicts with the light, existing in a mesmerising harmony.

» Rilīja Attributes: (What is Rilija? Rilīja takes assocations that your character's Conceptual World has, and releases them to the outside world. An example of this would be if someone who had the concept of "Water" as their Origin Power and summoned immense tidal waves onto the the field with. Another would be if someone had a "Rock" based origin could summon things like massive boulders or massive pieces of Earth at their opponent. These are optional and you can remove them if you cannot think of anything.)

» Eternal Partner Name: Lucine Morgenstern

» Eternal Partner Appearance:

His appearance takes on a rather young looking child possessing the traits of a Seraphim, though of course are falsified traits to bring about a more gentle appearance. However, his eyes are a chilling black, the only thing giving any indication of where he looks are small but thick amber irises that make out his pupils.

» Eternal Partner Personality:

Freezing Cold:
Lucine is a completely different person to that of Lilium. He is colder than the coldest tundra in behavior. His mannerisms are stiff and lifeless, as if it were a puppet being present instead of a boy. His eyes are always wide open, ready to stab holes into whoever meets his gaze. Everything presented of him brings unsettlement and discomfort; he appears to be the complete antithesis of normal social body language. His verbage is always grotesque and morbid, picking at the darkest aspects of things in a melancholic tone. He’s rather stuck in a position of disappointment, one would call it, which is one of many nails in his behavior..

Emotionless Poise:
Despite bearing the appearance of a child, Lucine’s emotions are actually very muted in nature. He still feels things, but they’re more in grayscale tones than colorful palettes. He normally doesn’t behave or react in a very strong or spontaneous way, often being a silent spectator and being unwilling to intervene in things. Though, a sort of deep sadness is hidden behind his walls...

Deep Thought:
Lucine is notorious for spacing out. He often gets so into studying a situation, or just thinking about things, that he appears to trail off into whoknowsland, to the point of a disconnect from the situation. He’s one to carefully think about situations, sometimes to the point he diverts all mental resources towards gaining a grasp of control over it, if warranted. He is nowhere near a rusher, and completely lacks impulse.

Judgement:
Lucine is one who often judges people while keeping a realm of fairness intact. He often puts pins on traits he were to notice, and would bring up any kind of traits, whether positive or negative, into situations where they are needed to be spoken of. He is even more blunt and “mean” than Lilium, often not caring for others opinion of himself; whatever needs to be said must be said, regardless of other’s feelings.

» Eternal Partner Powers:

??? (Presumably similar to Lilium’s powerset)

I. Atma Vatou


» Atma Vatou Name: (What is the name of your Atma Vatou?)

» Atma Vatou Appearance: (What does your Atma Vatou look like?)

» Atma Vatou Abilities: (What does your Atma Vatou do? For instance, if one had a Origin Power that was associated with war? Then they would have a series of Atma Vatou that could generate things such as grenades, tanks, missiles and weapons related to war.)

Note: To prevent people from being overloaded who make Multi-Origin Danava, we allow them to qualify for certain forms if they a Atma Vatou for each Origin Power.

I. Diverse Paths


» Note: THIS PART OF THE DANAVA REQUIRES YOU LOOK AT THEIR RELEASE FORMS IN THEIR RACIAL THREAD! Therefore, if you have a Danava that has a Saca Atmā (Constant Release)? Then simply remove all of the below and state their Saca Atma or leave a note. Also, remove this note upon completion of the app.

» Aliṅgana State Appearance: (What does your character look like when in their Alingana State? To help, they take on characteristics of whatever background their release form is based on. Thus, if you were of a Rock Origin? Then you'd probably have some sort of appearance that has your character covered in some sort of armor comprised of Earth/Rock. Ice user? Then you could probably be covered in a cold aura and have ice covering your body. You should get the picture. You may also use images.)

» Aliṅgana State Powers: (What sort of powers does your Danava Demon possess while in this form? The primary objective of this release form is to ultimately come to terms with whatever your origin, past, concept or being is. When this transpires, all of the users powers will become easier to use and then become enhanced further beyond that. Thus, if you were a fire user? You could then begin to take your fire usage to the next level by having more fire related abilities, enhancing your current techniques and even having new power altogether; but on the condition that they are related to your base. So, for the fire user, it might be possible for him to control Lava or Solar Energy while in an Alingana State; but it wouldn't be possible for him to control all the elements or something like that. )

» Aliṅgana State Abilities: (What sort of abilities or techniques does your Danava Demon have while in Alingana State? This is the same as Origin State Abilities. Meaning, that these will be related to whatever powers you advance or gain in Alingana. So, if you were a fire demon, you could probably apply that fire-skin of yours to increase your defense/endurance. Something along those lines)

» Unnata Release Appearance: (What does your Danava Demon look like when in Unnata Release? If one were the origin of fire? They'd most likely have their entire body engulfed in flames in order to become the embodiment of this element; perfecting this origin further then in it's previous state while in their former release state. Another example: If one represented a past filled with pain? Then in this transformation, they'd most likely be covered in head to toe in blood, eyes turned red with agony and body covered in physical scars from all the mental pain racing to the surface in order to display just the type of horror they've had to endure in their life. Pictures are also accepted.)

» Unnata Release Powers: (What sort of powers does your Danava Demon advance in while in Unnata? The primary focus in this transformed state is to ultimately, as the title says, advance. This means that most Danava can further develop, strengthen or otherwise evolve their powers. However, it is possible to gain new powers that are related to your origin while in this form. It's just very dependent on it being associated in someway with your Danava's Origin. )

» Unnata Release Abilities: (What sort of abilities or techniques does your Danava Demon have while in Unnata Release? This is the same as Origin State Abilities and Aliṅgana State Abilities. Meaning, that these will be related to whatever powers you advance or gain in Alingana.)


I. Equipment/Other Resources


» Equipment: (If your character has any equipment, then you should put it in this section. Otherwise, if they don't, do not fill in this section and you can leave it blank.)

I. Skill Sheet


[NOTE: SKILLS ARE NOT TO BE FILLED IN UNTIL A TIER IS GIVEN! WILL SKILLS WILL BE GIVEN BY THE STAFF MEMBER WHO GRADES YOUR APP!]

Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Adept
  • Shadow Movement: Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Adept


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Beginner
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


END OF THE DANAVA DEMON APPLICATION



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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


Comments/Notes: Everything looks fine. I especially like the "floating sin"
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