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Name: Seitan Jaryutan
Appearance Age: 19
True Age: 179
Gender: Male
Overall Appearance

Personality: Seitan is a very loyal and caring person who at times can be lazy to the point where one has to nag him constantly in order to get him to do something. Laughing is one of Seitan's favorite thing to do because of his belief that being mad all the time does nothing but kill you faster. He tries his best to not get mad because no one takes him seriously, and he usually ends up crying. If there had to be one thing that Seitan couldn't live without it would have to be music. He is socially awkward and whenever he is in a room with strangers he tends to gravitate towards the back so that he doesn't have to talk to anyone. However when he is with his friends he is more out spoken, and can be usually seen making jokes or doing random things to make his friends laugh. Another thing that Seitan likes to do is read books from authors that write about adventures based on fantasy.

Seitan's favorite place in the world would have to be Italia due to the culture and the wonderful food. He loves to stay up late and sleep in if possible. Whenever he smiles it indicates that he likes an object, something that was said, or a person.

Appearance: He is a light skinned black male with brown eyes and black hair in the style of a buzz cut. He wears a light red hoodie over a black shirt with the words JATTGOD in red. His pants are made of a demin that fits closer to his legs enough to make it seem skinny. His shoes are red converse with white laces. Because he is very skinny his muscles aren't as large as some of his peers. Despite that fact he does have a four pack and continues to work hard in hopes of having six some day.

He wears a size eleven in mens so his feet a big. The only facial hair he has besides his eyebrows is a goatee that he keeps trimmed very well. His ears are average size and his nose is kind of small.
Height: 5'11
Weight: 165

Zanpakuto (Sealed) Description

Zanpakuto Name: Siytalshu
Zanpakuto Spirit: Black Panther
Spoiler:
Zanpakuto World: Constantly raining field
Spoiler:
Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance: Tsurugi
Spoiler:
Release Phrase: "This is so bothersome"
Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description

Shikai Appearance: >>>>>
Spoiler:
Shikai Abilities: After saying the release phrase he has to point his Zanpakotu at his opponet and make sure that they sustain visual contact for ten seconds before his shikai ability is activated. The ability itself makes the opponet seem like everything has slowed including Seitan himself, but in reality the opposite is true.

Zanpakotu (Bankai) Description


Bankai Appearance:
Bankai Abilities:


Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow

Inner Hollow Description: His red hair falls down to his neck where he has a tattoo of a demon. He is wearing a nice suit with black loafers and a red handkerchief in his right pocket. Although it might not look like it he is actually very muscular. His current height stands at six foot four inches tall, and he weighs two hundred and fifty pounds. Along with hazel eyes and pale skin he has a faint scar on his right arm that he got from fighting. A faint smell of honey can be smelled from his clean shaven face.

Inner Hollow Personality: Seitan's inner hollow personality is exactly the
opposite of him. His inner hollow is aggressive, rude, and loud. Whatever comes across his inner hollow's mind is said on the spot no matter how horrible it may be. When it comes to fighting his inner hollow cuts off the limbs one by one before playing with the victim till they die.

Hollow Mask Appearance: >>Like this except the whole mask is black and the red line across the mouth is an X.
Spoiler:
Hollow Powers:

* Enhanced Speed: Visored gain a great boost in their speed
while Hollowfied.


Enhanced Strength: The Visored have shown great strength
while using their masks.

Cero: A standard energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. Seitan's is the color green.

Power Augmentation: With the acquisition of the mask through the
subjugation of one's inner Hollow, Visored gain access to an additional
and separate source of power.

Mask Protection: Body damage can seemingly be ignored while wearing their masks.

Reiryoku Enhancement: Visored have dual spiritual power of both Shinigami and Hollow, which enhances their abilities.

Telekinesis: Visored apparently hold varying degrees of telekinesis ranging from being able to summon their zanpakotu with the flick of their wrist to talking to each other.

Resurreccion Appearance:
Resurreccion Abilities:

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Background: Seitan was born the twenty seventh day in the month of November. The year was and he was an only child to the proud parents of American descent. His father is a banker and his mother is a cafe owner. Histenth birthday was a day that he would remember forever. The attic was forbidden for Seitan to enter because of the chance that he could fall
through the creaky boards. After many pleas from his friends he
reluctantly grabbed a chair from the kitchen and placed it under the
string before standing upon it so that he could pull the string in
order to bring down the stairs that allow access to the attic.

Seitan climbed up first to make sure that everything was ok before motioning to his friends so that they knew it was ok to come up. The attic had an eerie silence to it that made him and his friends shudder a bit before they walked around examining the various boxes that contained items from Seitan's earlier years to his parents personal items. A shout
could be heard from where his parents were watching a movie in the
living room. Everyone jumped at the sound of it only to laugh a moment
later at each others jumpiness.

As fate would have it Seitan wouldn't be laughing for long. Out of a corner of his eye he would see what seemed like a shadow appearing. He quickly turned his head in the direction that he thought was where the shadow had come from, yet he saw nothing. He would shake his head while telling himself to stop being such a scaredy cat. It wouldn't be until all of his friends had climbed down the steps before he would see the shadow again, except this time it would be directly in front of him with what seemed to be red eyes jutting out of its big black mass. It took a step towards Seitan before disappearing only to reappear several feet in front of him.
In response Seitan would take several steps back while making sure
to keep his eyes closed on the black blob just in case it decided to
attack him. The black blob would once again take a step towards Seitan
before disappearing. Seitan would response take a step back. This would
continue on until his back was against the wall. The blob now knowing
that he was trapped charged towards him with his red eyes glowing
bright. Seitan closed his eyes and covered his face while he screamed
for his parents as loud as he could.



Since that day
his whole life changed. As he got older things became much more clear.
The ghosts that seemed like specks of dust were now shown in all their
glory. It wasn't much longer after that when his friends were attacked
by monsters called Hollows. That night was something that was burned
into his memories for reasons he would rather not think of. Along with
the hollow attack it was also the first time that he would be thrown
into a world that he visited many times in the books he read as a kid.

While
walking out of the movie theater he and his friends were recounting the
various scenes that they thought were either hilarious or cool. It was
late and the buses weren't running due to the union wanting more money
so they had to walk back to their neighborhood on a path that wasn't
lit very well.

One of his friends started talking about a so
called curse that was over the graveyard a mile or so away from the
movie theater, and suggested that they check it out. Any other time
Seitan would have been reluctant, but seeing as he had just been
accepted to the collage of his choice he saw no harm in it. As they got
closer to the graveyard his friend would started telling stories about
how people who come here don't return, and how a monster named Yhaugn
lurks here feeding on kids brave enough to enter his part of the
graveyard.

It wouldn't be long before they reached the entrance
to the so called "cursed" graveyard that his friend spoke of. After the
usual round of you go first Seitan would pull at the door in an attempt
to get it to open before kicking it in on the second try. Seitan
scanned as much of the graveyard as he could before he realized that it
was strangely free of anything that goes bump in the night. He shrugged
as he put the thought behind him before running towards the part of the
graveyard Yhaugn is suppose to lurk so he could see if the legend was
true. When he first got there he suddenly felt cold despite the fact
that it was in the middle of summer, yet as soon as he crouched behind
the biggest tomb that he could find he suddenly felt warm again.

Minutes
passed as his friend's ran across the graveyard in search of him.
Without knowing it the hands of fate moved them closer and closer to
their death. They wouldn't stop running until they got to the area
where Yhaugn was said to reside. It was then that Seitan would pop out
while shouting boo in an attempt to scare the same friends that he
would give the shirt off his back. As they jumped he would begin to
laugh much to their displeasure. After the prank that Seitan pulled,
they decided that it was time for them to go home in hopes that their
parents wouldn't ground them.

It was at this exact moment that
fear gripped Seitan's heart. Suddenly in shock he tried to call out to
them, tried to tell them to stop only to find that nothing but air was
coming out of his mouth. By the time he found his voice it was too
late. With one swift movement two figures appeared from what seemed
like nowhere only to crush all of his friends in what seemed like an
instant, but was really several minutes.

His whole body tensed
up in response to the scene that just unfolded in front of him. Every
fiber of his body was shouting at him to run, yet it was like he was
paralyzed until something inside of him snapped. Once again he closed
his eyes and screamed for his parents like he did on his tenth
birthday. The two figures looked around with their ears perked up in
order to find the source of the scream. One of the figures would give
up and go back to cleaning itself off only to be nudged by the other
figure who would be looking directly at Seiten with glee. They chuckled
at the scared boy and enjoyed the sight of his body trembling. The way
he screamed for his parents excited them to the point where they
charged towards him ready to strike when one of the figures sudden
screamed out in pain.

As the other figure swirled around only to
see what looked like someone clad in black and white carrying a sword.
The figure that wasn't hurt was going to charge at the swordsman, yet
stopped once he saw that his companion had already made a move towards
him.

While his companion was busy attacking the swordsman he
turned back around only to find that Seitan remained in the same spot
they left him. This caused the figure to smile a smile that showed each
and every sharp tooth that he used to rip food apart. The figure wanted
to savor the moment, but knew that he wouldn't be able to the moment
his companion cried out for help. As he picked up Seitan he would put
his mouth closer to his head before turning around in time to see the
final blow that would bring death to his companion. A glint of what
seemed like light reflecting off a metallic object would alert the
figure which in turn caused him to quickly open his mouth and bite down
upon the head of Seitan Jaryutan.

The swordsman cursed at
himself for not acting faster as he watched the monster bite off the
head of a defenseless human. He had been hunting these monsters for
months, and had only found out about there whereabouts by methods some
of his fellow men would rather not think about. His muscles tensed in
preparation while he feet carried him within a range good enough to
deal the monster a fatal blow. Like always it seemed like nothing could
be made easy for him as the monster turned around to run so that he
could get to the back entrance of the graveyard, and escape once more.
Even though he would have liked the thought of staying on earth a bit
longer, the fact was that he was being graded for his performance and
as of right now he was barely cutting it.

He would take in a
deep breath before closing his eyes only to open them once more after
he was directly in front of the monster. A smirk would creep across his
face as he brought the sword up above his head before bring it down
upon the monster as cleanly as he could.
Looking around he saw
nothing but rows and rows of tombstones. He turned around to go meet
back up with his fellow swordsman when he saw movement out of the
corner of his eye.

With his sword ready he charged towards the
source of the movement only to find the boy who had died earlier in a
spiritual form. He would reach out touch him only to see Seitan flinch.
This wasn't the first time he had met a soul who moved away from his
touch out of fear, so instead of taking offense like some might he
instead chose to tell the soul what had happen and give it the choice
of moving on.

Seitan listened as the swordsman explained who
he was and what just happened. At first it sounded ridiculous. That was
until he started talking about some placed called soul society, then it
started sounding insane. When asked if he wanted to go there something
in his mind told him to say yes, and with that he would be whisked away
to another land that was different in so many ways Seitan couldn't
believe it.

On his eighteenth birthday he joined the academy.
While in the academy he learned how to wield a Zanpakuto, preform kido,
and the history of soul society.

After being placed in the
twelfth division he would begin to work alongside the scientists that
were working on ways Shinigami could be two places at once. It was hard
work and some times down right frustrating, but Seitan loved every
minute of it.He had been working in the twelfth divison for one hundred and sixty one years when he stayed late one night so that he could finish up his work that was due tomorrow when he heard what sounded like foot
steps behind him. As he turned to look he would feel a hand come down
upon his neck with a huge amount of force that would cause him to black
out.

When he woke up he was tied to a chair with his hands
behind his back and his legs tied to the chair. While his head throbbed
he would be greeted with a voice from what seemed like a female. It
wasn't until he saw her bright red hair and lovely smile before he
recognized her.

She greeted him the way she normally did every
day before getting straight to the matter at hand. She gave him a
choice between being killed or allowing her to experiment on him. After
refusing several times she kicked him in the face repeatedly before
taking out her Zanpakuto and placing it upon his neck. She asked him
again except this time he voice was filled with anger and frustration.
Once again he refused before threatening to refer her to their captain.
With this she brought her Zanpakuto up into the air before bringing the
hilt down upon his head causing him to black out once more.Power coursed through his veins as he began the process that would change his life forever.

Every
part of his body screamed with pain as he swung his fists that were
covered in a hard shell that resembled something that would be found on
a hollow. Some time after the white shell would recede from the rest of
his body until it was on his face. The mask would be all black with
white spots where the eyes are, and a red X over where the mouth is.

Congratulations
a voice would say moments before the mask fell towards the ground only
to crumble before landing. After explaining what she did and why she
would toss Seitan his Zanpakuto before pressing a button so that he
could enter into the room. He looked at her with disgust before walking
into the room so that he could follow her so that she can settle him
into his new life as a Vaizard.



Role Play Sample: Seitan Nara he would say with a sincere smile before placing both of
his hands together in a way that would form the horse hand seal. He
would preform this hand seal several times before becoming use to the
shape it required his hands to be in. He would then take in several
deep breaths while thinking of various moments in his life were he was
the happiest. After a while he would begin to transfer chakra from his
stomach, and move it towards his shadow by using the basic chakra
control that he had learned from the academy. It would take him a few
minutes before he got what he felt was like an appropriate amount of
chakra before thrusting his handseal out, followed by grunting while
trying his hardest to move his shadow. A slight twitch of movement from
his shadow would happen before he would release the hand seal due to
the drain that was caused by the jutsu.


Last edited by Teraon on Wed Feb 02, 2011 5:01 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:26 am
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in [X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: You can't just say "a miniature version of blah-blah-blah" you have to have a picture or describe it. I can tell NOTHING from your mask description, or your physical description for that matter. More detail for your Zanpakutou....everything. Also, if he's 17, he wouldn't have SHIKAI let alone be a Vizard. 175 is the YOUNGEST you can be with Shikai. Also for the hollow powers, you can have Ceros, etc.
Tier: When modified, it will be 3-1.


Last edited by Tsubine on Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:28 pm; edited 1 time in total


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Wed Feb 02, 2011 2:28 pm
I apologize for all of my mistakes.

Fixed.
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Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:38 pm
Inner hollow needs more description. Also, fix the history since he's 179~


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Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:58 pm
Approved, and checklist modified


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Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:29 am
As per Teraon's request, I am locking and archiving this application.


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