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She Sat by Me
Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:25 pm
She Sat by Me
By UHCM (Jacob Smith)
In my mind within the depth of a well
Darkened sky, brightened water
She sat by me when I fought a hard battle
Against the rough torrent of imaginations
Others cannot see her
As she was a shadow of herself
Just as others cannot see me for the same reason
We both understood and felt the same way
I may be crazy, but I can see her
When even my mother could not
Mother...never heard a sigh from my dismay
Her words of briar and sunlight
But that girl still stood by me
Praising my existence
I know why she stayed
She cared about me for more years than anyone else
Twenty-two years and she still look so young
She knows one secret to my inner peace
Five words of great importance
“Love yourself before loving others.”
I know one truth from my heart
She is a friend within my own mind...I have to trust myself.
By UHCM (Jacob Smith)
In my mind within the depth of a well
Darkened sky, brightened water
She sat by me when I fought a hard battle
Against the rough torrent of imaginations
Others cannot see her
As she was a shadow of herself
Just as others cannot see me for the same reason
We both understood and felt the same way
I may be crazy, but I can see her
When even my mother could not
Mother...never heard a sigh from my dismay
Her words of briar and sunlight
But that girl still stood by me
Praising my existence
I know why she stayed
She cared about me for more years than anyone else
Twenty-two years and she still look so young
She knows one secret to my inner peace
Five words of great importance
“Love yourself before loving others.”
I know one truth from my heart
She is a friend within my own mind...I have to trust myself.
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Re: She Sat by Me
Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:39 pm
Amazing, that's all i have to say about this, uhcm.
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Re: She Sat by Me
Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:39 am
Bravro enjoyable, i might ask if i can let my english teacher read this
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