Sting - Carbon Clouds

Mon Apr 10, 2017 11:27 am

» Name Of Character: Sting Chikara
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11107-sting-chikara-approved-tier-0-3?highlight=Sting

» Upgrading:
Not upgrading, changing.

Carbon Clouds: In the release, the individual has the ability to release large black clouds of carbon that form compounds in the air that are similar to the composition of carbon monoxide. To most individuals the fumes would be rather deadly, however can only be maintained within a hundred meter radius of Sting immediate vicinity. When Sting releases into the state, the clouds are instantly generated for further manipulation. The clouds are somewhat thick and block both sight and reishi. This is an ability that stems from the inner hollows personality and general skill set. The cloud effectively removes traces of Sting presence while affecting the vision of his enemies.

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Carbon Clouds: In the release, the individual has the ability to release large black clouds of carbon that form compounds in the air that are similar to the composition of carbon monoxide. To most individuals the fumes would be rather deadly, however can only be maintained within a hundred meter radius of Sting immediate vicinity. When Sting releases into the state, the clouds are instantly generated for further manipulation. The clouds, are naturally transparent in nature, however Stings manipulation makes them pitch black. Any individual that's within the range of the clouds wont be able to see or sense anything within the Carbon Clouds. The clouds are somewhat thick and block both sight and reishi. This is an ability that stems from the inner hollows personality and general skill set. The cloud effectively removes traces of Sting presence while affecting the vision of his enemies to a staggering degree. In addition, the clouds have two modes of travel. The first, the clouds will center on Sting, so if you were to calculate the radius of the hundred meter Carbon Cloud, you would be able to identify that Sting is in the center. However, the second move enables Sting to move anywhere witin the cloud while the Carbon creation remains centered on his previous location, until such time where he switches to the previous mode and back again.

» Why: To reflect his power with the Carbon clouds how I invisioned them

» Extra: Ostrich Egg...?

Mon Apr 10, 2017 5:45 pm

So what I'm understanding is, this is pretty much just an addition to his Carbon Clouds, and one that let's him fast-travel to any area within the domain of the carbon clouds. At first I was worried about how he could just lol-dodge anything that's being aimed at him all the time, but then I realised that this just forces the opponent to try some AoE attacks, which makes this ability fairly strategic more than anything.

However, as with all teleport-type abilities, there should still be some level of limitation, whether its in frequency of teleport, whether or not there might be a delay, just some sort of drawback since this isn't just a strategic defense but an overwhelmingly powerful accentuate to any sort of attack he might preform, to a ridiculous extent. Especially since the clouds themselves don't really have too much of a hardset limitation in itself.

Mon Apr 10, 2017 8:52 pm

§aga wrote:
So what I'm understanding is, this is pretty much just an addition to his Carbon Clouds, and one that let's him fast-travel to any area within the domain of the carbon clouds. At first I was worried about how he could just lol-dodge anything that's being aimed at him all the time, but then I realised that this just forces the opponent to try some AoE attacks, which makes this ability fairly strategic more than anything.

However, as with all teleport-type abilities, there should still be some level of limitation, whether its in frequency of teleport, whether or not there might be a delay, just some sort of drawback since this isn't just a strategic defense but an overwhelmingly powerful accentuate to any sort of attack he might preform, to a ridiculous extent. Especially since the clouds themselves don't really have too much of a hardset limitation in itself.

Nah bro, nothing teleportation related unless I'm tripping out!

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Water_Prison_Shark_Dance_Technique

^ It's literally that but with black Carbon clouds that block site and spiritual presence, as oppose to water. It can either maitain its center point or use Stings position as a center point.

I was under the impression that teleportations banned in battle anyway?

Mon Apr 10, 2017 9:28 pm

[mod]OK IN MY DEFENCE I AM FATIGUED. I completely misunderstood the secondary mode of travel and made some poorly formed conclusions in my head. Anyways, now that I more thoroughly understand the changes, I'm gonna go ahead and approve this. Please don't flame me (it's hard enough as is to open our PMs).[/mod]

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