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Mirja Eeola
Mirja Eeola
Demon Toy
Joined : 2016-08-18
Posts : 6076
Location : Where ever a Space-girl can

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Sat Jan 28, 2017 10:45 am
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» Name Of Character: Mirja Eeola
» Link To Character: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t16312-mirja-eeolaapproved-0-5-0-4-in-shikai

» Upgrading: Beowulf [Mirja Eeola Shikai]

Released with 'Obliterate the Ideal of Fear' Beowulf's new Shikai form is not dramatically differing from it's old one. Instead of having two releases born from Mirja's lack of confidence in herself and her Zanpaktou, this has two forms that can be called upon depending on the current situation.

The first, is the original form, which is the form it releases into unless Mirja gives the command to release into the alternate form. It retains the strength-increase and the light-consuming ability, and has not changed very much from it's release before Mirja lost her connection.

The major evolution in her Zanpaktou, is the alternate form of her Shikai. Crafted from Mirja's intense desire and enjoyment from speed, it is a form that drops everything to cater to this desire specifically. The physical appearance of this release is a slender pair of shoes, the standard white-gold colour but with a softer look to them than her original shikai form and small gauges on the side.

This form grants no bonuses other than a considerable increase in her speed, exceeding the upper limits of her movement and reaction speed. When moving, the two gauges on the side fill up and after some time [3 posts] they max out and allow Mirja to release the Wings of Beowulf. Incorporeal but bright and easy to see, the wings stretch out from the back of her shoes, and grant a further boon to her movement and reaction speed, allowing her to move and react at speeds phenomenally higher than her upper limits.

The Wings of Beowulf last for the same amount of time as they where charged for [3 posts] and then retract back into the shoes, to charge again. This cycle can roll as long as Mirja has her Shikai active, but the charge is not saved if she seals her Zanpaktou with only a portion of the power prepared, having to charge again from scratch if she re-releases it later.

» Why: looking to get this reviewed so I can do a mid-thread release in an upcoming event.

» Extra: Beowulf has wings, mmkay?



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Henrex
Henrex
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Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 5126
Age : 24

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Tue Jan 31, 2017 9:43 am
[mod]All I have an issue with would be the multipliers. Two and four times are VERY massive jumps for someone at Master Speed. I'd lower this to a decimal-like scale or something. Seeing as Mirja is a 0-4 tier, and as I said before, has a Master in Speed, two times and four times can be something along the lines of Shadin-level fast, or possibly even faster. That's the only issue I have with this. Fix that, and I'll approve it.[/mod]
Henrex
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Age : 24

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Tue Jan 31, 2017 10:31 am
[mod]Seeing as we've talked about this on Discord in PC, and things have been changed, and I currently find this able to be approved. I'm putting a bit of trust into you with this. Don't abuse this. Thanks for working with me on this, and...

APPROVED[/mod]
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