Re: Captain Unohana Retsu [APPROVED, 0-2+]

Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:36 am

As i don't have the ability to check this myself since it is a moderator or above thing i am going to move this to unchecked for ya so someone can see it and review your app sorry about the inconvenience and the amount of time you've had to wait.

Sat Mar 22, 2014 5:03 am

«PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED NOW»

« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

Willpower/Determination: Grand Master
Mental Deduction: Master
Pain Endurance: Grand Master
Focus: Master

Comments/Notes: Alright, I read both of the RP samples by Kade and CPK, and I feel that the Unohana portrayed by CPK feels a bit more accurate. Therefore, judging from each of the post given to me, I'm gonna go ahead and approve CPK to have control over Unohana. I'm also going to give this Grand Masters in will and I won't be doing the double system because it's a canon VS a personal character. I feel this one deserves after everything I've read i n the manga.

Although, I expect CPK to make a cleaner app for this character than the one currently provided. You have free creative ground to do what you need to in order to bring this application up to par and I don't care if you make a new one. So, I wish you good luck with this character and I'd also congratulate Kade for trying as well.
Tier: 0-2+

Sun Aug 03, 2014 3:51 am

「CHECKING THIS SHIT OUT」

☓	Yeah, I haven't seen CPK in quite some time Therefore, due to his inactivity, I am going to go ahead and place Unohana into inactive canons for the time being as I clear out inactive canons. At the moment she is MIA.