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Re: Jaeden Crow [APPROVED, 1-4++] [HAZARD RATING: B]
Thu Jul 25, 2019 2:59 pm
I did fix or remove everything in question, the things were addressed as asked. I did not see that a post was requested. I thought tagging would be enough so that is my bad in that sense.
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Re: Jaeden Crow [APPROVED, 1-4++] [HAZARD RATING: B]
Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:45 am
Alright, there were two major things that still need to be addressed -
First, what is the expenditure of Jaeden's Speed Clone? How much does it exhaust him to do this for say, a post? Or how long can he keep up at it before needing to rest?
Second, Tokihanachumasu:
- How is this move a counter? As in, how does it actually begin to function? An example would work well here.
- How does it draw back/exhaust Jaeden to use?
- 500 is excessive, it should have a max of 100 hits.
Once those are addressed, everything should be in good order.
First, what is the expenditure of Jaeden's Speed Clone? How much does it exhaust him to do this for say, a post? Or how long can he keep up at it before needing to rest?
Second, Tokihanachumasu:
- How is this move a counter? As in, how does it actually begin to function? An example would work well here.
- How does it draw back/exhaust Jaeden to use?
- 500 is excessive, it should have a max of 100 hits.
Once those are addressed, everything should be in good order.
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Re: Jaeden Crow [APPROVED, 1-4++] [HAZARD RATING: B]
Sat Sep 07, 2019 11:42 pm
Speed Clone: These are solid clones and thus he can take damage from what they take. But also he is able to only perform this for two posts only.
Example for Tokihanachimasu:: When use has begun the user will have slashed at him using a sword or Hakuda technique. Using this moment he'll cast an Utsusemi with highly precise movements. Activating this is tiring on his senses and body making him only use it once per thread. Due to the labor of usage and timing issue. He won't always be able to make it work in effect.
Example for Tokihanachimasu:: When use has begun the user will have slashed at him using a sword or Hakuda technique. Using this moment he'll cast an Utsusemi with highly precise movements. Activating this is tiring on his senses and body making him only use it once per thread. Due to the labor of usage and timing issue. He won't always be able to make it work in effect.
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Re: Jaeden Crow [APPROVED, 1-4++] [HAZARD RATING: B]
Tue Sep 10, 2019 11:08 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Hazard Rankings
- Power: A-Rank
- Influence: C-Rank
- Resources: D-Rank
Comments/Notes:
His General Speed should be changed to Master, in accordance with the guidelines for the new scaling list.
Master's should similarly be reclassified as Elite.
Hazard Ratings: I felt that his power is indeed A class, but considering he is not currently affiliated with any organization, his resources and influence are dependent upon his own family. Also, considering his laid-back personality, it seems unlikely he would have strong ties that he would be able to leverage outside of his own family.
Tier: 1-4++
Hazard Rating: B
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Re: Jaeden Crow [APPROVED, 1-4++] [HAZARD RATING: B]
Mon Mar 08, 2021 6:41 am
[mod]Archived because there's a newer more updated app up now.[/mod]
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