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Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:56 am


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Name: Estol
Age: 250
Gender: Male
AppearanceEstol(demon) 1352-1035718204

True Form/any Differnt form: Estol(demon) D_D4th__Lich_by_UdonCrew

Personality: Estol is a proud creature, believing himself to be better than anyone else. He will do anything for power, and is very arrogant. He loves anything to do with his former friend, Maria. He gets angry quickly, and is very rash. He feels all non-demons are worthless, except for Maria. He feels demons have too little power, and they should do something about it. He acts like he is smarter than everyone else. He feels like no one will ever understand his power. He rarely talks to anyone else outside of a fight. When he does talk, he talks confidently, often mocking the other person.

History Estol used to be a human with an average life, though he had a huge thirst for knowledge of the unnatural. He and his then alive friend, Maria, used to try all sorts of forbidden rituals. Then, while on his way to school, Estol spotted a car crash. The car seemed vaguely familiar to him, before he realize it as Maria's parents.

After that day, Estol became obsessed with dark magic, and bringing back the dead. His grades in school dropped, and he was eventually kicked out of his parents house. Three days later he managed to exchange his soul with Maria's. mAria's soul was to enter his body, and he would leave it and die. But his soul was so tainted with the evil of the dark magic he turned into a demon.

In his new demon form, he searched all over his old friend Maria. But when he found his old body, it had a knife through it. Apparently, Maria hated his body, and killed herself. In grief, he obsorbed his old body, alolowing him to change into it's form.


Powers:
-Body absorption: Can take a dead body and absorb it, allowing him to change into that bodies form.
-Shadowform: Allows him to shape the shadows into a weapon of some sort.
-Nercro-create: creates an undead minion by standing by a dead body for an hour. He starts with two.
Necro-summon: summon undead minions he has created. He can only have five summoned at a time.


Skill Level: Powers: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Speed: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Defense: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Likes: Shadowy places, dead people, dark magic

Dislikes: Sunlight, almost all people, bunnies

Fears: Losing his power, being kill, not being able to ressuurect Maria.

Weakness: At 12 noon each day he has to choose human form and stay in it until 1 hour later. none of his powers work during this hour/i]

Role Play Sample:[i] Estol, in human form, was walking around town. Finally, he spotted what he was looking for. Looming before him was the town's cemetery. He needed to make another undead minion. He had lost one a while ago. He climbed over the fence, and was about to congratulate himself, when he heard a voice, "Hey kid!"
He turned around to see a guard standing there. Estol smiled as he summoned his other two undead minions. The guards face turned pale, and he ran for help. Just then the clock struck twelve noon. "No," yelled Estol, as his undead minions were transported back to the dimension form which they came, and all his powers left him.


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Fri Jan 07, 2011 5:11 am
Alright, there are a few things wrong here.
1)No emotion-based powers, I.E. NO FEAR AURA
2) Personality needs to be two paragraphs or 10 sentences.
3) More likes, fears, and dislikes! At least three on each


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