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Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Fri Sep 02, 2016 9:26 pm
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I. Basic Information
» Name: Sølv Rosa
» Age: 0 [recently spawned from the incursion of the Black World into the Seretei]
» Gender: Female
» Race: Shinigami Saca Dlia
» Association: Mirja Eeola
» Appearance:
- Spoiler:
» Purpose: This Saca Dila, having been made very recently through Mirja's actions against the Black World's arrival in parts of the Seretei, has not got a grand scheme being fight the invaders in her realm - the realm of taint - and then survive long enough to gain a reason to exist beyond protecting the realm.
II. Personality
» Personality: Having been a very recent construct, there is little in the way of mentality in this Saca Dila. It protects the land it was born from, and even as young as it is, desires something more from it's existance than simply fighting. However, beyond this, it has no persona. However, this is not as much a fault as some people would believe, seeing her as she is. This is instead, quite the boon to her. For she has nothing to tell her what to do, or how to do it, she is, much like the Asuchi that the Shinigami are given when they first enter their roles in life and so imprint the nature of their very souls onto it and craft something that has yet to exist in the world, something unique and at times quite terrifying to behold depending on the person that is in question at the moment of creation, an empty piece of paper, for all who wish to draw upon her, and create a beautiful picture, or a harrowing nightmare, however the dice may fall.
III. History
» History: Nothingness. This was Solv's existance for time immemorable. But then, after aeons of this lack of being, the Black World's foothold on the Soul Society was hurt by powerful heat beams, carving into it, slicing her breathen into pieces. It was this, that gave Solv what she needed to actually be, to exist.
Crawling from the muck, the dank, dark, abyss that was her home for so long, she moved from Nothing, to Something. And this Something was Protect her Lands. Still, even with this in her mind, she wanted something else. She didn't know why she wanted something else, she just...did. She did not even know what she wanted from her life, which was a point that would have annoyed her, had she the emotional maturiaty to understand how emotions worked. It was as if she wanted the dream, rather than what the dream was about. She wanted the ability to go and make something of herself, more than she actually knew what she was going to do to make something of herself.
IV. Powers
» Powers: Aside from the Zanpaktou, Solv has the same powers as Mirja, from her super-dense body and momentous strength, to her surprisingly considerable skill in Hakuda.
- Full power set:
- Kido: Under no circumstances, in no perceivable way, manner, or form, can Mirja ever actually use Kido. Her unique nature denies it, like water denies oil.
Hakuda: Some people would think that just because she is titanically powerful, Mirja would throw hammer-blows and nothing else. But, she is actually a highly skilled martial artist, quick with strikes and precise at the same time. Since she did not need to spend any time building up her muscles, she could spend her entire time training technique, and skill. Her main focus is an Atemi style, where singular-fingered Nukes strike specific points in a target's body, creating the most effecient way to take a person down, and minimalizing the risk of her accidentally killing them. Such a style obviously doesn't work on bestial Hollows, but it far more effective on sentient humanoids.
The style when she is using her false shikai is more effective against the bestials. Having deep roots in Boxing, but also with a few Karate techniques thrown in for good measure, it takes advantage of the knuckle-dusters and the increased strength to use swift jabs, Meotoude feint-shots, and brutal uppercuts to lay waste to the opposition. This is a style used when Mirja has to worry less about the surrounding area and the state of the person she is fighting, and is allowed to cut loose and break things.
Zanjutsu: Mirja doesn't like this concept, since most weapons break in her useage. As a result, she has only a basic grasp of Zanjutsu, and rarely, if ever, uterlizes it in combat.
Hoho: Surprising to most, considering she is incredibly heavy, Mirja has a decent skill with Hoho, not exactly outrunning lightning bolts, but able to keep pace with a good collection of people. Her favourite thing is to literally run into people, using her body to protect her from the recoil, and allow massive impact damage, something she likes to call a Flash Crash. Lacking any ability to extrude Reiatsu and create platforms, Mirja relies on her natural speed and strength to get her were she needs to go. Recently, she is in the process of creating a style where she kicks off from the air with such force it momentarily acts as a physical object. She tenitively calls it Void Dance, but doesn't quite like the sound of it.
She is not skilled enough to create after-images, but she makes up for this with incredible stamina. Due to her body's nature, fatigue toxins take much longer to become rooted in her body, allowing for peak activity for longer than most people of the same power ranking. This allows her to be equally skilled at sprinting and long distance, reaching her maximum speed reletively quickly, and allowing her to maintain it for a considerable length of time. There is still room to grow, but Mirja is skilled at the use of it after the Fifty Year War and subsequent Demonic invasions, so she is confident that her speed will increase as she works on it.
Reiatsu Perception: Another interesting thing, considering her total lack of Reiatsu, this came about with her Shikai's nature. She can sense Reiatsu that is reletively well hidden, but anything dedicated will still slip under her radar. However, since she rarely uses her Shikai in it's light-consuming nature, her skill is limited. Her range goes out to about a hundred meters, and can sense Reiatsu that is not expertly hidden, but it is far from her greatest ability. Another drawback is the fact that she is focused on the sensing of a singular person, and so she can be overwhelmed by false signals and large amounts of energy blasts, throwing her off and distorting her perception to the point were she just gives up and goes in for what she knows best, punching.
Natural skill - Ultra-dense Reiryoku: A strange quirk of her birth, this has become the defining attribute with Mirja. As her power increases, as does her density, which in turn allows her to have multiple advantages over her normal brothers and sisters. Her defensive powers are increased considerably due to the fact that her entire body is roughly eight times denser than a person of equal rank. This ratio has increased over her life, and still has the ability to increase further as she grows in power. The down side to this is that she is the bane of chairs, having to sit very carefully in them, or they collapse under her weight. In her life time, she has only suffered two major punctures of her skin, once when she was a young child, and once at the Demonic Incursion. This has caused her to have a moderate feeling of invicibility, which manifests in her style of attack, charging in without though of her own well-being.
Along with being really heavy, and really hard to hurt for people not miles above her in power, or without a special trick, her muscles have grown more dense along with the rest of her body, granting her incredible strength that is aided by how solid her skin and bones are. Mirja believes her physical attacks wouldn't be nearly as effective if she wasn't akin to a marble pillar when hitting someone. This has allowed her to has a unique fighting style, where she focuses on the weak points of a person's body, and devestates them with well timed strikes, not needing to put more than a jab in, since she is a psysical monster. At present, there are few non-spiritual materials she can't break, only extremeities of temprature can be felt by her, and she has a great penchance for grandstanding and letting people break their fists on her face. This can lead to some trouble when said fists break her face at the same time....
Due to the fact that her weight is a natural thing that her body can handle with ease, she can train her Hoho and natural running speed as easily as any other, since her weight is in preportion to her skeletal and muscular strength, rather than dispreportioned like regular fat people.
Unique Skill - Motionless Fist: Mimicing the flow of Reiatsu through a person's body, the person throws a punch that slightly twists on impact, and then drives forward with all their might. The end result is the kinetic energy dispersing through the target's entire body like the flowing of Reiatsu instead of at a singular point. It feels like being punched in the everywhere, but only people with esoteric strength can manage to provide enough force for the impact to do any damage, since it spreads out rather than gathers in a single spot.
The name comes from the fact that there is no force driving the target back, and so they stay exactly were they are standing as the punch hits them, being Motionless. It also has a shocking impact on inanimate objects, since anything not strong enough to absorb the impact of the hit will subsequently, explode.
The mental and physical prepration of this attack, however, causes it to be pretty slow, and isn't something that can be called out on a dime except by the greatest fighters in the world, making it something of an on-demand technqiue rather than an ace in the hole.
The Zanpaktou, is a different thing. It looks reletively the same, same size, same general shape and lack of embelishment, but it releases differently. The Shikai is a basic affair, but unique. It's release phrase is 'Fade, Grendel' and it's form coats her entire body in a very thin layer of the Zanpaktou's reiatsu. This obviously lights her up on all Reiatsu sensors, but also allows her body to increase it's strength and durability in relation to how dark the surrounding area is. The Sahara in the middle of the day would provide practically no power boost at all, but underground with no light source would triple her power and durability. The shikai also grants her perfect night vision, allowing her to hunt her prey even when there is no light to see by.
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Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:28 am
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Even though this is an NPC of sorts, I'd make this character's personality at least ten sentences. Add three more sentences to her history as well.
I'd also still paste the abilities she has from her other app into the profile and put them in a spoiler or make them viewable. That's up to you.
I'd also still paste the abilities she has from her other app into the profile and put them in a spoiler or make them viewable. That's up to you.
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Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:30 am
I...can't make the personality any longer. She doesn't have one yet. Same goes for the History, really. That is the sum total of her existance so far.
Any insight you want to give would be helpful, but, I can't do anything myself.
Any insight you want to give would be helpful, but, I can't do anything myself.
Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:35 am
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"Having been a very recent construct, there is little in the way of mentality in this Saca Dila. Most can think of this has a blank slate. Since she is a newborn creature, there has not been much time for a personality to develop and grow. Therefore, there is a lot of room for development for this entity to eventually evolve into. For the time being, however, there seems to be some faint ambitions within the creature. Within it's conscious lays a need to want to protects the land it was born from.
And, even as young as it is, desires something more from it's existence than simply fighting. It isn't quite sure what it wants, but it believes there is something more to life than simply combat and bloodshed. It can't be all that she was born into and she wants to discover just what this worlds offer. Thus, even if she has no personality of her, she wishes to craft one and discover it in this new world she was born into. "
I made one. Does this not fit and sound better?
And, even as young as it is, desires something more from it's existence than simply fighting. It isn't quite sure what it wants, but it believes there is something more to life than simply combat and bloodshed. It can't be all that she was born into and she wants to discover just what this worlds offer. Thus, even if she has no personality of her, she wishes to craft one and discover it in this new world she was born into. "
I made one. Does this not fit and sound better?
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Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Sat Sep 03, 2016 10:48 am
Personality buffed, history increased, and spoiler added for her full compolation of powers.
Re: Mirja Saca Dila [Approved 4-1]
Tue Sep 13, 2016 1:29 pm
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