Bi, The Wolf of Desert[NPC]

Tue Jan 27, 2015 1:14 pm

- Name: Bi
- Titles:
- Gender: Male
- Age Of Death:32
- Appearance Age: Can't really tell
- Age: 410
- Affiliation/Rank: Serves under Nize

- Appearance Description: Bi is about the height of a horse and weights about 300 to 400 pounds. His body is of a wolfs, only in place of fur, there is layers of dark red scales. It is a athletic body, muscled, with almost no fat. A huge hole is in his chest. His mask completely covers his face, two thin lines separates the jaw with the rest of body, letting him do biting moves.

The creatures nails are extended long and sharp, looking as if they would be small daggers. Two larger and longer fangs, like caber tooth lion, reaches out of his mouth. His eyes are in the color of Hueco Mundo sand. If you look close enough, you could even see a pattern, that resembled the sand itself. But in these eyes kindness could also be seen...And sadness.
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- Personality:
Loyal: Like the beast, he resembles, Bi is loyal to those he believe is his friends. Most attached, of course, the wolf is to Nize. Both were friends, when he was a Arrancar and he still is loyal to him, even after what had happened between two of those. His loyalty can reach to the point, where he will jump in front of a lethal shot or kill himself, if needed.

Feral: Like many Hollows, Bi also can become vicious and blood thirsty, hungering for the flesh of his enemies. Only, not like any wild Hollow, his furry will act together with calculation and precise attacks. If decided to kill someone, he will do it, no matter what.

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- Hollow type: Adjucha

- Hollow Power: Bi can turn into sand and also take control of already existing sand. Area he can take over is around two kilometers. He can also change the density of the sand.

Soul-Body Separation: This is a simple racial technique that most, if not all, Hollows have access to. In essence, this ability allows the Hollow to separate the living person from their spirits, forcibly dragging their spirit so they can either converse with their loved ones upon turning into a Hollow or for more sinister means. Whilst a common racial ability, Hollows are usually not found using such an ability as they normally hunt after pluses, rather than living human beings. If desperate enough, however, this can change and the Hollow is capable of separating the human spirit from their body. This also means that it is possible for a Hollow to extract a Shinigami from their Gigai, but this could prove... disasterous for the Hollow. But it is also shown to be able to reverse, in the same way. As Hollows can extract souls, Shinigami are capable of placing their souls into an artificial vessel and becoming visible in the human realm.

Acidic Touch: A rather passive and simple ability for all Hollows. In essence, this is the first form of defense for a normal Hollow, that if someone were to touch their skin they would be singed and their hands would be eroded and burnt as if acid was poured onto it. It is said this is extremely painful, and actually capable of letting the Hollow's Reiatsu into the victim's body.

Cero: This is a very powerful and extremely swift blast of energy that can be made by anyone infected by Hollows. It has been shown my some Gillian class hollows to blast even towns apart, their wide array of power being quite scary. As the classes of Hollows goes up, the power of their cero is also quite unique and strong. Most cero of basic Hollow have shown to be simply red in colour, whilst others like Vasto Lorde or Arrancar can have various ranges of colours. For an example of this is that Starrk has blue cero, Harribel has yellow, ulquiorra has green ceros, etc. A cero can also be shot from a variety of locations, each unique to the Hollow in question; this can be the tongue, finger tip, fist or even eyeball if one wished.

Garganta: Literally translating to "throat" in spanish and "Black cavity" in Japanese, Garganta is the method in which all Hollows use to travel between different realms. When in use, a black rift literally tears open the fabric of space and opens into a black rift of Darkness. The most common usage is to travel from Hueco Mundo to the living realm, but users whom are more adept at this can even use it in fights to actually open rifts of darkness to absorb attacks, and open a rift elsewhere to shoot it back at them. It highly depends on the skill of the user, as often even Vizards have been shown to open garganta during battle. Normal hollows only use this as a method of transportation, though. Many of the reasons Garganta is a very powerful tool is for it's utility and mass transportation which can hold endless numbers of "foot soldiers" or people within it.

High-Speed regeneration: Generally self explanatory, some Hollows are capable of having the ability to regenerate their bodies at their own will. However this is usually quite limited to the cutting off of limbs. This is usually more commonly found in Arrancar, however some Hollow's have learned to reform their bodies from damage. It is said that if they have taken drastic damage to organs and vitals, however, they cannot regenerate these easily (or not at all, depending on the Hollow), which allows them still very vulnerable. This is shown by Ulquiorra whom sacrificed even more raw power for the ability to regenerate his body.

- Weapons: None

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- Background: Bi had been a lot of things. First, a soldier, then a husband, father, enemy, two times a hollow and a arrancar.

When Bi was alive, his name was Mickle Newton. A simple name, simple surname, and in all, he was simple. First few years of his life was spend in Americas getos, surviving gang fights, a violent father and always unpleased mother. In age of seven years, his father died in of these gang shoot downs, and mother, not wanting to take care of him, sent the boy to live at her sisters in country side.

There he spent all his childhood and left only, when entering army at age of 16. He had gotten way bigger, then usually boys do in his age and the males rough face, and forget documents, got him in. There he was capable to fight, let out his energy and actually do something good. The man died at age of 32 by a bullet in his head. It happened, when visiting his mother in his home town.

As a hollow, the man didn't spend much time in Earth Realm, but soon came to Hueco Mundo.

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General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills

Acid Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Garganta : Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Regeneration: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Fri Jan 30, 2015 10:21 am

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Comments/Notes: Even though it is an NPC, I'd like to see at least a paragraph or two of history for it. Along with that, the personality needs to be at least ten sentences. Furthermore, put in the age as well. After you fix that, I'll review it again. For now? Its going into pending.
Tier: N/A until changes are made.

Wed Feb 18, 2015 9:12 pm

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Sun Mar 01, 2015 10:25 am

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