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JWC
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Joined : 2012-11-11
Posts : 392
Age : 27
Location : 'Murica.

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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Thu Jan 22, 2015 10:41 pm
NPC Template


Name: Carine Carleau

Age: 302

Gender: Female

Personality:
Playful: See that damn squiggly line down there? That's her way of poking fun while not expressing too much of her true feelings, which James can read, and is surprisingly fond of teasing.
Protective: She can be very protective of James, especially when he's threatened. She can't do much in the way of protecting him, but she can offer some strong ass words. (Like offering to maim someone brutally before they can even speak to James in any romantic manner. Or if they threaten him first. She's a jealous, selfish motherfucker)
Accepting of James' decisions: Carine doesn't care that James does horrible things, but when he does horrible and stupid things, she makes sure to scold him, and deprive him (And herself) of certain experiences. This usually backfires after about a week, if you know what I mean...
Serious: In short bursts. She may sometimes switch from her usual playful manner to one wherein she is very serious toward a subject. Usually maiming prey.

Appearance She has a slight french accent.
Spoiler:

Tier: 3-2++
If Applicable, Position: Formerly, Blood Stalker.
What Race: Sueki

Brief History: Formerly a Blood Stalker of the Sanguine Court, Carine resigned from their protection formally after happening upon a man whose blood she simply could not resist. The Sanguine Court could not promise her safety in the human world, but she wasn't worried, as the man himself was full of simply delectable darkness for her to devour, oh~ what a wonderful choice~ It was so simple for her, so natural~ She got blood and sweet, sweet sex from him, so she was pleased with the decision. Now she follows him everywhere with her umbrella, just so she can be near him. Naturally, she wants to protect his life, as he has protected hers. (I'll put a better history in James' app.)

Associated Character: James William Caldwell

Basic Powers:
Spoiler:

General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner


Sueki Skills
  • Racial Affinity:N/A
  • Umbra Control: N/A
  • Dependencies: Beginner
  • Sexual Amplifications: Advanced


Last edited by JWC on Mon Apr 20, 2015 9:15 am; edited 5 times in total
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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Re: Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Fri Jan 23, 2015 7:04 am

«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus:Beginner


  • Comments/Notes: Make the personality ten sentences and I'll approve it.

  • Tier: 3-2++


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JWC
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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Re: Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Fri Jan 23, 2015 10:54 pm
On second thought, if you could move this to WIP so I can make her real character first? The NPC form is for when she's with James (which is most of the time). But I think I'll humor Chao and make a Sueki. And that way, I can put her real tier here, or can I just alter it when I finish my other app?
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Tue Feb 03, 2015 11:52 am
Moved to wip
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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Re: Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Sun Mar 29, 2015 10:50 pm

«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Beginner
  • Focus: Beginner


  • Comments/Notes: Errr, what is going on with this in your personality section?

    THIRSTAAAAY: In every sense. I don't really need to say more.

    That just seems....unnecessary. I'd prefer it removed because it just seems too meta to me. Also lose a lot of the "XD's" in the app and we'll be good to go.

  • Tier: 3-2++


Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] WVMWLOu
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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Re: Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Fri Apr 03, 2015 9:15 am
I had changed it to 2-5 because that's James' tier. I'll go fix that now.


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Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved] Empty Re: Carine Carleau [3-2++ Approved]

Wed Jun 15, 2016 10:01 am
[adm]Moving to Inactive Characters based on member inactivity exceeding 2 months. Please post here to retrieve this application.[/adm]


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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