Re: [THEFROST]'S 30 Day Tracker - Winter 2015 Round Editon

Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:52 am

«TENTH POST OF THE CHALLENGE DONE»

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13020-the-beast-arrives#84705

Alright, I'm still cranking through these post for the 30 Day Challenge. I am determined to keep myself at least one day ahead of the challenge; so I gotta manage the groove later on today by making one or two post. Granted, my goal is to maintain a two post a day average for the 2nd week, but no matter what, I'll be AT LEAST getting ONE post a day out.

With that said, this post came out to be around 2,700+ words and I was rather happy with how it turned out. The reason for that is because it described a bit of how Ibiki felt towards Tsubasa's relations, their goals, the situation with the Soul Society, the mission ahead, Neviah's MIA status, Eliah's sadness and how everything was more or less falling on Ibiki's shoulders with how fucked up things were getting.

And, although Ibiki does possess superhuman powers, her mind is that of human and even she has her limits of endless positivity; as she attempted to hold back the sadness of her heart in order to continue with her objectives for the Seireitei at large. So much so that she utilized her spiritual pressure's effect to calm others on herself to get the job done.

Thus, after having a drink and boosting herself up, Ibiki took flight towards the combat going on with the Maggots Nest riot and is tempted to do it the old' fashioned Zaraki style: smash 'em up and leave no resistance. All things considered, it was one hell of a post and I keep to proceed with this muse cycle I'm on.

With that said, TO GUTS!

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Mon Jan 26, 2015 11:34 am

«11th POST OF THE CHALLENGE DONE»

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t12757p10-the-cycle-of-destruction-and-renewal-commences-the-end-of-the-vandenreich-begins-enter-k-world-s-strike#84724

Fuck yeah, still going strong in the 30 Day Challenge so far. I managed to crank out a 2,300+ word post and I'm getting closer towards my 50,000 word mark. Since, with that post, I was able to jump to 25,000 words and I know I can jump to 30,000 today, tomorrow or Wed. Then, once I reach that point, I'll be 3/5 done with my word count challenge. So there is lots of hype and energy going on with me since i'm feeling my old muse come back.

With that said, I felt this post was pretty impactful. One of the first reasons I say that is because Kin more or less solidify the foundation for his new country: Naē Vanśa. In Hindi it stands for "New Dynasty" and the reason he chose that name is because he is ushering in new life to a barren land to make a new superpower in the world. So, there was that whole factor going on.

More to the point, the Vandereich, while not entirely destroyed, had catastrophic damage dealt to its orders of operations. So much so that they'd more than likely be inoperational for quite some time to come according to KIn's expectations. Thus, their enemies would have been dealt with and that land theres.

Because, following that point, Kin went on to use his URE Sphere, Kuro Suso and the nanomachines of K-World in order to produce a continental wide barrier in order to lock out external forces from the development of his country.

Then, when you bounced back to the whole thing going on with Sing/Cero? That whole thing was an emotional mess with Cero and it was nice to see a kinder and gentler Sing comfort him in his moment of need. Even Kin, from that scene, decided to simply hold back his temper and let his daughter handle the situation. As, if nothing else, he does listen to her and felt it was a needed lesson for Cer to learn about how much this world could be improved upon.

Thus, from all of that, Sing decided to listen to his pleas of mercy, and for a good diplomatic showing, allot the remaining survivors a chance to either walk away from the organization, join up with their kingdom or follow Cero.

So, overall, this was a whole fuckplosion of things going on at once and I'm quite happy with how things turned out. I still need to keep up the GUTS posting and I'll see if I can crank out another post today to keep up with my two post quota for the second week of the 30 Day Challenge.

Let's do this shit!
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Thu Jan 29, 2015 4:30 pm

«12th POST OF THE CHALLENGE DONE»

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t12814p10-witch-s-revenge-open#84765

I meant to post this the other day, but time constraints and exhaustion set in. However, I broke 2,600+ words on it and it got me to a high place in my word count. So I was pretty amp'd for it while I was writing it.

The primary thing I liked about the post is the fact is that there were a few things going on with it at once. You had Shadin acknowledging Yuu's whole "Admiration", although he mostly just humored her in that aspect. Due to the fact he chemically castrated himself (granted, he can fix that), he just can't see the heart for any other woman after losing his wife.

Along with that, he gave her a lecture about referring to Arrancar as scum. As, while he isn't the biggest fan of them, it would be arrogant for them to declare all Arrancar as villians. And, for those who want to do "good"? He'd allow citizenship into Karakura. For those who want to cause trouble? He'd simply kill them and that would be that.

A somewhat stark change when compared with his "no hold bars" attitude towards them a few years ago. More signs that the value change from Australia in both his mind and powers were still having a profound change on his outlook.

He also cleaned up matters with a bit of friendly fire he did against an Arrancar, whom, was apart of the Vanguard. Paid off her medical bills, gave a treatment plan, invested a wealth of energy into her and gave her money to keep quiet about the affair. It was his mistake and he was willing to pay for it. A sign that while he has absurd speeds, these speeds can occasionally cause mistakes; showing the flaws in his transcended humanity

There was also a bit of tension between him and Hisao. The reason being? Shadin deduced that he was only there to cause a ruckus by the way he antagonized Yuu's ignorance. Therefore, he gave him a parting gift, since, after all, he was an affiliate of the Yayjuu by being apart of the Gotei 13. So, he gave him resources in the form of prime energy from the Yuudeshi Network and their nanomachines to develop something nice for the research department.

Then, once those gifts were given? He told him to hit the road!

Which brought us to the last scene: the terrorist Mari. It seemed, that most of all, more of his sensible morals started to come back. As he was able to conduct a supernatural drug in order to suppress the mental instability of Mari's body; while providing a metaphysical form of medicine to sooze her physical breakdown due to the adverse effects of him sealing her powers down.

And, despite threatening to kill her if she continued on with her dangerous acts, he remained true to his word in saying that he would spare if she compelled with his arrest. From there? He intends to rehabilitate her like those unstable Ziamichi youth whom were apart of The Yayjuu. A clear sign that Shadin has somewhat changed from his chaotic neutral stance he held a few years back. As, if this was Prime Yuudeshi Drive Shadin? He would have killed her outright with no remorse and considered it a means to further his power to protect Earth.

So, from all that, I feel Shadin is progressing pretty well along. There is still more, but the post covers that. I just need to keep cranking out these posts.

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