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Nize [APPROVED, 1-2]
Sat Jan 10, 2015 9:47 pm
• Name: Niza
• True Age: 100 years
• Appearance Age: 20
• Gender: Male
• Orientation: Shadow Fall
• Appearance: Nize is completely obsessed with the world of the living. When mastering his spirit control, he shaped his black/white spirit pressure into form of clothing he saw once visiting the place. Like his clothes, the arrancar is completely black and white. Skin, teeth and eyes are snow white, without even one spot of other color. In the same time his hair, pupils and nails are pitch black, but cut neatly. The creature has no irises and his blade is sheathed in black cloth and he haven't showed it to no one.
• Bone Appearance: Little, tiny broken horns, that can't be seen in his wild, messy hair.
• Hollow Hole: In his stomach.
• Reiatsu Colour: Black and white.
Personality: Curious, he will want to know everything about everyone. World of the living had interested him even when he was a hollow and this interest had grown, when he became a arrancar, because his hunger had been calmed down. Still, his home was and will be Hueco Mundo. He will love it and always keeps it close to his heart.
When he meets someone, first he will try to get along, be friendly, but this doesn't mean, that he will not protect himself, if it will be needed. Sometimes Nize can become distracted, if a particular thing catches his attention. Another side of his nature could be seen, when he is working at his lab. Being a semi-scientist, the male tries to invent different things, that would benefit his beloved Hueco Mundos future. About life he has weird seeing. The arrancar thinks that, if he had created the life, it means, that he has the rights to do it, what ever he wants. This quite often ends with different weird creatures been seen around Nizes glass tower. But even to his creations the man tries to be as nice, as possible.
Violence is something the arrancar hates. Even now in nights he sees the nightmares, where he killed and feasted on hollows, even, if he didn't wanted to. He could remember the dark, dominating voice taking over him, robbing from his free will. So, whenever it turns to violence, even then, Nize first tries to scare or injure his enemy...before killing it, if needed. Life is something in value, even in Hueco Mundo!
• History: Nize was Nize as long, as he can remember. Before he was only a part...Part of the Source. Source was a hollow, that created from gillians evolution going wrong. Somehow the beast, when becoming a adjucha, didn't get one dominant personality, but all those personalities in it went so berserk, that they turned into a unreasonable force, when reached Vasto Lordes level. The being ate...no, sucked hundreds of thousands of hollows in him, growing bigger and stronger. But then, when eating and devouring more and more, the huge monster just reached his limits one day. No one knows why, but the huge being started to separate. He split into chunks, that soon went lost into the dessert of Hueco Mundo. What happened to them, hard to say, but one was slowly eaten by a small dummy hollow. The effect was mind blowing, the little being turned into menos, that needed to be feared. That was the beginning of Nize.
He wasn't as rest of hollows. Hueco Mundo was his home and he didn't want to make anyones else life harder, then it was. But then an old, primitive voice started to speak with him. Whisper terrible things. To kill, to devour, to return the strength of The Source. And he did, he did it for a creature, that really existed in his head. And that hurt. The guilt and remorse grew day by day and he was close to trying taking his own life. And he tried. Nize tried to rip his mask, end this pain, end this servitude. But happened something completely different, he became a arrancar.
Later, in Hueco Mundo, he found, more to say, created, a place, to call home. A tower, made out of glass like material, where made his experiments and looked for ways, how to make the eternal dessert a better place for everyone. Of course, it wasn't easy. He needed to work hard, protect his home and the arrancar even thought, that it was hopeless some times. But now years had passed, he had grew in strength and it seemed, that the near future will be...livable. But now, suddenly, he again had started to hear it speak. The Source is speaking with him and it isn't good.
• Sealed Zanpakutô: Nizas Zanpakutō has a white hilt and a black holder. Half of the blade is black, while other half is white. Small white or black flames dances around the blade time to time and in a complete darkness it illuminates a small field around it.
• Racial Abilities:
- Bala (虚弾 (バラ), Bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") a technique of firing his hardened spiritual pressure against his enemies. Less powerful than a Cero, but it can be successively fired at 20 times the rate.
- Cero (虚閃 (セロ), Sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) a powerful spiritual light fired by Menos Grandes and Arrancar. For Nize, his cero looks like black and white flames, that much slower, in a speed of wild-fire, burns everything in its way, growing bigger, by eating reishi. In the process, the arrancar needs to be careful, because the flames can also burn him.
- Descorrer (解空(デスコレール), Desukorēru; Japanese for "Loosed Void", Spanish for "Drawing Back/Opening"): A technique used by Espada-level Arrancar and sometimes others, to open a Garganta between the living world and Hueco Mundo.
- Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), Garuganta; Spanish for "Throat", Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Hollows are able to move in and out from Hueco Mundo. It is a spiritual pathway connecting the Arrancar's world, Hueco Mundo, to other worlds. Besides the World of the Living and the Soul Society, it can also open the gates of the Dangai and K-World. A turbulence of Reishi blows within Garganta. To move through it, travellers must create footholds using the Reishi.
- Garganta Broadcast: a visual broadcast similar to a television screen, created by using individual Garganta portals. Ulquiorra Cifer does this in order to show the current predicament of Orihime Inoue's friends (Ichigo Kurosaki, Tōshirō Hitsugaya and Rangiku Matsumoto) fighting their respective battles.[6] It is unknown if he could create as many as desired, or if three broadcasts are his limit.
• Unique Abilities:
- Nize has a ability to absorb reishi around him in and use it to create items and beings. With a speed of few seconds, the arrancar can create simple objects and beings with almost no power. However, if he puts time and concentration in it, he can also, combining his knowledge of hollow and arrancar anatomy, create more complicated creatures, one tier lower then him. Also he need to remember to implant the needed knowledge for them, like loyalty and so on. The result will never be completely predictable. Of course, for that kind of feet, he also needs enough reishi to use.
The abilities strength had grow, after Nize realized, that he will definitely die, fighting Sunshine. Now the area, what he can manipulate is almost one kilometer in radius. Of course, the further the reishi is, the longer it takes for him to collect it. For example, when Sunshine sent the devastating attack to Nize, he was able to collect the reishi in 100 meter radius in matter of second, but, if he would want to collect something in the boundaries of this ability, it would take two minutes or even longer to do it. In this radius he can sense everything, as his perquisa would be advanced.
Nizes reishi manipulation ability had become in a level, when he can reach into the actual cores of reishi based creatures. Now his ability to create hollows had grew at the level, where the strongest he can create is of tier 2-1. Of course, like always, sufficient amount of reishi is always needed. Also Nize should be careful from his created being, because they now are independent enough to act on their own. - Núcleo profundo: This ability lets him to manipulate with his own zanpakutō, reforming it into different objects. His choose is a futuristic gun, that lets him shoot balas in speed, that matches the fastest machine guns(around 500-600 in a minute or 100-120 ceros at a minute). Although, if he goes out to that kind of speed, in next post the arrancar can't use his gun. The normal speed would be 200 balas a minute or 40 ceros.
Additional to already mentioned gun, now, as his body is the Hollow essence, Nize can create various guns and weapons as extensions of his own body. As few examples, there are these three weapons, additional to the gun already mentioned in app.
One is a cannon, as long, as his body and even wider, as it. Tho’, even knowing the size of it, Nize can easily carry it in one hand, only because the cannon itself is his arm. When formed, the male can shoot from it max. to 50 Ceros in strength of Grand Ray Cero, in one minute. Tho’, if used in that kind of amplitude, the next two posts Nize can't shoot Cero at all. So, he uses the weapon in 30 Cero in a minute, that way avoiding the drawback.
Second one is two mini guns (imagine those in the movie Predator), that are attached to his back and each follows one Reishi signature Nize appoints them on. The mini guns shoot Balas in size of a regular bullets, but having a almost unbeatable piercing damage, that can go through even master level defence with ease. The max speed is 600 bullets a minute, but then it is a posts cooldown, when Nize can't use them. So, the usual speed is 300 bullets a minute.
Third weapon is a sword, in which his left hand turns in. Being black, with a empty middle, the blade is quite wide. When activated, black Cero energy fills the empty space in the blade, sharpening the sword to the level of cutting diamonds, mountains and the strongest defences like butter. The secret behind that is how concentrated is the energy in the blade. - Pits of Inferno:
Dozens of black holes, gargantas, open in a radius of 70 feet around Niza. From them pillars of smelting hot black and white flames come out, burning almost anything, that goes in them. If someone manages to survive them and fell into the holes, they would see a monster, bigger then ten gillians, spitting the fire pillars from its countless mouths. It's a white mass, with dozens of tentacles. On some of them different masks were put on and it seemed, that those are the heads of the monster. But, if one of them are cut down, a new one appears in the place. - Monstrou:
Niza opens numerous small gargantas in the battle field. From them tentacles with different hollow masks come out and shoots marble ball size white and black balas. Upon connecting with something, these balas explode like actual cero would hit a target. In a same time he can keep open 10 gargantas. Cooldown 3 posts, after one of these heads had been cut down. - Renuir:
It's a passive ability. While in conscious, Niza absorbs all reishi around him to sustain his power level and heal him, if needed. It's useful in places, full with reishi, but also literately it eats the ground and buildings around him. - Mil Cero: The sky is filled with hundred dinner plate size gargantas. Then from every one of them a black cero piller shoots out, matching the strength of his own cero. This field of death lasts for 7 posts and can be used three times in a thread. The cooldown is 4 posts.
- Cinco Estrellas Cero: Opens five gargantas, from each of them a tentacle with a hollow mask merges. Five of them combine their cero type blasts together, forming a black ball, in size of a bulldozer ball. This ball, if hits the target, creates a blast in around 300 meters in radius and does damage of five Nizes ceros combined together. Cooldown 2 posts.
He can also use this energy in other way, making the ball form into a blade for his staff. The blade would last around 6 posts and could go through master hierro with ease. - Cero Artesanía: Nize can craft from his cero energy swords and shields in need. If a shield, it looks like his flame like energy hardens at the needed place and serves as a hierro at advanced level. If using as a weapon, he creates black flame like sword in his arm. It is more or less durable as a captains bankai. In a post he can switch from sword to shield five times and can never have both at the same time.
(Leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Advanced
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Advanced
- Mental Deduction: Advanced
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Adept
Racial Skills
- Perquisa: Beginner
- Sonido: Advanced
- Cero/Bala: Master
- Hierro: Adept
• RP Sample:
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A glass tower, that reached high in the sky, hiding its peak in artificial smoke, that came out from the place it self. Every arrancar and even few hollows could tell, that this place didn't have doors nor windows. The light of the eternal Hueco Mundos moon shined, making the glass illuminate a strange, white light. From time to time sounds of blasts or lighting could be heard coming from the palace all over the desert land. Sometimes strong spirit pressure could be felt again and again, at those times, when it seemed, that around the tower nothing existed. Also this was the source of rain clouds, that started to visit the dead land from time to time. And, like always, even today, Niza was working on his newest project. Well, he should be at least.
-Where are they!? Did you found it Bi?
The arrancar was calling to his minion, he had created few hours ago. The morning had started as always. Getting up, stretching, like he saw it in the "TV" and eating classic american family dinner, five eggs, two pieces of bacon and three toasts. Nothing seemed off and he even was glad, that he had some free time. Entering the main laboratory, Nize checked a few devices first, took some measurements, but froze, when reached a broken glass box. Yesterday it was covered with a sealing talismans and contained 26 of his experiments, the gappy spirits. If we are precise, they were 26 pregnant female gappy spirits, that were isolated from the rest of the pack for some observing. But it looked like something had gone wrong and there were none left.
-Ups...I guess...
After a half an hour a white/black figure could be seen running through the desert with a scaly wolf running along side him. It had a simple bone mask on its face, with a triangle mark on it. This was the symbol, how did the Nize marked his created beasts.
-Did you smell anything? They should be somewhere!
The arrancar sounded a bit nervous. The man didn't hide his spirit pressure, so no stupid hollows or rouge Arrancar would get in his way. Of course, there still were those, who were even stupider and a worm like hollow appeared from the ground to hunt down the wolf, that had ran a bit in front of his master. A precise bala went through him, setting the adjucha in black flames. The beast stopped for a moment and starred at his master in confusion.
-Move or I will replace you!
Knowing, that it could really happen, the animal kept running, sniffing the ground time to time. Then he froze, his ears turned to one side, nose to the other and then he ran, this time looking more sure of where he is going. Nize followed his creation, only to realize, that they had returned to his home.
-What?
Four hours later Nize had turned his glass tower completely around, searching for something, that would lead to where his experiments would be now. The time was of essence! Finally, when turning over a huge computer, he puffed, looking defeated.
-I don't get it! I can't sense those things and your nose isn't working anymore too Bi. Why is it like that? How something this simple, disappear without trace?
The created hollow turned his head in question, but started to crumble into dust, when Nize waved his hand in dismissive gesture. He stared few seconds in the glass wall, looking at the Las Noches and thinking, what could happen? Then it hit him and hit him hard. He knew, how to find them. A minute later the Arrancar face was even whiter(if it's possible) and he was chewing his nails.
-This...what now?
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Re: Nize [APPROVED, 1-2]
Sat Jan 10, 2015 10:16 pm
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- Willpower/Determination: n/a
- Mental Deduction: n/a
- Pain Endurance: n/a
- Focus: n/a
- Comments/Notes: First off, you'll need ten sentences in your personality.
Second, what in the world is going on with your history? I can't allow the source to have consumed that many Vasto Lordes because they are a breed of Hollow/Arrancar that are sparingly allowed on the site. It usually takes a lot of work, app wise, to really get one off the bat; much less four. So you are going to have to rewrite that part of your history indefinitely or remove it.
Vasto Lorde: Concerning these characters, there are a rare amount of them and it requires some sort of admin permission in order to create one. Therefore, don't think about them often.
I'd also probably adjust the eating of millions to the eating of hundreds of thousands for The Source. As for the Aizen interaction? That will also need to be edited out because of the fact this interaction seems sketchy at best.
Dealing With Canon and OC in history: If someone has the canon character in question, contact them. If someone does not, contact an admin. The same goes for OCs. The owner of the canon or OC must post in the application giving their expressed written consent.
Everything else looks fine, however.Fix those few things and I'll approve it. - Tier: N/A
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Re: Nize [APPROVED, 1-2]
Sat Jan 10, 2015 11:30 pm
Done!
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- Willpower/Determination: Adept
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- Pain Endurance: Adept
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- Comments/Notes: Alright, seeing how we worked the details of this character over a series of PM's, I'll go ahead and approve it.
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Re: Nize [APPROVED, 1-2]
Wed Jan 21, 2015 9:51 am
Ok, upgrade!
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