Sugar Plum Freeze

Sun Nov 09, 2014 2:21 pm

Name Of Character: Hayato Nishi
Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11436-hayato-nishi-approved-3-4
Reasons For Upgrading: In a recent battle with Yuu Hayato awakened the power of a powerful artifact with his strong will to not fall in the batte, it wasnt his time. This awakened in him latent spiritual powers that can be accessed when he transforms into an alternate form. This sudden burst of power almost killed Yuu, but with his new powers he filled her with energy to keep her from dyeing.

What Are You Upgrading:
This upgrade allows him to enter an alternate form where he controls ice.

Form Name: Sugar Plum Freeze
Appearance: he wears a small blue crown, a white long sleeved shirt with the word "Freeze" written in a icy blue graffiti font. He was wearing white pants with blue flames imprinted on them and to finish it all off some ice blue sneakers.

Weapon: Around his waist he has a belt made out of sharp snowflakes that he can use as a whip.

Abilities: In this form Hayato has access to his spiritual energy and allows him to use the following abilities.

Ice Affinity: All his attacks now are ice element.

Frozen Will: An ice cold will that can freeze all shred of doubt that life brings. The ice from these attacks does more damage to living creatures. The cold deals 1.5x damage to things that are classified as alive in this case being humans, demons and iramasha, while things that are classified as non-living take .5x damage that is shinigami, hollows and vizards.

Frozen Stage: The area around Hayato becomes a frozen arena where his powers can come into full effect. this forms a sphere around Hayato that has a radius of 25 feet. When this first forms everything inside the area is coated in a sheet of ice 1 centimeter thick. It does not follow Hayato after it has been created

Within this area Hayato can create ice from the air and control it within the area. The ice can leave the area but it melts after it has been outside for one post.

Blizzard en tournant: This ability has a dual purpose. While inside Frozen Stage it creates a raging blizzard inside the area that decreases visibility to almost zero and freezes those inside of it. When used outside of the area it resets Frozen stage to Hayato's current location while melting the other.

Arabesque Shower: This is the strongest ability this form has. It can be used one of two ways once per thread. The first one is to use it as a damage dealing attack.. This creates 1 foot wide snowflakes that fall from the sky and cause small explosions of ice when they hit something. They fall on a 100 foot radius but wind can cause them to move. The second from of this ability is a large snowflake filled with spirit energy that falls onto one creature and can heal them by 25%. Both of these take one post to cast.
Any Extra Notes: (Anything else you want to add?)

Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:19 pm

«CHECKING THIS THREAD RIGHT NOW»

Okay, lets go through this check m8. I'm assuming that this thing is finished because there isn't a WIP in the title. If this is still a work in progress, then it will serve as a lesson to properly tag your threads and make sure you produce posts in your threads when a power upgrade is finished.

Frozen Will: An ice cold will that can freeze all shred of doubt that life brings. The ice from these attacks does more damage to living creatures.

What...? You'll need to go into more detail about this ability. I don't even know what that means. Describe the ability, its purposes and how it affects the character. That makes no sense to me and I will ask that it be fixed or removed.

Other than that, I don't see anything else that is really off with this upgrade. So tell me when you fix that and I'll approve it I guess.

Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:31 am

I guess I was a but too cryptic with that one. Basically the cold deals 1.5x damage to things that are classified as alive in this case being humans, demons and iramasha, while things that are classified as non-living take .5x damage that is shinigami, hollows and vizards.

Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:47 pm

Viz wrote:I guess I was a but too cryptic with that one. Basically the cold deals 1.5x damage to things that are classified as alive in this case being humans, demons and iramasha, while things that are classified as non-living take .5x damage that is shinigami, hollows and vizards.

Then please add that into the upgrade application with sufficient detail so people aren't too vague on what it does.

Sat Feb 28, 2015 10:09 am

«OVERVIEWING THIS STUFF RIGHT HERE»

Alright, I recently got a message from Viz saying that he added in my changes. Therefore, I'll go ahead and approve the power upgrades. Next time, make an update post saying you've finished it or post it in my communication thread. This way? You won't have waited as long as you did for me to give this final clearing. Also, go ahead and make an update post in the app linking this power upgrade to it.

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