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These are interesting powers, but god damn they are hard to read, so check the vernacular again please, but they seem pretty interesting to me.


DE Class: 1st Class

I'm not too sure if he's ready for this JUST yet, but I'm going to talk to the admins about this. Personally I think he's really good at DE, but not top 1% as a Fist Class DE user like Hayuko or Mana would be like. I think 2nd Class would be best for him personally.

DE Powers: Breakdown: Damien's breakdown works differently because the mad demon and manipulate reishi particles to his advantage. The demon uses his breakdown ability to reform and create air molecules and transforming them into pure reishi which the demon warrior infuses the reishi combining with his own power. The demon warrior will start burning with a blue aura. When Damien infuses his power into his hands the demon warrior can become a total powerhouse with one or many punches/kicks. The demon warrior can weaken or even kill the strongest barrier. Also, Damien is able to breakdown attacks by using some called "True Erase" in which the demon warrior stares at an attack, barriers, seals, charms, weapons and it starts to break down or tear apart.

What is True Erase, and what does it do. You need to explain that, because Vaguely Explained moves. and how does him staring at it break it down. Does his eyes activate the ability or what, make a new paragraph and explain it in full please.

Semi-Immortal: Damien didn't fully understand what it means to be immortal the fear of living forever and outliving family members and friends. However, The demon was given the gift of semi immortality through his own death energy. Because of this, He can remain the same without the worry of watching his body aging or growing white hair. Damien has been given three gifts from this semi immortality which the mad demon use to his advantage in great battle. The demon had found out he doesn't have to breath anymore in harmful/deadly environments which his body lacks anything expect his blood. Whenever the demon is in DE Merge or Berserk sate, Damien can heal a extremely fast but their a downside to this. The fast healing is very painful which the demon's blood restructures the damaged to lost parts hurting the demon sending pain to his body.

How fast is the healing and how does the healing work with his blood.? Also, why is it painful to him? I mean if healing is painful why would he use it for? That's something that should be explained, I mean I want him to be able to self heal so why is it painful?

DE Barrier: DE Barrier: Damien's DE Barrier works kind of different it acts like a second layer of skin which actually combines with any defensive power the demon warrior has. The second skin acts like an invisible armor improving the demon warrior's chances in a fight which has turned sour for him. The skin holds a support power as well that does nothing until you make contact with another power. When coming into contact with someone, it gives grants you a highly advanced decaying ability that is seen to phase through one or two layers of defense at a time. If Damien is attacked and enemy the power would actually or maybe overwhelm the enemy's defenses or put them out of commission. Lastly, judging by tier, if the person is more powerful then you, chances are you'll only just end up somewhat weakening their defense. If they are equal in tier level, then you'll most likely be able to cause up to eighty percent weakening of it.

I don't get what you mean by 80% weakning of it, do you mean they can only weaken it around 80% normally or what?



DE Merge Powers: White DE Mecha Armor: The DE Barrier was able to create some of the demon features of the original mecha demon armor; Kade once had as a noble demon life that he once lived. The white armor actually combines with his defensive ability or powers making them stronger allowing him to become more resistant to attack. The white armor holds a support power as well that does nothing until you make contact with another power. When coming into contact with someone, it gives grants you a highly advanced decaying ability that is seen to phase through one or two layers of defense at a time. If he's attacked and enemy the power would actually or maybe overwhelm the enemy's defenses or put them out of commission. Unlike DE Barrier, The white armor does have a time limit which more works with his level. If Damien was an the advanced level of his barrier then the armor can lasts for 6 posts. If he becomes at master with his DE Barrier powers then the armor can last for the the 8 posts completely.

Uhm I guess, but does the contact have to be solid as in a solid hit or is it like he grazes you and you get hurt. Also the wording is a bit confusing so can you rewrite that a bit please, I want to be fair so I would like it to be less confuzzling.

Vol-Shield Breakdown: A new form of breaking down of attacks. Damien's Vol-Shield Breakdown works differently because the mad demon can manipulate both reishi particles and chaos energy to his advantage. The demon uses his breakdown ability to reform and create air molecules and transforming them into pure reishi which the mad demon infuses the reishi combining with his own power. The demon's body starts absorbing particles of the fallen noble demon that still lingers within him combining both reishi and chaos energy. The demon warrior will start burning with dark green aura. When Damien infuses his power into his hands the demon can become a super demon with one or many punches/kicks. The demon can weaken or even kill the strongest barrier. Also, Damien is able to breakdown attacks by using some called "Dark Break" in which the demon warrior stares at an attack, barriers, seals, charms, curses and weapons then it starts to break down or tear apart.

Same comments with the True Erase naming you need to fully explain it, and not just throw its name down please. If you are going to name something you need to make it separate and explain it.

Unlike his DE Merge, Damien on his berserk state has taken the penultimate embodiment of an true mecha demon-angel warrior. Almost cover white armor mecha body. His wings are gone and replaced with some energy rockets which are for enhanced flying, hovering even gliding. An super armored power up version of DE Merge. His ears are replaced for mecha antennas used for augmented sight or hearing purposes. This form his weight is increased to 87kg and his height is also increased to 2.38m(7.4 feet). Because of his demon heritage his eyes are dark green within any pupils like robots & cyborgs would have.

This is fine, well it seems fine.

Berserk Enhancements: 100% Spiritual Energy & Unbelievable Strength: The penultimate embodiment of a true berserk demon warrior; Damien's Berserk state is the evolution of the mecha demon taking it super power. In this berserk state, Damien's spiritual pressure is unbelievably high the energy levels itself can drive him to go truly berserk on a person using his power to destroy enemies. The strength of the demon warrior is the same of ungodly powerhouse demon something he couldn't reach with his previous transformations. Damien is able to greatly overpower/withstand an person's stronger attacks maybe even powerful one with his big hand or one punch yet it hurts when does but thanks to DE, it doesn't hurt as long.

How does his DE makes his punches not hurt him as bad say if he normally punches you without DE and normal energy? This seems okay, but how much energy is needed to punch through barriers and things like that.

100% Pure Mecha Speed & Flying: Damien has relentless demon speed of a true speed demon. From hard training, Damien's fast speed is greatly above a normal demon or a powerful demon. His fast speed is used mostly for rushing up to an opponent, attacking at a fast berserk-like speed or trying to counter attack when the opponent is too close. The shocking part of this ability, Damien can actually gain the upper hand maintain a fast speed against any enemies that poses a threat to him. He can match or overpower a powerful captain's shunpo, powerful espada's sonido speed or a powerful speedster. Because of his berserker state, Damien can fly with his self propelled flight because of the booster jets on his backside. Because of the booster jets; Damien can do different things like flying like glide or levitate up in the air. It has one drawback if one of the booster jets are damaged then the demon won't be able fly at all because they're fragile. With his booster jets, Damien with his new power can travel anywhere he wants to.

Uhm...I'm not even sure how to begin with this. The wording is confusing so, is it his Jets on his back making him faster or his he naturally faster when he's in the state or is it a combination of both? This ability is quite the puzzler to me.

VolTekka Powers and Abilities: The acceptance of power; Damien Zarathos has been given unique ability from his berserk state which is a burning green dark fire class power. He can create even augment attacks with burning dark fire energy giving much more deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after green enhancements by his demonic powers and finally finding ways harness the Death energy. Damien can mostly control this dark green flame power creating attacks and defenses from her powers, creating weapons, attacks and defenses with her burning dark green flame powers. When using dark green flame power, Damien's arms can transform taking on a different characteristic when using dark weapons or dark green fire attacks which she can use 8 times. For crafting weapons, Damien can make flame swords, flame spear-like weapons, daggers which can be 7-8 inches which can give a burning sensation when used against enemies. Also Damien's burning dark green fire attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Damien's defensive powers can be weaken if his burning dark green flame weapons are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by his opponents depending on their attack strength.

This does seem okay. Will re-read more than likely.

Vol-Tekka Attacks
Voltekka Bolt This is his signature attack. When his demon eyes starting to flash just once. This activates the shoulder cannons on his shoulders which they unlock revealing an energy cannon on each shoulder they start gathering both air and energy powering up the energy cannon. Damien yells "Voltekka". The energy cannons are fired which dish out medium or major damage upon an enemy

Seems okay I don't think this is bad. I mean what's medium to heavy damage on an enemy mean in terms of PH, like if they don't block properly they'd blow a limb off or what?
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Triple Voltekka Bolt: An super version to voltekka bolt. Damien starts yelling and the energy cannons in his shoulders and arms are activated. They all start drawing energy into them powering up the cannons formed four air black balls started to form one black air ball. Then suddenly super nova starts and energy starts forming within him then Damien starts yelling. Damien gets into a stance jumping into air unleashing a giant massive energy spear beam. Once this thing hits is leaves an giant tri-explosion which destroys anything in it path. An enemy must an very fast speed to dodge it if blocked the the attack will dish out immense damage.

Move at a very fast speed* Wait how is making a Super Nova, because Super nova and bolts of energy are two different things bro, is his "bolts" really compacted nova like explosions? Explain please.

Ultimate Quad Voltekka Bolt: A stronger version to the Triple Voltekka Bolt. The only way he can use the attack is if this was his last resort or enemy forces have defeated all his comrades. Damien can only use this once if used a second time he'll start gaining memory loss and extreme fatigue to his body. He starts the attack like a regular Triple Voltekka stance. But suddenly his leg shoulder cannons are activated forming six air bubbles and demonic energy bombs. They all form into one giant energy bomb which he starts yelling turning the giant and massive bomb into a huge energy demonic blast wave. This attack is meant to hurt an enemy. If enemy blocks this attack then something body parts/organs will be blown the heck off of burn oblivion style.

Uhm.. No, They have to be able to guard against this without having their limbs blown off, and I'm assuming that person if fast enough can dodge this or has enough magic skill can do something to counter this also. I mean if they make a strong enough barrier they shouldn't have to worry about their limbs getting blown off, unless it's completely direct strike with no barriers and their pants are around their knees.


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Kakeru
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Wed Jul 16, 2014 6:40 am
This seems good, Let's give it a spin.~

Approved. Please don't abuse your powers.~


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