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Re: Eric's Forbidden Powers
Fri May 23, 2014 6:52 pm
Alright I want to check this but before I do need some questions answered and this will go pretty quickly.
Do you have some other documentation of Joshua Iramasha like a profile, or something, because then we have something to go off of, and this will make it faster, because while I think A demon could pull from Demon Iramasha's I'm not too sure how Eric is pulling from his former incantation you really didn't specify in your profile so... I want to tighten those loose ends up. So once you answer this then we can get this check through and on your way. I just want some way to document this because I don't want this to become an abuse of past giving more powers than necessary etc.
So let's do this.
Do you have some other documentation of Joshua Iramasha like a profile, or something, because then we have something to go off of, and this will make it faster, because while I think A demon could pull from Demon Iramasha's I'm not too sure how Eric is pulling from his former incantation you really didn't specify in your profile so... I want to tighten those loose ends up. So once you answer this then we can get this check through and on your way. I just want some way to document this because I don't want this to become an abuse of past giving more powers than necessary etc.
So let's do this.
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Re: Eric's Forbidden Powers
Sun May 25, 2014 3:36 pm
Okay, minus spelling errors this gives.. me really nothing to go off of, but I can gather what his power is supposed to be. My Question is does Eric Zanthos have Alex Vergas absorbed into him or absorbed his powers, otherwise I'll want to nerf your powers a bit before I can say okay to a Seshin Buki of this caliber. The history seems okay, I'm going to re-read after you reply. Thank you and sorry this is taking a bit.
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Re: Eric's Forbidden Powers
Tue May 27, 2014 4:50 pm
I will be placing notes in between each section as comments and things to change.
I know i missed stuff, but there's a lot of fixes needed, and I'm still confused greatly on what the main purpose of this is, when this seems like you should of just made this a separate app, I like the concept and find it nifty but it needs some work.~ Uhm.. any questions?
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Seishin Buki Name: Shadow Crissaegrim
Seishin Buki Appearance: Shadow Crissaegrim is almost the same shape of the original vampire killer sword known as Vulgrim. Joshua recreated it the volcanoes of the demon world to recreate the sharp and pure metal which perfected the sword's strength and sharpness in battle. This seshin sword features a hand-hollowground, hand-finished blade. This sword is an exact recreating of the legendary vampire sword but with one important difference, instead of being made of 440 stainless steel, it is made of shadow pure adamantium steel and heat treated to a tough 56 HRC and fully sharpened, making it a fully functional weapon. The shadow seishin buki sword is painstakingly re-created, with solid bronze fittings cast from the original molds. The grip has a core of stabilized birch and is wrapped in leather to match the original vampyre sword. Runic inscriptions are deeply etched into both sides of each blade, exactly as on the original sword. Joshua did years of research upon his shadow powers to make this seishin buki into a high quality battle-harden sword.
This is fine.
Seishin Buki Abilities: Enhanced Shadow Flame Strength: When holding his Seishn Buki, Joshua's muscle mass enhances the shadow flame actually infuse with the dark iramasha's body actually improving it for battle. His physical strength is also enhanced while using his seishin buki sword. Joshua been known to stop or break medium or some strong attacks and most kidō abilities with a swing of his seishin sword. Joshua maybe able to destroy stronger attacks but they can hurt him or explode right depending on the enemy's strength. Powerful ones like from a shinigami's captain and other powerful ones are hard to block it can have a nasty reaction if they explode.
Uhm how much is his strength increased by? That is vague.
Your second clause is okay I think,but I will re-read it.
Enhanced Shadow Flame Durability: An unique ability when the blade glows burning black as shadow energy is formed give it more shadow dark flame power for many different attacks for the sword. Yet it also used to give it defense against the natural enemies of shadow fire which is light/angelic. But too many angelic/light attacks can weaken the attack power of the seishin buki.
How many is too many Angelic/Holy/Light attacks.
Shadow Enkou Tensho(Shadow Flame Piercer): The shadow version of the Getsuga Tensho; At the instant of the slash, Joshua's Seishin buki absorbing the shadow energy pressure, releases the highly condensed shadow energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or the shape of a black wave. The Shadow Enkou Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, capable of creating large-scale damage and destruction. The power of the Shadow Enkou Tensho is 20% stronger the Getsuga Tensho. Joshua has used this technique in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.
This is really vague in terms of how it works, omnidirectional? just use all directions, and I would like a limit on range at the least. Since you're comparing Getsuga Tensho which version are you comparing to? Bankai or Shikai this is important.
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Powers: True Shadow Manipulation: Because Joshua Iramasha is the one and true forbidden Iramasha the child the darkness had complete control of the shadows themselves using their power to survive. The dark one has been given unique ability from his shadow powers which he can enhance even augment attacks with shadow energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. Joshua can mostly control this great shadow power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from his powers for iramasha attacks and defenses with his controlled shadow or shadow flame powers. He can also teleport with this power combining both shadows and shadow flame power creating a black portal and leave into another dimension/place of her choosing when creating the portal. The shadow iramasha can create wings for himself giving him the ability to fly but his black wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some shadow healing which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. When using the shadow flame power, Joshua can fire black energy weapons or complete shadow energy blasts/beams firing at twice of normal speed of an iramasha technique. For defenses, Joshua can create an shadow black flame shield or an energy blockade barrier from his power. Also Joshua's controlled shadow flame attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Joshua's defensive powers can be weaken if his controlled black shadow flame defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength.
Please fix gender issues I know that he's a guy but you have him as a girl in a section bro.
Unbelievable Strength: Joshua's physical strength is really unbelievable of such a very high level that even his simplest actions cause destruction and damage in his regular form. Much stronger attacks might hurt him but they wouldn't have power of defeating him, Joshua can actually block attacks depending on their strength. He's able to greatly overpower/withstand an person's bankai with his big hand or one punch yet it hurts when does but thanks to new superb strength it doesn't hurt as long. Even with his shadow's strength, Joshua can actually punch a large espada hard in the face. With maximum force behind it, he's able to break through the walls to destroy buildings and structures.
There's so much wrong with this, how can he just deal a Bankai, a bankai isn't something that's negligable bro, how is he doing this with RAW physical strength. What if it's not touchable? How is he able to deal with it? Because This needs to be re explained.
Augmented Endurance: Even through his strength is very strong his endurance levels are stronger as well yet he shown to have some battle scars and wounds so it isn't that invincible yet. Throughout the battlefield, Joshua has shown to have high levels of resistant of damage when fighting due to the fact. He used both willpower and skill in a fight. The shadow iramasha can be killed by too many fucking attacks from an powerful enemy.
Untasteful swearing is untasteful. Digressing, past tense isnt a good foreshadowing, so fix that Used = Uses. Uhm.. i guess this is okay, but I want someone to read this again. ANd Resistant to Resistance. Also what kinds of damage Physical Magical? Spiritual, Psychological?
Chaos Moves: Chaos Impact: Chaos Impact is a rather simple move Iramasha can use if they need more physical output for their punches or kicks. By summoning just a small amount of their Inner Chaos Energy, they can use that force in order to make most of their physical blows two times stronger then normally depending on how much Chaos Energy is infused with the blow they are trying to make. More skilled Iramasha can even make use of the chaos particles in the air in order to combine inner and outer Chaos Energy to make a more effective punch that can even make their hits four times stronger then usual. Therefore, even on the most basic level, Chaos Impact is a rather deadly technique if it is used in rapid succession for those who have a good mastery over Inner and Outer Chaos Energy. It is recommended for those who wish to use for prolonged periods to have a large base of Inner Chaos Energy or have knowledge on how to control the flow of Outer Chaos Energy as this can tire a person out if they intend to spam this technique.
Chaos Burst: Chaos Burst is essentially a fighting style that increases the speed of a users punches or kick's in order to create devastating blows to anything that they happen to hit. By summoning a decent amount of Inner or Outer Chaos Energy, an Iramasha can make use of Chaos Burst in order to make each of their hits have an immense amount of swiftness and impact force that it can blow through an Arrancar's Hierro, shatter barrier's in stronger opponents or even outright blow through someone's defenses if they aren't on guard when this attack is occurring. Potentially, this technique can even be used to fight on par with both speed and physical based opponents as they are essentially getting the benefits of speed, with the devastating force of a physical user in one sharp blow. This can be used as often as an Iramasha wishes, though they should keep note of how much energy they drain from using this much like Chaos Impact and other similar techniques.
Chaos Warp: When this technique is activated it allows the user to teleport from short range distances at first, then when they become more master this move more they able to use to technique to teleport from long range distances along with being able to warp anywhere as long they can sense someones spiritual pressure or reiatsu. When they become more powerful they sometimes able to slow down within a limited range and gain the upper hand on their opponents. Advanced and master's can also teleport through dimension's and create pathway's to other world's. Adept can do it, but it takes much longer and drains them. However, Chaos Warp is not just limited to that. It can also be used for teleporting things and other beings. It starts by firing a burst of Chaos Energy from either your finger tips, palm's or anywhere else you can think of in your body. Then you can create it in any shape or form you want and try to have it attach itself to the thing you want to teleport. For objects, it's almost instant to teleport. However, to move massive land masses and things along those lines it would take a bit more time
Chaos Blast: This is the Iramasha's own version of the cero. It is a blast of either angel, demon or both (when used by hybrids) that is gathered from inside of their body and shot out in a massive wave or sphere. When used in a wave, it's faster, but not as strong. When used as a sphere, it is much stronger, but slower. Another thing to note is that when a Angel Iramasha uses Chaos Blast the blast is typically white or blue, while when a demon fires it the blast is typically black or bright red. If your a hybrid, it's both. However, some Iramasha's have customized their own Chaos Blast's to fit their needs.
Chaos Barrier: Chaos Barrier is a move you perform by summoning up Chaos Energy, placing a wall or sphere of energy around your body and sealing yourself inside your own world for up to three post. Nothing can get in OR out of this world. Which means you cannot attack while within it, nor can you be attacked. Also, if you stay in here for too long and you are not a master or Advanced you will eventually begin to erase yourself. Master's and Advanced can to, but this usually happens after five post after the recommended three post length. Also, after the recommended three post length, it can also be damaged by other attack's and eventually bought down.
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Hybrid Stage(The Shadow Weaver) Form Appearance- Spoiler:
Hybrid Stage(The Shadow Weaver) Form Abilities: Augmented Shadow Strength: He has the shadow weaver's strength of an hybrid shadow fighter and perhaps a demon shadow warrior. Fighting against stronger enemies and testing his limits every time on the battlefield hoping to grow to be an a great shadow hybrid. Joshua had trained constantly to keep his deadly strength to an unbelievable level the only thing that he thinks about while training is getting revenge. The shadow weaver can break bones one three or four hard punches . He's capable of lifting a gigantic boulder in mere minutes. He able to do a number of things which a normal shadow iramasha wouldn't do.
Augmented Speed/Shadow Reflexes: Joshua's speed and reflexes have been augmented to the point where his speed is better. Yet his agility and reflexes to dodge some oncoming attacks that have do him damage. Joshua is shown to used his quick speeds along with his reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. Joshua has become a little fast enough to outrun his own energy attacks, allowing him to strike and enhance them or launch simultaneous attacks. Joshua can keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed, iramasha's spped or arrancar's sonido speed yet the mad one gets a doubles increase in speed within this state. He can actually match a vice captain's shunpo or arrancar ressurrecion's soindo speed, depending on the enemy's speed.
...wait how is he fast enough to outrun his own attack, but yet can kinda match shunpo? Is his attacks super slow, I don't get this upgrade at all honestly.
Shadow Weaver Senses: The Senses of six animals (tiger, lion, dog, hawk, wolf, & bear) are embedded within the Iramasha's mind. The combined senses five the demon an dark keen ability to sense and point an enemy movements. Utilizing the characteristics of the animals, Shadow weaver has the senses of an enemy or enemies. Also detecting what kind of speed their using. After taking the Shadow weaver state, Joshua's sensing powers have been enhanced so the demon can sense spiritual pressure like a normal captain shinigami, strong quincy or a strong espada. To mainly detect people or see how powerful the bastard or people are.
Again the language is a bit unnecessary, but uhm explain how EACH Animal improves what sense, and I would like that he has to shift between the animals not have all of them at once, and every time he shifts he can't shift for two turns to allow him to acclimate to the new sense.
Shadow High Jumping: The Shadow Weaver is a great jumper with great skills almost to an humans acrobat. Joshua can leap or jump to close or far. To do so a dark energy plate from his black shadow energy is placed under his feet and then the shadow warrior jump a far distance then before whenever it to attack or get out of the way.
..This is kinda unnecessary, this would fall under speed/agility/reflexes.
Shadow Hand to Hand Combatant: While not showing any technical of formal skill in hand-to-hand combat, Joshua relies entirely on a brawler style of fighting. Whether he possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his Zanpakutō in combat while in this form. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent. Joshua is able to fight barehanded, using swift movements to land blows or claws clashes on his opponents before they can even react.
You mean Seishin Buki @ Zanpakutō. This seems okay.
Shadow Weaver Claws: Joshua has shadow metal-like claws on his hand which can be used for slashing, cutting rocks, cutting metal and gutting people when he gets angry, attacking, defensive or wanting to kill something. He can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around. Stronger enemies may feel 59% of the attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defenses. Joshua can use his zoa power or affinity of hell to empower his claws with energy to do certain energy slashing attacks as well.
I still don't like the forced damage, they would feel it if they couldn't put an adequate barrier or you broke it, so forcing damage is a no no.
Shadow Telepathy Powers: Because of his shadow weaver power, Joshua has very strong telekinetic powers to moving objects from one place to another without using physical contact. Which means he could stop an Kidō attack and send it off to another direction or back to the enemy. Also having the ability to talk in people's minds when important information or tricking a person comes to pass. Joshua is able to stop an stronger shikai attack but bankai takes a lot of mind control to stop it can blow up in his face if not careful. Joshua can only his telekinetic powers only about eight times because to large drain of powers it does to his shadow spiritual power and his mind.
How is he capable of this, like what stats are used to counter it, and how would his telepathy be strong enough to do this? Shadow or not, this is still basic telepathy and something that Eric is...not known for.
Pure Shadow Manipulation: Because Joshua Iramasha is the one and true forbidden Iramasha the child the darkness had complete control of the shadows themselves using their power to survive. The dark one has been given unique ability from his shadow powers which he can enhance even augment attacks with shadow energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. Joshua can mostly control this great shadow power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from his powers for iramasha attacks and defenses with his controlled shadow or shadow flame powers. He can also teleport with this power combining both shadows and shadow flame power creating a black portal and leave into another dimension/place of her choosing when creating the portal. The shadow iramasha can create wings for himself giving him the ability to fly but his black wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some shadow healing which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. When using the shadow flame power, Joshua can fire black energy weapons or complete shadow energy blasts/beams firing at twice of normal speed of an iramasha technique. For defenses, Joshua can create an shadow black flame shield or an energy blockade barrier from his power. Also Joshua's controlled shadow flame attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Joshua's defensive powers can be weaken if his controlled black shadow flame defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by hisopponents depending on their attack strength.
Is Eric/Joshua Transgendered? I'm being serious keep seeing her in your descriptions. This seems okay,but I'm going to have a second check.
True Shadow Iramasha Form Appearance- Spoiler:
The true form of Joshua Iramasha of what the forbidden iramasha would look like if his clan didn't do what they did and killed him. He has something of an royal attire to remember what could have been the shadow iramasha wears something of an shadow royal attire. True Joshua is a short male shadow iramasha with back eyes and chin-length spiky mess black hair, with some white bangs framing the side of his face.
True Shadow Iramasha Form Abilities: Immense Shadow Spiritual Pressure: He doesn't even know his full deadly power just yet after his mind lock away with Eric Zarathos the Mad One. After Joshua's death, The forbidden iramasha's powers diminish over time to the point of where he never knew his spiritual pressure was dormant inside of Eric Zarathos. After some battles, Some of Joshua's shadow energies started to awaken thus they continue to grow making his shadow energy stronger. After his release, Joshua's spiritual pressure shot up like a gigantic super waterfall. Being a powerful Iramasha member, Joshua has an grand high amount of spiritual pressure. From the long trainings, Joshua learned how control & restraints giving his opponents a fighting chance. When he shifts to different then his power will decrease rapidly. But when he unleashes it his enemy will known why he called the Forbidden Iramasha.
Strong Shadow Iramasha Strength: The strength of an True Shadow Iramasha; this also the unknown level of the shadow one. Joshua's physical strength is really shocking and superior fierce of such an unbelievable great level that even his actions cause great destruction and deadlier damage. Very stronger/powerful attacks might hurt him but they wouldn't have power of defeating him, Joshua can actually block attacks depending on their shadow strength. He's able to overpower an person's bankai and other powerful & stronger attacks with his one punch/hand slap yet it hurts when does but thanks to his ultimate shadow strength. With mad brute force behind it, he's able to break or destroy through the walls to destroy buildings and structures with his true shadow rage.
In the words of the famous Grump Arin Hanson, it just wouldn't... work like that. There has to be a way to kill/destroy/beat/knock unconscious. You can't just say oh I'm so physically powerful I can ignore shit, like You're some League Champion with Undying Rage, there has to be a limit to thi.
Strong Shadow Iramasha Speed/Dark Reflexes: Joshua's speed and reflexes have been greatly augmented to the point where the shadow iramasha can move faster. Yet his agility and reflexes to dodge oncoming attacks that have do him harm. Joshua is shown to used his quick speeds along with his reflexes to gain the upper hand on a enemy or find ways to outsmart their combat strategy. Joshua has become fast enough to outrun his own energy attacks, allowing him to strike and enhance them or launch simultaneous attacks. Joshua can keep up with a shinigami's shunpo speed, iramasha's spped or arrancar's sonido speed yet the mad one gets a quadruple increase in speed within this state. He can actually match a captain's shunpo or espada's soindo speed, vizard's speed or ziamichi's speed depending on the enemy's speed.
until the previous one is fixed I want to wait on fixing this.
Shadow Sensing: Joshua could only sense spiritual pressure when the forbidden iramasha started out as a shadow spirit inside a demon. Which his shadow power alerted him if the bastard or person was strong or a threat was coming. After taking a full iramasha true state, Joshua's sensing powers have been enhanced so the forbidden iramasha can sense spiritual pressure like a normal captain shinigami, strong quincy or a strong espada. To mainly detect people or see how powerful the bastard or people are.
You should be able to notice naturally, unless you're trying to say that he can check stealthed then you need a clause of where a person can resist being detected.
Perfected Dark Shadow Manipulation: The dark one has been given unique ability from his shadow powers which he can enhance even augment attacks with shadow energy giving much more powerful & deadly effect. Initially this was uncontrollable, but after enhancing it by some training. Joshua can mostly control this great shadow power creating powerful attacks and powerful defenses from his powers for iramasha attacks and defenses with his controlled shadow or shadow flame powers. He can also teleport with this power combining both shadows and shadow flame power creating a black portal and leave into another dimension/place of her choosing when creating the portal. The shadow iramasha can create wings for himself giving him the ability to fly but his black wings can be damaged quite easily from other energy and elemental attacks. This can be also used some shadow healing which can be combined with other power for much of an greater healing effect that can heal faster then regular healing powers. When using the shadow flame power, Joshua can fire black energy weapons or complete shadow energy blasts/beams firing at twice of normal speed of an iramasha technique. For defenses, Joshua can create an shadow black flame shield or an energy blockade barrier from his power. Also Joshua's controlled shadow flame attacks can be defeated or counter by a stronger defense or strong energy barrier depending on the strength and defensive power of that enemy. However, Joshua's defensive powers can be weaken if his controlled black shadow flame defenses are damaged by other stronger elemental attacks by her opponents depending on their attack strength.
Shadow Claw Black Gauntlets: The Claw Black Gauntlets are an augmentation of Shadow Fist technique which the iramasha used for bashing enemy's skulls in. Backs of hands made of 10 oz leather, fingers made of 6 oz. No glove here, made entirely of hand tooled leather. All fingers fully articulated and easy to move in. Lots of rivets in this one, but I tried to conceal them. Wrist and back of hand articulated also with scale tooling. Fingers tooled with smaller scales. From its ashes new structures always arose, ever taller than the ones before and, from the burning fires, a blinding shadow flame. In its burning heat the Chaos Claws were forged, filled with contained fury, waiting for their master to unleash their power once again.
Black Gauntlet Abilities
Brute Gauntlet Combatant: While not showing any technical of formal skill in hand-to-hand combat using the shadow claw gauntlets. With the Shadow Claw Gauntlets, Joshua relies entirely on a brawler style of fighting. Whether Joshua possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his weapons in combat. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable shadow strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent.
Shadow Empowerment: Encasing the gauntlets with shadow energy flow within them allowing the iramasha to strike with more energy with each punch.
Shadow PowerRaiser: This is an Demon-exclusive technique that hardens the user's iramashas energy and releases it in a swift yet potent blast within the fist. While similar in function to an arrancar's Bala, the technique is not nearly as powerful, though thanks to its composition its speed is 20 times faster and allows for it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Bala does.
Shadow Pyro Blast: An attack where the from the gauntlet hand can produce or fire a super ball of shadow fire energy blast which can do some damage. It starts with opening the gauntlet palm and raising it the target a flame circle is formed and then the super flame ball is generated. Depending on the enemy's defenses will determine the flame damage from the super shadow flame blast if the person was weak then it does immense damage to that people. If the enemy's defenses were stronger then it might have done something(25%-45%) or nothing at all which could lead to trouble.
Tenma Shurettou( "Mara Vermilion Splitting Knife"): This great technique was only taught to certain demons and some ramasha however the power had been placed within the gauntlets. The attack with the skies completely turning dark the opponent the forbidden iramasha start to gather massive amounts of shadow energy. The user will start to get into a powerful stance and then suddenly the user will completely disappear from the enemy's sensing power. Joshua will appear violently crashing down upon the enemy almost like a bomb hitting the target. However it will be a powerful energized out hand knife-edge strike. It has a drawback depending if enemy's speed is fast enough to stop the user's stance starter then the attack becomes undone. Meaning it's over.
Kongou Kokuretsuzan(Land Killer Slash): The ultimate technique of flames which was known to be offensive and defensive at the time. A user will raise one hand in the air summoning vast amounts of shadow magic into that palm with the power of wrath and vengeance flowing within. Joshua whole body will be imbued with shadow pyro energy making him strong and vicious. With all that deadly power in one hand, He slams it violently on the ground unleashing a massive earthquake energy explosion. How it works when the user slams that powerful gathered energy into ground or enemy and unleashes a explosion of energy. The explosion of pure energy power emanates into unleashed an massive earthquake that can perhaps or cause a city to tear itself apart..
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Class Title: The Legendary Forbidden Iramasha
Class Traits: Ancient Shadow Power{The Lords of Shadow}: The Lords of Shadow was known to be the ancient shadow uprising which four strong iramasha warriors used to wield to control the shadows themselves. Through that they gained power from the shadows. The Lords of Shadow was once based upon three parts of the Shadow Power which were Shadow Rage, Darkness Strength and Shadow Chaos Overdrive from those three things. It led to the creation of the Lords of Shadow. Over the years, Lords of Shadow had changed completely taking a new power deprived from shadow magic and chaos magic combined. If one gained all powers of the Lords of Shadow that person would gain both physical and mental control of the shadows themselves using little or much power to control them. However, In ancient times this power can be known to corrupt the hearts of men and women. Eric's mother gave Joshua's an tremendous gift after his journeys and research within the demon world. She was able to reconstruct the power and place it within Joshua's body. After she created the seal within Kade Vargas(Eric Zarathos) Joshua had control of the Lords of Shadow learning many unique and new shadow powers that can be used along with his own.
Lords of Shadow Abilities
-Shadow Chaos Release: The true madness of the shadow dragon; Into receiving such power a person must be willing to sacrifice something to obtain such power. In Joshua's case the iramasha sacrifices the power of the kage chokyo shi which the power is implanted to one his lords of shadow abilities which are [Shadow Rage(Speed), Darkness strength(Magic) and Shadow Chaos Overdrive(zoa koa)] which be increased to one level(Grand-Master). However the Iramasha will have to say which ability that he wants to use in order for it to work. Chaos Release doesn't last forever depending on the enemy the user's fighting the power which the chaos has a certain limit depending on the enemy's power. During this process, Joshua's eyes are completely pitch black the eyes of the draconian demon a seeker of vengeance. Once this power is depleted, Lords of Shadow power is completely drained and the demon shows major signs of fatigue minutes later. Can be only once per thread.
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3-5 to 3-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 12 posts.
2-5 to 1-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 8 posts.
0-5 to 0-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 4 posts.
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE You can't increase past master in a move, sorry we aren't castlevania here, you ain't no Soma from Dawn of Sorrows. Digressing, This needs to be nerfed in terms of that.
Demonic Bloodrights: Joshua Iramasha once summoned has complete control of Eric Zarathos's powers and abilities the iramasha can use them at will. This all had something to do with the ancient mark upon Eric tongue was sealed one part of Joshua Iramasha. Eric mother's sealed Kade all of Joshua's shadow power and his brother Alex was sealed all Joshua's mental powers. In the end their were two soul iramashas as the mad demon(Eric Zarathos) carried Dark Joshua and his elder brother(Xathis Zarathos)carried Good Joshua. The seal was created on both Kade and Alex's tongues so the forbidden iramasha wouldn't become complete and it would prove deadly consequences for the whole iramasha clan. Only Eric's mother can release the seal from both tongues allowing two to become one once more. Their is one thing that can combined them both one must be holding both Eric and Xathis's hands and have strong telepathy powers. Then the seal will be removed for a limited time. (Yet Joshua Iramasha the Dark Joshua; Has complete control of Eric powers also because of the dahlia seal as well) It prevents Eric from using Joshua's powers within his demon forms.
Is Joshua a summon or is Eric Josuha's summon... actually what is going on here?
Darkness Last Rites{Shadow Final Punishment}: Being the darkness part of the Forbidden Iramasha; Joshua was given an unearthly title granting him many unique abilities of shadow demonic angel. Abilities to be known as the shadow death powers which were banished the demon iramasha clan so long ago. Joshua had implanted many powers of the unknown shadow demon abilities while the mad demon was asleep learning different techniques. The truth is Joshua Iramasha actually connected with dark force of the shadow dimension the very thing that granted him his shadow powers. The being known as Anubis created and sacred shadow mark on Joshua's arm which gave him control of something called the Shadow Punishments. The Shadow Punishments are ancient shadow disciplines known to be the rare magics of the shadow dimensions. Joshua was given one called the Darkness Last Rites an ancient shadow magic long forgotten. In short this Curse Effect + Curse Magic + Darkness Magic and the Affinity of Hell wrapped together allowing Joshua to create any Shadow Punishments as the forbidden iramasha chooses to. Joshua Iramasha has great control of four deadly Shadow punishments yet they can be defeated by some angelic iramasha powers and abilities if learned. They're two other ways to defeat the Shadow Punishments of way of Anti Curse powers and defensive magic.
I still have no clue where you are going with this, even when I read the powers and reviewed them.
-------Different Kinds of Shadow Punishments-------
I.) Shadow Purifier: Known as the very first Shadow Punishment; The Purifier this is known also as shadow cancel it activates when an attack hits Joshua's body. The shadow punishment is activated when an attack connects hurting him badly once this happens. The shadow black star is formed draining 50% power and strength from the enemy attack. It will like Joshua was never by an enemy damaged but the iramasha will shows the signs of damage and battle scars but only half of it. Because the forbidden iramasha is a master of shadow energies and shadow magic, Joshua can only use this technique about 4 times if used a 5th time one of his eyeballs will disappear. Which also means, he won't be able to use Blood eyes technique either because of the shadow punishments.
First what are blood eye technique and how much stronger does Josuha need to be in order to do counter the attacks with his black star...
II.) Darkness Witch-Force: Known as the second Shadow Punishment; Witchforce was an ancient shadow technique long forgotten and used by witches to redirect things by way of shadow stitching. Taking a shadow thread to the ground if it can connect to the enemy attack's shadow just it coming towards Joshua. The forbidden iramasha can stop the enemy attack completely, send the attack away or send the attack straight back to the enemy even use the affinity of hell to make it stronger. One drawback to this the enemy attack must seen along with it shadow if not the attack itself won't. Also it can't work against holy attacks, kido attacks, cero attacks or telepathy attacks.
There has to be more than just the shadow in countering it, I mean that's pretty slim chances ANYone will pay attention or know where a shadow is located in a normal lit area. So this needs some other ways to be countered.
III.) Black Dead Prison Known as the third Shadow Punishment; Dead Prison is a way of completely binding a person almost like Void Howling. If the enemy's willpower is weaker the attack will have deadly effects it starts off the opponent feeling a certain chill to their body. Meaning the attack has phased the enemy's body the iramasha shadow completely grabs at the enemy's shadow. Once this is done black spikes start to pierce the enemy's body putting the enemy into a near paralysis mode weakening arms, legs and body. The shadow spikes growing on the enemy's will form into a black prison all around the enemy draining their power as shadow spikes get sharper. Even causing the enemy to bleed a lot when it happens. Their have been their ways into defeating this solar attacks, flame/fire attacks or the enemy's speed.
...This is VERY tentative agreed on as okay, but I would like to know how this is deadly.
IV.) Final Dark Reckoning{Heartless Shadow Angel}: Known as the fourth Shadow Punishment; The Heartless Angel technique a way of putting one's soul into darkness sending it into complete destruction pulling the power & sense of death into the enemy. Completely weakening 75% the enemy's powers and abilities however their one weakness to this. The technique itself needs the enemy's blood or the attack itself won't work at all. It part of an punishment law for the technique "The blood of an shadow's enemy will seal their fate and the pain of death will come into their fruition". Once the enemy's blood is taken; Joshua will grow shadow flame wings upon his back the dark ritual will begin as within the gathered enemy's blood. It will create a small little clone of that enemy as the iramasha will rise up into the air. The little clone will be encase within a shadow ball the iramasha will the ball up with one hand. As the forbidden begins to say the ancient words of the fallen angel. "I send thy enemy's pain into the megadeath of the dark abyss. Embrace and Descend, Heartless Shadow Angel". Once this is said the shadow ball will disappear sending immense shock waves, headaches, cramps and burning sensations throughout the enemy's body. Thus draining 75% of the enemy's power and abilities however the attack can only be done once per thread. It can defeated if the shadow ball is destroyed or stopping the ritual by finding a way to stop Joshua from descending up in the air.
...I guess? I mean can a enemy be faster than your balls of darkness?
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I know i missed stuff, but there's a lot of fixes needed, and I'm still confused greatly on what the main purpose of this is, when this seems like you should of just made this a separate app, I like the concept and find it nifty but it needs some work.~ Uhm.. any questions?
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Re: Eric's Forbidden Powers
Fri May 30, 2014 1:45 pm
=More checking to come soon.=
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«MOVING THIS POWER UPGRADE M8»
Based on the fact there has been extensive checking with this upgrade app, I'm going to go ahead and move this into WIP to save up space in the unchecked power upgrades. So, have fun with this.
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Re: Eric's Forbidden Powers
Sun Jun 01, 2014 3:14 pm
Okay now that My mind is refreshed enough to think...
I think there's good stuff, and bad stuff in here.
I'll list the things I like and think you should keep, and the other stuff will be suggested for you to re-do or remove completely because unnecessary.
Things you should keep.
Keep all the Shadow moves on your Seishin buki besides the obvious Getsuga Tensho rip off. You have more class than that brah.~
For your abilities during your shifter.
You need to really explain your senses better because I'm seriously confused on what you're trying to localize with each animal, and some of them are kinda repetitive.
You have these four senses, and this would be a better idea for them to be used.
Tiger. [Sense of seeing better at night, Felines are noted for their abilities to see in the dark.]
Wolf. [Sense of Smell Typically would be better with a wolf.]
Lion. [One of mankinds greatest hunters, able to sense fear would be better.]
Eagle. [This one you nailed birds eye view.]
These do seem better.
Shadow Claw Black Gauntlets: The Claw Black Gauntlets are an augmentation of Shadow Fist technique which the iramasha used for bashing enemy's skulls in. Backs of hands made of 10 oz leather, fingers made of 6 oz. No glove here, made entirely of hand tooled leather. All fingers fully articulated and easy to move in. Lots of rivets in this one, but I tried to conceal them. Wrist and back of hand articulated also with scale tooling. Fingers tooled with smaller scales. From its ashes new structures always arose, ever taller than the ones before and, from the burning fires, a blinding shadow flame. In its burning heat the Chaos Claws were forged, filled with contained fury, waiting for their master to unleash their power once again.
Black Gauntlet Abilities
Brute Gauntlet Combatant: While not showing any technical of formal skill in hand-to-hand combat using the shadow claw gauntlets. With the Shadow Claw Gauntlets, Joshua relies entirely on a brawler style of fighting. Whether Joshua possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his weapons in combat. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable shadow strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent.
Shadow Empowerment: Encasing the gauntlets with shadow energy flow within them allowing the iramasha to strike with more energy with each punch.
Shadow Power Raiser: This is an Demon-exclusive technique that hardens the user's iramashas energy and releases it in a swift yet potent blast within the fist. While similar in function to an arrancar's Bala, the technique is not nearly as powerful, though thanks to its composition its speed is 20 times faster and allows for it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Bala does.
I think this should equal in strength since it's 20 times faster than a normal Bala.
Shadow Pyro Blast: An attack where the from the gauntlet hand can produce or fire a super ball of shadow fire energy blast which can do some damage. It starts with opening the gauntlet palm and raising it the target a flame circle is formed and then the super flame ball is generated. Depending on the enemy's defenses will determine the flame damage from the super shadow flame blast if the person was weak then it does immense damage to that people. If the enemy's defenses were stronger then it might have done something(25%-45%) or nothing at all which could lead to trouble.
This seems okay Maybe...
Tenma Shurettou( "Mara Vermilion Splitting Knife"): This great technique was only taught to certain demons and some ramasha however the power had been placed within the gauntlets. The attack with the skies completely turning dark the opponent the forbidden iramasha start to gather massive amounts of shadow energy. The user will start to get into a powerful stance and then suddenly the user will completely disappear from the enemy's sensing power. Joshua will appear violently crashing down upon the enemy almost like a bomb hitting the target. However it will be a powerful energized out hand knife-edge strike. It has a drawback depending if enemy's speed is fast enough to stop the user's stance starter then the attack becomes undone. Meaning it's over.
I think there should be a check on if they can detect him when he's coming down, because he'd be locked into the action attacking. This is my thought however you can always get a second opinion though.
Kongou Kokuretsuzan (Land Killer Slash): The ultimate technique of flames which was known to be offensive and defensive at the time. A user will raise one hand in the air summoning vast amounts of shadow magic into that palm with the power of wrath and vengeance flowing within. Joshua whole body will be imbued with shadow pyro energy making him strong and vicious. With all that deadly power in one hand, He slams it violently on the ground unleashing a massive earthquake energy explosion. How it works when the user slams that powerful gathered energy into ground or enemy and unleashes a explosion of energy. The explosion of pure energy power emanates into unleashed an massive earthquake that can perhaps or cause a city to tear itself apart..
So a vibration based explosion? That's what I need to know what kind of explosion this is you say an earthquake which means vibrations, so how many times can he used it.
Darkness Last Rites{Shadow Final Punishment}: As the true Lord of Shadow, Joshua was given to rights and priviledges to use dark shadow abilities more deadlier then his own. Over the years, The shadow iramasha was able to recreate ancient punishments that were used against demons many of them are benefits while some devour enemies within darkness. After absorbing energy for his own survival, Joshua used his shadow powers recreating each angelic punishment remaking into a evil sort of faction. In the process, Joshua created the evil version of Angelic Last Rites and ancient ability from the angel iramasha which can deadly even to be a hellbent curse upon his enemy. Joshua Iramasha has great control of four deadly Shadow punishments yet they can be defeated by some angelic iramasha powers and abilities if learned. They're two other ways to defeat the Shadow Punishments of way of Anti Curse powers and defensive magic.
-------Different Kinds of Shadow Punishments-------
I.) Shadow Purifier: Known as the very first Shadow Punishment; The Purifier this is known also as shadow cancel it activates when an attack hits Joshua's body. The shadow punishment is activated when an attack connects hurting him badly once this happens. The shadow black star is formed draining 50% power and strength from the enemy attack. It will like Joshua was never by an enemy damaged but the iramasha will shows the signs of damage and battle scars but only half of it. However, Joshua's strength is stronger then the enemy attack then the iramasha wouldn't feel the attack at all. He would only feel 25% of the attack with some minor bruises yet if the iramasha is weaker then he'll half of the enemy's attack. Because the forbidden iramasha is a master of shadow energies and shadow magic, Joshua can only use this technique about 4 times if used a 5th time one of his eyeballs will disappear. Which also means, he won't be able to use any of the Blood eyes technique either because of the shadow punishments.
--------------Shadow Chaos Release Limit---------------
3-5 to 3-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 12 posts.
2-5 to 1-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 8 posts.
0-5 to 0-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 4 posts.
I want these as these limits.
II.) Darkness Witch-Force: Known as the second Shadow Punishment; Witchforce was an ancient shadow technique long forgotten and used by witches to redirect things by way of shadow stitching. Taking a shadow thread to the ground if it can connect to the enemy attack's shadow just it coming towards Joshua. The forbidden iramasha can stop the enemy attack completely, send the attack away or send the attack straight back to the enemy even use the affinity of hell to make it stronger. One drawback to this the enemy attack must seen along with it shadow if not the attack itself won't. The second drawback would be the sun if it's a bright day outside in the battle the sun uv rays can weaken the shadow as the enemies attack would hit the shadow iramasha. Final drawback is speed if the enemy's is way too fast for the shadow stitching to catch then the attack is worthless to throw it at attack. Also it can't work against holy attacks, angel attacks, light attacks and telepathy attacks.
III.) Black Dead Prison Known as the third Shadow Punishment; Dead Prison is a way of completely binding a person almost like Void Howling. If the enemy's willpower is weaker the attack will have deadly effects it starts off the opponent feeling a certain chill to their body. Meaning the attack has phased the enemy's body the iramasha shadow completely grabs at the enemy's shadow. Once this is done black spikes start to pierce the enemy's body putting the enemy into a near paralysis mode weakening arms, legs and body. The shadow spikes growing on the enemy's body will form into a black prison all around the enemy draining their power as shadow spikes get sharper. Why is it painful? Each shadow spike that pierces the enemy's body the spike spins slowly attacking the flesh as the veins of blood putting enough pressure to make an enemy scream. Almost like a torture system or someone about to be tortured. Even causing the enemy to bleed a lot when it happens. Their have been their ways into defeating this solar attacks, flame/fire attacks or the enemy's speed.
IV.) Final Dark Reckoning{Heartless Shadow Angel}: Known as the fourth Shadow Punishment; The Heartless Angel technique a way of putting one's soul into darkness sending it into complete destruction pulling the power & sense of death into the enemy. It was known by angels to be the ultimate voodoo curse technique to put fear into demons but that was centuries ago. Completely weakening 75% the enemy's powers and abilities however their one weakness to this. The technique itself needs the enemy's blood or the attack itself won't work at all. It part of an punishment law for the technique "The blood of an shadow's enemy will seal their fate and the pain of death will come into their fruition". Once the enemy's blood is taken; Joshua will grow shadow flame wings upon his back the dark ritual will begin as within the gathered enemy's blood. It will create a small little clone of that enemy as the iramasha will rise up into the air. The little clone will be encase within a shadow ball the iramasha will the ball up with one hand. As the forbidden begins to say the ancient words of the fallen angel. "I send thy enemy's pain into the megadeath of the dark abyss. Embrace and Descend, Heartless Shadow Angel". Once this is said the shadow ball will disappear sending immense shock waves, headaches, cramps and burning sensations throughout the enemy's body. Thus draining 75% of the enemy's power and abilities however the attack can only be done once per thread. It can defeated if the shadow ball is destroyed or stopping the ritual by finding a way to stop Joshua from descending up in the air. An enemy can outrun it if the enemy's willpower is strong enough to sense it in time and have their speed to dodge it.
Clean up the vocab as in typos, and I'll recheck.~
I think there's good stuff, and bad stuff in here.
I'll list the things I like and think you should keep, and the other stuff will be suggested for you to re-do or remove completely because unnecessary.
Things you should keep.
Keep all the Shadow moves on your Seishin buki besides the obvious Getsuga Tensho rip off. You have more class than that brah.~
For your abilities during your shifter.
You need to really explain your senses better because I'm seriously confused on what you're trying to localize with each animal, and some of them are kinda repetitive.
You have these four senses, and this would be a better idea for them to be used.
Tiger. [Sense of seeing better at night, Felines are noted for their abilities to see in the dark.]
Wolf. [Sense of Smell Typically would be better with a wolf.]
Lion. [One of mankinds greatest hunters, able to sense fear would be better.]
Eagle. [This one you nailed birds eye view.]
These do seem better.
Shadow Claw Black Gauntlets: The Claw Black Gauntlets are an augmentation of Shadow Fist technique which the iramasha used for bashing enemy's skulls in. Backs of hands made of 10 oz leather, fingers made of 6 oz. No glove here, made entirely of hand tooled leather. All fingers fully articulated and easy to move in. Lots of rivets in this one, but I tried to conceal them. Wrist and back of hand articulated also with scale tooling. Fingers tooled with smaller scales. From its ashes new structures always arose, ever taller than the ones before and, from the burning fires, a blinding shadow flame. In its burning heat the Chaos Claws were forged, filled with contained fury, waiting for their master to unleash their power once again.
Black Gauntlet Abilities
Brute Gauntlet Combatant: While not showing any technical of formal skill in hand-to-hand combat using the shadow claw gauntlets. With the Shadow Claw Gauntlets, Joshua relies entirely on a brawler style of fighting. Whether Joshua possesses any skill in swordsmanship is unknown as he never uses his weapons in combat. His skill in hand-to-hand combat combined with his unbelievable shadow strength makes him quite a dangerous opponent.
Shadow Empowerment: Encasing the gauntlets with shadow energy flow within them allowing the iramasha to strike with more energy with each punch.
Shadow Power Raiser: This is an Demon-exclusive technique that hardens the user's iramashas energy and releases it in a swift yet potent blast within the fist. While similar in function to an arrancar's Bala, the technique is not nearly as powerful, though thanks to its composition its speed is 20 times faster and allows for it to be fired in quick succession. In addition, it possesses more concussive force than a typical Bala does.
I think this should equal in strength since it's 20 times faster than a normal Bala.
Shadow Pyro Blast: An attack where the from the gauntlet hand can produce or fire a super ball of shadow fire energy blast which can do some damage. It starts with opening the gauntlet palm and raising it the target a flame circle is formed and then the super flame ball is generated. Depending on the enemy's defenses will determine the flame damage from the super shadow flame blast if the person was weak then it does immense damage to that people. If the enemy's defenses were stronger then it might have done something(25%-45%) or nothing at all which could lead to trouble.
This seems okay Maybe...
Tenma Shurettou( "Mara Vermilion Splitting Knife"): This great technique was only taught to certain demons and some ramasha however the power had been placed within the gauntlets. The attack with the skies completely turning dark the opponent the forbidden iramasha start to gather massive amounts of shadow energy. The user will start to get into a powerful stance and then suddenly the user will completely disappear from the enemy's sensing power. Joshua will appear violently crashing down upon the enemy almost like a bomb hitting the target. However it will be a powerful energized out hand knife-edge strike. It has a drawback depending if enemy's speed is fast enough to stop the user's stance starter then the attack becomes undone. Meaning it's over.
I think there should be a check on if they can detect him when he's coming down, because he'd be locked into the action attacking. This is my thought however you can always get a second opinion though.
Kongou Kokuretsuzan (Land Killer Slash): The ultimate technique of flames which was known to be offensive and defensive at the time. A user will raise one hand in the air summoning vast amounts of shadow magic into that palm with the power of wrath and vengeance flowing within. Joshua whole body will be imbued with shadow pyro energy making him strong and vicious. With all that deadly power in one hand, He slams it violently on the ground unleashing a massive earthquake energy explosion. How it works when the user slams that powerful gathered energy into ground or enemy and unleashes a explosion of energy. The explosion of pure energy power emanates into unleashed an massive earthquake that can perhaps or cause a city to tear itself apart..
So a vibration based explosion? That's what I need to know what kind of explosion this is you say an earthquake which means vibrations, so how many times can he used it.
Darkness Last Rites{Shadow Final Punishment}: As the true Lord of Shadow, Joshua was given to rights and priviledges to use dark shadow abilities more deadlier then his own. Over the years, The shadow iramasha was able to recreate ancient punishments that were used against demons many of them are benefits while some devour enemies within darkness. After absorbing energy for his own survival, Joshua used his shadow powers recreating each angelic punishment remaking into a evil sort of faction. In the process, Joshua created the evil version of Angelic Last Rites and ancient ability from the angel iramasha which can deadly even to be a hellbent curse upon his enemy. Joshua Iramasha has great control of four deadly Shadow punishments yet they can be defeated by some angelic iramasha powers and abilities if learned. They're two other ways to defeat the Shadow Punishments of way of Anti Curse powers and defensive magic.
-------Different Kinds of Shadow Punishments-------
I.) Shadow Purifier: Known as the very first Shadow Punishment; The Purifier this is known also as shadow cancel it activates when an attack hits Joshua's body. The shadow punishment is activated when an attack connects hurting him badly once this happens. The shadow black star is formed draining 50% power and strength from the enemy attack. It will like Joshua was never by an enemy damaged but the iramasha will shows the signs of damage and battle scars but only half of it. However, Joshua's strength is stronger then the enemy attack then the iramasha wouldn't feel the attack at all. He would only feel 25% of the attack with some minor bruises yet if the iramasha is weaker then he'll half of the enemy's attack. Because the forbidden iramasha is a master of shadow energies and shadow magic, Joshua can only use this technique about 4 times if used a 5th time one of his eyeballs will disappear. Which also means, he won't be able to use any of the Blood eyes technique either because of the shadow punishments.
--------------Shadow Chaos Release Limit---------------
3-5 to 3-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 12 posts.
2-5 to 1-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 8 posts.
0-5 to 0-1: The Dragon Chaos can last for 4 posts.
I want these as these limits.
II.) Darkness Witch-Force: Known as the second Shadow Punishment; Witchforce was an ancient shadow technique long forgotten and used by witches to redirect things by way of shadow stitching. Taking a shadow thread to the ground if it can connect to the enemy attack's shadow just it coming towards Joshua. The forbidden iramasha can stop the enemy attack completely, send the attack away or send the attack straight back to the enemy even use the affinity of hell to make it stronger. One drawback to this the enemy attack must seen along with it shadow if not the attack itself won't. The second drawback would be the sun if it's a bright day outside in the battle the sun uv rays can weaken the shadow as the enemies attack would hit the shadow iramasha. Final drawback is speed if the enemy's is way too fast for the shadow stitching to catch then the attack is worthless to throw it at attack. Also it can't work against holy attacks, angel attacks, light attacks and telepathy attacks.
III.) Black Dead Prison Known as the third Shadow Punishment; Dead Prison is a way of completely binding a person almost like Void Howling. If the enemy's willpower is weaker the attack will have deadly effects it starts off the opponent feeling a certain chill to their body. Meaning the attack has phased the enemy's body the iramasha shadow completely grabs at the enemy's shadow. Once this is done black spikes start to pierce the enemy's body putting the enemy into a near paralysis mode weakening arms, legs and body. The shadow spikes growing on the enemy's body will form into a black prison all around the enemy draining their power as shadow spikes get sharper. Why is it painful? Each shadow spike that pierces the enemy's body the spike spins slowly attacking the flesh as the veins of blood putting enough pressure to make an enemy scream. Almost like a torture system or someone about to be tortured. Even causing the enemy to bleed a lot when it happens. Their have been their ways into defeating this solar attacks, flame/fire attacks or the enemy's speed.
IV.) Final Dark Reckoning{Heartless Shadow Angel}: Known as the fourth Shadow Punishment; The Heartless Angel technique a way of putting one's soul into darkness sending it into complete destruction pulling the power & sense of death into the enemy. It was known by angels to be the ultimate voodoo curse technique to put fear into demons but that was centuries ago. Completely weakening 75% the enemy's powers and abilities however their one weakness to this. The technique itself needs the enemy's blood or the attack itself won't work at all. It part of an punishment law for the technique "The blood of an shadow's enemy will seal their fate and the pain of death will come into their fruition". Once the enemy's blood is taken; Joshua will grow shadow flame wings upon his back the dark ritual will begin as within the gathered enemy's blood. It will create a small little clone of that enemy as the iramasha will rise up into the air. The little clone will be encase within a shadow ball the iramasha will the ball up with one hand. As the forbidden begins to say the ancient words of the fallen angel. "I send thy enemy's pain into the megadeath of the dark abyss. Embrace and Descend, Heartless Shadow Angel". Once this is said the shadow ball will disappear sending immense shock waves, headaches, cramps and burning sensations throughout the enemy's body. Thus draining 75% of the enemy's power and abilities however the attack can only be done once per thread. It can defeated if the shadow ball is destroyed or stopping the ritual by finding a way to stop Joshua from descending up in the air. An enemy can outrun it if the enemy's willpower is strong enough to sense it in time and have their speed to dodge it.
Clean up the vocab as in typos, and I'll recheck.~
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