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Raiki
Raiki
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November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
Joined : 2010-09-12
Posts : 1238
Age : 33

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue0/0zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:

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Tue Feb 25, 2014 12:41 pm
check incoming


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Raiki
Raiki
Moderator
November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
Joined : 2010-09-12
Posts : 1238
Age : 33

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue0/0zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:

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Tue Feb 25, 2014 3:19 pm
"Come On! Suika Arms! Ōdama Big Bang!"
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:
  • Mental Deduction:
  • Pain Endurance:
  • Focus:


Comments/Notes: Oh were to even begin My dear Kade. Well firstly you keep switching between he and she in the app making the gender ordeal focusing, which could be a simple typo. Secondly you need to reword the powers around, you give examples as if there plain facts and unblock-able. Next No its rare to have A NPC to be a 0-2 let alone a horde of them for Eric, lower the tier this character powerset is more suited to be much lower than a 0-2 teir
Tier:
N/A


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Raiki
Raiki
Moderator
November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
Joined : 2010-09-12
Posts : 1238
Age : 33

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue0/0zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:

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Mon Mar 03, 2014 12:26 am
Check shall be up after gym monday


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Raiki
Raiki
Moderator
November SOTM 20112nd place
November COTM 2011 : 1st place Zefonse
Joined : 2010-09-12
Posts : 1238
Age : 33

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue0/0zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:

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Mon Mar 03, 2014 10:45 pm
Everything seems to be order
other wise approved.

1-1++(Full Power: 0-4++)


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THEFROST
THEFROST
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Head Admin
OTY

Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 19582
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
https://www.platinumhearts.net

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Fri Aug 21, 2015 6:33 am
[adm]
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Due to Kade's request, I'm placing this character in archives for him. You can read more about it here: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t7253p230-thefrost-s-communication-thread[/adm]


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THEFROST
THEFROST
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OTY

Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 19582
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
https://www.platinumhearts.net

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Sun Jan 10, 2016 9:28 am
[adm]Moving back to NPC's as per request by Kade.[/adm]


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Henrex
Henrex
Tor'uk
Joined : 2016-01-20
Posts : 5126
Age : 24

Member Info
Platinum Points:
zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Left_bar_bleue419100/999999zorin - Zorin Blitz [NPC] [finished][1-1++/0-4++] Empty_bar_bleue  (419100/999999)
Tiers:

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Fri Apr 14, 2017 9:57 pm
[adm]Moving to archives due to member being banned.[/adm]
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