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Ulqui
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:27 pm
Application Checklist
Prepare to be reviewed.

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept



Code:

    [b][center][u]Will Skills[/u][/b][/center]
    [list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Adept
    [*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Beginner
    [*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Adept
    [*][b]Focus:[/b] Adept
   

Comments/Notes:

Only one thing mate, your phantom tech powers are borderline however I will allow them. But if these powers and abilities are OP'd then they will be reviewed more strictly, but I'm sure I can trust you with them.
Approved.
Tier: 2-4




Last edited by Ulqui on Thu Feb 27, 2014 4:06 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Tue Feb 25, 2014 9:13 pm
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Moved to pending as this was in the wrong place



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Ulqui
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Platinum Points:
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Thu Feb 27, 2014 3:49 am
"Freezing Warfare Damage" - Clarify that the tiers your mentioning in the damage section refer to that of the opponent. Also I suggest adding how strong it can get based on your characters tier level.

- Alright, once that is edited, I will have one last run down the app and give a final decision. Also, did you receive permission to begin with Shikai?

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Thu Feb 27, 2014 3:36 pm
"Heaven's Soaring Dragon Slash" - Hahah, I believe this ability is new.
- Your really lacking information, why has it got to do with the will to live?
- How can you cut your own leg off?
- The vortex part, how does that fit in with the rest of your characters abilities?

"Augmented Ice Durability:" - One thing, the attacks that are required to damage this would need to be based on intensity. I mean getting 8-10 attacks from Poliro would most likely kill the character, lol.

Right now, I see that a lot of individuals need elemental prowess in order to take on your abilities. For clarifaction, I would like to see a note at the bottom of the app explaining that energy based attacks are as effcient if not more so than elemental ones.

"Enhanced Cyro Shield" - How big can the shield get?

-- Alright, as long as nothing new is added and the changes plus additions mentioned above get covered then this is on the path to approval!

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Thu Feb 27, 2014 4:07 pm
Well done, Approved.

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