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GENETICS
Character Name:
Rose Cleary
Character True Age:
1350 (Souls age)
Character Appearance Age:
Mid Twenties
Character Gender:
Female
Orientation:
Rose serves no one but herself thought she will ally herself with anyone who will be of use to her meaning she will serve anyone who will give her the ability to kill and destroy.
Personality:
Rose's Personality is dark and wrath filled. She views others as merely pawns in her game. She will appear how she want to get what she want at the time, her cunning and manipulation know no bounds. In truth Rose hates, she hate everything around her and want nothing more for everything to die and be reduced to nothing. That is her game and everything and everyone else are her instruments of destruction.
She just wants all the pain in the world to end, all her pain to end and it that means killing every soul shinigami hollow and human alike herself so be it. You'd never think that the dominate soul of his hollow was once a loved shinigami who'd sacrifice herself to save a single soul
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
Rose stand at 5,3 but her presence is never over looked. She is beauty and elegance embodied ironically in a being of hatred and destruction. Her eyes are darked from constant sorrow and tears, her eyes themselves are blue tainted with dots of black. She where a long white dress that reach down to past her knees. On the her arms are black ribbons, one on right arm and two on her left.Her hollow hole is directly over her hearth and her cracked mask is only her neck and forehead covered by her collar and her hair.
Her skin is pale and cold to the touch as if she was already dead. Her eyes hold nothing but pain and wrath in them. She ware an ankh as a necklace and two as hair pins, merely for decorative purposes. Tied around her waist is a Sekkiseki chain, this is not for decorative purpose. She uses this chain to quickly strange her opponent when their back are turned or before she has to fight them.
Reitsu Colour:
White with flares of black.
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
The Zanpakuto is unique for the fact it is not a single blade but a thousands of smaller blades connected by Rose reitsu allowing her to extend it into a whip or condense it into a solid blade. When not in use it sit at her hip in a coiled position.
Racial Abilities:
The Pain Cero- Used only by Rose this cero is amazingly unique in a number of ways. Firstly the cero is fired from an opened wound (Usually a cut on the hand), secondly it has a chant. "Feel, feel the pain of my world" and finally it causes no physical damage on it's target. Upon contact the Cero cause every pain receptor in the targets body to be simulated causing pain that simple can not be compared to anything.
pesukisa- Rose skill in pesukisa is immense to the point she is capable to determining a person emotions by the spirit pressure and able to detect other beings from miles away.
Lánluas - A cross between the shinigami shunpo and the Arrancar Sonido, thought being fast then both it is more taxing and can only cover a small distant.
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RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
Pian an Domain (Pain of the World)
Resereccion Release Phrase:
End The Pain, End it all.
Release Actions:
Rose sword extend into it's whip form and coils it's self around Rose arm and squeezed cutting into Rose arm causing immense pain.
Resereccion Appearance:
Rose's Resurreccion is very unique perhaps the most interesting aspect of Rose. Her resurreccion does not resurrect her form hollow but revives the Shinigami side of Rose soul. Rose resurreccion main ability is to turn all her pain into power, mean the more she fight and get her the strong she become. Her power grows with the pain till her dieing breath. The pain can be emotional or physical
Resereccion Abilities:
Name: Pian Bri (Power of Pain)
Description: All pain absorb or inflicted onto rose is converted to energy and spirit power. This ability allows her powers to grows with the pain till her dieing breath. The pain can be emotional or physical.
Name: Galrú Pian. (Injectious Pain)
Description:
This technique allows Rose to transfer her pain to her opponent. To do this she drops a tear onto her blade which then glows a violent red then cuts her opponent. This transfer the pain she feels to her opponent and can drive them mad. A side effect of this technique is after her pain is transferred Rose experience a euphoric High freeing her of pain and all feelings. . This ability can be used in reverse to extract the pain from other to increase her power. (This ability last 3 post but can be repeated after 5)
Name: Pian Buile (Pain Blast)
Description: By focusing her pain and pressure into her Zanpakuto Rose can fire a black blast of pain. The attack does impressive physical damage and causing immense pain in the hit area
Name: Ceap mo Pian (Feel my pain)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Description: Emily cuts herself placing her own blood on her Zanpakuto should this blood come in contact with an other soul, or Zanpakuto then any pain inflicted on Rose by the soul is felt twice fold by the soul. (Last 3 post, 6 post cooldown)
DUES EX RESSERECION
Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)
Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)
Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)
SKILLS
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
PAST
History:
Background:
Rose's existence started nearly a millennium and a half ago as a shinigami in the soul society. Rose at the time had many friend and loved ones. Her days in the shinigami Academy were spent training her abilities to the best she could and due to her hard work she was invited to join the gotei 13 it was there in the shinigami Rose found the lover of her life.
It was a spring day Rose had come across Ri fighting his squad mates it some friendly spars ,it was the first time Ri saw her. Rose had know Ri was one of the students ever to graduate from the academy. Ri saw her and for a moment stood in awe of her, it caused him to lose the fight he was it. Rose asked who was the strongest and Ri stood up, for a moment that seemed to last for ever they starred at each other then without a word both walked to the sparring field and began.
The fight started in the morning and didn't end till the sun had gone down and both Ri and Rose collapse due to exhaustion. They spent the next week in the infirmary talking and it was in that time Ri knew he was in love.
After that the two starting seeing each other, soon both entered into the squads as unseated member but it didn't take the two long to rise in position. Both of them were as determined as the other to get to the next seat before the other. It was this motivation that caused Ri to achieve Shikai thought Rose had beat him to that.
Ri was the seventh seat and Rose the sixth when the day came that Ri purposed. The answer was automatic, Yes. The wedding day came soon and it was the happiest Ri had ever been. Shortly after Ri and Rose moved out of the barrack and into a home of their own.
The Death of Love :
Rose soul before it re-enterd the cycle of rebirth was attack by hollows and the soul of her child was eaten. Rose's soul remain untouched but the pain caused by the lost of her child changed her, and over time she took became a hollow.
Perhaps it was the shinigami side of her or maybe she justed wanted to hurt other but from the moment she became a hollow she began devouring the soul of hollows. The power if gave her eased her pain and slowly Rose became something else a being of pain death and destruction. Rose O'Nocht was gone and a new being emerged one hell bent on ending everything.
RP Sample:
ARRANCAR
GENETICS
Character Name:
Rose Cleary
Character True Age:
1350 (Souls age)
Character Appearance Age:
Mid Twenties
Character Gender:
Female
Orientation:
Rose serves no one but herself thought she will ally herself with anyone who will be of use to her meaning she will serve anyone who will give her the ability to kill and destroy.
Personality:
Rose's Personality is dark and wrath filled. She views others as merely pawns in her game. She will appear how she want to get what she want at the time, her cunning and manipulation know no bounds. In truth Rose hates, she hate everything around her and want nothing more for everything to die and be reduced to nothing. That is her game and everything and everyone else are her instruments of destruction.
She just wants all the pain in the world to end, all her pain to end and it that means killing every soul shinigami hollow and human alike herself so be it. You'd never think that the dominate soul of his hollow was once a loved shinigami who'd sacrifice herself to save a single soul
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
Rose stand at 5,3 but her presence is never over looked. She is beauty and elegance embodied ironically in a being of hatred and destruction. Her eyes are darked from constant sorrow and tears, her eyes themselves are blue tainted with dots of black. She where a long white dress that reach down to past her knees. On the her arms are black ribbons, one on right arm and two on her left.Her hollow hole is directly over her hearth and her cracked mask is only her neck and forehead covered by her collar and her hair.
Her skin is pale and cold to the touch as if she was already dead. Her eyes hold nothing but pain and wrath in them. She ware an ankh as a necklace and two as hair pins, merely for decorative purposes. Tied around her waist is a Sekkiseki chain, this is not for decorative purpose. She uses this chain to quickly strange her opponent when their back are turned or before she has to fight them.
Reitsu Colour:
White with flares of black.
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
The Zanpakuto is unique for the fact it is not a single blade but a thousands of smaller blades connected by Rose reitsu allowing her to extend it into a whip or condense it into a solid blade. When not in use it sit at her hip in a coiled position.
Racial Abilities:
The Pain Cero- Used only by Rose this cero is amazingly unique in a number of ways. Firstly the cero is fired from an opened wound (Usually a cut on the hand), secondly it has a chant. "Feel, feel the pain of my world" and finally it causes no physical damage on it's target. Upon contact the Cero cause every pain receptor in the targets body to be simulated causing pain that simple can not be compared to anything.
pesukisa- Rose skill in pesukisa is immense to the point she is capable to determining a person emotions by the spirit pressure and able to detect other beings from miles away.
Lánluas - A cross between the shinigami shunpo and the Arrancar Sonido, thought being fast then both it is more taxing and can only cover a small distant.
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RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
Pian an Domain (Pain of the World)
Resereccion Release Phrase:
End The Pain, End it all.
Release Actions:
Rose sword extend into it's whip form and coils it's self around Rose arm and squeezed cutting into Rose arm causing immense pain.
Resereccion Appearance:
Rose's Resurreccion is very unique perhaps the most interesting aspect of Rose. Her resurreccion does not resurrect her form hollow but revives the Shinigami side of Rose soul. Rose resurreccion main ability is to turn all her pain into power, mean the more she fight and get her the strong she become. Her power grows with the pain till her dieing breath. The pain can be emotional or physical
Resereccion Abilities:
Name: Pian Bri (Power of Pain)
Description: All pain absorb or inflicted onto rose is converted to energy and spirit power. This ability allows her powers to grows with the pain till her dieing breath. The pain can be emotional or physical.
Name: Galrú Pian. (Injectious Pain)
Description:
This technique allows Rose to transfer her pain to her opponent. To do this she drops a tear onto her blade which then glows a violent red then cuts her opponent. This transfer the pain she feels to her opponent and can drive them mad. A side effect of this technique is after her pain is transferred Rose experience a euphoric High freeing her of pain and all feelings. . This ability can be used in reverse to extract the pain from other to increase her power. (This ability last 3 post but can be repeated after 5)
Name: Pian Buile (Pain Blast)
Description: By focusing her pain and pressure into her Zanpakuto Rose can fire a black blast of pain. The attack does impressive physical damage and causing immense pain in the hit area
Name: Ceap mo Pian (Feel my pain)
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Description: Emily cuts herself placing her own blood on her Zanpakuto should this blood come in contact with an other soul, or Zanpakuto then any pain inflicted on Rose by the soul is felt twice fold by the soul. (Last 3 post, 6 post cooldown)
DUES EX RESSERECION
Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)
Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)
Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)
SKILLS
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
PAST
History:
Background:
Rose's existence started nearly a millennium and a half ago as a shinigami in the soul society. Rose at the time had many friend and loved ones. Her days in the shinigami Academy were spent training her abilities to the best she could and due to her hard work she was invited to join the gotei 13 it was there in the shinigami Rose found the lover of her life.
It was a spring day Rose had come across Ri fighting his squad mates it some friendly spars ,it was the first time Ri saw her. Rose had know Ri was one of the students ever to graduate from the academy. Ri saw her and for a moment stood in awe of her, it caused him to lose the fight he was it. Rose asked who was the strongest and Ri stood up, for a moment that seemed to last for ever they starred at each other then without a word both walked to the sparring field and began.
The fight started in the morning and didn't end till the sun had gone down and both Ri and Rose collapse due to exhaustion. They spent the next week in the infirmary talking and it was in that time Ri knew he was in love.
After that the two starting seeing each other, soon both entered into the squads as unseated member but it didn't take the two long to rise in position. Both of them were as determined as the other to get to the next seat before the other. It was this motivation that caused Ri to achieve Shikai thought Rose had beat him to that.
Ri was the seventh seat and Rose the sixth when the day came that Ri purposed. The answer was automatic, Yes. The wedding day came soon and it was the happiest Ri had ever been. Shortly after Ri and Rose moved out of the barrack and into a home of their own.
The Death of Love :
- Spoiler:
- Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Lights flashed by as the car start gaining more and more speed , every few seconds the car swerved out overtaking cars with ease even the police had no chance of catching the car. Ri was sitting far back into the passenger seat , thought slightly terrified there was something enjoyable about it. He looked over at Rose who was driving the car , she hand one hand on the wheel , her foot had the peddle flat and her eyes didn't blink
Both her and Ri were assigned to a German town that neither of them could pronounce nor did they try. In gigis both wandered the street and 'by accident' Rose had come into possession of car. Ri didn't speak he was afraid to distracted Rose even for a moment.
“Ri” Rose said her voice had a uneasy seriousness to it. “I'm pregnant”
“....” Ri's mouth opened to say something but he couldn't think of anything.
“Ri say your happy”
“Rose, that would be an understatement, we've going to parents “ Ri said as a smile to wide for Ri's face appeared. He took rose free hand and held it, they'd been trying to for a child for the long time and soon they'd have one.
“I've love you Ri” She stated as she took her eyes from the road and starred in Ri's.
“And I love you too, more then I can ever show”
Passing cars became nothing more then stretched lights as Rose pushed the car faster , in the distance sirens could be heard but not seen. Hundredths of thoughts filled Ri's mind all concerning his child, he was in a state of utter bliss. Then with out warning Rose break sharply making the car spin around six or seven time before coming to a stop. When the car came to a stop Rose exited her Gigi and Ri could see why standing in the middle of the road a short distance away was a man hold a Zanpakuto and on his head a cracked mask.
Ri quickly popped a soul candy into both gigis and order them to run. He could hear the car quickly turn and speed off as he charged after Rose. Rose had already engaged but she wasn't doing well , he strikes and kido were being blocked by the arrancars arm with ease, he was toying with her.
Ri knew she was out of her league but he knew better then to ask her to Run. Ri wasted no time and called Gáircas out into her released state. Ri flash stepped but as he did the arrancar landed a kick into Roses gut and then turn in time to block Ri's strike.
“Now here is the challenge I seek” He said as he struggled to hold Ri's blade in his hand. Ri unleashed his pressure and slowly his blade began to cut through the arrancars skin. Using his own form of shunpo the arrancar vanished then reappeared above Ri his Zanpakuto in hand ready to strike.
“Buile an Cas triple” Ri said as he swiped at the arrancar sending three blast up at him , the first he dodged the second struck his stomach and the second removed his hand sending his Zanpakuto fly to land on the ground. Rose immediately shunpo'd and stood on the blade , that was a mistake.
Before Ri could register what happened the Arrancar moved behind Rose and with a truly sinister grin he raised one hand then forced it through Roses back and out her stomach. For a moment Ri couldn't move then his entire being was absorbed into anger and rage.
Ri shunpo'd toward the Arrancar and launching into a fury of strikes aiming for the arrancars limb in order to inflict the most damaged without killing him, he didn't deserve a quick death. Firing two Buile an Cas Ri removed the Arrancars two arms and started into launching a final blow when the sky grew dark and cracks began to appear Ri stopped to look up and saw a number of Meno's faces fill the sky. A bright light surround the Arrancar and carried him away as his laugh filled the air.
Knowing he could do nothing Ri ran to Rose's side, she pulled her self to the side of the road out of harm way. Ri could she from the amount of blood she was in danger, he gripped her hand and starred into her eyes.
“Please say with me” Ri said desperately as he pressed a finger into his ear that held his mic and ordered immediate squad four assistance. Turn back he could see Roses eye begin to fade , as if the life the drain from her.
“Ri.” She said softly as he raised a hand and stroked Ri's tearfully face. Even in this state she kept her loving peaceful nature. “ Before I …. Before I... I want to tell you”.
“Don't speak like that your not going anyway , I won't let you” Ri said his voice quiver with a number of uncontrollable emotions , tears now ruled his face and a number dropped off his chin to land on the ground.
“I wanted to tell you I will always loved you nothing will ever change that, not even death.” Rose said speaking in such a normal and calm manner even though he hands were growing cold and her eyes were growing heavy.
“Please don't die” Ri begged ,somewhere inside him he knew nothing could be done her wounds were to great and help was to far away but he refused to believe it, he just couldn't
“Let me leave this life happy Ri” Rose asked as a single tear rolled off her face. Ri wiped the tear away and leaned in passionately kissing Rose. Her lips were cold , her hand had dropped to the ground , her eyes were shut but she was smiling.
Two member from squad four arrived and took care of Roses body and Ri sobbed alone by the roadside, though he felt sorrow along with many emotion one thing was on his mind, revenge. He followed the squad four member back through the gate.
Arriving back in the soul society Ri didn't follow Rose , instead he waited a for a few moment at the gate until it close. He walked toward the few kido corp member who operated the gate, all were cover from head to toe in robes and cloth.
For a moment Ri said nothing , he thought carefully then in a flash all of the kido corp members dropped to the ground. It took Ri a few minutes to open the gate, to Hueco Mundo
Ri stood still , his feet sank slightly into the sand. He thought of how exactly he would find his prey and decided instead of searching he'd lure his prey to him. Ri smiled as he let his pressure flow free , the wind around him began to circle him violently and soon a sand storm was flowing around Ri.
He slowly started walking as his released Zanpakuto vibrated in his hand , he wasn't the only one enraged by the days events even Gáircas was howling for blood. The desert seem peaceful to the normal eye but Ri could feel the mass movements of hollow beneath him in the menos forest.
"Are you ready Ri?" Gáircas's asked in her calm collected tone, it reminded him of Roses similar tone. A singled tear glided down him face and fell into the sand. Then from behind the see able horizon an echoing roar sounded.
Ri could now see an uncountable number of hollows of all rank , from low level hollow to meno's of all levels. Ri slowed his breath as the wind picked up, the sight of hollow and only fueled his rage.
"Gáircas I ask you once more fight with me , help me see this day to its end" Ri said in a suddenly calm tone. He felt Gáircas vibrate in his hand and he knew the answer. Moving with speed he'd ever known before Ri was in the center of the horde before even he knew it.
Firing off a number of blast Ri started whittling down the number of the hollows around him though every time one died another three took his place but that only meant more hollows for Ri to vent his anger on.
Prying his blade from a dead hollows mask he swung it around and cut through a hollows throat then set his sight on a towering Gillian a rare sight to see them in the desert.
"
Buile an Cas" Ri roar with all his might as he swung his blade in a full circle, a concentrated blast fired in every direction utterly obliterating every hollow unlucky enough to be in its path.
"two hundredth and sixty, sixty one , two , four ,eight" Ri count off as he fought with an undieing passion, he wasn't going to stop not till his revenge was complete the Arrancar had said he want a challenge and was Ri giving him that challenge
Ri ploughed his blade through a hollows masks when he felt the presence he'd been waiting on arrive , every hollow seem to shrink in size and retreat from the imposing presence on the newly arrive Arrancar.
"Sorry I'm late but I had to regenerate some of limb you understand. My name , well you may call me Cao" Cao said speaking in emotionless tone that only increased Ri's unmeasurable hatred for him
"Ri O'Nocht thats the name of your killer" Ri said he shunpo'd right in front of Cao and with his free hand he clenched a fist and swung with all his might. His punch connected and caught off guard Cao stumbled back a few pace.
Ri didn't wait for him to recover, he went for Cao neck with a quick and hopefully decisive blow but Cao manage to draw his Zanpakuto in time. The two entered in an exchanged of blows that was fought on instinct and skill. Neither could land a serious blow but upon breaking off both Cao and Ri were covered in small cuts and gashes.
"I see " Cao said as he smirked and wiped some trickles of blood from his face. "Your currently at Shikai level , the first release allow me to release my power as-well. End it all!"
Ri could feel Cao's pulse with power unlike anything Ri had ever felt before, it forced Ri's winds to retreat. Cao's white armor peeled off his body, his arms grew white blades and his zanpakuto split into two round blade know as chakram
Ri stood in awe as Cao raised his head and started into Ri's eyes with his own soulless eyes. Ri wanted nothing more to kill him but if he attacked now he'd surely die but weather he attack or not he didn't have the power to match him.
Cao smiled as he threw his two chakram toward Ri, instinctively Ri dodge but both of the blade came back around and left two gashes on both of his arm , then again on his leg making him drop to his knee. Now on their final run the blade attempted to cut off Ri's limb from his shoulder, they left two fatal wounds though the arm remained attached.
Ri fell to the ground and took what must be his last breath. Hitting the ground his mind raced with thought of Rose, he failed her completely now both of them were dead.
"Get up Ri" A familiar voice called out Ri tried to open his eye but he could. He knew the voice but he refused to believe it with out seeing her.
Prying his eye open Ri found himself not in the desert but in his inner sky blue world. He found himself back in good health and Rose's glowing face hanging over him, running her fingers through his hair as he laid his head on her lap. A baby bundled in blankets was in her arms
"This is not your time Ri , you listen to me. Since the day I meant you I knew you had greatness in you without a doubt I knew and so did everyone who ever fought beside you. Now get up and fight , not just for me but for your destiny." Rose said in her angelic voice. The baby cooed sweetly.
Ri stood and as he did Rose left him for what must be the last time. He now found Gáircas standing before him. She had rage in her eyes but a caring smile on her face.
"Ri this power is not mine but ours all you must do is release it, I will be able to heal your wounds for a short while but that is all we need." Gáircas said speaking very seriously well maintaining the caring quality that was always carried in her voice.
"I am ready Gáircas" Ri said and went he next open his eyes he found himself back lying on the sand, his cut had gone but blood still soaked the sand beneath him. He could hear Cao boasting on the crowds of hollows.
All attention was dragged from Cao onto Ri when he stood , apparently back from the dead. A cocky little grin found it way across Ri's face as he starred up into Cao's scarred eyes.
"This is not going to be quick Cao, I'm going to make you beg." Ri said as he started moving toward Cao who suddenly seemed to remember he had the advantage. Cao said his blades again and launched them at Ri. They flew straight from Ri both aimed for his head and both were inch away when Ri looked up and spoke
"Bankai"
The area around Ri exploded with both his pressure and winds that seem to flow directly out of Ri. Caos blade were force away due to the high pressure. Ri became surround in his own powers aura , when he next appeared he'd changed dramatically.
His hair turned a pure white color, his eyes became a shinning blue, his clothes had changed from the standard black robes to immaculate white attire that seem to shine of its own accord.
His Zanpakuto had gone under a transformation of it own into a greenish-blue staff , it now stood at around six feet taller, then Ri one end seemed to be overflowing with Ri's visible pressure and the other was a blade of sorts.
Ri looked at Cao with nothing but hatred in his eye for a moment Ri didn't move then with no warn Ri appeared behind Cao but left an after image behind. With his free hand his swung around and landed another punch into Cao's face sending him flying to the east.
Ri shunpo'd again and as Cao attempted to gain a footing Ri swiped low and cut into both of Cao's ankles. When Cao applied force onto his feet they broke the blood soaked the sand.
"ATTACK!" Cao called to the horde of hollow and like the mindless creature they were they charged at Ri. RI spun his staff around his on hand and quickly an almighty hurricane appeared from the calm skies and made it's way toward the horde of hollowing killing many of them. His launched an number of these and then walked over to Cao.
In a swift slice Ri removed all of Cao's limbs , Cao was now lay helpless on the ground unable to doing anything or even speak due to the levels of pain. Ri shunpo'd and stood higher over Cao.
Gripping his staff with both hand Ri standing spinning it with unimaginable speed , all of his previously made hurricane became sucked in as did all of the reiatsu in the air. Cao look up at Ri and with all the strength he could must he fired a ball from his mouth at Ri.
An immense concentrated ball of reiatsu and wind formed in the center of the Ri staff. Ri stopped the staff and fired the ball down toward Cao. Cao's bala hit into Ri's attack with no effect it was merely absorbed into it. The balled reached Cao's face and stopped inches away from his face.
"It ends now" Ri said as the ball exploded with unmeasurable power. It took the sand nearly ten minutes to fall back to the ground and as Ri look at around he knew the entire area of miles around was now void of life.
"What now?" Gáircas's voice suddenly asked as Ri started back toward the gate. Ri thought for moment on his answer then spoke in a soft tone.
"I don't care”
Rose soul before it re-enterd the cycle of rebirth was attack by hollows and the soul of her child was eaten. Rose's soul remain untouched but the pain caused by the lost of her child changed her, and over time she took became a hollow.
Perhaps it was the shinigami side of her or maybe she justed wanted to hurt other but from the moment she became a hollow she began devouring the soul of hollows. The power if gave her eased her pain and slowly Rose became something else a being of pain death and destruction. Rose O'Nocht was gone and a new being emerged one hell bent on ending everything.
RP Sample:
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Night had came and gone, it was now earlier morning the members of squad thirteen were all sleeping comfortable, all for one. From the kido field, chants and cries could be heard.Rose had yet to rest, she'd only joined the squad recently but since then she'd only left the training field on order or when rest was unavoidable.
“The pillar of heaven falls, damn thy fate. Crush the wicked.Hado seventeen Smite”
An eightside block of energy fired from her palm but after a moment it fade into the air, far from it's intended target of a trainning drummy. Rose cursed a few time then retook her stance, she slowed her breathing and concentrated her energy into her left hand, her right sat at her side.
“The pillar of heaven falls, damn thy fate. Crush the wicked.Hado seventeen Smite”
The kido fired again but erupted after traveling a few meters from Rose. Again she cured loudly this time, she clapped a hand to her mouth hoping no one was woke by her last thing she needed as one of the seated officers yelling at her. She gripped her hand again and focus his energy and concentrated her mind.
“The pillar of heaven falls, damn thy fate. Crush the wicked.Hado seventeen Smite”
The kido fired from her hand it neared the target but suddenly lost momentum and fell, exploding on the ground. Rose refrained from swearing this time instead she retrieved her bottle of water and drained it quickly, she always thought she had a talent for kido but this one was frustrating her thought this was the first time she attempting to learn a kido without the aid of a teacher.
Ri slept as always with his windows opened and thus the sounds of kido and curing shortly after awoke him. He stumbled to his window unsure whether he was dream or not but the cold morning air soon woke him up.
"Who could that be" He mutter to himself. Ri'd at once stage had been a night person but he didn't know anyone is his squad to train at night. His curiosity got the better of him and after pulling on his robes, he leaped from his window and landed on the adjacent building .
From these he could see the kido field and unmistakeable able he could see Rose training. Her hair blew like flames fight a draft in the wind and her voice though boiling with rage had a warming feature to it. He leaped again near to Rose, she turned to him and bowed her head immediately.
"Come on now Rose by now I'd of thought ya'd overcome such formalities." Ri said speaking in his thick Irish accent as present as ever. He could see the frustration in her eye, from the scorch marks on the ground he could tell her training wasn't going well.
"Sorry, they drummed it into us at the academy" Rose said with a slightly giggles. She could tell Ri had only awoken, his hair was a mess and his eyes were still sagging. She caught his eye for a brief second then turned away.
"I can't get this kido right, could you maybe help me" Rose said putting on her puppy dog eye thought she knew Ri was the kind of man who'd never deny a student in need of help.
"Course I will, try and again and let me see"
Rose retook her stance, held out her left hand and focused, focused her energy and her mind on channelling the kido. Her energy soon took form at her palm as she spoke.
"The pillar of heaven falls, damn thy fate. Crush the wicked.Hado seventeen Smite”
The kido fired but after travelling halfway down the field it fell to the ground, blast a hole in the gravel. Rose looked away, not wanting to look at Ri, she hated failing about all else.
Ri came behind her, and took both of her hand in his. He did speak but guided her hands. He placed her hands on top of one another, she closed her eyes and focus.
"Try again" He whispered softly in her ear. Rose opened her eyes, she could already feel a great movement of power within her, she set her sight on the training dummy on the far side of the field and spoke.
“The pillar of heaven falls, damn thy fate. Crush the wicked.Hado seventeen Smite”
The kido fired with twice the strength on its predecessors. It stuck the dummy with an exploded in an array of lights. Rose could feel Ri's heart beat, it was beating just as fast as hers was. She looked over her shoulder into Ri's eyes then turned her body toward him.
Neither them spoke.Rose had gripped Ri's hand. They leaned very closer together, no one to interrupt them now. They kissed, they broke off. An indescribable feeling filled the two that starred at each of the moment then came together in a passion kiss The road ahead was not going to be easy.
The sun rose bring with it the new day, it warmth crept into Ri's room and woke him. Ri's eyes open to angelic site, Rose sleeping opposite him. Ri didn't move for what must of been hours, he laid there watch her sleep.
Things had escalated quickly from this kiss out of the kido field, now the lay in Ri's bed, their clothes shattered across the room and a number of empty Saki bottle rolled on the floor.
Roses eye opened and close, a smiled appeared across her face. She moved closer to Ri and curled up to him, resting her head on his chest. Ri ran his finger gently through her luscious hair. He should of been worried about being found with a unseated member of his squad but he wasn't, for now he'd no cares or worries.
"So we meet again"
"So we do."
A bell rang somewhere in the barracks and a sigh escaped from both of them. Neither want to move but both knew they had to. With great difficulty they separated and slowly dress.
"Rose..."
"I know, this is our secret."
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Re: Rose Cleary
Sun Nov 21, 2010 8:14 pm
Alright, here are some things that need to be edited:
1) "Upon contact the Cero cause every pain receptor in the targets body to be simulated causing pain that simple can not be compared to anything. " You can't stimulate every pain receptor
2) Galrú Pian's final ability needs to be redone or removed. Since you could theoretically create an endless cycle.
1) "Upon contact the Cero cause every pain receptor in the targets body to be simulated causing pain that simple can not be compared to anything. " You can't stimulate every pain receptor
2) Galrú Pian's final ability needs to be redone or removed. Since you could theoretically create an endless cycle.
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Re: Rose Cleary
Sun Nov 21, 2010 8:42 pm
"The Pain Cero- Used only by Rose this cero is amazingly unique in a number of ways. Firstly the cero is fired from an opened wound (Usually a cut on the hand), secondly it has a chant. "Feel, feel the pain of my world" and finally it causes no physical damage on it's target. Upon contact the Cero cause every pain receptor in the targets body to be simulated causing pain that simple can not be compared to anything."
So it causes no damage at all... What is the point to this? This kinda seems just an illusion, and that's god mod in itself, your not actually able to make people feel anyway unless it's because of you actually DOING damage to them.
Lánluas - A cross between the shinigami shunpo and the Arrancar Sonido, thought being fast then both it is more taxing and can only cover a small distant.
There is no point in having this at all, so why have it?
So it causes no damage at all... What is the point to this? This kinda seems just an illusion, and that's god mod in itself, your not actually able to make people feel anyway unless it's because of you actually DOING damage to them.
Lánluas - A cross between the shinigami shunpo and the Arrancar Sonido, thought being fast then both it is more taxing and can only cover a small distant.
There is no point in having this at all, so why have it?
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Re: Rose Cleary
Mon Nov 22, 2010 2:24 am
Wow just wow
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Re: Rose Cleary
Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:28 pm
Well, those are the changes that need to be made. If you're not going to make them, I will go ahead and move this to denied.
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Re: Rose Cleary
Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:30 pm
Sorry sorry I'll revise them now, that actual post was intend for a completely different forums I do apologize
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Re: Rose Cleary
Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:16 am
I didn't make the changes yet. I've not had a chance to.
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