Zane's Fully Awakened Upgrade (Finished)

Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:55 pm

Name Of Character: Zane Fenier
Link To Character Profile: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t5561-zane-fenier-completed-approved-0-3
Reasons For Upgrading: Zane has achieved this state of power through his acquiring of Semi-Immortality & his overall power as his tier is 0-3+.

He has also pushed himself to achieve the power that he has through events like in Malaysia & most recently in Sydney. Zane overall has been a very involved part of the Kokuryuteshi as he has taken over the country of Turkey and turned Atarashii into a war zone. Overall through his many adventures and missions, he has been utilizing his abilities well enough to achieve such a level as well.

(If further reasoning is needed or links to threads, just ask below)

What Are You Upgrading:

Chi Ability:

Universal Shift/ Using the common know fact that chi is universal energy and that it comes along with just about every person or object, Zane is able to shift the properties of something or someone's universal energy to inflict spiritual injuries and many other uses. The theory in using this, is that Zane can utilize his command over Universal energy and his enormous amount of it to rather increase or drain the universal energy out of objects or people with this process. He can also use this to take energy from other things around him to further increase the amount of universal energy that he has around him at a given point in combat. If Zane used this shift correctly he could also easily reinforce objects with amazing amounts of durability by boosting the universal energy within an object. However with this shifting Zane can also overpower an object with the enormous amount of universal energy to the point that the object would probably explode if not countered correctly.

This form of usage for Universal energy mostly revolves around the use in relation to increasing or decreasing his own chi energy & having it applied to, or supplied from another object. A drawback of this manipulation is that as distances increase between the objects that he is shifting from or to, the easier it becomes for others to interfere with this ability, however it also becomes a much more difficult task, when Zane has direct contact with the object in question.

(When it comes to how much he takes from a person and defending against it, Zane typically can use this ability against NPCs he finds it relatively easy for him to drain them due to the fact that they hold little resistance to him already. The amount that he drains over time for PCs only will make the more susceptible to pain endurance and willpower to pull through attacks and in the case of others that use chi energy a lowering in their energy output. However in severe cases overtime some may find their overall energy drained if he focuses upon them for too long and isn't stopped.

In the case of those that are boosted by Universal energy will not only find an increase in their pain endurance and will to withstand abilities, those increased by Zane's ability will find after three posts that their energy is being restored. In the case that Zane is instead using this ability upon himself and another to increase, they will find this to happen over a single post as Zane can more openly influence the transfer of his own universal energy since he is most definitely willing to himself. Finally, when he applies this to drain objects they will find their overall durability also slowly getting reduced, even in the case of spiritual key objects like a Zanpakutō and Seishin Buki, he an utilize this effect of universal energy. In the case of objects like technology that this is utilized on not only will their durability be cut, but he will also begin to cut their effectiveness just like a person. Obviously as stated before, practically the opposite will begin to happen in the case of objects that are being increased.)

In regards of preventing Zane's ability upon a character, one would need some kind of knowledge on how to deal with Universal energy or are a user of it themselves. Overall Zane can drain another user of universal energy as well, however he finds that they can simply break off his connection in some form with their own knowledge and uses. It most likely can also be figured out by some others that understand Universal energy, to come to realize how do deal with his ability at this current state. Although he does have a fixed rate at which he can normally drain people, he can utilize his energy to further try to drain energy from them, but there is a small point to this, if Zane isn't even draining any energy at a low and easy rate, why try to utilize a large amount of energy to speed it up or attempt at draining further. In the end of it all, it takes energy in some points to drain energy. It would be better to implement his energy in other ways.

(Tier will not effect the rate at which he drains people, however, it can effect the amount at which things start to come into effect. He can start making a 5 or 4 tier character to lose a large amount of their universal energy over a post, where a 1 or 0 tier might take three or four posts to reach a majority drained by him. in most cases however, not matter where a great amount of it has been drained or not, abilities become more taxing, ultimately characters that have their universal energy drained will begin to experience drops in their endurance & stamina. The amount in feel is being drained will fluctuate from person to person not only based on tier but will skills and many other factors.)

Awakened Ability:

Universal Manipulation/ Zane utilizes Universal energy at a much more in depth level as he can now not only shift his energy between objects but also, he can now shift one object's universal energy to a source that is completely separate from Zane, In a sense Zane could now re adjust the capable universal energy contained between two humans if he was not interfered with, he could probably transfer all of one's power to the other rather easily. He may also do this with other objects as he might transfer the universal energy of a spiritual enhanced object or place to a different location. This could be used to remove protections or barriers from one location and place their effects elsewhere. This could in theory also allow Zane to transfer beneficial protections or barriers to upon his allies or something that he is try to protect and/or save for the time being.

This ability however applies only transfers between one object and another. As to say Zane could utilize multiple manipulations at once but it would be like utilizing this ability twice as well meaning that it is twice as costing upon Zane's level of energy in combat. Once again however, the distance between him and the objects that he tries to manipulate can be easily interfered with by the distance between him and his choice. However this ability can become much easier or difficult by also the distance between him, the first object/person, and the second.

When it comes to come Zane using his ability to drain an opponent or ally of universal energy it somewhat comes at a willing system in a way. If they offer no resistance to him draining them, then this process will go through without fail, however if you can offer resistance, this can often become difficult to a point. This point, is that he can only take a smaller rate, or nothing at all if they successfully defend against it. As he drains a person of their universal energy, in most cases there essential abilities will typically not even really feel a change as most use a different form of energy unless they are also a chi user. However as their energy is drained they will begin to lose their overall stamina, as to say, they will begin to feel more exhausted over time.

(When it comes to how much he takes from a person and defending against it, Zane typically can use this ability against NPCs he finds it relatively easy for him to drain them due to the fact that they hold little resistance to him already. The amount that he drains over time for PCs only will make the more susceptible to pain endurance and willpower to pull through attacks and in the case of others that use chi energy a lowering in their energy output. However in severe cases overtime some may find their overall energy drained if he focuses upon them for too long and isn't stopped. After about three posts of this within constant use against an enemy they will find about a fourth of their remaining internal energy has slipped away from them.

In the Case of those that are boosted by Universal energy will not only find an increase in their pain endurance and will to withstand abilities, those increased by Zane's ability will find after three posts that their energy is being restored. In the case that Zane is instead using this ability upon himself and another to increase, they will find this to happen over a single post as Zane can more openly influence the transfer of his own universal energy since he is most definitely willing to himself. Finally, when he applies this to drain objects they will find their overall durability also slowly getting reduced, even in the case of spiritual key objects like a Zanpakutō and Seishin Buki, he an utilize this effect of universal energy. In the case of objects like technology that this is utilized on not only will their durability be cut, but he will also begin to cut their effectiveness just like a person. Obviously as stated before, practically the opposite will begin to happen in the case of objects that are being increased.)

In regards of preventing Zane's ability upon a character, one would need some kind of knowledge on how to deal with Universal energy or are a user of it themselves. Overall Zane can drain another user of universal energy as well, however he finds that they can simply break off his connection in some form with their own knowledge and uses. It most likely can also be figured out by some others that understand Universal energy, to come to realize how do deal with his ability at this current state. Although he does have a fixed rate at which he can normally drain people, he can utilize his energy to further try to drain energy from them, but there is a small point to this, if Zane isn't even draining any energy at a low and easy rate, why try to utilize a large amount of energy to speed it up or attempt at draining further. In the end of it all, it takes energy in some points to drain energy. It would be better to implement his energy in other ways.

(Tier will not effect the rate at which he drains people, however, it can effect the amount at which things start to come into effect. He can start making a 5 or 4 tier character to lose a large amount of their universal energy over a post, where a 1 or 0 tier might take three or four posts to reach a majority drained by him. in most cases however, not matter where a great amount of it has been drained or not, abilities become more taxing, ultimately characters that have their universal energy drained will begin to experience drops in their endurance & stamina. The amount in feel is being drained will fluctuate from person to person not only based on tier but will skills and many other factors.)

Full Awakened State:

Universal Reconfiguration/ Zane's use of Universal energy reaches a new level as it comes upon this state of power. Until before Zane has the ability to manipulate multiple transfers, shifts, or changes in the universal energy levels of other objects or people. However for this exchange of conserving a bit of energy, Zane is only able to use this method in the case of all the transfers being targeted to one object or person specifically tied as the middle person to it all. Also in most cases he can only have the manipulations going in one direction with this method, however in the cases that he is the connecting factor then energy may be sent either way towards him or away. Utilizing this he can change many factors of universal energy and kind of reconfigure the battlefield in a way that will most likely favor him 7 his allies more so than others.

As an added twist to this ability however Zane may also use it's full capabilities to change the properties of something completely. As to say that he could increase the universal energy within water and within response cause the universal energy to move the atoms of the water at a much higher speed to the point that it simply turns into water vapor no matter what temperature it might appear to be around it. Also as a final resort to using this reconfiguration he can implant his universal energy within an object and take command of it. Similar to if Zane applied his universal energy to a pond of water, he could not only manipulate the properties of the water, but also command it to rise up out of it's container and attempt to grab and drown his foes in one case. So long as his universal energy is implanted with the object he can seize control of it, he can also use this ability to try and hijack other's abilities as he could manipulate and implant his own energy with the attack overriding the former controller's grip on the attack.

(When it comes to how much he takes from a person and defending against it, Zane typically can use this ability against NPCs he finds it relatively easy for him to drain them due to the fact that they hold little resistance to him already. The amount that he drains over time for PCs only will make the more susceptible to pain endurance and willpower to pull through attacks and in the case of others that use chi energy a lowering in their energy output. However in severe cases overtime some may find their overall energy drained if he focuses upon them for too long and isn't stopped. After about three posts of this within constant use against an enemy they will find about a fourth of their remaining internal energy has slipped away from them.

In the Case of those that are boosted by Universal energy will not only find an increase in their pain endurance and will to withstand abilities, those increased by Zane's ability will find after three posts that their energy is being restored. In the case that Zane is instead using this ability upon himself and another to increase, they will find this to happen over a single post as Zane can more openly influence the transfer of his own universal energy since he is most definitely willing to himself. Finally, when he applies this to drain objects they will find their overall durability also slowly getting reduced, even in the case of spiritual key objects like a Zanpakutō and Seishin Buki, he an utilize this effect of universal energy. In the case of objects like technology that this is utilized on not only will their durability be cut, but he will also begin to cut their effectiveness just like a person. Obviously as stated before, practically the opposite will begin to happen in the case of objects that are being increased.)

In regards of preventing Zane's ability upon a character, one would need some kind of knowledge on how to deal with Universal energy or are a user of it themselves. Overall Zane can drain another user of universal energy as well, however he finds that they can simply break off his connection in some form with their own knowledge and uses. It most likely can also be figured out by some others that understand Universal energy, to come to realize how do deal with his ability at this current state. Although he does have a fixed rate at which he can normally drain people, he can utilize his energy to further try to drain energy from them, but there is a small point to this, if Zane isn't even draining any energy at a low and easy rate, why try to utilize a large amount of energy to speed it up or attempt at draining further. In the end of it all, it takes energy in some points to drain energy. It would be better to implement his energy in other ways.

(Tier will not effect the rate at which he drains people, however, it can effect the amount at which things start to come into effect. He can start making a 5 or 4 tier character to lose a large amount of their universal energy over a post, where a 1 or 0 tier might take three or four posts to reach a majority drained by him. in most cases however, not matter where a great amount of it has been drained or not, abilities become more taxing, ultimately characters that have their universal energy drained will begin to experience drops in their endurance & stamina. The amount in feel is being drained will fluctuate from person to person not only based on tier but will skills and many other factors.)

Universal Devastation/ Using a rather large amount of chi energy, Zane applies his energy to various objects and turns them into ticking time bombs that are quite destructive. By applying his energy to an object in an obvious overloading amount, Zane can make it to the point that the object will begin to break down and upon reaching this breaking point, all of the energy will most likely be released in a very violent manner. The destruction can easily wreck an entire city if Zane isn't trying to contain himself at all and the way that he applies this energy only gives the explosion that the energy produces only take on a very unique twist.

^Devastation Sphere/ Upon using this form of Universal Devastation, Zane will form a sphere of energy upon an object and will slowly feed the energy into the object over the course of a post, upon the point in which the sphere is either completely consumed by the object or completely consumed, the object will begin to breakdown already to a point in which it will explode in conclusion that the sphere has not been completely absorbed shows the extension of the destruction that it will produce. Those exception spheres will not only cause an explosion but will stay in an explosion like state for an entire post following it's initial spark point. It can be noted that Zane can make multiples of these within a post but typically it requires him to make a physical connection with the object in question, meaning that if an object connected to Zane is touching it then it is able to be utilized by this technique.

^Devastation Point/ In another method of Universal Devastation, Zane utilizes abilities & his massive amount of energy upon a single direction on an object, instead of the sphere timer appearing like before, the object immediately is feed an overwhelming amount of Universal energy at a point to where the inflicted part breaks down and releases the energy in a continuous motion but rather than the simple flow that it had before it is a violent blast of explosive energy trying to escape it's incapable container. It is also noted that an entire object is not eradicated by this move if it is inflicted with this ability, however this is a question however of if they can survive the massive release of energy that flows after it. Just like before, Zane can utilize this abilities multiple times over posts and threads due to the pretty much near infinite amount of chi energy that he possess within this state of power. Also he must find himself or an object that he is physically connected, to inflict the energy into the object that he would like to utilize this on.

Chi Barricade/ Utilizing the chi upon the battlefield and his own, Zane can create a barricade in many shapes and forms, this could be torn between a plain wall of chi energy, perhaps a web of sorts, or even a streamer flying off another object or person. Utilizing this ability as stated creates a barricade of sorts for Zane to utilize with the properties similar to his shields and armor within previous states, however he also ties in the energy of buildings to further reinforce his technique as he might reinforce two separate buildings to withstand an attack but he wishes to also protect the people that might be right in between these two buildings. As such he will connect the two buildings through his own chi and therefore make a connection that takes the form of a barrier. Not only is this a barrier of Zane's chi but it will also implement the chit from the two buildings therefore for the barrier to break, not only would Zane's energy need to be compromised but all of the objects connected by his chi.

Weak Point/ Should Zane ever be able to ever strike a foe by an means that is physically connected to himself, he may imprint his chi upon them to work away at their defenses, as he would ever strike again his own chi would connect with the chi within them and severely weaken any of their spiritual defenses to further attacks. However the first attack does have to be a physical connecting one, the second however does not and as such should be taken with caution. The final notion of Zane's weak point ability is that it will last a total of three posts after the initial strike happening to a person as he has designed this ability to also try to go undetected by his opponents and as such he doesn't want his foreign universal energy being sensed either.
Any Extra Notes: None so far.

Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:26 pm

«MOVING THIS THREAD SOMEWHERE»

M8, if this is a WIP, than it needs to go into the WIP Power Upgrade section of this board. As a result, I'll be moving this for you and placing that thread there to free-up space.

Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:46 am

«REVIEWING THIS POWER UPGRADE»

About this whole taking energy from other people business. I don't really care much about most of the other capacities of the power, but when it comes to draining power from others, how fast can he do it? I'd like there to be more explanation on that. Is it much faster with NPC's as opposed to in character people in the thread? Is there a limit to how many times this can occur? I think you should expand on that aspect of Universal Energy much more as it leaves me with an unsteady feeling. Everything else is fine but that.

Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:06 am

Edits made and abilities further explained as requested.

Sat Nov 23, 2013 6:37 am

«REVIEWING THIS POWER UPGRADE»

Only thing left to do in my opinion is probably state how fast he can drain them from other tiers. As I can see him having more swift drains from those on lower tiers, but when it comes to 0 tiers, I can see him having a harder time. So I'd most likely ask to make some sort of list. Such as how swift 5 tiers can be effected, 4 tiers, 3 tiers, 2 tiers and etc.

Mon Nov 25, 2013 3:34 pm

OK, edited the abilities once more and have added the factors at which Zane will drain a person and how the overall effects they experience from it relies on tier & that the skill of a character with chi energy or having knowledge in chi energy will give a much better ability to reduce the rate at which Zane drains universal energy. All of this is stated below and added to each ability.

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In regards of preventing Zane's ability upon a character, one would need some kind of knowledge on how to deal with Universal energy or are a user of it themselves. Overall Zane can drain another user of universal energy as well, however he finds that they can simply break off his connection in some form with their own knowledge and uses. It most likely can also be figured out by some others that understand Universal energy, to come to realize how do deal with his ability at this current state. Although he does have a fixed rate at which he can normally drain people, he can utilize his energy to further try to drain energy from them, but there is a small point to this, if Zane isn't even draining any energy at a low and easy rate, why try to utilize a large amount of energy to speed it up or attempt at draining further. In the end of it all, it takes energy in some points to drain energy. It would be better to implement his energy in other ways.

(Tier will not effect the rate at which he drains people, however, it can effect the amount at which things start to come into effect. He can start making a 5 or 4 tier character to lose a large amount of their universal energy over a post, where a 1 or 0 tier might take three or four posts to reach a majority drained by him. in most cases however, not matter where a great amount of it has been drained or not, abilities become more taxing, ultimately characters that have their universal energy drained will begin to experience drops in their endurance & stamina. The amount in feel is being drained will fluctuate from person to person not only based on tier but will skills and many other factors.)
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Wed Nov 27, 2013 7:32 pm

«APPROVING THIS POWER UPGRADE»

Everything seems alright to me now. I'll go ahead and approve it with all the changes made. After this post, I'll put it in Approved Power Upgrades and go from there.

Zane's Fully Awakened Upgrade (Finished)

Zane's Fully Awakened Upgrade (Finished)

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