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Re: Der Rüstung Streiter [APPROVED, 0-2]
Sun Feb 18, 2018 7:49 pm
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Expert, at the max.
For reference:
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Turn it into a standard shield, include an activation requirement, and remove the excerpt of them being immune to all forms of lingering status effects.
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You're using the wrong measurement. You've switched from Fahrenheit to Kelvin. I would like all of the measurements changed to Fahrenheit, as it not only makes this more consistent but also makes it easier for me to understand. Also, I will mention that this will not be a 0-tier at the end of this. So, I would like you to change this to be around 5,000 - 6,000 Fahrenheit.
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No. A couple hundred thousand at best.
Thank you.
1 - 2 miles at best.
I would prefer this be reworded so that it more directly refers to the fact that they can't control the trajectory.
One more thing:
Just remove this line as a whole.
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100 meters at max. Additionally, if this thing can extend to that length, then the cutting power should be heavily reduced.
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Ok, thank you, makes this easier.[/adm]
Dexterity wrote:Well all it means is that they can make a barrier as strong as their tier would allow them to. It's the easiest way to explain it without trying to get into details.
Expert, at the max.
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Well it was always meant to be more effective against the non-physical types. I could fix it although turning it into a plain shield. Also, the activation requirement is no big deal.
Turn it into a standard shield, include an activation requirement, and remove the excerpt of them being immune to all forms of lingering status effects.
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A lit candle is somewhat over 1000 degrees Kelvin. How much do you propose I lower this and still be effective in the 0 tier range?
You're using the wrong measurement. You've switched from Fahrenheit to Kelvin. I would like all of the measurements changed to Fahrenheit, as it not only makes this more consistent but also makes it easier for me to understand. Also, I will mention that this will not be a 0-tier at the end of this. So, I would like you to change this to be around 5,000 - 6,000 Fahrenheit.
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Lowering the temperature to 1 million sound fine?
No. A couple hundred thousand at best.
"Incinerate everything it passes through with ease" was more to make the ability sound intimidating, I'll remove it.
Thank you.
Humans are already firing sniper rounds in the kilometers so how much do you propose I lower this?
1 - 2 miles at best.
'Can't be redirected' is a drawback. It is there to ensure that the NPC can't control the trajectory of their Holy Arrow as Quincies can do, just as it says in the previous ability.
I would prefer this be reworded so that it more directly refers to the fact that they can't control the trajectory.
One more thing:
...which will hit its target far, far before they hear the gunshot...
Just remove this line as a whole.
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What range do you propose? Also light is weightless; if there is a drawback then it should be something else entirely.
100 meters at max. Additionally, if this thing can extend to that length, then the cutting power should be heavily reduced.
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I will remove this, more because as the years go by the less I like this weapon.
Ok, thank you, makes this easier.[/adm]
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Re: Der Rüstung Streiter [APPROVED, 0-2]
Sun Apr 15, 2018 3:29 pm
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