Ritorusutā[Approved 4-4]

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- Name: Ritorusutā
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- Gender: Male
- Appearance Age: Ritorusutā has developed a new kido, the name of the kido is Nenrei bodimōfu. It stands for Age Body Morph. As the name suggests the kido makes him appear to be around 25,but it takes a constant amount of spiritual energy to use. for this reason when Ritorusutā goes into battles he deactivates the kido and changes into his true age appearance which looks to be about 70.
- Age: 1456
- Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

- Appearance Description: Appearance Description: When Ritorusutā has his Nenrei bodimōfu active he is a 5 foot 9 fit man.He has Red hair that drapes down to his shoulders. he has bright blue eyes but not to thick of eyebrows.
He almost always has a happy face that spreads to others and makes many wonder why he is a rouge. He wears a dull grey robe that starts with a collar that reaches
his chin. The robe is tied around his neck and flows from his back, and covers most of his chest. The robe reaches down to his knees. the areas that the robe does not cover is covered by light grey wrappings.
Ritorusutā has a slight muscle build. He Also has a Grey Bag of sorts which covers most of his red hair.If a fight comes to the point where Ritorusutā is forced to deactivate his Nenrei bodimōfu
an explosion of reiatsu that will twirl like a tornado around Ritorusutā and will blow anything around him back several feet. when the tornado clears and Ritorusutā is visible the first thing you see
is his bright red hair. after that you notice that he appears a lot older than he was when he had Nenrei bodimōfu active. his hair is still the same, but his face has the look of an old sad man. below his eyes you can see heavy bags of all the people and loved ones that he lost in his life time. He no longer has the happy look that makes others feel good about them selves.
he has a sense of dread around him like an old veteran that has seen to much in his time.His top cloak is blown off when he releases Nenrei bodimōfu.
He still has his grey under clothes on but he has lost the muscle build. He now appears to be a skinny and fragile old man. He also has several scars across his body that you can see.

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- Personality: Personality: Personality: Ritorusutā has almost two personalities just like he has two different looks thanks to his Nenrei bodimōfu.
His Younger self is a happy and hyper young man. Enthusiastic: When Ritorusutā has his Nenrei bodimōfu active he is very jumpy and happy about everything. He is one of those
people that when your around them they make you want to be happy and almost put you in a good mood. TRUSTWORTHY: Most people will trust him right away and for good reason.
while Ritorusutā still has his Nenrei bodimōfu active he sees no reason to act out of charactor and will do what ever it takes to help and protect you. he will also he hold his word till the end.

playful: While I already stated how Ritorusutā was Enthusiastic he is also very playful with little kids and will play games with them and do anything to make them laugh.
while he is like this does not mean that many kids will walk up to him. because of his appearance many parents wont let there kids go to him.

PROTECTIVE: while he is very playful and happy, if something happens to go down he will protect you no matter what. He does-int even have to know you that well. and if the fight gets to much of a threat, he will deactivate Nenrei bodimōfu.
His older self.SERIOUS:while Ritorusutā is in his true age he no longer jokes around or plays. He will most likely be bringing out his most powerful attacks and go all out.

SAD: He now carry's a very sad look in his eyes that shows that he does-int want to be fighting but he does because he has to.
PROTECTIVE: He is still very protective and will risk his life to save yours.has almost two personalities just like he has two different looks thanks to his Nenrei bodimōfu.
His Younger self is a happy and hyper young man. Enthusiastic: When Ritorusutā has his Nenrei bodimōfu active he is very jumpy and happy about everything. He is one of those
people that when your around them they make you want to be happy and almost put you in a good mood.
TRUSTWORTHY: Most people will trust him right away and for good reason.
while Ritorusutā still has his Nenrei bodimōfu active he sees no reason to act out of charactor and will do what ever it takes to help and protect you. he will also he hold his word till the end.

playful: While I already stated how Ritorusutā was Enthusiastic he is also very playful with little kids and will play games with them and do anything to make them laugh.
while he is like this does not mean that many kids will walk up to him. because of his appearance many parents wont let there kids go to him.

PROTECTIVE: while he is very playful and happy, if something happens to go down he will protect you no matter what. He does-int even have to know you that well. and if the fight gets to much of a threat, he will deactivate Nenrei bodimōfu.

JOKEFULL: He is aways joking around even if he is in a fight, he will try and joke him self out of fights.He will also go as far as dressing up in weird but funny costumes to make kids laugh.
His older self.SERIOUS:while Ritorusutā is in his true age he no longer jokes around or plays. He will most likely be bringing out his most powerful attacks and go all out.

SAD: He now carry's a very sad look in his eyes that shows that he does-int want to be fighting but he does because he has to.

PROTECTIVE: He is still very protective and will risk his life to save yours.

STRAIGHT FOWARD: He wont be joking around to tell you the least. He will tell you the truth and will not back away under circumstaces. If he says that he is going to kill you, you better be ready for a fight.
GENTLE: While he is stern and serious, if there is a kid around Ritorusuta will be like an old grand parent to them and take care of them to the best of his care. Although even if he is in a fight he will try to calm them down and let them know that everything is going to be ok. But if he knows that he will not be able to win the fight he inform the kid to run away while he will risk his life for them.


- Likes: Ritorusutā likes to play with little kids and likes to be able to relax.He also loves tea and will do anything to get a some. His favorite food is bananas.

- Dislikes: Pears, He hates pears. He also has a strong disliking for the 13 court guard squad



- History: june 27th Some where in Asia:It was a peaceful day in the town. Kids were running around and playing tag. old couples would watch from the porches while drinking tea and smile at the kids.Men would be hard at work plowing and seeding for the harvest to come.Mothers would be preparing food and getting ready for the dinner meal.And to make the time even better the birds were singing such a beautiful song. and the trees would be dancing to song and the wind. This was a average day in the town,such a lovely town. suddenly a loud scream shot threw the walls. it echoed
threw the trees and made all the children scared. the older folk jumped in there seats. the Men stopped working and looked around. The women rushed to find what was wrong. But nothing was wrong in fact it was something beautiful,Child Birth.On that day Ritorusutā was born into this world.
The screaming continued on as the mother pushed and pushed just hoping that it would all be over soon.Finally the sun began to set as finally the mother stoped screaming and the new born started.
The mother smiled.No it was more than a smile she laughed, a deep happy luaph. she held her baby and all her worry's began to float away. she looked up to the sky, the room she was in had a window at the top which allowed her to see the stars coming into focus. "you see that? stars are the most beautiful things there are.and your my little star, Ritorusutā ."
Years later Ritorusutā was just starting to grown older. It was his 10 Birthday party,but nothing went as planned. He was supposed to learn how to plow with his farther but that never happened. He woke with a start after hearing his name bieng called down stairs. "Ritorusutā!! come down!" Ritorusutā quickly shot up out of bed and rand down the stairs.
As soon as he hit the last stair he took a deep breath through his nose and smelled what could only be bacon. He rounded the corner that led to the kitchen and he found his mother at the firepit happly working away at her sons favorite meal.
"YES!!!" Ritorusutā jumped up and down in indictment. After breakfast he was told to go out side because his farther was waiting for him.He ran outside and followed the path that led to where the family kept there farm.
LATER THAT DAY: It was just about time for dinner when both son and father were tired after a hard days work. the father put his hand on his sons shoulder and was about to say somthing when a loud scream echoed through the farm.
the father looked to the house as he saw his duaghter run torarwds them with blood on her face. The dad quickley ran as fast as he could to get to her. but before he could a rider on horse came behind her and cut her down.
the father screamed in anger and tried to jump at the horse rider but he to was cut down.Ritorusutā fell to his knees, "NOOOO!" the boy wept as he watched his farther fall and die. the man on the horse rode up to him.
The man looked scruffy with clothes made out of fur. the rider picked the boy up "your coming with us boy" Ritorusutā screamed and fought but he couldint do nothing to fight back. the rider met up with a group of riders that were actually bandits.Ritorusutā began to live with the bandits and found a group of other children that all had the same thing happen to them.
the children had to learn to fight and fend for them selves.
Years later Ritorusutā is 16 and still lives with the bandits but mostly sticks around the other teenagers. One day all the children were called together to one place and the leader of the bandits stood before them. "Only one of you will become a true raider!" all the children teenagers looked around in confusion.
"what do you mean?" on of them shouted. The head bandit launched. the other bandits stepped up and gave all the children weapons and herded them in to a room with only one way out. The bandits locked the door. "Now then fight to the death and the winner will become one of us!"
none of the children moved. Some of them cried, some just collapsed on the ground. Ritorusutā stepped back and distanced him self from the others.one of the teenagers who was given a axe screamed and charged one of the girls.
the girl screamed and sobbed and tried to run but could-int make it in enough time as the boys axe rammed into her head and she dropped. all of the others looked in terror. and for a split second nothing happens. than all hell broke lose. Half the boys and girls charged the others. blood was every where. one boy charged Ritorusutā.Ritorusutā narrowed his eyes and dogged the first attack and had to swing his own weapon and kill his friend.
As the fight went on more and more were killed. finally it came down to Ritorusutā and a girl. the girl had a spear, while Ritorusutā had a sword. Ritorusutā knew that he was in danger, this girl was strong.
she shot forward and thrust her spear at him. he tried his best to jump back but was still stabbed in the arm. Ritorusutā winced in pain but took the time. He grabbed on to the spear to hold it that stabbed the Girl in the chest. she fell. Ritorusutā looked around and saw the door opening, The leader walked in smiling. "perfect fight"
the leader pulled out his sword and advanced on Ritorusutā . "What are you doing?" Ritorusutā stepped back in fear."you said that if i won i could live!" the leader smirked. "i lied." the leader raised his sword and droped in onto the boy.

The boy died all alone. but soon after he died he found a Shinigami that performed konso. In soul society things were not as they are now. Most of the known figures weren’t even born yet. As Ritorusutā went through the academy he found that he was terrible at sword play and started to rely on kido more. As he finally graduated and got his Zanpakutō Ritorusutā only some what decent at Sword play. He still relied heavily on kido and eventually becoming skilled at it. When Ritorusutā was finaly starting get good at fighting and had a good career ahead of him he was orderd to do something that he didn’t want to do. He was ordered to kill innocent people for the benefit of soul society . Ritorusutā rejected the mission and fought to protect the people. Ritorusutā was banned from soul society, but the banning did not go right. Ritorusutā tried to use his kido to stop the banning but simply messed it up. Because of this when he was banned he was put in deep sleep for a very long time, until the current time in the story line of the RP.
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- Reiatsu Color: Greyish Black

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Haka supīkā (Grave speaker)
- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Haka supīkā looks to be the Grim reaper. He is 20 feet tall and bend down and whoever he is looking at.He holds a sythe. For the most part
you dont see his hands because he is usually in the shadows. but when you do you can tell that he has skeleton hands that bend. he has black steel boots that point up. you
cant see his face because he has a hood on but you can see to glowing eyes that stick out.
- Inner World: The inner world is a massive Grave that goes on forever in every direction. in the center(where Ritorusutā appears there is a dead white tree that has razor sharp branches. the floor is covered in mist and it is always night.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : A average sword. But with a grey hangle

I will put in my shikai and bankai when i reach that tier, or after you give me my starting tier.
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Kido: Strong in kido and frequently creates new kido.Ritorusutā almost never pulls out his Zanpakto because he ends most fights with kido.
Nenrei bodimōfu: One of the Kido that Ritorusutā Created is Nenrei bodimōfu. Nenrei bodimōfu is a kido that is almost like a tempary body time shift. If changes your body to a past time, while you still have all of your abilities.



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General Skills
• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
• Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

[Click Spoiler for definitions of each skill]
Spoiler:



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- Roleplay Sample: The wind rustled through the air as Ritorusutā stood before the unknown man. Ritorusutā squinted his eyes and got ready for a fight. the man started to laugh.
Ritorusutā steped back in caution not knowing what to expect from the man. The man finally got him self under control and smiled. "you know you are doomed against Me!"
the man threw his hands in the air to emphasis what he was saying. It was Ritorusutā's turn to smile, "oh am I"
Saying this caused the man to go into another uncontrollable laugh. At a closer look the man appeared to be in his 50's.he wore a white suit that almost looked like a captains suit.
"do you think that some young kid like you could defeat me? I have mastered all the arts of kido! you are nothing" the man was caught short in mid sentence.
"release Nenrei bodimōfu!" A huge cloud of dust shot around Ritorusutā. waves of wind hit the man as he was pushed back. his eyes wide he had no idea what was going on.
A grey Reistu was bieng released into the air. "what is this!" the man stepped back. Finnaly the dust cleared. the first thing the man sees is red. at first he has
no idea what it is. but than he noticed that it was hair. And the young man was no longer young! he was old, in his 70's!
Ritorusutā looked at the floor. he had a sad look. he didint like to get serious. "you mastered the forms of kido? should i be scared? Have you ever asked your selves who made kido?"
the unknown mans eyes widened. "Me" Ritorusutā looked up to see what the man was doing after he learned this new peace of Info. The man smiled "hahaha Ok, and i created the Zanpakto,haha. whatever"
THe man pointed his hand at Ritorusutā. "Hadō #63. Raikōhō!" A orb of what looked like lightening appeared in the mans hand. Suddenly a massive bolt shot out at Ritorusutā. while it was still on the way
there the man used shunpo to get behind the man and pointed his hand again at Ritorusutā. "hadō #88. Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō!"
Out of no where a huge beam of sprituel energy Shot out of his hand. and flew towards Ritorusutā. The man shunpo'd to a hill on the side to get out of the way. just as the Bolts were about to hit Ritorusutā he smiled. "Bakudō 92, Hogo-bako" A massive cube appeared around
Ritorusutā just mila seconds from impact.As both Hadō spells impacted a huge explosion surrounded the area. The man stumbled back from the explosion in shock and horror.
"Bury them deep Haka supīkā"

• Name [x]
  
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• Gender [x]
  
• Appearance Present [x]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [o]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [o]
  
• History is of appropriate length [x]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x] (currently ignoring shikai and bankai)
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [x] look above
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]
  

• Willpower/Determination: N/A
  
• Mental Deduction: N/A
  
• Pain Endurance: N/A
  
• Focus: N/A
  

Comments/Notes:

There are a few issues with this app that will currently prevent me from approving this character currently.

First issue is the mention of Yamamoto, Shunsui Kyōraku, and Jūshirō Ukitake. You can not mention other Canon characters without permission of their current owners. I see no information that any permission was acquired to be used within this app.

Second issue is that one does not obtain shikai and bankai automatically so i will have to ask you to cross those sections out. you do not need to erase them but used the [slash] [/slash] tags to do this. You will not be getting shikai until at least tier 3-2 and a shikai unlock thread and you wont unlock bankai until 2-4 with a bankai unlock thread.

Third issue i see is you want your character to be from the beginning of the Soul society that is fine but you can not be making yourself more important by making yourself the inventor of kido and then making actions for the characters that you have not been given permission to do from the current people who hold the characters. Your history is okay really just fix the last paragraph.

What bothers me about the app is also how the template seems to look butchered. This is the link to the shinigami template. https://www.platinumhearts.net/t2-shinigami-template go here and copy and paste the template and fit everything you wrote back into it. make sure you keep the racial and the will sheet don't fill them out until the app is approved.

Make sure that you expand some more on your character's appearance and personailty since he has two i would recommend you have have ten sentences describing both personalities. i counted 5 for the second one.

Also for the kido your character created Nenrei bodimōfu describe what it does or make a custom kido describing what it does and how do you use it.

also age wise even if he forgot he still has an age you can put down for him.

for any issues contact me via pm on site or on the xat.

Tier:N/A

Ok i have fixed everything, and am waiting to be reviewed again.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• Willpower/Determination:  Beginner
  
• Mental Deduction: Beginner
  
• Pain Endurance:  Beginner
  
• Focus:  Beginner
  

Comments/Notes:

Please be aware that your kido will only affect your appearance and thats it. your knowledge will not change even if your appearance age does. this is just a heads up.

Also just so your aware the soul society does send out units to kill people in the rukongai to keep a balance in the soul cycle. those who die in the Soul Society are reborn on earth with no memories and the same applies for shinigami. shinigami may have a recolletion of their life on earth.

please fix up that part about you tried to use kido to counter the ban. it is confusing as how and what and who would you do it to prevent getting banned and failing.

i will be aproving this but please keep everything in mind.
Tier:4-4

Ok thanks I will

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