Levia Demise (W.I.P.)

Name: Levia Demise
Age:210
Gender:Male
Appearance: Age:17


True Form/any Differnt form:N/A

Personality:He is a sick and twisted Person. He loves to play Violin next being grusome around his lovely mates. He is twisted when It comes to Killing.

History Levia was born in the middle of winter. His died had died the following year. Him and his mother were left the house and a fund for Levia's entrences into Schools. His mother died when he was only 5. She got ill when Levia had just turned 5.

He learned to play the Violin when he was in the 5th grade. Levia wanted so badly to pay he begged to have part of the fund to get his very own lessons and Violin. He played the violin all the way up till his first year of highschool, when he was told he had to take over his dad's business. His dad had said when Levia would turn 15 he would be taking over the company in his WILL.

When Levia entered into his Father's company everything in his life was screwed. His father's work was filled of non-humans. Levia didn't know what else to call them. Levia was told by the VP of his father's company(which is now his) that he were to kill and protect the people of the city, not like the police.
Powers:Ice-

Likes:
He loves to read romantic Novels along with writing some of his own.
He keeps refridgerated AB+ blood in his fridge 9Of course it's hidden).

Dislikes:
Having his blood stole from him. The bright, bright sunlight.


Fears:
Being alone for too long or wanting something too much that he craves for.

Weakness:
Nothing so far he knows of.

Role Play Sample:

Here's something...a big fat

1:Your history isn't even a history. It seems to be a copy/paste summary of the character from a wiki. You don't even explain how you became a demon.
2:Personality....MORE. THAN. TWO. WORDS. DUMBASS. Sheesh, did you not even glance at an approved application?
3: "True Form/any Differnt form:Is human with a Signature tattoo on his tongue" ....You could have added the tattoo part in appearance. If there is not another form, just put N/A or none.
4: You. Can't. Fill. In. Your. Skills. Until. After. Your. Tier. Is. Assigned. You. Imbecile.
5: Roleplay Sample must be 2 paragraphs.
6: We don't use colons to separate stuff like you have in your RP sample. Nor do we rp like that with a separator. Just read some roleplays and get a feel of what to put
7: Listen, this isn't the worst application I've seen. But it's the worst copy/paste application I've seen. Why don't you just go crawl in a pit of fire after drenching yourself in gasoline?