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Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:35 am
Name: Ryokoshky Takeda
Age: 107
Gender: Male
Orientation: Serves under the Zefonse, the Segunda espada
Appearance: Ryokoshky looks like any child, he appears to look around the age of 13, and he has golden eyes. His eyes shine to show the long lost innocence that was lost during his earlier ages. He has jet black hair the goes down his face in a way that covers his entire face, but he usually has the hair pushed off a bit so you may see his eyes, and that his entire vision is clear. His hair now reaches to about his shoulder blades. He has a perfect set of teeth with out chips anywhere, his K9 teeth are a bit sharper then they should be to reveal a panther side to him. He has a way to hide his broken mask, a skull atop his head, his mask almost matches the mask of the once living ggio vega. The only difference is that the teeth are broken off. He hides the mask under a human hoodie, he usually travels around in a jacket along with silver jeans that reflect light at times to blind ryokoshky's enemies for split seconds. He wears a pair of black shoes, cushioned to keep his foot steps quiet. His hollow hole is in stomach, right atop his belly button, he found a way to hide his hollow hole perfectly, he would put a single peice of fake skin that matched his skin tone atop it.
Updated appearance:
Personality: Ryokoshky can act like a child, not to blow his cover much when entering a city to answer a mercenary call, though he is still not welcomed, he would find his own way past and into the city. He will act cautious enough to stay away from a heavy fight when he needs to. He is able to act as a friend at times, and at others your mortal enemy, he may act like an ass, stubborn and unwilling, but he is also able to act kind and in his own way love.
Abilities: Ryokoshky has an ability hear, smell, taste, feel, and see into the extreme at natural. He can turn this off an on at times to not drive himself insane. He can also turn invisible for 2 post, he can still be heard just not seen, you can see blood dripping and foot prints still also.
He also has an ability to surround an enemy in a fire no matter how fast they move this fire will not go out for about 3 post, this fire does not burn but shifts color through the color spectrum.
Sealed Zanpakutô: His sealed zanpakuto looks like a black scimitar. The handle is wrapped in black lacing, the guard is shaped like a star. It's sheith is made from a material that turns the enitre thing invincible. Along ryokoshky with a fine stealth into certain areas.
Skill Level: Hierro: adept
Skill Level: Pesquisa: adept
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Advanced
Release: Blackwings soar, Morrigan
Resurrección: His appearance changes to that of the arrancar white clothes, just black and silver. Breaking from his back are two pairs of raven wings, his mask's teeth fix, and resemble saber tooth tigers. His black hair grows a couple inches, and the innocence in his eye's turns to the gloom of war. He body posture changes to that of grimmows, allowing him to only look like he walks on the from of his feet, not the balls of his heels.
His abilities are that his invisibility is upgrade, he raps himself in his wings, they reflect heat to hide his body signatures, so that he may not be tracked in the infrared spectrum, or thermal. This last for about 4 turns and it also allows him to muffle his foot steps more but they are still seen, just they are less visible.
He also gains a ability control earth to a certain extent, to such cases he is able to control the earth under him allowing himself to raise himself into the air atleast 50ft or creating a dome of earth with a hole in the roof, being able to generate atleast 30 crystals within the dome before losing control of the growth of the dome, and in the end he can hold it up for about 10 minute before it collapses from no outside interference.
Colossal Har'dro Errdegahr - Translated to Colossal Earth Demon - It takes a fair amount of his reishi, he surrounds himself in room of pure diamond of about 4feet thick. Inside this room is the center of mass, using his reishi he also is able to see through the eyes of this creature allowing him to create the a bond between the beast and him. It has a reach of about half a mile. It also allows him to fire crystals of about as big as car filled with both bala and cero. The wings can disconnect from the back and can be interchanged as swords, the wing morphs into a scythe, and from the other wing it can change into an axe. The weak points on the body are at the wrist on both arms, and the elbows are also weak points, the shoulder blades would be the final weak points before the head, the head when destroyed opens up to show the diamond interior. The huge demon though must be on the ground and cannot move after it has been summoned. When the wrist points are destroyed the demon utilizes its disadvantage to fire crystals and its arm covers in crystals till the elbow, after it covers up to the elbow he is able to fire the crystals from his arms at speeds of about a bala opening up to fire cero. This works for both arms, when the arm is destroyed it does the same thing from the elbow's just instead of cero's coming out of the crystals its bala's. PLEASE NOTE the size of the human on the right of this.
Deus ex Segunda: He has his eyes gouged out and replaced with new mechanical eyes that can see into ultra violet, infrared, and normal. He also had certain key muscles in his legs and arms replaced with mechanical ones that operate at a capacity far beyond before. His feathers on his wings are replaced with more reflective coatings. He also had his arms modified to spread apart into a multiple set, each able to control its self and not bump into the other, allowing Ryokoshky to fight with one arm behind his back. HA. Due to this he is able to weild more then one weapon, and handle difficult situations easier, he has eight at max if your wondering. He had a cooling system built into each of his metal arms, and legs, along with his chest and head, to help protect against the heat. He also has a moderate nullification against electrical failures and lighting from his feet to his knees, and from his finger tips to his shoulders. He usually stumbles around when he needs to turn invisible, which usually creates a ruckus allowing him to be detected, but still unseen.
History: Ryokoshky lived a fun care free life, never traveling farther then the city limits. He always loved to get into trouble though, from doing dumb dares, to jumping off buildings. He always found something to do in the domes, he didn't like having to learn in school, he only liked learning about the advancements spreading through out every faction. In there own way each was different. He eventually got to the point to were he tried creating his own, and failing on his own. Till he finally though he made a break through, he was dared to enter the wasteland, and return after a half hour. He took his device with him, it was meant to reject hollows from the user, he strapped it onto his arm. When he activated it though, it backfired and instead of rejecting hollows, it attracted them, he had started to run back to the city limits, until he noticed, he had been stalked by hollows and suddenly surrounded in mere seconds. Though he had gained enough power from training to fight hollows to fend off for a mere 10 seconds, he wasn't entirely killed, he had mutated with the hollows during the feeding frenzy. His strong soul defeated the hollows inner beings one at a time, allowing him to survive, finding his previous body was mangled. He wandered about for the next 4 months watching the kids wait for his return every day for a week, until they left. They never once tried to make him a burial, no one did, it made him feel unwanted, he hated all the friends he had made before, just tossing him off like a piece of trash. He also noticed that as his hate continued he neared closer to the end of his chain, not knowing a way to end the hate and anger he felt, he was soon consumed.
Having become a hollow, he fed off lesser hollows one at a time, keeping track he slowly number that he had devoured more then 500 hollows, slowly gaining back a somewhat human form after 100 years of feeding. The form wasnt perfect though, he had heard to be an arrancar your mask must break in some form. He found his prey in a rather strong but unidentifiable Gillian, he attacked it from the sky, using his own natural speed and thought of reach to survive during the battle, and eventually overpowers the gillian, and devoured it using it as his final meal.
He had finally become something better then what he was before he had become a gillian. As he traveled in his new form, attack weaker hollows and devouring them he eventually came upon a sight that frightened him, something powerfuler, he had run into the arrancars. They saw potential in him and allowed him to become a arrancar amongst there weakest ranks.
During his later years he finally grew tired of just hiding and preparing for battle along side the others, he made a deal with the arrancars, that he may be set free to work on his own, as long as he did missions for him when ever he was asked, no matter the mission, the type, or the requirements, and absolutely with no questions. He quickly agreed and left and went upon his own business.
After several years of destroying hollows and certain humans stupid enough to travel out of the domes, did he finally learn how he would make his living in life he was going to become a mercenary. Being able to work with both sides, anyone needs help, also long as he survived long enough to receive the mission and long enough to receive his rewards.
RP Sample:
From my website i made dont ask
She bought the game along with his friends. They intended on going farther then what was limited in the manual. They were going to hack the game, make it funner in there aspect. They wanted to rewrite "The world", they had already failed at containing one monster, but hacked there abilities, so that they could contain the monsters better. The escpaed monster was a parasite dragon. She scolded the person responsible and told him that he was to erase all traces before the Azure knights ever had a chance to catch them. They had a long trail ahead of them, and they needed safety more then ever. They needed another leader, someone that they could use if they ever needed to run. They found someone else, other then just Briza, they found there new boss.
Age: 107
Gender: Male
Orientation: Serves under the Zefonse, the Segunda espada
Appearance: Ryokoshky looks like any child, he appears to look around the age of 13, and he has golden eyes. His eyes shine to show the long lost innocence that was lost during his earlier ages. He has jet black hair the goes down his face in a way that covers his entire face, but he usually has the hair pushed off a bit so you may see his eyes, and that his entire vision is clear. His hair now reaches to about his shoulder blades. He has a perfect set of teeth with out chips anywhere, his K9 teeth are a bit sharper then they should be to reveal a panther side to him. He has a way to hide his broken mask, a skull atop his head, his mask almost matches the mask of the once living ggio vega. The only difference is that the teeth are broken off. He hides the mask under a human hoodie, he usually travels around in a jacket along with silver jeans that reflect light at times to blind ryokoshky's enemies for split seconds. He wears a pair of black shoes, cushioned to keep his foot steps quiet. His hollow hole is in stomach, right atop his belly button, he found a way to hide his hollow hole perfectly, he would put a single peice of fake skin that matched his skin tone atop it.
Updated appearance:
Personality: Ryokoshky can act like a child, not to blow his cover much when entering a city to answer a mercenary call, though he is still not welcomed, he would find his own way past and into the city. He will act cautious enough to stay away from a heavy fight when he needs to. He is able to act as a friend at times, and at others your mortal enemy, he may act like an ass, stubborn and unwilling, but he is also able to act kind and in his own way love.
Abilities: Ryokoshky has an ability hear, smell, taste, feel, and see into the extreme at natural. He can turn this off an on at times to not drive himself insane. He can also turn invisible for 2 post, he can still be heard just not seen, you can see blood dripping and foot prints still also.
He also has an ability to surround an enemy in a fire no matter how fast they move this fire will not go out for about 3 post, this fire does not burn but shifts color through the color spectrum.
Sealed Zanpakutô: His sealed zanpakuto looks like a black scimitar. The handle is wrapped in black lacing, the guard is shaped like a star. It's sheith is made from a material that turns the enitre thing invincible. Along ryokoshky with a fine stealth into certain areas.
Skill Level: Hierro: adept
Skill Level: Pesquisa: adept
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Advanced
Release: Blackwings soar, Morrigan
Resurrección: His appearance changes to that of the arrancar white clothes, just black and silver. Breaking from his back are two pairs of raven wings, his mask's teeth fix, and resemble saber tooth tigers. His black hair grows a couple inches, and the innocence in his eye's turns to the gloom of war. He body posture changes to that of grimmows, allowing him to only look like he walks on the from of his feet, not the balls of his heels.
His abilities are that his invisibility is upgrade, he raps himself in his wings, they reflect heat to hide his body signatures, so that he may not be tracked in the infrared spectrum, or thermal. This last for about 4 turns and it also allows him to muffle his foot steps more but they are still seen, just they are less visible.
He also gains a ability control earth to a certain extent, to such cases he is able to control the earth under him allowing himself to raise himself into the air atleast 50ft or creating a dome of earth with a hole in the roof, being able to generate atleast 30 crystals within the dome before losing control of the growth of the dome, and in the end he can hold it up for about 10 minute before it collapses from no outside interference.
Colossal Har'dro Errdegahr - Translated to Colossal Earth Demon - It takes a fair amount of his reishi, he surrounds himself in room of pure diamond of about 4feet thick. Inside this room is the center of mass, using his reishi he also is able to see through the eyes of this creature allowing him to create the a bond between the beast and him. It has a reach of about half a mile. It also allows him to fire crystals of about as big as car filled with both bala and cero. The wings can disconnect from the back and can be interchanged as swords, the wing morphs into a scythe, and from the other wing it can change into an axe. The weak points on the body are at the wrist on both arms, and the elbows are also weak points, the shoulder blades would be the final weak points before the head, the head when destroyed opens up to show the diamond interior. The huge demon though must be on the ground and cannot move after it has been summoned. When the wrist points are destroyed the demon utilizes its disadvantage to fire crystals and its arm covers in crystals till the elbow, after it covers up to the elbow he is able to fire the crystals from his arms at speeds of about a bala opening up to fire cero. This works for both arms, when the arm is destroyed it does the same thing from the elbow's just instead of cero's coming out of the crystals its bala's. PLEASE NOTE the size of the human on the right of this.
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Deus ex Segunda: He has his eyes gouged out and replaced with new mechanical eyes that can see into ultra violet, infrared, and normal. He also had certain key muscles in his legs and arms replaced with mechanical ones that operate at a capacity far beyond before. His feathers on his wings are replaced with more reflective coatings. He also had his arms modified to spread apart into a multiple set, each able to control its self and not bump into the other, allowing Ryokoshky to fight with one arm behind his back. HA. Due to this he is able to weild more then one weapon, and handle difficult situations easier, he has eight at max if your wondering. He had a cooling system built into each of his metal arms, and legs, along with his chest and head, to help protect against the heat. He also has a moderate nullification against electrical failures and lighting from his feet to his knees, and from his finger tips to his shoulders. He usually stumbles around when he needs to turn invisible, which usually creates a ruckus allowing him to be detected, but still unseen.
History: Ryokoshky lived a fun care free life, never traveling farther then the city limits. He always loved to get into trouble though, from doing dumb dares, to jumping off buildings. He always found something to do in the domes, he didn't like having to learn in school, he only liked learning about the advancements spreading through out every faction. In there own way each was different. He eventually got to the point to were he tried creating his own, and failing on his own. Till he finally though he made a break through, he was dared to enter the wasteland, and return after a half hour. He took his device with him, it was meant to reject hollows from the user, he strapped it onto his arm. When he activated it though, it backfired and instead of rejecting hollows, it attracted them, he had started to run back to the city limits, until he noticed, he had been stalked by hollows and suddenly surrounded in mere seconds. Though he had gained enough power from training to fight hollows to fend off for a mere 10 seconds, he wasn't entirely killed, he had mutated with the hollows during the feeding frenzy. His strong soul defeated the hollows inner beings one at a time, allowing him to survive, finding his previous body was mangled. He wandered about for the next 4 months watching the kids wait for his return every day for a week, until they left. They never once tried to make him a burial, no one did, it made him feel unwanted, he hated all the friends he had made before, just tossing him off like a piece of trash. He also noticed that as his hate continued he neared closer to the end of his chain, not knowing a way to end the hate and anger he felt, he was soon consumed.
Having become a hollow, he fed off lesser hollows one at a time, keeping track he slowly number that he had devoured more then 500 hollows, slowly gaining back a somewhat human form after 100 years of feeding. The form wasnt perfect though, he had heard to be an arrancar your mask must break in some form. He found his prey in a rather strong but unidentifiable Gillian, he attacked it from the sky, using his own natural speed and thought of reach to survive during the battle, and eventually overpowers the gillian, and devoured it using it as his final meal.
He had finally become something better then what he was before he had become a gillian. As he traveled in his new form, attack weaker hollows and devouring them he eventually came upon a sight that frightened him, something powerfuler, he had run into the arrancars. They saw potential in him and allowed him to become a arrancar amongst there weakest ranks.
During his later years he finally grew tired of just hiding and preparing for battle along side the others, he made a deal with the arrancars, that he may be set free to work on his own, as long as he did missions for him when ever he was asked, no matter the mission, the type, or the requirements, and absolutely with no questions. He quickly agreed and left and went upon his own business.
After several years of destroying hollows and certain humans stupid enough to travel out of the domes, did he finally learn how he would make his living in life he was going to become a mercenary. Being able to work with both sides, anyone needs help, also long as he survived long enough to receive the mission and long enough to receive his rewards.
RP Sample:
From my website i made dont ask
She bought the game along with his friends. They intended on going farther then what was limited in the manual. They were going to hack the game, make it funner in there aspect. They wanted to rewrite "The world", they had already failed at containing one monster, but hacked there abilities, so that they could contain the monsters better. The escpaed monster was a parasite dragon. She scolded the person responsible and told him that he was to erase all traces before the Azure knights ever had a chance to catch them. They had a long trail ahead of them, and they needed safety more then ever. They needed another leader, someone that they could use if they ever needed to run. They found someone else, other then just Briza, they found there new boss.
Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:55 am
Since it's already been approved in the past, and I'm alright with the upgrades you've given him...
Reapproved for 1-1+
Use him well.
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:17 am
Name: Heavenly-Cage
Description: All of Ryokoshky's bala arrows gain an imprint. After striking their target, no matter what it is, an imprint of his reiatsu is left on that substance. This imprint is in the shape of a black wing. If he curves his next arrow to touch more than one but not connect solidly, his reishi will form a solid line, that fills in to form a wall of solid reiatsu, to connect the two or more. The more reishi he pumps into the arrow, the thicker the lines and walls.
Name: Relentless assault
Description: After firing a volley of bala arrows into the sky, they will split into numerous smaller bala's and rain down. The reishi that forms the bala will have converted into a dark jet black flame that can burn with an intense heat, capable of scorching bone immensely.
Bala's are now shaped like arrows and travel faster then before, Ryokoshky is also able to shoot 300 bala's as fast as a quincy can shoot arrows.
Gained from devouring the quincy Jack Skellington
Description: All of Ryokoshky's bala arrows gain an imprint. After striking their target, no matter what it is, an imprint of his reiatsu is left on that substance. This imprint is in the shape of a black wing. If he curves his next arrow to touch more than one but not connect solidly, his reishi will form a solid line, that fills in to form a wall of solid reiatsu, to connect the two or more. The more reishi he pumps into the arrow, the thicker the lines and walls.
Name: Relentless assault
Description: After firing a volley of bala arrows into the sky, they will split into numerous smaller bala's and rain down. The reishi that forms the bala will have converted into a dark jet black flame that can burn with an intense heat, capable of scorching bone immensely.
Bala's are now shaped like arrows and travel faster then before, Ryokoshky is also able to shoot 300 bala's as fast as a quincy can shoot arrows.
Gained from devouring the quincy Jack Skellington
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:20 am
well since this was already ahead and thought up on skype i see nothing wrong with this since this is his reward for beating jack in battle
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:58 am
DENIED. He didn't put an upgrade thread up. Also, he can't use Gintou or Seele Scheiders. So, go put this in an upgrade thread instead. ALSO! I don't believe an Arrancar could use ANY Quincy techniques since once a Quincy dies, their powers go away. So lolno on that.
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:47 pm
and after some thinking, i'm gonna have to say this is still denied, until the things i asked for IN chat. are removed.
1.he does not get any power from devouring anything, since hollows simply need souls to survive and he cannot mimic their abilities. unless it's an ability that he has in res, or a natural ability. especially devouring someone....so as much as it's a reward...it's something he is not allowed to get. even then.
Denied, till further notice.
1.he does not get any power from devouring anything, since hollows simply need souls to survive and he cannot mimic their abilities. unless it's an ability that he has in res, or a natural ability. especially devouring someone....so as much as it's a reward...it's something he is not allowed to get. even then.
Denied, till further notice.
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:40 pm
Now that the shitstorm has ended and that I have fixed the problem in the app, I re-approve with no Tier boost.
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Re: Ryokoshky Takeda updated
Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:48 am
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