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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: "She could call upon a wall cloud, forming a massive tornado that could destroy an entire city in a single sweep, cause a megaflood to wash away and entire plain and force lightning to burn the ground, setting wildfires ablaze."

I'd make a note, even in that, to say this would extremely exhaust her after performing such an action at her level. It may be easier to do if Mana augments her, but without it, I'd say that would be an extreme feat for a 2 tier. So you may need to scale that down a bit from city size; making that only possible when enhanced.

Additionally, you need to make your history a bit longer. All I will ask out of you is another 1-2 paragraph's added so that it is of sufficient length.

Tier: She will be 3-2 in base and 2-4 when powered up when changes are corrected.


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