WIP Carter [APPROVED, 1-3]

Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:21 pm

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Name: Carter
Titles: Angel Shinigami
Gender: Male
Appearance Age: 15
Age: 221
Affiliation/Rank: Gotei 13 Captain of squad 7

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Spoiler:

Mon Jan 14, 2013 11:08 pm

Personality is only 9 sentences. Add on and I'll approve.

Tue Jan 15, 2013 6:22 am

Added two more cause I only counted eight. Better safe than sorry.

Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:14 pm

Application Checklist

Name [x]
Appropriate Age [x]
Gender [x]
Appearance Present [x]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
10 sentences for personality [x]
History is of appropriate length [x]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [o]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Beginner
Pain Endurance: Beginner
Focus: Beginner

Comments/Notes: You're going to have to get a recheck when you unlock Shikai and Bankai.
Tier:4-1

Thu Feb 14, 2013 1:56 pm

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t9023-carter-s-upgrades Bumped to 3-2+ with a weapon skill, Focus, and Kidō increase of one tier each.

Fri Mar 22, 2013 12:36 pm

upgraded to 2-4+ from the 30 days posting prizes

Tue Aug 20, 2013 1:56 am

Due to missing a few activity checks this app will be moved to inactive applications. If you want this moved back please refer to This Thread or ask staff to move it. Thank you for your time.