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Re: [FINISH]Rina Hachirobachi
Mon Oct 08, 2012 1:53 am
Reserving the checking when I wake up.
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Re: [FINISH]Rina Hachirobachi
Mon Oct 08, 2012 2:13 pm
The app is fine : except for the history. The history is totally, and utterly INVALID. Have you read the other approved Sangsue? I'd assume not.
There are two major components to Sangsue history : being a mod-soul within a gigai near death and being offered a deal to live by my character Aivee. Sangsue are NOT spirits. They are a Parasite : namely, they reside in the host in symbiosis. There is no known way to reproduce them, apart from Aivee, the last surviving one.
So in a sense, your character would never have a real life, as a human. Nor would a dead friend become a spirit and invade their bodies, turning them into sangsue. ICly, Aivee is researching how to apply Sangsue to other creatures (hence her experiment Ichi) but other then my own character and plots, it is impossible.
So I'mma have to ask you to re-write that history, as you break every single race canon in the damn thing.
There are two major components to Sangsue history : being a mod-soul within a gigai near death and being offered a deal to live by my character Aivee. Sangsue are NOT spirits. They are a Parasite : namely, they reside in the host in symbiosis. There is no known way to reproduce them, apart from Aivee, the last surviving one.
So in a sense, your character would never have a real life, as a human. Nor would a dead friend become a spirit and invade their bodies, turning them into sangsue. ICly, Aivee is researching how to apply Sangsue to other creatures (hence her experiment Ichi) but other then my own character and plots, it is impossible.
So I'mma have to ask you to re-write that history, as you break every single race canon in the damn thing.
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Re: [FINISH]Rina Hachirobachi
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