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• Name: Oboro Saginomiya
• Titles: Little Girl - Given Nickname Due To Her Height
• Gender: Female
• Appearance Age: Almost below 15. (Ranged approximently 10 - 12)
• Age: Her Real Age Remains Unknown. Almost 1000 over.
• Affiliation/Rank: N/A

• Appearance Description: I can hardly describe her appearance due to her lack of colors and lack of pictures. You can see the picture below. ^ ^

• Appearance Picture:
Spoiler:

Items:

Sleeping Powder: Very efficient medicine has a weapon. Instead of using drugs in this modern day, she could throw them at the ground and make it explode itself. Once exploded, a puff of smoke comes out, mostly 50 meters wide only. It works on one to two persons only. The powder makes her opponent go to sleep. The powder isn't really powerful, depending on how much she uses.

If she uses a little powder (10% of the powder), it'll turn Tier 6 and Tier 5 to sleep if caught in the explosion of the powder. If she uses a quarter of it, (25% of the powder), It works on Tier 6 to Tier 4. Half of the powder (50% of the powder) works on Tier 6 to Tier 3. Half a quarter of the powder (75%), it works on Tier 6 to Tier 2. If she uses all of them at once. It affects Tier 6 to Tier 0-4. The rest above Tier 0-4, will not work. All tiers gets the same effect, they will fall asleep for one to two post only. If she uses anything between the percentage listed above, it will do the same on the written tier, unless if used on the percentage above the list, it will work on the written tier. This can be used anytime, except it has only the capiticy of 100% powder. If she finishes the powder on that one thread, she cannot refill it and can be only used again in another thread. Oboro only item, because she did not want anyone to mis-use this item much.

Smoke Bomb: As like modern days, we use smoke grenades. But for oboro, like ninjas, who uses smoke bombs, as she has her own smoke bomb too. But this smoke bomb seems to be her most favourite but most annoying of all. The smoke bomb can be actually used for her escape, which its too 'overly smoked' as she meant that too much smoke comes out, but gives her a lots of advantage to somehow escape. If she throws the bomb down to the ground, it will explode and release a large amount of gas, which is really 'extreme' as it covers entire 2 feet wide. The smokes, though, dissapears quickly in one post later. As for reminder, the smoke's really strong, only visibility for the person in the smoke can see only 2 - 5 meters away. Once per thread only, since she doesn't like to bring much of them because they won't be used for another time. Oboro only item, because of its huge puff of smoke, only she could handle it.

Bang: Its effect works like a modern flashbang, but more 'flash'. If threw at the target, it explodes and releases a 'flash', blinding anyone within 500 meters in the explosion. Because Oboro added more 'flash', wearing sunglasses won't work against the Bang. Especialy the 'Bang' can also blind someone temporarily in a complete darkness, which its really useful. The blindness is only one post, and once per thread use. A short version name of flashbang. Oboro renamed it as 'Bang' due to the sound of its explosion and its 'flashy' explosion. It does no damage also. Due to the extreme amount of 'flash' was added, nobody but oboro can only use this item.

Nade Pill: Like any modern people uses during war, grenades are always the first choice for soldiers. Because of oboro's high intellect on medicines, she could turn a medicine into a bomb. A small pill that looks like any ordinary medicine, has its deadly bomb inside. As simple, if you want to do a suicide attempt, just take the pill and swallow it together with a glass of water, the pill would explode like a TNT, more powerful version of a normal grenade. If you want to kill, this might be the best pill you need to use. Either force the pill into the person's mouth or throw it, it will explode and harms anyone within 250 meters wide. Its' explosion would send out a shockwave that blows anyone away near it, sending the person who was caught by the shockwave a few miles away or a few buildings away. Anyone she trusts, will receive this item.

Fire Water: A really, near-perfect creation made by Oboro. With a controlled gasoline that she has created, it is placed in a small, sealed test tube. Almost unbreakable because for safety purposes, she hardened the test tube's material, making nearly unscratchable even for a cero. If she opens the seal, she has to throw it or spill the controlled gasoline as quickly as possible. Once the gasoline has caught the enemy or landed on the floor, it ignites itself up into a fire, burning up as the fire would become stronger and stronger during the two post, and eventually puts out itself after the third post. Any water to put it out is nearly impossible, but strong winds can put it out rather easily. It burns any materials, any materials. The fire can be also taken out through explosion. Once per thread, due to danger it can cause to Oboro herself. If oboro accidentally drops it after removing the seal, she could burn herself. A certain person whom she trust, can receive this item from her.

Strength Boost Drug: A drug that she created for herself. It can be given to others, if she trusts them. One pill, can boost the person's strength temporarily by 2 times, for only 2 post. It can be used anytime, but overdosage of the pill can cause serious side effects, like death. Overdosage are 4 drugs. 3 drugs are recommended to be used.

Speed Boost Drug: Also a drug that oboro created for herself. It can be also be used by anyone, only to those she trusts the most. One pill can boost the person's speed by two times and two post. It can be used as many times as the person wants, but overdosage will serve the same side effects as overdosage the strength boost drug. Overdosage are also 4 drugs. 3 drugs are recommended.

[Any further creations will be added]
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• Personality: Oboro is quite a sadistic person. She always loved to create new items to use on her opponents and usually using them for test purposes. She mostly locks herself in her own room or labotary when she is working on something, because she never liked any disturbance from outsiders unless she gives them the permission to come in. Whenever she finishes any of her items, she would either test them on herself or mostly test on any nearby people that she sees as an experiment for her test. Oboro doesn't seem to regret what she does by using others as her guinea pigs. She never quite liked during house chores, but she often does the chores whenever she has any free time that she did not know what to spend on. Whenever she has free time, she always uses her newly made items on others, including shinigamis and other souls, including humans as well to be her personal experiment.

She loves her teapot and her tea very much, as you can see that the teapot and cup of glass are always hanging on her head. Surprisingly, they never dropped even once. Oboro can be feminine sometimes, although she is a 'tsundere' type of woman. She drinks her tea all the time, anytime, anywhere. Weirdly, her tea never runs out whenever you see her drink all the time. She is fond of making any useful items that might help her during battle, as it mostly helps her in the time of need. It is an extremely rare case for her to be really nice and helpful to someone, because she never trust anyone she sees, because it always reminds her of her mystery past, where she was burned by the villagers long ago before she came to soul society for the first time.

Oboro never felt confused in her life, because whenever she is confused with something, she can always finds a way out or an answer to the confusing questions. Although Oboro has the skill to cook, she hardly does it. She mostly finds food outside instead of buying groceries and cook for her own. Even if she works a lot, she hardly gets hungry because she was too busy creating and experimenting her things. She is never honest around with guys nor girls, as Oboro always disrespects them and never treats them well, except in special occasions.

On the other hand, Oboro is not much of a communicative person. Because she was too attached to her works and such, she hardly communicates to anyone, even to any close to her. Though in really rare case, she'd rather spends her time with her closest one (which she never had any) than spending her entire time on her work. This, though, never happened.

She gets really angry, whenever when someone interferes during her test on living things as an experiment. She would always find a way, any way, to get rid of the person who interfere her work and ruins it. She never believes that she could meet someone she trusts the most, or someone special to her.

Her IQ is much more higher than any smart person would. She could create new inventions and items, and then put them into test before officially used. Before she did any testings, she would always make sure that nobody's in her room or labotary, before commencing the test. Oboro seems to have a lots of IQs' about modern medicines and traditional medicines, since she lived long ago before her death. She knows everything about herbs, medical items, equipments, material and stuffs needed to make a powerful medicine. She has also the IQ to create something into a useful weapon. She can also turn medicines into weapons, or curses.

• Likes: Using living things as a Guinea Pig/Experiment, Test her newly created stuff on living things, Torturing them, Tea and Her Teapot on her head.

• Dislikes: Interference from others, Ruining her stuff, Disturbing her work.
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• History: Her life in earth as a living being is a mystery for everyone in the soul society, as no shinigamis has ever brought her to soul society. Her age was almost a thousand years old, so it is not confirmed that if she has ever lived in the earth before. Though her said past that brings to her death is once the villagers burned her because of her healing capabilities, calling her the curse of the village, in the end, burning Oboro to her own death at the village. That is the only past that others remembered.

A thousand years ago, after Oboro's death, she first arrived in the Soul Society. It was peaceful, very peaceful. She lived at an abandoned house, which it was really old, with cracked floors and ceilings, also with rats all over the place. She treated it as her own home, always stayed inside, cold. Until she decided to search the entire abandoned house to check if she could renew it or not. She first checked the bedroom at the 2nd floor, the cloths and the clothes were all ragged and tattered, which cannot be worn but she can sew it up with the remaining cloths that she found. Then, she checked the bathroom. It was nothing more than an ordinary, dirty and old bathroom that haven't been used for years. She then went downstairs and checked the kitchen, and what she found was a strange, traditional teapot. She took a glass, which isn't cracked and it was all fine. It looks pretty new, and the only glass in the kitchen.

When she pour out the tea, it was warm, really warm. It was like it was boiled a few minutes ago. But nobody was in the house, and she felt really weird. Oboro opened the teapot, and found a Zanpakutō inside. Oddly, she started to bring it with her all day. She trained and lived hundreds of years in the house, and eventually, she really found a new, comfy home from that day onwards. One day, it was night, and dark. Oboro fell into a deep sleep, and caused her to enter the Zanpakutō's inner world, accidentally. She was in a dark abyss, with endless amount of road and dimensions. She couldn't see anything, until something large appears. It looked like a golem, a huge one, entirely made out of stone. It stood in front of oboro, with that fear had caught her heart, she stood there, almost in fear. Oboro.. You'll have to know my name.. to know your real power.. The golem whispered in silence, but oboro couldn't hear what 'he' said, it was too loud, then she woke up in the morning, in fear.

Everything changed her personality, after the incident in her dreams. Oboro thought this was an illness, and she started creating medicines like a mad woman who would do whatever it takes to heal herself wihout buying any medicine, instead, she makes one. Whenever she had a free time, she trains her Zanpakutō, who yet have not been named yet. She stayed, hundreds of years, trying to find the heal for this, because each night she slept, she dreamed about the golem, trying to tell her his name, but she couldn't, at all.

800 years later after the incident, she tested all the medicine she made for the past long years, but none of them works. But the medicine caused her to receive some side effects, which turned her into a sadistic person and caused her appearance to reverse to a small child's shape, height and body, including her face. The side effects though, did not wear off, it almost like it lasted forever after the testing. Which almost one day, she entered her Zanpakutō's inner world, accidentally and met with him. The golem finally challenged oboro into a fight, which they did. During the battle process, any damage she took would be inflicted on her sleeping body. The battle took a long time, until she won. She finally knew her Zanpakutō name and gained shikai, but then, before she left the inner world, his Zanpakutō spirit, warned her about shikai. Even if shikai is just the first release, it can lead to a serious danger to anyone, by that time, she never, ever released her Zanpakutō.

A few hundred years later, she had created numerous of items, and increased her knowledge about medicals and medicines. It was really weird for her, as even wihout Shino Academy or ever joining the gotei 13, she was able to successfully gain shikai through training and fought against her Zanpakutō spirit. As today, and this year has reached, Oboro started to look and explore the outside world, for the first time, she left her home to find an organization, that can fit her intellect.

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• Reiatsu Color: Her reiatsu color changes depending on her mood. Her original reiatsu is pink. The symptoms of why it changes depending on her mood is not verified yet.

Black Reiatsu: Bad Mood.

Red Reiatsu: Busy.

White Reiatsu: This reiatsu color is really a rare case. This reiatsu color only appears if she felt completely confused and couldn't find an answer to it.

Blue Reiatsu: Sad.

Pink Reiatsu: Her original reiatsu color. This reiatsu appears when her condition and mood is as normal as always, the playful, sadistic and the one who uses others as an experiment.

• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Ishi no gōremu (Golem Of Stones)

• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance:
Spoiler:

• Inner World: Golem's Inner World is a dark abyss, entirely made of stones. The stones are purely made of reishi, and breaks easily once hit with a little used effort. The abyss had endless road, it never ends no matter how much Oboro goes, the road and the place will always at its same positions, even if you see the world moving. The inner world is like an endless cycle. Although it is placed at the same position, surprisingly, if that one place is destroyed completely, they can actually shift their places to a new, fixed area even if its an endless cycle. It's almost like they could switch places whenever they want to.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
Disguise:
Spoiler:
A small, traditional teapot and a small glass/cup.

Zanpakutō:
Spoiler:
An ordinary katana with a pink hilt.

• Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: Oboro's Zanpakutō ability is Earth Manipulation. Her Zanpakutō can control and manipulate the ground completely like her own slave. Wihout using any strength, she can lift a huge rock using her Zanpakutō by means through manipulating the huge-sized rock. Sadly, she cannot manipulate a large building (approximently 10 - 20 storeys tall building because of its weight). She can manipulate earths to do anything, as a sword, sheild, trap, or almost anything on her own will. She has limits of doing any of those things, depending the size, power and energy she placed to do those.

Another ability, which her Zanpakutō can be disguised as her ordinary teapot, which she could pour out endless amount of warm tea from it. Her teapot is always there even if she summons out her Zanpakutō from her teapot. Her teapot, is almost as odd as it is, because it can fit a sword (like her Zanpakutō) and can pour out endless amount of warm tea from it. As for the appearance, you can see at the appearance picture.

Oboro originally had shikai (but not bankai) previously, but she never revealed it due to how destructive it was. The shikai will only be 'unstriked' and 'added' when she first releases her own shikai in an event, training or private match.
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General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Was able to finish in time.
I don't know if there's something wrong with the history. x-x'
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Alright, I have a few things to put in here.

Sleeping Powder: Very efficient medicine has a weapon. Instead of using drugs in this modern day, she could throw them at the ground and make it explode itself. Once exploded, a puff of smoke comes out, mostly 50 meters wide only. It works on one to two persons only. The powder makes her opponent go to sleep. The powder isn't really powerful, depending on how much she uses.

If she uses a little powder (10% of the powder), it'll turn Tier 6 and Tier 5 to sleep if caught in the explosion of the powder. If she uses a quarter of it, (25% of the powder), It works on Tier 6 to Tier 4. Half of the powder (50% of the powder) works on Tier 6 to Tier 3. Half a quarter of the powder (75%), it works on Tier 6 to Tier 2. If she uses all of them at once. It affects Tier 6 to Tier 0-4. The rest above Tier 0-4, will not work. All tiers gets the same effect, they will fall asleep for one to two post only. If she uses anything between the percentage listed above, it will do the same on the written tier, unless if used on the percentage above the list, it will work on the written tier. This can be used anytime, except it has only the capiticy of 100% powder. If she finishes the powder on that one thread, she cannot refill it and can be only used again in another thread. Oboro only item, because she did not want anyone to mis-use this item much.

First. 50 metres is quite wide. If you were trying to get someone to fall asleep, I doubt you'd be any further away from them than 10 metres.

Second. You say that only one or two people will fall asleep. How would she choose those two people? It'd be nearly impossible, especially if she were in a fight with five or six people. I'd like this to be explained better.

Third. Using a tier range is a bit iffy, especially seeing as tier wouldn't really affect the inhalation of a medicine. I may recommend putting it that it can affect beings of that tier, rather than will, since some characters may have immunities to medicine, or the like.

If she throws the bomb down to the ground, it will explode and release a large amount of gas, which is really 'extreme' as it covers entire 2 feet wide. The smokes, though, dissapears quickly in one post later. As for reminder, the smoke's really strong, only visibility for the person in the smoke can see only 2 - 5 meters away.

Two feet is less than a metre, so this is quite redundant. I'd increase the area the bomb covers, if I were you.

Bang: Its effect works like a modern flashbang, but more 'flash'. If threw at the target, it explodes and releases a 'flash', blinding anyone within 500 meters in the explosion. Because Oboro added more 'flash', wearing sunglasses won't work against the Bang. Especialy the 'Bang' can also blind someone temporarily in a complete darkness, which its really useful. The blindness is only one post, and once per thread use. A short version name of flashbang. Oboro renamed it as 'Bang' due to the sound of its explosion and its 'flashy' explosion. It does no damage also. Due to the extreme amount of 'flash' was added, nobody but oboro can only use this item.

First. You can't just 'blind' someone instantly. It'll be more likely to blind them, but they may not get blinded easily.

Second. 500 metres... no. That's TOO much. Half a kilometre... reduce that a LOT, please.

Nade Pill: Like any modern people uses during war, grenades are always the first choice for soldiers. Because of oboro's high intellect on medicines, she could turn a medicine into a bomb. A small pill that looks like any ordinary medicine, has its deadly bomb inside. As simple, if you want to do a suicide attempt, just take the pill and swallow it together with a glass of water, the pill would explode like a TNT, more powerful version of a normal grenade. If you want to kill, this might be the best pill you need to use. Either force the pill into the person's mouth or throw it, it will explode and harms anyone within 250 meters wide. Its' explosion would send out a shockwave that blows anyone away near it, sending the person who was caught by the shockwave a few miles away or a few buildings away. Anyone she trusts, will receive this item.

First. Not every enemy would be killed by it.

Second. Not only are you making the explosion cover a quarter of a kilometre (that's at least two football fields), but you're also having it make a shockwave that goes OUT for that distance? I can't allow this, I'm sorry.

Strength Boost Drug: A drug that she created for herself. It can be given to others, if she trusts them. One pill, can boost the person's strength temporarily by 2 times, for only 2 post. It can be used anytime, but overdosage of the pill can cause serious side effects, like death. Overdosage are 4 drugs. 3 drugs are recommended to be used.

Speed Boost Drug: Also a drug that oboro created for herself. It can be also be used by anyone, only to those she trusts the most. One pill can boost the person's speed by two times and two post. It can be used as many times as the person wants, but overdosage will serve the same side effects as overdosage the strength boost drug. Overdosage are also 4 drugs. 3 drugs are recommended.

Define overdosage. Is that 4 pills at one time, or 4 pills in one thread? Since if it's 4 pills at one time, then they'd just be able to use one every two posts. Elaborate and make this a bit fairer, please.

Oboro's Zanpakutō ability is Earth Manipulation. Her Zanpakutō can control and manipulate the ground completely like her own slave. Wihout using any strength, she can lift a huge rock using her Zanpakutō by means through manipulating the huge-sized rock. Sadly, she cannot manipulate a large building (approximently 10 - 20 storeys tall building because of its weight). She can manipulate earths to do anything, as a sword, sheild, trap, or almost anything on her own will. She has limits of doing any of those things, depending the size, power and energy she placed to do those.

Be a little more exact, please. She's not going to be great with it, and there'll obviously be a limit to it. Expand, rather than change.
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