Ken Suzume WIP

Name: Ken Suzume

Titles: Dark hunter

Gender: male
Appearance Age: 19
Age: 300
Affiliation/Rank:rouge

Appearance Description: Ken has black hair ,red eyes,he whares a black shirt with no sleeves. Or shoulders and he has a black scarf and black combat boots.Ken also has sleeves going up his arm to his shoulder, and he has black cargo pants.

Appearance Picture: (If you have one, link a picture of your character.)
http://gal4.piclab.us/key/anime%20guy%20with%20sword#_________________________________ its the same pic as my profile pic.



Personality: Ken can be a bit dark at times, but he can lift the atmosphere in a room.he can be a pervert at times but he's a kind guy with a good heart he's independent and he wont let people get hert if he can help it.He's always calm and he tries to keep a poker face when fighting and around people.

He hates when people try to change his or anyones life.And he's not one to cry in front of people,he good under pressure and he's always calm and collected.


Likes: One thing he likes is killing hollows slowly and painfully,he likes to sharpening his sword,and to try to forge relationships with people.

Dislikes:The one thing he hates more than anything, is hollows.
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History: Ken does not remember much about his life on earth but he can remember how he died, he was at his school the day he died.It was the last day of school so he decided to ditch it was about noon when Ken was in town.
There was an attack in town by a hollow killing 20 people right in front of Ken.

Some people were traped in a store by the hollow and the hollow was trying to get in so Ken did what he had to do.Ken got the hollows attention and ran as fast as he could.But it was not enough the hollow was to fast for Ken to outrun it.But he saved the people in the store so he died with a clean conscience.


By the time the shinigami got there it was to late the hollow got away.In the soul socity Ken trained to be a shinigami but when he was forced to kill a friend he said no and then became a traiter to the soul socity.ever since then he's been on the run from the soul socity.

Ken has been training him self to one day take in a hollow and take revenge on the soul socity lap dogs his fury twards the soul socity for what the soul socity stands for.
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Reiatsu Color: black

Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Ryuu

Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: https://2img.net/h/i173.photobucket.com/albums/w79/pointeshoes_4_me/anime%20look-alikes/animeguycoat.jpg

Inner World: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-O3-TQO8-mz8/T47OCcdll9I/AAAAAAAAFbU/hqa27GMrWSE/s1600/Destroyed+city+of+Future.jpg

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : http://www.swordskingdom.com/extra_images/IMG_9482.JPG sorry its really unoriginal.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities:The sword has the abilitiy to turn the wielder into a shadow and move a set distance of 25 feet away.

[strike]Release: Omoide no kage (The Shadow memories).


Shikai Description: https://media.photobucket.com/image/recent/Arctic_Wintere/dark-anime-guy-image.jpg

Shikai Abilities: it increases his shadow movement by 2x
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General Skills

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• Strength:
  
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Racial Skills

• Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

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Roleplay Sample: Ken walked into a clearing in the woods there was a cool breaze in the air the moon was full.Ken took in a breath and turned there was a man behind a tree (He's been behind me for about three days now,who is he working for) Ken grabed his sword and drew it and so did the man.

Omoide no kage is what Ken mumbled under his breath as he became a shadow the man moved at the same spot as Ken thare swords clashed.Ken showed a smirk (this is going to be fun).

Moved to Old WIP.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [?]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [O]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
  

• Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

Comments/Notes: You have a good bit to fix.
Appearance: Make a valid link or image of your character. The link doesn't work.
Personality: You have 5 sentences, including compound sentences. You need ten.
History: You have 9 sentences, including compoud sentences. You need fifteen.
Sealed Zanpakutō Powers: WAY MORE DETAIL.
Shikai: Strike it out and WAY more detail on the powers. Description link is also broken.
RP sample: You need ten sentences, including dialogue. You have five.
Grammar: I see a lot of run-ons, please fix those.
Tier:

I's been 2 weeks, Old WIP

this thing has been here for a while i will be moving this to archives.