Alexis L. Kozono the Dragon Goth [APPROVED, 1-2+]

Thu Jul 19, 2012 7:11 pm

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» Name: Alexis Lilithzan Kozono
» Titles: Alex, Lilith the Queen Dragon, The Dragon Queen, The Dragon Empress, A, The Dragon Bruiser
» Age: 117,475yrs old; However she looks in late 20s
» Gender: Dragon Female
» Affiliation/Rank: Rogue

» Shifter Appearance Written: Alexis is a young, beautiful woman in her early twenties. She has light black, spiky hair. The hair is kept short on the sides. A long strand hangs from the right side of her fringe down to her chest. From the back of her head her hair is a bit thicker and reaches down to her shoulder blades. Her lips have been colored light purple, matching her hair color. Her eyes are light blue. She possesses quite an ample bosom. Her main clothing is a short, sleeveless, dark purple tunic with black edges. The front and back of the tunic are open which shows quite a hefty amount of her cleavage and fully exposing her back. The tunic is kept together by a red obi belt tied on the front around her waist. On her forearms she has dark brown leather bracers. Her right elbow and up to her shoulder are bare, while her left side wears a fishnet sleeve and a simple shoulder plate.

Alexis's legs are almost bare, save for dark purple socks and japanese style tabi shoes. The most distinguished part of her outfit is the brown, horned headband on her forehead. The horns are small and curved upwards.

» True Appearance Written: In her true form, Dark Alexis looks more like a gargoyle then in her other forms or states. Dark Alexis's eyes glow a deep red (as any female gargoyle's would) when she is angry, unlike male gargoyles, whose eyes glow white. Dark Alexis, like all gargoyles, has a physiology that is distinctly different from the human species. While she is vaguely humanoid in shape, but with wings and a tail, many gargoyle bodily functions are distinctly non-human. For example, all gargoyle females lay eggs just as monotremes do. Dark Alexis possesses large, bat-like wings that she is able to use to glide on currents of air, though she can't actually fly. She has to be a good distance above the ground in order to take off. Her fingers and toes end in very sharp and powerful claws.

She can also use this tail as a weapon and even to wrap around objects and grip them if she chooses to. As seen in a number of bloody battles, items held by a gargoyle often will turn to stone as well, a magical effect which also affects their clothes

» True Appearance Picture:

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» Personality: Alexis's personality resembles an dark silment demon persona's in the way she reveals information only when she needs to. Not much is known about Alexis except that she is cynical, rather quiet, and generally keeps to herself. Alexis is tough and loves a good fight, but she is also sensible enough to smell trouble a mile away. If she feels her fellow demons are getting too enthusiastic, she uses sarcastic cracks to jolt them to their senses, and despite 's constant prying, she refuses to divulge any information about herself, except that she has always wanted to fly on an airship and hunt for spheres containing records of Devilman army's past.

In the past, Alexis was kind-hearted, spirited, happy-go-lucky, and energetic, which sometimes clashes with the more stoic group members. She looks up to Devil Lady as something of a role model, being impressed with her calm level-headed nature. Child-like and playful in many ways, Alexis tries to maintain a positive outlook and often refers to gloomy or annoying people as "big meanies". Her cheerful outlook often makes a stark contrast, however, when she is sad or upset, and despite her outwardly happy exterior, she seems to carry some insecurities, particularly when it comes to her own future and what she wants to be.In spite of her dry wit and demeanor, Alexis values her friendship with Kade and Kaleb, but only after spending long years travelling the demon world by herself, that she is able to express these feelings towards them. Her physical mannerisms are somewhat boyish, perhaps a side effect from her past adventures.

» Likes: Her most remarkable ability is her will to succeed, pushing herself beyond her limitations, and never giving up even when the odds are stacked against her

» Dislikes: Alexis is shown to suffer from severe trypanophobia, or the fear of medical needles, when she was taken to a hospital is when it started., She hates cheaters and human cheating with other people. What she hates the most is seeing her friends getting hurt or loved ones dying.
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Alexis L. Kozono the Dragon Goth [APPROVED, 1-2+] Image4087-1

» History Sindel Berset the witch demon of the damned wanted really to help the brothers of the an legendary demon who died at hands of an evil iramasha warrior. At the time, Sindel was helping Hagokumo with some stuff and she wanted to help the person that the demon summoner killed years ago. The witch didn't have enough spells to create another demon like before so she want into the ancient scrolls of dragon to create a dragon demon. The first attempt didn't work and then the dragon went crazy which she had to kill that dragon and then start over, Sindel placed both human souls and dragon souls into the next creation and it started to form. Something was missing, Sindel wanted the dragon demon to be stronger so it would be able to survive within the demon world. The witch laced the soul of the dragon queen inside the creation and finally it started to form and dragon woman was created. The creation started walking over to the witch wondering what her name was as she started snacking on some goblins nourishing herself. Sindel was trying to figure out a name and then she thought of one name and so the witch named her Alexis Kozono. For years, Alexis took care of the witch doing chores and having a cheerful smile on her face but Sindel knew dark days were coming and she should train the dragon woman. Sindel started seeing better results within the dragon woman the creation was self learning her attacks and her abilities at a very young age. Maybe by putting the soul of the dragon queen inside of Alexis was a good idea after all the dragon was learning at much faster rate then demons.

Decades later, Alexis did help demons and half demon fight in the Devilman wars as demons were leading the assault against an ancient enemy. She met a few demons along the way making a friendship between Kade Hiroshima and Mico Dayheartstin helping them fight against the fallen demon tribes. They were a lot of victories and a lot defeated friends who were killed in battle what ended the war was Devilman's defeat no one saw it coming at all. The war lasted for years until the one day everybody saw their the demon who helped demons and half demons survived in the demon fall down dead. The demons still however won the war but Devilman was a great lost. Kade made a decision after that and many demons started to follow him along with his new friends at an undisclosed peace summit and alliance was made. Kade watched he made a peace agreement with the iramasha clan leader thus ending some bias at the demon race but most iramasha didn't like the alliance with the demon race. One in particular hated the idea thinking of ideas to destroy this peace between the demons and the iramasha clan. Alexis became a guardian to some iramasha children helping them while parents were doing business she was more of an super nanny around the kids. She met another demon when one of the iramasha kids were was being bullied in school, Kaleb Seiger stop the bully telling him to leave. Kaleb helped Alexis with her nanny job thus somehow she felt that she wasn't alone anymore that iramasha and demons could work together. The iramasha clan started seeing demons was peacekeepers while some of them were good and some very bad, however they made peace work. All it took was one event which changed everything 12 years later an iramasha was wounded, Alexis went into help but some person kills the iramasha and dragon demon started following him. The person was gone and some iramasha people started calling her a killer as she started running as people were throwing rocks and energy attacks at her. The iramasha clan started attacking demons telling them to go where they came form most demons were getting killed by some stronger iramashas. One of Kade's oldest friends died while that friends was just trying to protect her daughter and they both were killed. Most of the demons went back within the demon world, Alexis still didn't understand and what happen and better what started all this.Alexis's close friend Kade dissapeared shortly after that she truly believed his heart was broken after watching his close friend die like that. Yet aside of that Alexis hated the iramasha clan for what they did and thus she started training just to make herself stronger. Alexis's attitude chanaged she became a little bit more sdeuctive and a bit violent in her actions but most of her friends helped her through her bad times. Decades later, Alexis heard rumors that Kade was killing people and Kaleb knew something was wrong as the Hiroshima family was in shock over the news. A demon centaurian talked about Kade and his stepsister being killed by an demon wizard, Alexis's mom couldn't belieb she never believed her would do that Hagokumo was the killer. Kade managed to somehow survived he changed completely allowing evil to takeover his heart but Alexis refused to believed this new version of her friend had turned evil.

Alexis confronted the new form of her friend Eric Zarathos crying in his arms she didn't wanted to lose him or Kaleb they were her only best friends around here. Alexis convinced Kade to come back with her and Kaleb she thought having her best friends again could help her move on.
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Alexis L. Kozono the Dragon Goth [APPROVED, 1-2+] Image4091

» Natural Abilities:

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» Unique Abilities: Immense Spiritual Power: After the relentless beatings of high class demons and deadly missions from both the dark lords and the charred council. Alexis earned the title of demon dragoon warrior but throughtout missions. Her spiritual power is immensely high. Being the first dragon demon ever created from a powerful witch Sindel. Being one of Sindel's children granted her a power of a great demon & grat dragon but he doesn't brag about he wear skeleton shoulder like armor and gauntlets to cover up her real power.

Flying: Alexis has the ability of flying to different places whenever she wants do so. A demon needs to fly or super jump and with her new power can travel anywhere he wants. She used her power also when she in different states too.

Demonic Healing: The witch' spellbooks was passed into her brain. Little dragons will come from her very blood rehealing bruises, cuts wounds, damaged limbs etc. But this power is very limited because the book was destroyed so the ability won't last forever really this ability can use seven times. Because her blood healing will get signs of fatigue and sluggish causing Alexis to faint.

Dragon Demon Fighter: During her dragon years, She self trained himself how to fight training with zombie skeletons and demons at a young age with her fighting skills being a novice at the time. Using her fists when beating down an enemy. In addition to having powerful kicks and punches, Alexis has also shown proficiency in counterattacks, takedowns, and body locks. Being a true dragon fighter taught her many enhanced skills of wrestler, boxer and a kickboxer.

Fireball Buster: A ball of fire energy blast. A fire attack with the same strength as cero if Alexis wants to catch people off guard or hurt somebody. It be charged into stronger fireball attack but it can dodged or blocked however.

Dragon Spiral Beam: The technique is a strong spiral laser beam to hurt her enemies.The move is performed by touching the index and middle fingers of one hand to the forehead and charging enough energy to attack. Its speed changes to the demon energy of the person performing the move. When ready, the fingers are extended forward, the attacker shouts the name of the attack and two thin energy beams are unleashed from the fingers. One remains straight while the other coils around the straight beam. The resulting beam is quite powerful, drilling through most targets, and exploding on the ones it can't. It can also be used with only one arm. The weakness is can be blocked to dodge easy enough if the enemy had faster speed or great defense.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Dark Shapeshifting: Alexis has the unqiue ability of shapeshifting into animals and differnt kinds of human, arrancar and iramasha females but the only problem. Whenever she shapeshift her red eyes remained the same. If any enemy came and remember those same eyes then she's in trouble. The technique can be defeated if you can get her to say her last name backwards and then she change back which is "Onozok".

Increased Demon Strength: Because of the dragon souls, Alexis has increased her muscles to withstand pain of strong powerful techniques for long time. But somebody's bankai, iramasha forms, espada's segunda etpa might be a problem if she didn't use her demonic techniques. Alexis has been training hard because in hell demons would tear a demon apart show strength is the only way to stay alive. Alexis's strength is very strong but not strong enough.
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Alexis L. Kozono the Dragon Goth [APPROVED, 1-2+] Image4088-1

» Half Breed Dragon State Appearance:

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» Half Breed Dragon State Benefits: Augmented Strength: Her demon dragon body is trained constantly to keep her strength high fucking level. Sindel had the demon train all of her forms making them stronger. Alexis has an augmented physical strength from all the fights, wars and training sessions the demon been in. Like ever strong demon dragon she believes strength is a weapon in battle. She can do things a regular demon couldn't do making her an deadly combatant. This was all due to the facts of the many souls of dragons she absorbed during their augmented strength was infuse into her body making this half breed form stronger but it isn't that strong her other forms.

Improved Dragon Claws: She has drgaonlooking-like claws on her hands and her dragon feets which can be used for slashing and gutting people when she gets angry or wanting to kill something. She can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around. Stronger enemies may feel 35% of the attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defensives. Alexis can use her zoa power to empower her claws with energy to do certain energy slashing attacks as well.

Augmented Durability: She had very high resistant to damage due to the fact she had both dragon skin and demon skin combined making her able to withstand attacks at a very high rate. Sindel actually infused magic from the sacrifice of demons improving the durability of Alexis's dragon skin making it stronger then the regular dragon yet it hass been know to faulter. Strong enemy attacks like bankai or stonger shikai have been known to damage her even higher Kidō can hurt too. But the lower case stuff wouldn't even penetrate anymore.

Fire Buster Beam: The Fire Buster Beam is formed when cupped hands are drawn to the user's side and the demon energy is concentrated into a single point between the cupped hands and the hands must be really close. The hands are then thrust forward to shoot out a streaming, powerful beam of energy & fire. The blast can also be used, generally under extenuating circumstances, with just one arm. However the attack has a big flaw if the user too weak or hurt the focus of the beam won't hit the direct target which can be big trouble. Stronger enemies can block or dodge the attack completely.

Shadow Dark Claw: A claw slash attack. When her claws extend giving off an shadow energy slash attack which weak but fastlike attack but it causing damage. It can be blocked by armor or stronglike defense. Alexis can use this claw attack instantly and has the similiar strength to bala.

Razor Dragon Claw: A claw slash attack. When her claws extend giving off an enegry slash attack which weak but fastlike attack but it causing damage. It can be blocked easy enough by armor or stronglike defense

» Dragon Snake Queen State Appearance:

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» Dragon Snake Queen State Benefits: Immense Strength: The raw abilities of demon skin had to be sacrifices in order to make her snake form stronger. The strength comes from the magic which was put into it the witch demon thought of giving her daughter the power of snake woman by infusing the raw strength of Dark Medusa into his snake queen form. Yet her defense strength had to be sacrifices in order to make the strength augmentation work for the form. Because of the sacrifice of her demon skin ability, Alexis physical strength is immensely strong that she can actually crack or destroy a human with one punch.

Body Manipulation: This is a natural ability that all demon's possess if they wish to activate it or perform it. Most Demon's have full control over every aspect of his physical make-up, able to stretch themselves to obtain insane heights such as being thirty foot tall, being able to change their skin color, having the ability to shape-shift into different people that they are able to remember and, on much more powerful levels, being able to even detach, generate or fuse body parts together in order to increase odds of surviving. Though, this does not occur until at least one tier, and even then it's weak compared to the 0 tier version. Additionally, it can even be used for offensive or defensive purposes. For example, a demon can use Body Manipulation in order to generate a layer of steel-like skin around their body in order to increase their defense and block out outside sources from entering their body by clogging every pore on it. Or, for another instance, they could use it on the offensive side by hurling body parts at their opponent that are extremely hot and turn into acid blood, using their increased height to smash down on most opponents and the same may even apply for some more powerful demon's attacks; or finally, in an avoidance way, more powerful demon's could even control their body in order to be broken down into a liquid, wind or fire type form in order to gain more ways to escape or evade attacks.

Curse Effect: Curses are a natural to a demon and work somewhat like a decaying system. For instance, when a demon uses their Curse ability they can inflict sickness on any type of living or spiritual being which in turn can bring about illnesses within them, gradually drain them of their power and ultimately make it very hard for fighting due to the fact that this Curse Effect can eventually begin to heavily weaken the persons Reiygoku, Reaitsu and Physical body to the point where it would be well advised to seek medical attention before too long. However, that is not the only use of Curses. It can also be inflicted on a mental level depending on the persons Will Power Skill Sheet and can eventually begin to inflict insanity, madness, distracting thoughts and some succubus class skills. Not only that, but curses can also be applied to the area around them. This is usually done by using this curse to containment the flow of reaitsu within an area to make it very unstable to use for non-demon races; causing their bodies to react violently by spewing out blood, causing malfunctions in their powers or their bodies outright rejecting this flow of additional power and sometimes even canceling out attacks.

Enhanced Razor Dragon Claw: A claw slash attack. When her claws extend giving off an fast enegry slash attack which can do some damage but fastlike attack but it causing damage. It can be blocked or dodged

» True Dragon Queen State Appearance:

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» True Dragon Queen State Benefits: Unbelievable Strength: Alexis had the unbelevabale strength of the dragon queen her physical strength is unbearable unlike her previous forms the blood and soul of the queen dragon. From all the souls and raw power of ancient dragons are infused into her body. After Sindel placed the soul of the dragon quuen into his daughter;s body she had her on a training regiment of fighting demons and training with live volcanoes in an attempt to make her daughter almost unstoppable. She even able to stop bankai attacks with her bare claws but too many attacks like can hurt her but not enough to kill her in this form.

Flying: Alexis has the ability of flying to different places whenever she wants do so. A demon needs to fly or super jump and with her new power can travel anywhere he wants. She used her power also when she in different states too.

Stronger Dragon Claws: She has shraper and drgaonlooking-like claws on her hands and her dragon feets which can be used for slashing and gutting people when she gets angry or wanting to kill something. She can extend them for longer slashes even retract them when friends are around. Stronger enemies may feel 65% of the attack if it blocked by barrier or strong defensives. Alexis can use her zoa power to empower her claws with energy to do certain energy slashing attacks as well.

Eye Lasers: These are precise laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The potency of the Eye Laser technique varies, but most of them are very fast and able to nullify weak attacks and small projectiles, as well as cripple opponents when they are greatly damage and damage other objects. This can blocked or dodged easily.

Truely Strong Durability Higher Enurance Levels: She had been known to keep on fighting despite beaten hurt not only does she strong defensive capabilities all thanks to her dragon skin. She's able to survive most powerful attacks in her dragon queen form. The dragon queen's soul has passed down knowledge of high pain endurance when in the heat of battle the demon dragon warrior can take a damn beaten and still keep fighting. As such, Alexis is able to withstand attacks that would be fatal to most demons and ancient dragons. It may have something to the souls within combined with her own they must have combined with her stamina levels making them higher then normal.

Supreme Fire Buster Beam: The deadly Supreme Beam is one of Alexis's best attacks. In order to make the attack, Alexis draws her hands back and gathers up all of her energy. Then, she thrusts her palms forward and discharges a massive dark red beam of flame energy towards his opponent. This is stronger the regular fire buster beam which this can be blocked strong barrier attacks or stronger opponent then herself. She created this attack for killing purposes when demons were becoming bothersome and she wanted to kill them on bad ass attack.

Affinity For Hell: If a Demon ever gets the chance to foot into hell or has the skill level and power to summon it's presence on the battlefield, they can potentially increase their power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, Demon's can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread they are in. This is due to the fact that there is a large amount of hellish energy within that place for Demon's to thrive on and it's filled with many hidden elements that were designed to overcharge a Demon in times of crisis. But, in addition to that, the presence of hell augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said demon; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Dragon Genocider: The trump card attack wheres he lights a spark of energy on her index finger. Once enough energy is gathered, this spark may grow to the size of a small moon and is thrown towards the target. Typically, this attack is used to destroy many buildings or a small city or as a last-ditch effort to severly wound an opponent. When it hits something it almost like an big and massive explosion but it can be destroyed if it blasted in right in the center depending enemy's attack power or by a much stronger energy attack. However this can be charged into a much stronger attack which is called 100% Dragon Genocider which takes 3 posts to charge and the user must completely still when gathering energy for the attack. If the user is attacked the attack is no more which she have to do it all over again. The 100% Dragon Genocider is made when she places his hands forward as she forms a sphere of deep black energy that has another gray sphere inside it that turns black in the center and has red electricity flowing around it. If he charges the attack for a few seconds, it seems to take on a decagon shape, but most commonly looks like a circle. Once she fires it, it leaves a shot black trail of energy behind before it hits the target, very easily causing a medium nuke-sized explosion.

True Shadow Dark Claw: An augmented version to Shadow Dark Claw which her hand will actually grow as with her claws. The demon claws will start turning black unleashing energy from each claw tip. When delivered darker and supreme energy slash faster and stronger then the original. Stronger enemies will feel the pain of the attack while weaker opponents will have their skin rip off or worse from the demon claws.

True Judas Priest: An ultimate shadowlike defense move used by various witches and warlocks. The stronger & newer version of the original Judas Priest. Sindel taught Alexis hold toy use the ancient power if she was ever come into contact with the demon wizard Hagokumo. The user must be on the ground when using his move and one hand must be placed on the ground. If attacked by an enemy by some sort energy blast, sword attack, punch kick, almost getting impaled, etc. The user's own shadow will block the attack immediately however it can be only used three times if used a fifth time the user will die.

Black Inferno Blast: Black Inferno is a massive burst of destructive energy a demon can unleash if they have Adept or higher on Za Koa. It starts by gathering energy from Za Koa along with the Demon's Blood and any type of darkness. From there, it will form into a ball of darkness that can be used to unleash serious damage upon anything it hits; resulting in a black explosion that is similar to a cero in destruction and can be broken down like a bala as well. Though, unlike a cero or bala, The Black Inferno Blast does alot more then just simply explode. When it explodes, if trapped within the blast, the opponent will begin to feel extreme amounts of heat generating from their skin; so hot, in fact, some believe they are actually on fire from the strain on a person's will. However, this does more then that. That's simply the sign of a dangerous demon parasite entering a person's body. If a direct contact is made or even partial contact, there will be a strong rush of parasites, demon magic and Za Koa's force entering a person's body. From that point, over the course of five post if there was a direct hit or three for a indirect, this will begin to heavily tax an opponent. It will force them to drain extreme amounts of energy until they are somewhat weakened, slowed or damaged if they are unable to extract it from there bodies.
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Racial Skills

Za Koa Skill: Advanced
Demon Magic: Adept
Shadow Movement: Advanced
Akuma Kyōdo: Adept

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Adept

General Skills

Durability: Advanced
General Speed: Adept
Strength: Advanced
Weapon Skill: Adept

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Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:49 pm

You're gonna have to change that Dragon Queen Snake appearance, someone plans on using that appearance for a character. I'll check this app fully once that's fixed.

Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:37 pm

Ok fixed
Are their anymore problems with the bio?

Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:14 pm

I have some issue's with this application, and after checking with Kendall Ill look over the rest of this application for him.

One thing is that, when going from power form to power form you have a lot of things that you restate even though it honestly would be there still, things like Dragon Tail which we know you have an a earlier stage would only get more powerful as you became more powerful.

Another thing is after you fix that issue, because that alone just makes this thing look like it has too many powers, is fix how many powers this application has. The powers look fine but you have WAY too many things on this application with the powers.

Things like the "Beams" you are using, like final buster, etc, etc. You can just put that all into one power, just state that this person can use energy based attacks, more or less. You can tell us how she does it, etc. But You have like 4 different abilities stemming off of that basis. Please just fix it, I don't have a problem with these powers but me alone and I asked JJ. This application LOOKS like is has too many powers.

"Demonic Witchcraft"

No, as stated in your application before you already have "Demon Kidō" so why do you need Demonic Witchcraft or anything of that like? If you want you can apply for your witchcraft to be a "Kidō" for the "demon Kidō" but please don't keep using things like that, it's redundant.

Fri Aug 03, 2012 8:01 pm

I've removed some stuff

Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:53 am

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Advanced
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Adept

Comments/Notes: Good, thank you for doing those 'hotfixes' lmao..
Anyways, what I want for now on however is you to make a separate thing for natural abilities when I am grading your applications. I'd rather have there be a separate thing just for your natural abilities so people don't get them confused with your abilities that are with your different forms. With those changes I will approve this application.
Tier: 1-2+

Sun Mar 22, 2015 3:21 pm

:heavy_multiplication_x:| TLC NEEDED! Gao! |✚

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Inactive Character Warning!
Well, this hasn't been used since 2015 has started! Gao!~ I'm getting scared~~
Gao! If you wish to keep it, reply to this within a week!

Tue Mar 31, 2015 1:59 pm

:heavy_multiplication_x:| Kuma Shock! |✚

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Moving to Inactive Character
You haven't responded to my warning at all! You can claim your character back, but you have to message me or on this app.