Ashe Magma

- Name: Ashe Magma
- Titles: The Hero Of Justice
- Gender: female
- Appearance Age: 18
- Age: 12,000
- Affiliation/Rank: 4th substitute Shinigami[/b]
- Appearance Description: (Please Put 1-2 Paragraph's on your character appearance.) orange haired yoruichi with red streaks bigger breast and wider hips.
lighterskin and in a Shinigami uniform simmlar to yourichi

- Appearance Picture:



- Personality: trying to be the strongest but as pure good as they come

- Likes: to enjoy time with the loved ones and killing evil that threatens the world or loved ones

- Dislikes: hollows

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- History: (the story start off as a hero being born on as a super shinigami when the young ashe was to strong to protect every one so head shinigami yamamoto asked her whats your goal ashe her reply to protect the one i care for.
a few year later she killed the hollows for killing her father and mother. head shinigami yamamoto wants her to become the 4th substitute
she faced against arturo and her power was lost and put in to a coma.
then finds out she been in the shinigami lab frozen for 11,600 years
Her Power retruned when she awaked stronger than ever

. 3-4 paragraph's)

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- Reiatsu Color: muiti-colored like a rainbow

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: rainbow dragon woman

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: like a ghost of a rainbow version of ashe magma

- Inner World: a void of space that so can stand on in mid air

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : like a blade like a normal sealed zanpakto
with a gold middle japanese writing that glows red for the the ryukai power to a power that surpasses bankai

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: (ryukai a power to achive bankai with out going into the release state and the ryuu sonic slasher

- Release: go rainbow drago woman

- Shikai Description: a blade that looks like the z sword form dbz with the gold middle with writing

- Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)[/strike]

- Bankai Description: the sword sharp part glow into a mist type rainbow blade

- Bankai Abilities: the power to go 400,000 x faster

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- PhantomTech: a gold headband that negates enemy phantom tech

- Phantom Tech Abilities: turn invisible and proform sneak attacks

- Phantom Tech Powers: the power to go 160,000,000x faster

Note: If you don't want Phantom Tech, just REMOVE the sections.

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General Skills
Durability: Master
General Speed: Master
Strength: Master
Weapon Skill: Master


Racial Skills
Hoho: Master
Kidō: Master
Zanjutsu: Master
Hakuda: Master

ryukai info - a more powerful spirtful pressure like goku's kaio-ken without strain on the body

I'm just going to go ahead and tell you, this isn't how things work around here. This is a place for you to introduce yourself personally.
You're looking for this place though an application like this won't work.

This is our template for Shinigami. Please follow it and post your application into the Unchecked Applications section, which I just linked you.

While I thank Amaya for doing that, I've got this.
First of all, please read the rules.

- Affiliation/Rank: 4th substitute Shinigami[/b]

We don't allow for substitute Shinigami without special approval, and you won't be getting that approval.

- Appearance Description: (Please Put 1-2 Paragraph's on your character appearance.) orange haired yoruichi with red streaks bigger breast and wider hips.
lighterskin and in a Shinigami uniform simmlar to yourichi

Do you not see the "1-2 paragraphs" part? You need 5 detailed or 10 simple sentences OR a picture. And no, you can't used a photoshopped Yoruichi.

- Personality: trying to be the strongest but as pure good as they come

You need a bare minimum of 10 sentences. This isn't one.

- History: (the story start off as a hero being born on as a super shinigami when the young ashe was to strong to protect every one so head shinigami yamamoto asked her whats your goal ashe her reply to protect the one i care for.
a few year later she killed the hollows for killing her father and mother. head shinigami yamamoto wants her to become the 4th substitute
she faced against arturo and her power was lost and put in to a coma.
then finds out she been in the shinigami lab frozen for 11,600 years
Her Power retruned when she awaked stronger than ever

You don't know Bleach history. The Gotei 13 was around 12,000 years ago (though, I'm going to ask you to change that as well) but Yamamoto was not. You also do not have permission to have two of the stronger canons in your application, nor will you.

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: like a ghost of a rainbow version of ashe magma
- Inner World: a void of space that so can stand on in mid air
- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : like a blade like a normal sealed zanpakto
with a gold middle japanese writing that glows red for the the ryukai power to a power that surpasses bankai
- Bankai Description: the sword sharp part glow into a mist type rainbow blade

Again, 5 detailed or 10 simple sentences, or a picture.

- Shikai Description: a blade that looks like the z sword form dbz with the gold middle with writing

Again, 5 detailed or 10 simple sentences. Also, don't use "looks like ___ from ___." DESCRIBE it or provide a picture.

- Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)[/strike]

You don't get Shikai right off, but if you're going to describe your Bankai, describe your Shikai too.

- Bankai Abilities: the power to go 400,000 x faster

Hahahaha, no. You don't get a 400,000 x boost. That's way too much. Also, describe it more. What does it speed up? What drawbacks does it have?

- PhantomTech: a gold headband that negates enemy phantom tech

- Phantom Tech Abilities: turn invisible and proform sneak attacks

- Phantom Tech Powers: the power to go 160,000,000x faster

Hahahaa, no. First of all, you need to describe the appearance of it more. Second of all, you can't negate other PhantomTech like that, nor can you have a 160,000,000 x multiplier. Make that about 1.6 if you want it to be fair. Finally, describe the invisibility of it more. Why does it do that and what are its drawbacks?

General Skills
Durability: Master
General Speed: Master
Strength: Master
Weapon Skill: Master


Racial Skills
Hoho: Master
Kidō: Master
Zanjutsu: Master
Hakuda: Master

Not just no. Not just hell no. Fuck no. You do NOT fill in these yet first of all, and second of all, there is no way in sam hell you're getting all masters.

ryukai info - a more powerful spirtful pressure like goku's kaio-ken without strain on the body

You don't get a form over Bankai, remove it.


I suggest looking at some other Shinigami to get an idea of what we're looking for.

Otherwise, this thing is

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